作文句子常错点 (2)

1、1. Go to the students Centre to get your ID card on the very first day of school.2. Open the door. 3. Sit down.4. Stand up.5. What a day! 省略主语的句子省略主语的句子1)The old man likes take a walk in the village after supper.2) I enjoy talk with him over a cup of coffee3) The boy ran to his mother cry. 4) After

2、write the notice, he put it up on the wall. The boy ran to his mother crying. After writing the notice, After he wrote the notice, 一个句子同时不能有两个谓语一个句子同时不能有两个谓语1)Those who eat too much will easily ill.2) When he walking in the park, he felt a little tired. 3）When I at school, I studied very hard.Those

3、who eat too much will easily get ill. When he was walking in the park, he felt a little tired. When I was at school, I studied very hard.不要把从句的谓语当成句子的谓语不要把从句的谓语当成句子的谓语, 或把主句的谓语当或把主句的谓语当成从句的谓语。成从句的谓语。 如果是一个复合句，主句和从句都应该如果是一个复合句，主句和从句都应该分别有自己的主语和谓语。分别有自己的主语和谓语。一一. 不一致不一致(Disagreements)所谓不一致不光指主谓不一致，它还包

4、所谓不一致不光指主谓不一致，它还包括了数的不一致时态不一致及代词不括了数的不一致时态不一致及代词不一致等一致等.When one have money, he can do what he want to .Once one has money, he can do what he wants (to do)写作出现的句子错误：写作出现的句子错误：二二. 修饰语错位修饰语错位(Misplaced Modifiers)英语与汉语不同，同一个修饰语置于句子不同的位置，句子的含义可能引起变化. I believe I can do it well and I will better know the

5、 world outside the campus.better位置不当，应置于句末.三三. 悬垂修饰语悬垂修饰语(Dangling Modifiers)所谓悬垂修饰语是指句首的短语与后面句子的逻辑关系混乱不清. 1.At the age of ten, my grandfather died. 2.To do well in college, good grades are essential.To do well in college, a student needs good grades.When I was ten, my grandfather died.四四. 句子结构不完整句子

6、结构不完整1.There are many people agree to keep pets at home. Although pets may pollute the environment. 2.There are many ways to know the society. For example by TV, radio, newspaper and so on .五五. 不平衡结构不平衡结构 1. The new house is large, beautiful and has enough rooms for people to live in. 2. There is a

7、great difference between dining out and to have a snack at home. 六六. 指代不清指代不清(Ambiguous Reference of Pronouns)指代不清主要讲的是代词与被指代的人或物关系不清，或者先后所用的代词不一致。1.Mary was friendly to my sister because she wanted her to be her bridesmaid. We can also know society by serving it ourselves. Mary was friendly to my s

8、ister because she wanted my sister to be her bridesmaid. And we can also know the society by serving it yourself.七七. 累赘累赘(Redundancy) 言以简洁为贵。写句子没有一个多余的词;写段落没有一个无必要的句子。能用单词的不用词组;能用词组的不用从句或句子。如：In spite of the fact that he is lazy, I like him.Diligent, caring people use money only to buy what they nee

9、d.In spite of his laziness, I like him. For the people who are diligent and kind, money is just the thing to be used to buy the thing they need.八八. 不连贯不连贯(Incoherence)不连贯是指一个句子前言不对后语，或是结构上不畅通。例1. The fresh water, it is the most important thing of the earth.Fresh water is the most important thing in

10、the world.九九. 词性误用词性误用(Misuse of Parts of Speech)“词性误用”常表现为：介词当动词用;形容词当副词用;名词当动词用等. None can negative the importance of money.None can deny the importance of money.十十. 粘连句粘连句Beijing is a beautiful city, I enjoy living here. There are many ways we get to know the outside world.There are many ways for

11、 us to learn about the outside world. 十汉语式英语十汉语式英语 1. Who will instead of Miss Green? 2. We all against all kinds of terrorists activities. 3. There were 20 people died in the car accident. 4. Dont worry. Your body will get well soon. 5. I was very glad to hear from her letter. 6. The film had begun for 5 minut