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1、rear-ending 追尾追尾 run off the road crash into treecrash into houseturn overTraffic accidents are dangerous. Reasons: SpeedingTired drivingDrunk drivingCareless drivingUsing cell phones while driving.?Topic: Using cell phones while driving 1. Its a dangerous distraction to drivers. 2. It should be for

2、bidden.Para 2: Argument (论点论点) 1 Para 3: Argument (论点论点) 2 Para 4: SuggestionPara 5: ConclusionTip1: Structure is a guide to find the main pointsPara 1: Viewpoint (观点观点) Para1 Cell phones are used everywhere, but on the road they are a dangerous distraction to drivers and should be forbidden.a facta

3、 viewpointPara 1: ViewpointTip2: The viewpoint of an argumentative writing （议论文）（议论文）should be included in a summary.Point1：Cell phones used on the road are a dangerous distraction to drivers and should be forbidden.Main points of the summary1. Cell phones used on the road are a dangerous distractio

4、n to drivers. Para 2: Argument (论据论据) 1 using a not using aon the phoneon the roadunpredictablecarefulIts dangerous.Its safe.Drivers using a phone were 4 times more likely to have an accident than those not using.DriversAttentionDrivingResult(Support)Point1：Cell phones used on the road are a dangero

5、us distraction to drivers and should be forbidden.Point2：Drivers using a cell phone were 4 times more likely to have an accident than those not using a phone. Main points of the summaryPara 3: Argument (论据论据)22. Cell phones used on the road should be forbidden. at least 1,000 deaths per yearagainst

6、the lawand strictly enforcedlaws are need to forbid the use of cell phones in carsAn example：phones used by driversdrunk drivingSimilarly（Support)Point1：Cell phones used on the road are a dangerous distraction to drivers and should be forbidden.Point2：Drivers using a cell phone were 4 times more lik

7、ely to have an accident than those not using a phone. Main points of the summaryPoint3：Just like drunk driving, California need laws to restrict the use of cell phones in cars.Q1：Before using a cell phone, what question should drivers ask themselves?Para 4: SuggestionSuggestion1：Suggestion2：Is this

8、call really that important?Yes.No.Drivers need to be more responsible when using cell phones.Use a phone wiselyNot use a phone（Support)Point1：Cell phones used on the road are a dangerous distraction to drivers and should be forbidden.Point2：Drivers using a cell phone were 4 times more likely to have

9、 an accident than those not using a phone. Main points of the summaryPoint3：Just like drunk driving, California need laws to restrict the use of cell phones in cars.Point4：Drivers at least need to be more responsible when using cell phones. Para5 Cell phones can be a very important link in emergenci

10、es, but drivers need to use them wisely. As professional racer John Andretti says, “Driving safely is your first responsibility.” The best road to safety is to just hang up and drive.Para 5: Conclusiona quote (引语引语) Tip3: A quote is usually used to support an idea and should be not included in a sum

11、mary.Point1：Cell phones used on the road are a dangerous distraction to drivers and should be forbidden.Point2：Drivers using a cell phone were 4 times more likely to have an accident than those not using a phone. Main points of the summaryPoint3：Just like drunk driving, California need laws to restr

12、ict the use of cell phones in cars.Point4：Drivers at least need to be more responsible when using cell phones. Point5：Cell phones can be a very important link in emergencies, but drivers need to use them wisely. The best road to safety is to just hang up and drive. 1. Cell phones used on the road da

13、ngerously distract the drivers and should be banned.Skills:1. 词性转换法 2. 近义替换法 3. 正话反说法 4. 语态互换法 5. 句式变化法 Skills of restatement(重述重述): “Point1” as an examplePoint1：Cell phones used on the road are a dangerous distraction to drivers and should be forbidden.2. Using cell phones while driving dangerously

14、 draw away drivers attention and should not be allowed.3. We should forbid using cell phones on the road for their harmful distraction to drivers.4. Drivers should be prevented from using cellphones while driving because they can be dangerously distracted.并列句并列句复合句复合句简单句简单句6. 主语变身法 Have a try: work

15、in groups of 4 to create a good summaryPoint1：Cell phones used on the road are a dangerous distraction to drivers and should be forbidden.Point2：Drivers using a cell phone were 4 times more likely to have an accident than those not using a phone. Point3：Just like drunk driving, California need laws

16、to restrict the use of cell phones in cars.Point4：Drivers at least need to be more responsible when using cell phones. Point5：Cell phones can be a very important link in emergencies, but drivers need to use them wisely. The best road to safety is to just hang up and drive. Factors Checking pointscom

17、pleteconcisecoherentcorrectobjective2. No details in 4080 words1. Cover the main points using your own words 4. No grammatical mistakes5. No personal opinion3. Use transitional words if possible Learn to use the checklist: 4C+1OUsing cell phones while driving can distract the drivers and should be b

18、aned. Drivers have a higher rate of accidents when use phones. Accidents are danger, which include running off a road and crashing into trees, fences. Just like drunk driving, laws are needed to restrict the use of cell phones in cars. Drivers should use phones with greater responsibility for safe. In conclusion, cell phones are important in emergencies and should be used wisely. After all, we only have one life at all. (89words)copy original wordsTo ensure safe driving, drivers had bett