英语书面表达的解题步骤及解题技巧

1、书面表达的解题步骤及解题技巧应该能把要点说全，而且能说好。写作时要注意有条理地陈述要点，将两种观点陈述清楚的同时不忘表明自己的态度，而且对自己的态度作重点阐述。具体可以按如下步骤：第一步，编写提纲，列出重点词汇。第二步，将词汇扩展成句子。第三步，用合适的关连词、过渡语使句子顺利成章。最后通读全文，作修改和补充。确定时态。因汉语中无此语言现象，不少考生常犯此类错误。考生要强化这方面的意识，因为每一个句子都涉及时态，高考评分要求中时态错误原则上从应得分中扣除5分。因此，考生务必根据文意，确定全文正确时态。为避免题目中的要点遗漏，杜绝文不对题的语句，可先将这些要点逐条译成英语。所列要点可以是主要的动

2、词、动词词组、短语及句型。要使用自己熟悉的词汇或句型来表达。选用正确的时态和语态，把所列的词、词组、短语等扩展成句。并运用表示递进、转折、因果、选择的连词或具有连接意义的副词或过渡句等将所列的语句连成完整的语篇。全文应过渡自然，结构紧凑，前后连贯。这是书面表达中最关键的一步。应从以下四个角度进行认真的审核与修改：1. 词法角度。主要检查所用词语是否正确，搭配是否妥当；拼写是否有误；名词的单复数是否到位；代词的格和性是否恰当；词性是否混淆等；2. 句法角度。主要检查句子结构是否完整；动词时态语态是否正确；人称是否符合要求；主谓是否一致；非谓语动词是否恰当；句子的表达是否符合英语表达习惯等；3.

3、语篇角度。主要检查文章体裁、格式是否正确；词数是否符合要求；要点是否遗漏或误解；情节发展是否合理；过渡词句是否自然；语篇是否连贯；行文是否符合逻辑等。4. 书写角度。主要检查字母大小写是否恰当匀称；标点符号是否运用正确；是否符合英语规范；书写是否工整；斜体是否一致；卷面是否整洁等。“字体美观，格式正确，卷面整洁”是赢得阅卷老师“情感分”的首要因素。影响书面表达得分的几个因素高考书面表达评分标准：第五档（很好）（21-25分）完全完成了试题规定的任务。覆盖所有内容要点；应用了较多的语法结构和词汇；语法结构或词汇有些许错误，但为尽力使用复杂结构或高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力；有效地使用了语

4、句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑；完全达到了预期的写作目的。第四档（好）（16-20分）：完全完成了试题规定的任务。虽漏掉1、2个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容；应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求；语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试复杂语法结构或词汇所致；应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑；达到了预期的写作目的。第三档（适当）（11-15分）：基本完成了试题规定的任务。虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有主要内容；有语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解；应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文内容连贯；整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。写作一定要分段高考英文作文30例活用句型用于文章

5、承转句 1. 那就是(说)；亦即That is to say, = That is, = Namely, 例：我们生活需有规律。也就是说，早睡早起戒除烟酒。We need to live a regular life. That is, we can keep good hours and refrain from smoking and drinking in the daily activities. 2. (A) 基于这个理由 For this reason (B) 为了这个目的 For this purpose, 例：基于这个理由，我已决定把行医作为未来的职业。For this rea

6、son, I have decided to take practicing medicine as my future career.3. 我们有理由相信We have reasons to believe (that)子句例：我们有理由相信体罚应该严格禁止。We have reasons to believe that corporal punishment should be strictly prohibited.4. 事实上As a matter of fact, = In fact, 例：事实上健康才是最重要。As a matter of fact, it is health th

7、at counts.5. (A) 例如 For example, (B) 拿做例子Take for example.例：例如我们盲目地提高生活水准，却降低生活品质。For example, we elevate the living standards blindly, but lower the quality of life.6. 此外我们不应忽视Besides (In addition), we should not neglect 例：此外，我们不应忽视每个人都想要一个温馨祥和的社会。In addition, we should not neglect that everyone wa

8、nts a friendly and peaceful society.7. 相反地on the contrary, = by contrast, 例：相反地少数学生似乎还在鬼混。On the contrary, a few students, it seems, are still fooling around.8. 另一方面on the other hand, 例：政府应严格执法，另一方面大众也应该培养减少污染的好习惯。The government should enforce laws strictly. On the other hand, the public also should

9、 develop the good habit of reducing pollution.9. 然而很可惜的是However, it is a pity that子句例：然而很可惜的是他总是临时抱佛脚。However, it is a pity that he should always cram at the eleventh hour.10. 换言之in other words, = to put it differently例：换言之我会尽最大的努力达成我的目标。In other words, I will try my best to attain (gain, live up to

10、) my goal.11. 别人可能认为这是事实，但我不是。我认为It may be true as assumed by others, but I dont. I believe that子句例：别人可能认为这是事实，但我不是。我认为It may be true as assumed by others, but I dont. I believe that if you have strong determination and perseverance, the success will certainly come to you in the end.12. 从此之后我已发现Ever

11、 since then, I have found that子句例：从此之后我已发现Ever since then, I have found smile the best way to avoid any possible conflicts in our daily lives.13. 这样说来，假如当然毫无疑问地In this light, if, there can surely be no doubt (that) 子句例：这样说来，假如我们能善用时间，当然毫无疑问地我们会成功。In this light, if we can make good use of time, there

12、 can surely be no doubt that we will get somewhere.14. 更严重的是What is more serious is (that)子句例：更严重的是我们不珍惜野生动物。What is more serious is that we do not cherish the wildlife.15. 鉴于社会的实际需要In view of the practical need of society, .例：鉴于社会的实际需要，愈来愈多人对学英语有兴趣。In view of the practical need of society, there ar

13、e more and more people interested in learning English.用于文章结论句16. 如果能实践这三点If one can really put the three points into action (practice), 例：如果能实践这三点。If one can really put the three points into action(practice), he will surely be able to live a healthy and happy life.17. 做这些简单之事，我们一定可以By doing these si

14、mple things, we surely can .例：做这些简单之事，我们一定可以快乐出门平安回家。By doing these simple things, we surely can go out of the door happily and come back home safe every day.18. 如此我相信In this way, I believe (that)子句例：如此，我相信大家能够像我一样享受乘坐公车的乐趣。In this way, I believe that all the people may be able to enjoy the bus ride

15、 like me.19. 实践这些By putting them (the above) into practice, .例：实践这些，在智育方面我一直能不断进步。By putting them(the above) into practice, I have been able to make constant progress in intellectual education.20. (A) 唯有符合此三项要求，我们才能Only by living up to the three requirements, can we .(B) 唯有通力合作，我们才能Only with combine

16、d efforts, can we .例：唯有通力合作，我们才能期望台湾不久有新的面貌。Only with combined efforts, can we expect Taiwan to take a new face in due course.21. 最后，但并非最不重要Last but no least, .例：最后，但并非最不重要，教育上的缺失是助长青少年犯罪的原因。Last but no least, the shortcoming in education is the cause contributing to juvenile delinquency.22. 这证据显示的重

17、要性在怎么强调都不为过。This evidence shows that the importance of .cannot be overemphasized.例：这证据显示交通安全的重要性在怎么强调都不为过。This evidence shows that the importance of traffic safety cannot be overemphasized.23. 由于这些理由，我For these reasons, I .例：由于这些理由，我认为在台湾接受大学教育是明智的。For these reasons, I think that receiving college e

18、ducation in Taiwan is wise.24. 总而言之In conclusion, = To sum up, 例：总而言之好国民应该遵守交通规则。In conclusion, a good citizen should abide by traffic regulations.25. 因此我们能下个结论，那就是We can, therefore, come to the conclusion (that)子句例：因此我们能下个结论，那就是世上自由最珍贵。We can, therefore, come to the conclusion that nothing is so pr

19、ecious as freedom in the world.26. 如果我们能做到如上所述，毫无疑问地If we can do as mentioned above, there can be no doubt (that)子句例：如果我们能做到如上所述，毫无疑问地，我们就能精通英语。If we can do as mentioned above, there can be no doubt that we can master English.27. 因此，这就是的原因Thus, this is the reason why .例：因此，这就是我重感冒的原因。Thus, this is t

20、he reason why I caught a bad cold.28. 所以，我们应该了解Therefore, we should realize (that)子句例：所以，我们应该了解学英文不能没有字典。Therefore, we should realize that in learning English we cannot do without a dictionary.29. 因此，由上列的讨论我们可以明了We, therefore, can make clear from the above discussion (that)子句例：因此，由上列的讨论我们可以明了毅力可以克服任

21、何困难。We, therefore, can make clear from the above discussion that perseverance can overcome any difficulty.30. 1. 从观点来看 From the point of view, 2. 根据的看法 According to point of view, .例：从政治的观点来看，From the political point常见的过渡词语有：并列类and； also； not only but also； neithernor；as well as转折类but； however； neve

22、rtheless 递进类even； besides； whats more； to make things even worse时序类first； next； then； shortly after； finally； meanwhile强调类especially； indeed； at least； 例证类for example； such as； like； in ones opinion； that is (to say)对比类on the contrary； on the other hand； while； (al)though因果类thanks to； because； as a

23、result； so； due to； so that总结类in a word； in short； as you know； generally speaking学生习作：TV And WebsiteTV and website are popular media. They have something in common. Both of them make money from ads. Websites also have different sections. You may choose the one you are most interested in. They are d

24、ifferent in many ways. Moving pictures are shown on TV with sound and interpretation. It makes you feel that you are just on the spot. The programs change every day. Professional TV reporters do the report for TV. Some information on websites changes all the time. Not all of it is so updated. Everyb

25、ody can write articles for websites rather than professional reporter.Every medium has its own features. It is hard to say which is better.分析：这段文字用简单句表达，它们之间内在的逻辑关系含糊不清，意思支离破碎。如果使用过渡词，将单句与其前后合并，形成主次关系，就把一个比较复杂的内容和关系表达得层次清楚、结构严谨。修改后的文章： TV and WebsiteBoth TV and website are popular media. They have s

26、omething in common. Both of them make money from ads. Similar to TV, websites also have different sections, so that you may choose the one you are most interested in. However, they are different in many ways. Above all, moving pictures are shown on TV with sound and interpretation, which makes you f

27、eel as if you are just on the spot. Then, the programs change every day and professional TV reporters do the report for TV. Unlike TV, some information on websites change all the time, but not all of it is so updated. In addition, everybody can write articles for websites rather than professional re

28、porter.In a word, every medium has its own features, so it is hard to say which is better. 修改后的文章用过渡词来衔接上下段第一段第一句为：Both TV and website are popular media. They have something in common.第二段第一句为：However, they are different in many ways.第三段第一句为：In a word, every medium has its own features这篇短文每一段的第一句都是主题

29、句，在每个主题句前使用bothand, however, in a word使全文有序地衔接起来。修改后的文章中还恰当的使用了其他的一些过渡词，也使文章增色不少。以下我们在一起看一看2005年高考江西卷书面表达试题及参考例文，注意其中过渡词的使用。原题：人们对于学生网上交友持不同意见。请你用英语写一篇关于学生网上交友的短文，介绍人们的不同观点，并表达自己的看法。赞成的理由反对的理由你的看法1广交朋友2可自由表达思想3利于外语学习1浪费时间2影响学习3可能上当受骗？注意：1文章必须包括表中的全部内容。2词数为100左右。3参考词汇： 网络朋友on-line friend(s)，上当受骗to be

30、 cheated范文：:Should students make friends on line? Some people say yes. The internet helps make many friends. Chatting on line, students can more freely express their feelings and opinions, and even get help with their foreign language studies.Others, however, think students should not. They say maki

31、ng friends on line is a waste of time, which should be spent more meaningfully on study. Besides, some students get cheated on line.It is my opinion that students should place their study, health and safety before other things. As for friendship, we can readily find it in our classmates and other pe

32、ople around us.下面我们来具体看一篇英语书面表达学生习作如何修改：原题：假设你叫李华，今年暑假你的朋友Jane及其家人要到北戴河度假。她想租一套合适的住房。你碰巧在网上发现几则租房广告，认为其中一个较为合适，于是你将广告中的相关信息用e-mail发给Jane，供她参考。内容：房子位于城区，距机场高速公路仅一公里；备有安全系数高的停车场；附近有医院和现代化购物中心；要了解更详细的情况，请查阅网址。100词左右。学生习作：Dear Jane,Im very glad to hear you will come to Beidahe to spend your summer holid

33、ay with your family. Ive just read several ads for house rent from the Internet, they might interest you, I think.One of the flat lies in the city seems to be suitable. It is only one km from the flat to the freeway leading to the airport, meanwhile, there is a safely-guarded parking area. And you c

34、an find a hospital and a modern shopping center nearby. The good designed flat looks fine and there is enough room for your family. If you need father information, you may look up the webside “www.”.评析：就文章内容而言，这是一篇相当不错的学生习作。要点齐全、行文连贯、条理清晰；当然，习作也有不少不足之处。以下我们一起按步骤来检查一下这篇习作。1）字数：本文每行大约18个单词，6行左右，总计100词

35、左右。字数符合题目要求。2）段落：本文分为两段，基本合理。也可把最后一句话“If you need father information, you may look up the webside “www.”.”另起一段。3) 本文是一篇e-mail，属于书信，应有固定格式。但该篇习作作者忽视了这一点，文章缺少了结束语和署名。须在正文后另起一行，空34个字符加上结束语，如“Best wishes!”；在右下角署名“Yours, Li Hua”。4）就该篇文章的遣词造句而言，interest you, safely-guarded等词语的运用增强了文章的表达力度，总体还是相当不错的。5）检查拼写

36、、标点和语法错误。A. “wiil come”应该成“are coming”，因为come，go，leave等瞬间动词ichangyong进行时标将来。B. “，they”此处可将逗号改为句号，“they”首字母大写；或真该为which引导的非限制性定于从句。C. 根据语意，此处“lies”应改为“lying”，分词短语做后置定语。D. “meanwhile”是副词而非连词，不能连接两个句子。此处，可在“meanwhile”前加“and”；或者逗号改称句号，变成两个句子。E. “And you can find a hospital and a modern shopping center n

37、earby.”此句改为there be句型：“And there is a hospital and a modern shopping center as well nearby.”使前后举行一致，行文更连贯。F. 用词不当，此处“farther”应该为“further”。6) 再次检查卷面是否整洁。下面是修改后的文章：Dear Jane,Im very glad to hear you are coming to Beidahe to spend your summer holiday with your family. Ive just read several ads for hous

38、e rent from the Internet, which might interest you, I think.One of the flat lying in the city seems to be suitable. It is only one km from the flat to the freeway leading to the airport, and meanwhile, there is a safely-guarded parking area. And there is a hospital and a modern shopping center as we

39、ll nearby. The good designed flat looks fine and there is enough room for your family. If you need further information, you may look up the webside “www.”.Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua运用以上讲解的书面表达写作技巧，我们再来看下面这样一篇书面表达:原题：联合国教科文组织某考察团正在我国某乡村参观考察.假定你是接待人员,请根据下列提示以发言稿的形式简要介绍这个村的情况：大小:近100户人家,约500口人。变化:过去很穷,

40、78年后变化很大.人们生活比以前好多了。现已旧貌换新颜。教育:原来的学校很小,现已经过改建.新建的教学楼有4层,是村里最美的建筑物.村所有学龄儿童在此免费就读。注意：(1)要点齐全,前后连贯。(2)词数:100-120之间。分析: 根据试题中所提供要点,将所需要的语言材料准备好。可以只列出主要的词、词组、短语及句型。 100 families and 500 people used to be very poor/ change a lot/ richer than before/ take on a new look was very small/ have been rebuilt new

41、ly-built/have 4 storeys/ most beautiful building school-age children/ enjoy free education 扩展成句,连句成篇；注意体裁、格式。本文为一篇发言稿，其格式与口头通知大体相同。因此，短文应有称呼，开场及结束语。既然介绍的是小村，所使用的人称应为it。应注意时态，语态的正确运用，并适当使用一些连接成分将所列的语句连成完整的语篇。全文应结构紧凑，前后连贯。Ladies and gentlemen,Welcome to our village! This village is very small. It has

42、nearly 100 families and about 500 people. It used to be very poor. It has changed a lot since 1978 . People here are richer than before. Now it is taking on a new look.In the past, the school here was very small. Now it has been rebuilt. The newly built teaching building. has 4 storeys and it is the most beautiful building in the village. All the school-age children can study here. They enjoy free education in it.