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1、返回返回返回返回. 书写规范书写规范, 卷面整洁。卷面整洁。返回 Last week we had our class meeting. All our teachers joined us in the meeting. Our monitor first talked about our study and life at school and thanked the teachers for their kind help and good care. Then our class teacher made a speech. He hoped that we would keep st

2、udying hard. After that we gave each other presents. We sang and danced together until late in the afternoon. We all had a wonderful time and agreed that it was really an unforgettable class meeting.返回返回返回Internet download search for informationlatest newsfast convenientplaygamesE-mailsendwatch matc

3、hes Topic sentenceSupporting detailsReason 1 Reason 2 Reason 3 ConclusionMusic plays an important part in my life.The Internet plays an important part in our life.The Internet is very useful in our life. Conclusion: We cant live without the Internet.返回变式 1) “School” is just another word for “family”

4、. 2) “Friend” is just another word for “trust” 3) “Honesty” is just another phrase for “always telling the truth”.学生实际运用： “Computer” is just another word for “convenience”.2) To me, “pressure” is just another word for “challenge”.3) Freedom is based on “obeying rules”. So in my opinion, “rule” is ju

5、st another word for “freedom”. 变式 ： Nobody can decide the length of life, but we can decide its width and depth. 2) Nobody can decide the length of life, so we should save every minute, even every second.变式：There are always good time and bad time for us, but its important to remember both, because t

6、hey are the treasure in our life.1)There will be good luck and bad luck in our life, but both are important, because this is life. 变式 ：1) One flower makes no garden, so we should learn to share with others. 2) I finally come to understand the importance of teamwork, because one flower makes no garde

7、n. 变式1) From this experience, I realize that anything is possible as long as you put your mind to it. 2) From then on, I began to believe in such a famous saying “ Nothing is impossible!”变式：变式：1)What my father said makes me know that I cant let the failure define (decide) me-I have to let it teach m

8、e.2) Failure sometimes is not a bad thing, it is usually the entrance to the success. So do not let the failure decide you-you have to let it teach you. 学生实际运用：1) We cant let the pressure decide our life-We have to turn it into challenges. (How to deal with the pressure) 学生实际运用：1) So lets keep learn

9、ing and see what a wonderful world is following. (The most important thing in my life) 2) I often talk with my parents about my school life, my problems and my ambition. And they sometimes give me some advice and encouragement. This leads us to a much better understanding and a deeper love. (The mos

10、t important thing in my life) 变式：Happiness and excitement fill my heart.学生实际运用：1) Tears filled my eyes. (V. S. I was so moved.)2) Happiness and love fill my heart.变式：变式：In my eyes, he was the best, is the best and will be the best.学生实际运用：1) My parents were the best, are the best and will always be t

11、he best. I will love them forever.2) In my heart, my school was the best, is the best and will always be the best!变式：1) When our dream stops, the future can too.2) When trust stops, the friendship can too.3) When the communication stops, the understanding between us can too.返回返回对三个问题的完整回答对三个问题的完整回答对

12、某个重点问题的扩写对某个重点问题的扩写点睛之句的点题和收尾点睛之句的点题和收尾+=1=点评：内容空泛， 选材俗套，结构不严谨，缺乏立意 深刻的中心意思的表达。Q2: Which do you think is the most important thing?Q3: Why do you think so?learning to be brave, learning to be confident are the important things in my life.I think learning to share is the most important. It enables us

13、to get more ideas or experience from others. It also shows that we have the ability and will to help others.“Share” is another word for “ exchange with each other”.There are always many important things that may happen in our life.Among them, As a famous saying goes “One flower makes no garden”, so

14、we should learn to share with others. (共87字)There are always many important things that may happen in our life.As a famous saying goes “One flower makes no garden”, so we should learn to share with others. Life is just like a painting, colorful and meaningful. That can help us to have more friends.

15、In my opinion, learning to share is a kind of “life skills”.Among them, learning to be brave, learning to be confident are the important things in my life. I think learning to share is the most important.Why do I think so?(119)Most of the time I do things that I enjoy. However, there are still things I hate doing, such aslittering or jay-walking. And something I hate doing most is to waste water because water is one of the most important natural resources in the world.