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1、短文改错专练WhenMollysfatherwasabouttowork,hisdaughterMolly,aged8,handhimabag.Thefatherwasinhurrysohedidntknowwhatwasinside.Whilehavinglunch,hetookoutthecontents:aplasticdinosaur,atinyseashellandthreesmallstone.Thebusyfathersmiled,finishedeating,andsweepingthedeskcleanintothedustbinincludeMollysjunk.Thise

2、vening,Mollywantedherbagbackbecauseshehadnotmadeanoteintoit:Iloveyou,Daddy.Thefatherwenttohisofficehurried,carryingthejunkhome.HeaskedMollytotellheraboutthejunk.Itwasturnedoutthateverythinginthebaghadastory.ToMollytheywerenotjunkandtreasures!ALastweekendourschoolholdasportsmeeting.Realizingitwasourl

3、astschoolsportsmeeting,wedecidedtomakeitaunforgettableexperience.Wefirstattendedtheopeningceremony,forwhomourclasshadmadealotofpreparations.Muchforourexcitement,ourperformancewasasuccess.Myclassmatestookpartinvariousevent,suchasrunning,highjumpandlongjump.Duetothehardtraining,theathleteshavedonebefo

4、re,theirperformancewasveryimpressively.Myclassmatesapplaudedandcheeredfortheathletes,someraisingtheircamerastocapturetheexcitedmoments.Theresultwasannounced.Ourclasswonthesecondplaceandoureffortswerepaidoff!Cupinhand,wetookapicturetogetherproudly.Thissportsmeetingwillbeapreciousmemoryforallofthemast

5、imegoesby.BManyofusarefamiliartotheWorldCup,afootballcompetitionwhichispopularamongpeopleinalmostallnation.Doyouknowthereisanotherfootballcompetitionthatwaswellknownworldwide?ItscaBowlandisheldeveryJanuaryintheUSA.Itisverydifferentfromthefootballweknow.However,themoreyouknowaboutthem,thewellyouwilll

6、ikeit.EachyeartheSuperBowlisplayedindifferentAmericancity.Thisisofgreatimportantbecauseithelpsmakesurethatthegameisfair.NowtheSuperBowlisbroadcastonTVallovertheworld.ButifyouwanttoseetheSuperBowllively,youhadbettertohavealotofmoney,sincetheticketforthegameisprettyexpensive.CYesterdaymyEnglishteacher

7、askedeachstudentwriteacompositiontitle“TheGreatestAchieveLife”I.wasnotsurehowtowriteaboutit.Ivtehoughtitoverforalongtime.Idomanythings.ComingtoAmerica,getajobandmeetingnewpeoplewasmyachievements.IthinkmygreatestachievementislearningEnglish.ThoughsometimeIdontaunnddevrestrythingpeoplearesaying,buteac

8、hdayIgetbetterandbetter.Itoldmyteacherthiswasdifficultcompositiontowrite.Aboveall,itishardtomeasureeverythingyouhavedone.DTomisoneofmybestfriendsathighschool.Wespentalotoftimetogethereveryday.Wesharealotcommon.Forexample,webothworkhardlyandlovesports.AlthoughIamnotsosmartasher,webothdoverywellatscho

9、ol.TomsfavoritesubjectsishistoryandChinese,andhealsospeaksexcellentEngalimshu.sIedtobebadatEnglish.Thanktohishelp,Ihavemadeagreatprogressinit.Yesterday,ourEnglishteachersaidshedecidedtoholdanEnglishspeechcontestnextweek.IthinkagoodchancetoimprovemyEnglish.BothTomandIarelookingforwardtoshowourpotenti

10、alinthespeechcontest!EOneday,littleTonywenttoashoppingcenterwithhisparent.Itwasverycrowded.Tonysawatoyonashopwindow.Helikeditsoverymuchthathequicklywalkedintotheshop.Afterlooksatthetoyforsometime,heturnedaroundandfoundwherehisparentsweremissing.Tonywasscaredandbeguntocry.Awomansawhimcryingandtelling

11、himtowaitoutsideashop.Fiveminuteslater,Tonysawparents.Momsaid,“Hownicetoseeyouagain!DadandIwereterribleworried.”Tonypromisedherthatthiswouldneverhappenagain.FMysoccercoachretiredinlastweek.Iwantedtodoanythingspecialforhimathisretirementparty.Mymummakesthebetterbiscuitsintheworld,soIdecidetoaskherfor

12、help.Mumtaughtmesomebasicstepofbaking.Iinsistedondoingmostofthebakingmyself.Ithoughtthebiscuitswerereallywell.MyonlymistakewasthatIdroppedsomeonthefloorafterIwaspackingthemup.Ataparty,mycoach,withabiscuitinhismouth,askedsurprisinglywhomadethemandjoked,“Imighthavetoretireagainnextyearjustgetsomemoreo

13、fthesebiscuits.”Myfavoritepictureatthepartyisofmycoachandmeenjoythebiscuitswithhappylaughter!GHi,Janice,ItsbeenamonthsinceIcametothisnewschoolandIreallywantsharewithyousomeoftheproblemsIhavebeenexperiencing.AsItellyoulasttime,Imadethreenewfriendhere.Wehangouttogetherduringlunchandafterschool.Wevebee

14、nspendingalotoftimesinginkaraokebars.ItsbeenthreeSaturdaysnowanditreallycostsmemany.AndIstartedtoseethisasatime-wastingactivity!Infact,Idontliketogoanymore,soImafraidIlllosetheirfriendship.HowdoyouthinkIshoulddo?Ifyouareme,wouldyoutalktohim?Pleasehelpwithmeandgivemesomeadvice.GraceHMyoldclassroomwas

15、interestingbecausethreesideoftheclassroomweremadefromglass.Ienjoyedsitclosetothewindowsandlookingattheview.Ontheleft-handsideoftheclass,Icouldeasyseethefootballfield.Inthemornings,itwasfullofstudentsexercising.Theviewfromthebackoftheclassroomisalsosplendid.Closetotheschooltherewasabeautifulparkwithm

16、anytreesaroundthem.Fartherinthedistance,Icouldnotenjoytheviewofsnowymountains.Ontherightsideoftheclasswastheroad.Iwasalwaysinterestedtoseethedriversinhurryinthemorning.ThepositionoftheclassroomwithitsviewmademefeltlikeIwasdreaming.IfIwasonlyachildwhenIstudiedinthatclassroom,Iwillneverforgetit.IIever

17、workedasatourguide.OnedayIsawadvertisementonthenewspaper.Irangupthecompany,andIwasgiventhejobimmediate.Theyaskedmetotakeatouraroundthecitythenextmorning.ThemanagerjusttoldmetosayanythingthatIcouldthinkaboutthecity.Myfirsttouristerrible.Theoldbuswasnotair-conditioned,becauseitwasthemiddleofsummer.Itw

18、asuncomfortableinsidethebus.Thetouristsoonbecameveryhotandangry.Iownedaveryhardtime.Istayedthereforafewweeks,andthenleftandjoinedinabettercompany.JDearsir,Ihavelearnedfromthenewspaperthatyouareneedofatourguide.IthinkIamtheonewhoarefitforthejobduringtheweekends.ImLiHua,a18-year-oldboy,andIwillgraduat

19、efromGuanghuaMiddleSchool.MyoralEnglishissoexcellentthatIoncewonthefirstprizeinanEnglishcompetition.Beside.Ihaveworkedasatourguideinsenior2andwashighpraisedformygoodservice.YoungalthoughIam,Iamfullofenergy.Bringingupinthiscity.Imfamiliarwithmanyplacesofinterestshere.However,ImsurethatImuptothejobver

20、ywell.IfIcanbehired,IwillbeverygratefulandIwilldevoteallmetothejob.PleaseemailmeatLilei1999.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yourssincerely,LiLei高考英语冲刺训练短文改错专练【答案与解析】A本文是一篇记叙文。主要讲述了作者和同学们参加最后一次运动会的情况。全班同学经过努力拼搏,最终4/8取得了好成绩,这给作者留下了深刻的印象。1.holdtheld【解析】根据Lastweekend可知,是发生在过去的事情,故用一般过去时。2. atan【解析】unforgettab

21、le首字母的发音是元音音素,故应用an。3. whomtwhich【解析】这里含有一个非限制性定语从句,先行词是ceremony,关系词应用which。4. fortto【解析】toonesexcitement令人兴奋的是。5. eventtevents【解析】event是可数名词,前面有various修饰,故event应用复数形式。6. havethad【解析】表示之前做的艰苦的训练,而且句中有before,所以应用过去完成时。故把have改为had。7. impressivelytimpressive【解析】用形容词作表语。8. excitedtexciting【解析】表示令人激动的”用e

22、xciting,excited表示感到兴奋的”。9. paid前的was去掉【解析】主语是ourefforts,所以不用被动。句意:我们的努力获得了回报。10. themtus【解析】句意:随着时间的流逝,这场运动会对于所有我们都是一次宝贵的记忆。根据句意,故把them改为us。B本文介绍另一种运动theSuperBowl。1. to-with固定词组:befamiliarsth./sb.对熟悉;befamiliarto为所熟悉。故把to改为with。2. nation-nations句意:在几乎所有的国家。故把nation改为nations。3. thatwas-thatis根据句意可知此处

23、讲的是普遍情况,用一般现在时态,故把thatwas改为thatis。4. calling-called句意:被称作-。可知用一般过去时态,故把calling改为called。5. them-it此处指代前面的theSuperBowl,故把them改为it。6. well-betterthe+比较级,the+比较级,表示“越-,越-”。故把well改为better。7. 在in和different之间加a【解析】考查冠词句意:在一个不同的美国城市。故在in和different之间加a考查冠词。8.important-importanee形容词修饰名词,故把important改为importane

24、e。9.lively-live此处指“现场直播”。Live实况转播的,生动的。故把lively改为live。10.去掉hadbetter后面的to【解析】hadbetterdosth.最好做某事,故去掉hadbetter后面的to。C1. student【解析】后加to考查介词。此处为固定搭配:asksbtodosth:要求/请求某人做某事。故加to。2. titlettitled【解析】考查非谓语动词。此处为非谓语动词,title和逻辑主语composition之间是被动关系,故用过去分词,titled。3. howtwhat【解析】考查连词。句意:我不知道该写什么,故用what。4. do

25、tdid【解析】考查时态。此文用过去时态描述,故用did。故改成getting。6.wastwere5. gettgetting【解析】考查动名词。and连接的为并列结构,根据前后用词都是动名词,WhenlytLitherwasahcnHtuwork*diuRht?rMolly-mfitdhnhelookoutiht?cuntrnlMapktslicdiEiusciurtiny谕kNandihrc?11njTheLufvfnhertsmiJtd-invKcdfand严cc两阴(hedeskiinodue山用丨bininti咖h【川Mullvw.Htirdhur冷只hddehidtnrmddt山

26、馄includincThaiinlitjTkiwymiPDaddvqThefalbrrwtn|Inhi苦ulfirchurrinl事carrring1hrjunkhr*me4Hridl巴讣右川ihrli昏徑iurncdf.hl:ihM绅ryihingnS/h8口h.:M訂畑叫TnMdlylheywerenoiunkbun【解析】考查主谓一致。and连接的有三个主语,是复数形式,故用were。7. SometimeSometimes】解析】考查副词。此处表示有时候,用sometimes8. 去掉but【解析】考查连词。though/although不能和but同时使用,一次只能用一个,故去掉bu

27、t。9. was【解析】后加a考查冠词。composition是可数名词,此处用单数,故加a。10. AboveAfter【解析】考查固定搭配。aboveall是更重要的是的意思,此处为afterall,意为毕竟的意思。D本文属于记叙文,讲述了我的好朋友Tom帮助我学习英语的事情。【小题1】spent改为spend考查时态。本句的时间状语是everyday,这是一般现在时的时间状语,谓语动词使用spend.【小题2】lot后加in考查固定搭配。介词短语incommon共同。句意:我们分享了很多共同之处。【小题3】hardly改为hard考查副词。动词短语workhard努力学习,而hardly

28、几乎不,表示否定含义。【小题4】her改为him考查代词。Tom是男性,所以使用代词him指代他,而her指代女性。【小题5】is改为are考查主谓一致。本句主语是Tomsfavoritesubjects,这是复数名词,谓语动词也要使用复数形式are.【小题6】去掉am考查固定结构。句式usedtodosth过去常常做某事;beusedtodosth被用来来做某事;句意:我过去不擅长英语。【小题7】Thank改为Thanks考查固定搭配。短语thanksto多亏;表示原因。句意:多亏他的帮助,我在英语方面取得了很大进步。【小题8】去掉a考查名词。本句中名词progress进步”是不可数名词,不

29、能使用a修饰。【小题9】think后加it考查句子结构。本句中it是宾语,指代前句中的出现的名词短语anEnglishspeechcontest。【小题10】show改为showing考查动名词。动词短语lookforwardto期待.;其中to是介词,后面要接名词或动名词做宾语。本句使用动名词showing作为to的宾语。E第一处:parentparents由下文的hisparentswere.以及倒数第二句中的妈妈说的话中可知托尼是和爸爸、妈妈一起去的,所以应该用复数形式parents。第二处:onin表示在商店的橱窗里,用介词in。第三处:去掉very句中使用了so.that.结构,ve

30、ry多余,故将其去掉。第四处:lookslooking该动词位于介词after后,要用动词的-ing形式,故把looks改为looking。第五处:wherefthat或去掉wherefound后是一个宾语从句,句子意思和成分完整,应该用只起连接作用的that引导,也可以省略。故把where改为that或去掉where。第六处:begunfbegan本文描述的是过去的经历,and连接的两个并列成分应当时态一致,故此处用一般过去时,把begun改为began。第七处:tellingftold由and可知,此处和谓语动词saw并列,故用过去式。第八处:afthe这里指的是前文提到的shop,所以用

31、定冠词the修饰,表特指。第九处:saw后加his这里特指托尼的父母亲,所以用物主代词his修饰parents。第十处:terriblefterribly修饰形容词worried要用副词形式。F第一处:去掉in用last,next等表示的时间状语前不用介词,故去掉in。第二处:anythingfsomethinganything用于疑问句和否定句中,something用于肯定句中,故将anything改为something。第三处:betterfbest表示比较的范围是intheworld,故改为最高级。第四处:decidefdecideddecide意为“决定”,此处时态应与全文时态一致,故

32、改为decided。第五处:stepfstepsstep是可数名词,前面有some修饰,故用复数形式。第六处:wellfgood系动词be后接形容词作表语,副词不能充当表语,故改well为good。第七处:afterfwhen/while句意为:我唯一的错误就是当我正在打包的时候掉地上了一些。根据句意可知将after改为when或while。第八处:afthe第一段第二句中有提到party,此处为第二次提到,故用the表特指。故将a改为the。第九处:just后加to分析句子结构可知,mighthaveto是谓语部分,从而get不再是谓语动词,故只能是非谓语动词。此处表示目的,故用不定式。第十

33、处:enjoyfenjoying此处mycoachandme作介词of的宾语,enjoy与mycoachandme之间是主动关系,应用现在分词形式。G第一处:want后加towanttodosth.为固定搭配,意为“想要做某事”。第二处:tellftold根据从句中的时间状语lasttime可知该动作发生在过去,故应用一般过去时。第三处:friendffriendsfriend为可数名词,根据前面的数词three可知此处应用复数形式。故将friend改为friends。第四处:singfsingingspendsometime(in)doingsth.是固定搭配,意为花时间做某事”。故将sing改为singing。第五处:manyfmuch此处说的是在卡拉0K唱歌这件事让作者花费了很多钱,浪费了很多时间。many指代可数名词,much指代不可数名词。故将many改为much。第六处:sofbut逗号前说不想再去了,而后面又说害怕失去友谊,由此可知逗号前后为转折关系,而非因果关系。故将so改为but

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