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1、设置情景，导入新课设置情景，导入新课Write a Diary自主探究、合作学习自主探究、合作学习日记写作注意事项日记写作注意事项日记的格式：日记的格式： 正文上方左上角写正文上方左上角写 右上角写右上角写正文另起一行正文另起一行 人称多用人称多用_ 时态多用时态多用_ 文章多按照文章多按照_顺序写顺序写年月日年月日周几周几天气情况天气情况第一人称第一人称过去式过去式时间时间日记的结构日记的结构一般日记至少包括三部分：一般日记至少包括三部分： 活动或事件背景；活动或事件背景； 活动或事件的过程；活动或事件的过程； 活动或者时间的评价、总结或体验。活动或者时间的评价、总结或体验。你觉得英语日记的

2、写作还应该注意哪些问题？你觉得英语日记的写作还应该注意哪些问题？内容应有所选择，记有意义、感受最深内容应有所选择，记有意义、感受最深的事，的事，切忌流水账。有话则长，无话则短，甚切忌流水账。有话则长，无话则短，甚至三言两语亦可。至三言两语亦可。通常采用一般过去时或可灵活运用。通常采用一般过去时或可灵活运用。成果展示、汇报交流成果展示、汇报交流过渡词和短语in order toin order toOn the way toOn the way toWhats moreWhats moreMuch to our delightMuch to our delightWhat s important

3、What s important句式亮点句式亮点Listening to the birds and feeling the soft wind, we got completely relaxed. I got on the bus immediately, hoping to take a seat. Glaring at her, I could hardly believe it. Although tired, we had a good chance to get close to the nature. Only through efforts, can we succeed.

4、Hardly had I got there when a bus was coming.归纳总结、提升拓展归纳总结、提升拓展句式仿写站在山顶，我们欣赏到了美景。（站在山顶，我们欣赏到了美景。（VingVing）尽管我很忙，还是想帮父母做家务。（让步状语从句省略）尽管我很忙，还是想帮父母做家务。（让步状语从句省略）只有这样，我们才能取得进步。（倒装）只有这样，我们才能取得进步。（倒装）父母一进家门就表扬了我。（父母一进家门就表扬了我。（hardlyhardly when) when)Standing on the top of the mountain, we Standing on the

5、top of the mountain, we enjoyed a good view.enjoyed a good view.Although busyAlthough busy， I still want to do some I still want to do some housework for my parents. housework for my parents. Only in this way, can we make progress.Only in this way, can we make progress.Hardly had our parents got hom

6、e when they Hardly had our parents got home when they praised me.praised me.翻译下列句子翻译下列句子 平时忙于学习，在家很少帮助父母做家务。平时忙于学习，在家很少帮助父母做家务。(seldom)(seldom) 每次提出帮忙，总是被拒绝。每次提出帮忙，总是被拒绝。(every time)(every time) 觉得父母为自己做了太多，一直考虑帮父母做些觉得父母为自己做了太多，一直考虑帮父母做些事情。事情。(consider)(consider)虽然我很累，但是我觉得这件事情是值得的。虽然我很累，但是我觉得这件事情是值

7、得的。(worthwhile)(worthwhile) 我们不要把父母为我们做的一切当成理所当然的我们不要把父母为我们做的一切当成理所当然的, ,并且应该在业余时间多帮父母干些家务。并且应该在业余时间多帮父母干些家务。(take it for (take it for granted)granted)翻译下列句子翻译下列句子 S Seldom do I have time to help my parents to eldom do I have time to help my parents to do the housework because I am busy with study.d

8、o the housework because I am busy with study. Every time I offered to help, I was refused.Every time I offered to help, I was refused. F Feeling they have done too much for me, I am eeling they have done too much for me, I am always considering doing something for them.always considering doing somet

9、hing for them.Though tired, I think it was worthwhile.Though tired, I think it was worthwhile. W We should not take it for granted that our e should not take it for granted that our parents do everything for us, and wparents do everything for us, and we are e are supposed to help supposed to help th

10、em them with the housework in our with the housework in our spare time.spare time.反馈训练、巩固落实反馈训练、巩固落实P PARTART II W II WRITINGRITING假定你是李华，请根据写作要点用英语写一假定你是李华，请根据写作要点用英语写一篇日记，记述你周末帮助家人做家务的一次篇日记，记述你周末帮助家人做家务的一次经历。写作要点：做家务的理由，做家务的经历。写作要点：做家务的理由，做家务的过程，你的感受。过程，你的感受。注意：注意：1. 1. 字数字数8080100100； 2. 2. 不能使用真

11、实的姓名和学校名称。不能使用真实的姓名和学校名称。小组内互评作文小组内互评作文满分满分3030分分考虑一下几个方面：考虑一下几个方面： 书写书写文章格式和结构文章格式和结构词汇和句式词汇和句式连接词连接词 语法错误语法错误December 8th, 2013 Sunday SunnyDecember 8th, 2013 Sunday Sunny S Seldom do I have time to eldom do I have time to help help my my parents to do the parents to do the housework because I am

12、busy with study.housework because I am busy with study. Every time I Every time I offered to help, I was refused.offered to help, I was refused. F Feeling they have done too eeling they have done too much for me, I am always considering doing something for much for me, I am always considering doing

13、something for them. them. In the morning, when my parents went shopping I In the morning, when my parents went shopping I decided to take the opportunity to do something for them. I decided to take the opportunity to do something for them. I cleaned the table, bowls and cookers, after which I cleane

14、d the table, bowls and cookers, after which I mopped the floor. Mom praised me when she came back mopped the floor. Mom praised me when she came back and saw what I had done. Although tired, I think it was and saw what I had done. Although tired, I think it was worthwhile.worthwhile. As far as I am concerned, As far as I am concerned, we should not take it for we should not take it for granted that our parents do everything for us