9.2022届高三二轮专题卷 英语（九）概要写作附答案解析

1、专题九概要写作XXXXXXXXX11. 阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。It is important that you teach your baby to read at an early age. Why? Obviously, being able to read is the basis for any successful education, so the earlier they start, the better. All too often, parents leave educating their children up to schools, wh

2、ich probably explains why the United States is currently ranked 18th in its rate of reading and writing.Teaching your baby to read provides brain exercise and it has also been shown to increase the babys IQ because there is simply no better time in a persons life for learning than when they are babi

3、es. During this time, their brains are developing rapidly. The sooner they begin to read, the sooner they can begin to learn other subjects. This way, by the time your children begin school, they will already know whats being taught, and will be put on the fast track. Maybe they will even skip a gra

4、de down the road. One of the cases was 17-month-old Elizabeth Barrett who drew publics attention. She was given a series of words and even sentences that she could read quite well. Her parents had been reading to her since she was born and had provided her with a very early education.Reading is the

5、most important thing to teach babies at a young age. It doesnt have to be stressful or difficult for your child. Learning can be fun at such an early age, and it can be accomplished so easily that they wont have to struggle in order to learn.If youre interested in teaching your baby to read, the bes

6、t way to start is by spending just a few minutes every day. Flash cards are a helpful tool. Simply show your baby matching picture on the opposite side. There are also videos that help to teach babies to read. There is no better time to teach your baby to read than the present._【参考范文】Teaching your b

7、aby to read as young as possible is crucial owing to the necessity of obtaining good education. (要点一) It needs starting as soon as possible because babies intelligence will be improved when their brains develop fast. (要点二) Important as it is, relaxation and easiness could be brought into the learnin

8、g process. (要点三) Therefore, for people keen on teaching babies to read, it is high time to begin with sparing some time regularly with effective teaching materials. (要点四)【写作分析】本文是一篇说明文。文章介绍说，为了获得良好的教育，让你的孩子从小就学会阅读是非常重要的。这需要尽快开始，因为婴儿的智力会随着大脑的快速发展而提高。重要的是，放松和轻松可以被带入学习过程。因此，对于那些热衷于教宝宝阅读的人来说，现在应该从定期抽出一些

9、时间来阅读有效的教材开始。1. 要点摘录It is important that you teach your baby to read at an early age. Why? Obviously, being able to read is the basis for any successful education, so the earlier they start, the better.Teaching your baby to read provides brain exercise and it has also been shown to increase the baby

10、s IQ because there is simply no better time in a persons life for learning than when they are babies.Learning can be fun at such an early age, and it can be accomplished so easily that they wont have to struggle in order to learn.If youre interested in teaching your baby to read, the best way to sta

11、rt is by spending just a few minutes every day.There is no better time to teach your baby to read than the present.2. 缜密构思要点二和要点三之间形成因果关系，整合四、五要点3. 遣词造句Teaching your baby to read as young as possible is crucial owing to the necessity of obtaining good education.It needs starting as soon as possible

12、because babies intelligence will be improved when their brains develop fast. Important as it is, relaxation and easiness could be brought into the learning process. Therefore, for people keen on teaching babies to read, it is high time to begin with sparing some time regularly with effective teachin

13、g materials.【范文点评】高分句型1Teaching your baby to read as young as possible is crucial owing to the necessity of obtaining good education.（teaching为动名词作主语，用一个简单句总结了原文第一段的内容）高分句型2Important as it is, relaxation and easiness could be brought into the learning process.（用as引导让步状语从句，总结文章第三段的内容）22. 阅读下面短文，根据其内容

14、写一篇60词左右的内容概要。The manta ray is one of the largest fishes in the world, reaching up to 29 feet in width. And manta rays are some of the friendliest creatures. They allow divers to swim right up to them. Unfortunately, these gentle animals are in big trouble. Since 2011, manta rays have been listed as

15、 a threatened species worldwide.Overfishing is considered the biggest threat to giant manta numbers, both intentional and accidental. People catch manta rays for their gill plates the parts through which they filter their food from seawater are sold in China for medical purposes. Driven by the huge

16、demand, fishermen have hunted them mercilessly. From 2010 to 2013, the number of rays killed annually to supply the gill plate market tripled to 150,000. Clearly, overfishing is bad for any sea creature, but its even worse for giant manta rays. Female mantas usually have only one baby, every two to

17、five years. So every manta ray that was caught hurts the population in a big way.To protect giant manta population, Peru, a country in South America, recently took a big step to protect giant manta rays. It banned fishing for them. People who break the law can be fined or have their fishing licenses

18、 taken away. Even manta rays caught accidentally in fishing nets must be released. Although other countries have passed laws to protect manta rays, Perus may be the most important one yet, because there are more giant manta rays in the Pacific Ocean near Peru than in any other place in the world.Sci

19、entists working in the Manta Trust, an organization that researches manta rays, are also trying to protect manta rays by learning more about them. Earlier this year, the organization attached video cameras, called Crittercams, to manta rays off the west coast of Mexico. The photos the cameras collec

20、t could help researchers predict where and when manta rays swim. The scientist could use the information to warn fishing boats to avoid these areas, helping reduce the number of accidentally caught manta rays._【参考范文】Though being large and friendly, the giant manta ray are in danger.(要点1) Due to its

21、medical value and huge profit, manta rays are over-hunted, which can be more detrimental for the species given its low productivity.(要点2) To save the endangered species, the Peru government has taken the initiative, carrying out strict laws.(要点3) Besides, scientists are making attempts to protect ma

22、nta rays through gaining more knowledge of them.(要点4)【写作分析】本文是一篇说明文。文章介绍说，尽管巨大的蝠鲼又大又友好，但它们正处于危险之中。由于它的医疗价值和巨大的利润，蝠鲼被过度猎杀，考虑到它的低生产力，这可能对这个物种更有害。为了拯救濒危物种，秘鲁政府采取了主动，实施了严格的法律。此外，科学家们正试图通过更多地了解蝠鲼来保护它们。1. 要点摘录 The manta ray is one of the largest fishes in the world, reaching up to 29 feet in width. And ma

23、nta rays are some of the friendliest creatures. Unfortunately, these gentle animals are in big trouble.Overfishing is considered the biggest threat to giant manta numbers, both intentional and accidental. People catch manta rays for their gill plates the parts through which they filter their food fr

24、om seawater are sold in China for medical purposes.To protect giant manta population, Peru, a country in South America, recently took a big step to protect giant manta rays. It banned fishing for them. People who break the law can be fined or have their fishing licenses taken away.Scientists working

25、 in the Manta Trust, an organization that researches manta rays, are also trying to protect manta rays by learning more about them.2. 缜密构思，将第1个要点进行总说，将第2、3、4三个要点进行分说。3. 遣词造句Though being large and friendly, the giant manta ray are in danger.Due to its medical value and huge profit, manta rays are ove

26、r-hunted, which can be more detrimental for the species given its low productivity.To save the endangered species, the Peru government has taken the initiative, carrying out strict laws.Besides, scientists are making attempts to protect manta rays through gaining more knowledge of them.【范文点评】高分句型1Du

27、e to its medical value and huge profit, manta rays are over-hunted, which can be more detrimental for the species given its low productivity.运用一个复杂的主从复合句对原文第二段进行了概括，其中which引导非限制性定语从句。高分句型2To save the endangered species, the Peru government has taken the initiative, carrying out strict laws.用不定式作目的状语

28、对第三段进行了概括。33. 阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Parents always want the best for their children and giving them; the best education is always on top of the list. But if you think education is all they need, maybe you should think twice. Sure, you learn a lot of things in school, but there are important less

29、ons and skills you will need in life that one can only learn at home. Therefore, teaching the children to do household chores is very helpful in their growth. Most families nowadays hire housemaids to do the chores, so children dont get to experience doing it anymore. But studies argue that its stil

30、l necessary to let children do them.Helping at home can be a training place for your children to whatever responsibilities they may have in the future. By doing so, they can learn what might be of their advantage when they grow up. “Performing chores offers kids a feeling of self-sufficiency, helps

31、them develop a work ethic, is tied to academic success in school, makes them feel useful and teaches them the importance of helping others and contributing to the greater good.”Although, most parents can also argue that it is not easy to force their children to do chores. It is a nature for the chil

32、dren to refuse to do chores when they are told to. But there are ways that can turn household chores into a more likely activity for the children. First, start them young. This doesnt mean that you let your children do huge tasks at an early age. You can gradually increase the level of tasks as they

33、 grow old but never ever push them too hard. Second, appreciate every little achievement. Praise them or give them something. Children love rewards and it drives them to do better.Most importantly, let them know that asking them to help-out is not a punishment. Chores should never be used as a punis

34、hment. They might get done in the short term, but the effects wont last. This approach does not give the child the feeling of doing something because it is the right thing to do. It only makes them hate chores and hoping out even more. Chores should be used as a sense of purpose. Explain to them tha

35、t it is for their benefit and everything they learn from it is for their advantage._【参考范文】Teaching children to do household chores is very helpful in their growth, which can make home a training place for your children to whatever responsibilities they may have in the future. Although its hard to fo

36、rce children to do chores, there are ways that can turn household chores into a more likely activity for the children. But most importantly, chores should be used as a sense of purpose instead of a punishment.【写作分析】本文是一篇议论文。文章主要论述了让孩子学做家务对于孩子成长的重要性，它可以培养孩子的责任心，同时，要运用合理的方式鼓励孩子学做家务，而不是将做家务作为惩罚，要让做家务成为

37、一种使命感。1. 要点摘录Therefore, teaching the children to do household chores is very helpful in their growth.Helping at home can be a training place for your children to whatever responsibilities they may have in the future.Although, most parents can also argue that it is not easy to force their children to

38、 do chores.But there are ways that can turn household chores into a more likely activity for the children.Most importantly, let them know that asking them to help-out is not a punishment.Chores should be used as a sense of purpose.2. 缜密构思将第、两个要点进行整合；将第、两个要点进行整合；将第、两个要点进行整合。3. 遣词造句Teaching children t

39、o do household chores is very helpful in their growth, which can make home a training place for your children to whatever responsibilities they may have in the future.Although its hard to force children to do chores, there are ways that can turn household chores into a more likely activity for the c

40、hildren.But most importantly, chores should be used as a sense of purpose instead of a punishment.【范文点评】高分句型1Teaching children to do household chores is very helpful in their growth, which can make home a training place for your children to whatever responsibilities they may have in the future.运用一个复

41、杂的主从复合句对原文第一段和第二段进行了概括。其中which引导的非限制性定语从句等表达高级。高分句型2Although its hard to force children to do chores, there are ways that can turn household chores into a more likely activity for the children.用although引导让步状语从句对第三段进行了概括，且句中“that”引导定语从句修饰先行词“ways”，表达非常高级。44. 阅读下面短文，根据内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Bees are very str

42、ange creatures. They have their own way of telling each other that they have found a new flower. They bring some of its nectar (花蜜) back home and then do a little dance that shows where the flower is and how far away it is.In autumn the worker bees go out and collect as much nectar and pollen (花粉) a

43、s they can carry. Then they return to make honey and store it for the long cold winter.Bees build their own houses but they do not always have round tops like people draw them in storybooks. They are usually five storeys high. The queen bee always has the bottom storey. In between the bottom storey

44、and all the rest there are bars only just wide enough for the workers to pass through. The queen bee can never go up to the other floors because she is bigger than all the other bees. The storeys the queen cant enter are where the store rooms are. There are rooms for pollen, nectar and royal jellies

45、 (蜂王浆). If there is a fire the workers have to cover the walls and entrance of the rooms. They have to move the honey and the nectar and pollen away from the hot walls of the room.The queen is the only that can lay eggs. She mates with a male bee called a drone. Once the queen has laid the eggs she

46、throws the drone out because a drone just sits around eating honey and nectar. He cannot go out and collect pollen because drones do not have pollen-carrying things on their legs like the workers have.Young bees are called nurses because they have to nurse the newborn bees whether they like it or no

47、t. What a bee ends up being when it grows up depends on what it eats. If it is to be a queen it must feed on royal jellies and it must never, ever set eyes on another queen. If it does they must fight till only one of them is still alive._【参考范文】Bees are weird animals and have a unique way to communi

48、cate with one another. (要点1) Worker bees work tirelessly to store food. (要点2) Unlike worker bees, the relaxing queen bee takes up the bottom storey of the five-storey house. (要点3) She even deserts the drone after she finishes using him. (要点4) Same as worker bees, young bees need to work to care for

49、newborn bees, but they can only leave their futures to what they eat. (要点5)【写作分析】本文是一篇说明文。文章主要介绍蜜蜂家族生存习性、不同分工及蜂房布局。1. 要点摘录1）Bees are very strange creatures. They have their own way of telling each other that they have found a new flower. 2）In autumn the worker bees go out and collect as much nectar

50、and pollen (花粉) as they can carry. Then they return to make honey and store it for the long cold winter.3）They are usually five storeys high. The queen bee always has the bottom storey.4）The queen is the only that can lay eggs. She mates with a male bee called a drone.5）Young bees are called nurses

51、because they have to nurse the newborn bees whether they like it or not. 2. 缜密构思将1、2、3、4、5段各概括为一个要点，共5个要点。3. 遣词造句Bees are weird animals and have a strange way to communicate with each another.Worker bees work very hard to store food.Unlike worker bees, the relaxing queen bee always takes up the bott

52、om storey of the five-storey house.She even throws the drone out after she finishes using him.Young bees need to work to care for newborn bees, but they can only leave their futures to what they eat.【范文点评】高分句型1Unlike worker bees, the relaxing queen bee takes up the bottom storey of the five-storey h

53、ouse.运用介词短语作状语，对第三段内容进行概括，简练明白。高分句型2She even deserts the drone after she finishes using him.运用含有时间状语从句的复合句对第四段内容进行高度概括。高分句型3Same as worker bees, young bees need to work to care for newborn bees, but they can only leave their futures to what they eat.运用文章纽带衔接词but，以及名词性从句what they eat将第五段进行高度概括。55. 阅读下面短文，根据内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。College students need textbooks to help them learn and earn an academic degree. However,