高一短文改错练习及答案

1、高一短文改错练习及答案下面各短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。每句最多两处错误。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（人），并在其下面写上该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）戈胖。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2. 只允许修改10处,多者（从第11处起）不计分。1. 短文改错Dearsir,I'mgladtorecommend（推荐）myfriendLiMingtoyou.LiMingwasborninJuly15,1974inBeijing.HegraduatedfromXisiPrimarySch

2、oolin1986.Whenhewasinthemiddleschool,hedidgoodinmaths,physicsandchemistryandfondofart.AftergraduatingfromNo.4HighSchool,heenteredBeijingUniversitystudyphysics.Afterfouryearofhardworkthere,hewenttotheUnitedStatesforfurtherstudy.Becauseofhisexcellentwork,hegetadoctor'sdegreeinphysicsinlastyear.Hei

3、snowingoodhealthbutwouldliketomakecontributionstoourcountryIwillbemostgratefullyifyouconsidermyrecommendationLookingforwardtoreceiveyourearlyreply!Yourstruly,WangLin2. 短文改错Itseemsthattherearealargernumberofbeggarinthestreetsthanthereusedtobe.Idon'tknowhowweshouldhelpthemornot.OnceIgavesomemoneyt

4、oabeggarwholookspoor.However,minuteslate,Isawhimboughtsomecigarettes.Itreallyshockedatme.Inmyopinion,anyonewhoworkhardcanmakealiving.I'mafraidthatgivimngontheeymisn'betstwaytohelpthem.Maybethegovernmentcantakesomeactiontohelpingthem.Anyway,iftheywanttoliveabetterlife,theyshouldlearntodependo

5、nourselves.askedm3. 短文改错MyfathergofishingaloneeverySunday.Thismorningwhenweweregotup,itwasfine.Fatherdecidedtogofishing,somotherstoppedhim,saidthatitwasgoingtorainaccordingtotheweatherforecast.Sheaskedhimtoputoffhisraincoat,buthedidnottakeheradvices.Whenhegottotheriver,itwascloud.Soontherainbegantof

6、allheavilyandhewascaughtinit.Aftershegothome,hewaswetthrough.“Didyoucatchsomefish?mother.“No,butIcaughtbadcold,”heanswered.4. 短文改错WhilestudyinginBritain,IstayedwithaBritishfamily.Igottolearnaboutthelifeofcommonpeoplehere.Itooklotsofcourses,includedEnglishliterature,andthehistoryofBritain.Duringmysta

7、y,IhadvisitedmanylibrariesandmuseumsandItraveledtoseveralBritishcitiesaswell.Withthisway,IexperiencedpartofBritishculture.Thiswasreallyenjoyableandunforgettableexperience,thathelpedmeinmanyways.Firstly,Ilearnedtomakesomedecisionbymyself.Secondly,IgottoknowmanyaboutthedifferencesbetweenBritainandChin

8、a.Final,ImademanyfriendsthereandhadmyEnglishimprove.5. 短文改错MariawasafraidthatshewasgoingtohavetodeliverabadnewstoherfriendFreddy.Shewasupsettingaboutthenewsherself.Inthespring,MariamotherhadsaidMariamightbeallowedbringafriendalongonthefamilytwo-weekvacationatthebeach.Sincethen,MariaandFreddyhadbeend

9、oingnothingandplanningallthethingtheywoulddotogether.BythetimeAugusthadarrived,Maria'smotherhadtotalforgottenherpromise.WhenMariaremindedher,shesaidthatshewassorrybutthatitwouldn'tbeenoughroomforFreddybecauseMariacousin,Theresa,wouldbegoingtotheshorewiththem.NowFreddywasinhiswaytoMaria's

10、house.6. 短文改错Onceuponatimetherewasaboywhofondofreading.However,hewasverypoortobuyanybooks.Thatwasthereasonthathehadtoborrowbooksfromarichmanwhohadalotofbooks.Theboyknewclearlythathehastofinishreadingthebookshehadborrowedandreturnittotheownerassoonaspossible.Arichman,whowasreadytolendanyofhisbooktoth

11、eboy,readfewofhisownbooks.Withtimegoingon,theboyreadalotbutfinallybecameafamouswriterinhistime.Thoughtherichmanhadsuchmanybooks,heremainedamanwithlittleknowledgebecauseofheseldomreadhisbooks.7. 短文改错YangLi,afive-year-oldgirllivingnextdoortome,veryclever.Becausesheisnotoldenoughtogototheschool,sheofte

12、nasksmetoteachherselftoread,writeanddraw.Shestudieshardlyandsoonshelearnsalot.OneeveninglastmonthIwasdoingmyEnglishhomeworkswhenshecametomyhouse.SheaskedmehowIlearnedEnglish.dfin“Yogliwoalbridgeforsomuchknowledge,”Isaid.ShethenwantedtolearnEnglish,either.ShehaslearnedmanyEnglishwordssofarbutherparen

13、tsareverygratefultome.8. 短文改错WhenIwastenyearsold,IwenttoYangzhouwithtwoAmerican.Ibecametheirguide.First,wewenttotheShouxiRiver.Theywantedtolookaroundtheriverbytheboat.Afterbuythetickets,wegotintoaboat.Wewentaroundseeingthebeautifulsight.Afterthat,wewentshopping.Thesellerscouldn'tspokeErpisbghitw

14、asveryharder,Itriedmybestlistentotheirwordscarefullyandtranslatethesentences.Theyboughtsomelittlethingswiththeirhelp.Next,wewenttoasmallzoobuttooksomepictures.Whenwefelthunger,wewentoutandhadlunch.Afterlunch,wevisitedsomeoldhouseandlearnedmoreaboutChinesehistory.9. 短文改错（满分10分）Onenight,MrsRiley,aneld

15、erlywoman,waswalkingalongadark,Londonstreet.Shewascarryingherhandbaginonehandandaplasticshoppingbaginother.Therewassomebodyelseinthestreetexcepttwoyouths.Theywerestandinginadarkshopdoorway.Oneofthemwasverytallingoldenhair.Andtheotherwasshortandfat.Theyouthswaitedforafewmoments,andthenrunquicklyandqu

16、ietlytowardsMrsRiley.Thetallyouthheldhimfrombehinduntiltheotheryouthtriedtograspherhandbag.Suddenly,MrsRileythrewthetallyouthoverhershoulder.Hecrashedintotheotheryouthandtheyalllandedontheground.Withoutspeaking,MrsRileystruckthemontheheadwithherhandbag,andwalkedcalmaway.Thetwosurprisingyouthsweresti

17、llonthegroundwhenMrsRileywalkedacrossthestreettowardsadoorwithalightedsignaboveit.MrsRileypaused,turned,smiledandenteredintotheSouthLondonJudoClub.10. 单句改错Inrecentyears,duststormstakeplacemoreandmoreofteninthenorthofChinese.Herearesomegoodwaytohaveagoodtalkwithyourparents.DuringtheweekendItraveledby

18、airthefirsttimeinmylife.IwasreallyexcitingwhenIwasofferedtheopportunitytogotoGuangzhouformywork.Theexperiencehasshownthattravelingbyairisactuallythesafestwayofmakejourneys.IwishtoknowanythingmoreabouttheChinesewayofliving.Theboythoughtofawonderfullyidea.Pleasegivemesomeadvices.Iwonderatifyoucantellm

19、eaboutitinyourletter.Lifeinthetwenty-firstcenturywillbeverydifferentwithlifetoday.11. 短文改错Therearedifferenttrainticketforpeopletochoosefromwhentraveledbytrain.Theymaywanttobuyasingleticketandareturnticket.Asingleticketallowsthemenjoymorefreedomattheirdestinationwhileareturnnotonlyischeaperbutalsosav

20、ethemthetroubleofbuyingtheticketwhentheydecidetoreturn.Somepeoplepreferhardseatstosoftone.Youngpeopleliketohavehardseatsbecauseenjoythecompanyofotherpassengersiswhattheyneedduringajourney.Businessmenwouldnotliketohavesoftseats.Theywanttohaveagoodrest.Whentheygetoffthetrain,theywerestillenergeticandc

21、anrapidgoontodotheirjobs.12. 短文改错（10分）DearMr.Green,I'mLiHua,astudentwhomyouonceteachspokenEnglish.NowourschoolasksmeinviteyoutobeaspokenEnglishteacherontheEnglishSummerCampduringthesummerholiday.Hereisanythingabouttheactivity.ThecamplastsfromJuly,20andAugust10,2011.Inthemorning,you'llgivethr

22、eespokenEnglishclassessoyouareexpectingtopreparedifferenttopictocommunicatewithstudents.Intheafternoon,there'mreainoutsideactivitiessuchashavingsomepicnicsandvisitparksandmuseums,etc.Ihopeyouwillaccepttheinvitationevenifyouhavefreetime.13. 单句改错1.Shegotquiteangry,thinkthatshehadtodothisjobeveryda

23、y.2.Attheendofthethirdperiod,theAustralianswerewinningtoeightpoints.3. Therearealotoffactorsthatmakesinnovationpossible.4. We'repractisingevenmuchmoreregularlyandwe'retrainingharderthanever.5. Thebiggestsecretaboutinventingisanybodycandoit!14.短文改错Myclassmate,Hanks,havebeensickinhospitalforaw

24、eek.Yesterdayourclassdecidedsendhimsomeflowersandaskedmetobuytheflowers.Ihavehadahardtimegetthemsincethen.Iwenttotownimmediateafterclassyesterdayafternoononlytofoundtheflowershoptherealreadyclosed.SoIreturnedwithnothing.Icalleditmanytimesatthismorning.Butthelinewasalwaysbusy.WhileIfinallygotthrougha

25、tnoon,aladysaidshewasanewhandandcouldnottellmetheprices.Luckily,Ihaveclassesthisafternoon,butIamabouttogototownagain.ImustgettheflowersforHankstoday.15.短文改错Lastyearmyschoolplannedtosetupthefootballteam.IwasexicitingaboutthenewsthoughIwasafootballfan.Ienteredforit,onlytobetoldthatIwastoofat.However,t

26、heysaidtherewillbeatestthreemonthslater.IfIcouldloseweightsuccessful,Iwouldbeadmitted.SoIdecidedgetupearlyeverymorningtodoexercise.Itwasdifficultyformetogetupearly,especiallyinwinter.Imadeagreatefforttogetuponthefirstfewday,butIdidnotgetupthefollowdays.AtlastIfailedin.HowIregretnow!IfIhadcontinuedwi

27、thmyexercise,Iwouldhaveachievedmygoalandbecomeamemberofourschoolteamnow.参考答案1.1.in-on2.good-well3.fond前加was4. study蘭丿JUto5. yeaiyeai'i6*getgot7iii去荐8”butand9. gratefully-gratefuJ10. receive-recrivu)j书面表达，2.11seemsthattherear亡2largernumberdfbrggarmthesueelsthanthereusedto爲1donLiknowrhavrvreslicul

28、dhelpthemornot.OnceJgavescrmemoneytoabeggarwhfllookspoor.However,mtnutesjate,IsacwburnboulgotnecigarettesItreally切感期laterbuy/buyinggjicckaiatmeInmyopinion,anyonewhoworkhardcanmakeakvmgafieldthat孤jagttiewmoneyisn't"1bestwaytohelpthem.MaybethegavemmetUcantakesome蛾加tohtip覘themAtiyway,iftheywan

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31、Sfiiolcixhita-d,>EMIbidMht*苟煩：逼文加4.WhilestudyinginBritain,IstayedwithaBritishfamily.Igottolearnaboutthelifeofcommonpeoplehere.thereItooklotsofcourses,ineludedineludingEnglishliterature,andthehistoryofBritain.Duringmystay,Ihad删除visitedmanylibrariesandmuseumsandItraveledtoseveralBritishcitiesaswell

32、.WithInthisway,IexperieneedpartofBritishculture.ThiswasreallyAanenjoyableandunforgettableexperienee,thathelpedmeinmanyways.WhichFirstly,Ilearnedtomakesomedecisionbymyself.Secondly,Igottoknowmany_more/muchaboutthedecisionsdifferencesbetweenBritainandChina.FinalFinally,ImademanyfriendsthereandhadmyEng

33、lishimprove.improved5.MariawasafraidthatshewasgoingtohavetodeliverabadnewstoherfriendFreddy.theShewasupsettingaboutthenewsherself.Inthespring,Maria'smotherhadsaidMariaupsetmightbeallowedAbringafriendalongonthefamilytwo-weekvacationatthebeach.Sineestofamilythen.MariaandFreddyhadbeendoingnothingan

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35、swaytoMaria'shouse.on6.0nceuponatimetherewasaboywhoAfondofreading.However,hewasverypoortobuywastooanybooks.Thatwasthereasonthathehadtoborrowbooksfromarichmanwhohadalotofwhybooks.Theboyknewclearlythathehastofinishreadingthebookshehadborrowedandreturnhadittotheownerassoonaspossible.Arichman,whowas

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39、tjbon(Chin«s>hiuon-'byasw9.0nenight,MrsRiley,anelderlywoman,waswalkingalongadark,Londonstreet.ShewascarryingherhandbaginonehandandaplasticshoppingbaginAother.Therewasthesomebodyelseinthestreetexcepttwoyouths.Theywerestandinginadarkshopnobodydoorway.Oneofthemwasverytallin_goldenhair.Andth

40、eotherwasshortandfat.withTheyouthswaitedforafewmoments,andthenrunquicklyandquietlytowardsMrsranRiley.Thetallyouthheldhimfrombehinduntiltheotheryouthtriedtograspherherwhilehandbag.Suddenly,MrsRileythrewthetallyouthoverhershoulder.Hecrashedintotheotheryouthandtheyal_Iandedontheground.Withoutspeaking,M

41、rsRileystruckthembothontheheadwithherhandbag,andwalkedcalmaway.ThetwosurprisingyouthswerecalmlysurprisedstillonthegroundwhenMrsRileywalkedacrossthestreettowardsadoorwithalightedsignaboveit.MrsRileypaused,turned,smiledandenteredintotheSouthLondonJudoClub.10.61.Chinese-China62.way-ways63.air后加for64.ex

42、citing-excited65.of-to/make-making66.anything-something67.wonderfully-wonderful68.advices-advice69.去掉at70.with-from11.Therearedifferenttrainticketforpeopletochoosefromwhentraveledbytrain.Theymaywanttobuyasingleticketandareturnticket.AsingleticketallowsthemAenjoymorefreedomattheirdestinationwhilearet

43、urnnotonlyischeaperbutalsosavethemthetroubleofbuyingtheticketwhentheydecidetoreturn.Somepeoplepreferhardseatstosoftone.Youngpeopleliketohavehardseatsbecauseenjoythecompanyofotherpassengersiswhattheyneedduringajourney.Businessmenwouldnotliketohavesoftseats.Theywanttohaveagoodrest.Whentheygetoffthetra

44、in,theywerestillenergeticandcanrapidgoontodotheirjobs.I.ing3.or4.to5.saves6.ones7.enjoying8.not去掉9.are10.rapidly12.DearMr.Green,I'mLiHua,astudentwhomyouonceteachspokenEnglish.NowourschoolaskstaughtIntheafternoon,there'remainoutsideactivitiessuchashavingsomepicnicsmeAinviteyoutobeaspokenEnglishteacherontheEnglishSummerCampduringthesummertoforholiday.Hereisanythingabouttheactivity.ThecamplastsfromJuly20andAugust10,2011.Int