高考英语书面表达讲解(示范课课件)

1、Improve communicative skills I study.I understand.I can Welcome to my class! 高三高三2部部 杨晓玉杨晓玉Improve communicative skills I study.I understand.I can Welcome to my class! 高三高三2部部 杨晓玉杨晓玉How to make your writing better? 让你的作文让你的作文 起来起来What is a good piece of writing?1.neat writing书写书写2. content内容内容3. str

2、ucture结构结构4. language语言语言Good first impressionWell organized and smoothly developedEverything required includedNo ChinglishNo Grammatical mistakes Use good words and more sentence patterns一，改变句子的开头方式一，改变句子的开头方式二，句型转换二，句型转换A.合并为简单句合并为简单句把其中一句改为分词短语把其中一句改为分词短语把其中一句改为介词短语把其中一句改为介词短语B.合并为复合句合并为复合句三，避免只使

3、用一两个句式，三，避免只使用一两个句式，要灵活运用诸如倒装句、要灵活运用诸如倒装句、强调句、主从复合句、分词状语强调句、主从复合句、分词状语、with 复合结构等复合结构等. 四，注意使用高级词汇四，注意使用高级词汇代替一些单词，以增加文采。代替一些单词，以增加文采。Task1: Make your language better一一. 改变句子的开头方式，改变句子的开头方式，不要一味地都是主语不要一味地都是主语开头，接着是谓语、宾语，最后再加一个状语。开头，接着是谓语、宾语，最后再加一个状语。可以把可以把状语置于句首状语置于句首.2.The boy is very hungry and he

4、 hurried home.Hungry, the boy hurried home.Task1:Make your language better 1.The volleyball players practiced very hard to win the match. To win the match, the volleyball players practiced very hard.二二. Transformation of sentences in writing(写作中的句型转换写作中的句型转换)A. 合并为简单句合并为简单句1. 把其中一句改为分词把其中一句改为分词He ha

5、d finished supper. He went out to have a walk then.Having finished supper, he went out to have a walk.2. 把其中一句改为介词短语把其中一句改为介词短语He was brought in. His hands were tied behind his back.He was brought in his hands tied behind his back.with B. 合并为复合句合并为复合句1. The Chinese artists were to perform here that

6、night.The news cheered everyone of us.（同位从）（同位从）The news that the Chinese artists were to perform here that night cheered everyone of us.2. In recent years, Beijing has been advancing very fast.All these make peoples lives convenient, pleasant and colorful.（非限制定从）（非限制定从） , whichIn recent years, Beij

7、ing has been advancing very fast makes peoples lives convenient, pleasant 三三. 在整篇文章中，避免只使用一两个句在整篇文章中，避免只使用一两个句式，要灵活运用式，要灵活运用以下句型：以下句型：倒装句倒装句强调句强调句主从复合句主从复合句分词状语分词状语With 复合结构复合结构.感叹句感叹句1. Though he is wealthy, he works hard.Wealthy as he is, he works hard.In spite of /Despite his wealth, he works har

8、d.2. He didnt get up until 7 oclock.It was not until 7 oclock that he got up.Not until 7 oclock did he get up.3. It is nice to hear from you again. How nice to hear from you again! 2.I had a good idea. A good idea occurred to / struck / came to/ hit me.I came up with a good idea.注意使用词组、习语谚语、表强调的词来代替

9、注意使用词组、习语谚语、表强调的词来代替一些单词，以增加文采。一些单词，以增加文采。 四四.use “ complicated / advanced words” 1.Ill thank you if you think about my applicationIll appreciate it if you can take my application into consideration . 一，改变句子的开头方式一，改变句子的开头方式二，句型转换二，句型转换A.合并为简单句合并为简单句把其中一句改为分词短语把其中一句改为分词短语把其中一句改为介词短语把其中一句改为介词短语B.合并为复合

10、句合并为复合句三，避免只使用一两个句式，三，避免只使用一两个句式，要灵活运用诸如倒装句、要灵活运用诸如倒装句、强调句、主从复合句、分词状语强调句、主从复合句、分词状语、with 复合结构等复合结构等. 四，注意使用高级词汇四，注意使用高级词汇代替一些单词，以增加文采。代替一些单词，以增加文采。Task1: Make your language betterTask2: Make your structure better 文章结构文章结构1. In conclusion, we should take into account the problem. (结论结论)2. Im against

11、smoking for the following reasons. First, its harmful to ones health. Second, its a waste of money to buy cigarettes. Last but not least, it causes air pollution. （顺序）（顺序）3. In addition to the beautiful scenery, tourists can enjoy a variety of activities. （递进）（递进）2.有效使用有效使用 ，过渡自然，连贯通顺，过渡自然，连贯通顺，使文章结

12、构紧凑。使文章结构紧凑。1.通常使用通常使用 段式。段式。三三连接词连接词 逻辑角度 合适的过渡性词汇 时间顺序first，second，then，finallyat last，immediately，suddenly，soon 空间顺序here，there，On one side，On the other side，in front of，at the back of，next to 对称关系For one thing，for another，On the one hand，On the other hand 转折关系but，however，while，though，otherwise 因果

13、关系because，since，as，thanks to，as a result (of) 条件关系As long as，so long as，On condition that，if, unless 让步关系though，as，even ifthough，whether, who(what，when，where)-ever 递进关系whats more，besides，to make matters worse，whats worse过渡性插入语I think，Im afraid，you know，as we all knowA. Second, twenty years ago, teen

14、agers listened to music with tape recorders. Differently, today we use mp3, mp4 and even mp5 which are easy to take.B. Another change is in communication. Instead of writing letters, teenagers nowadays prefer writing e-mails or calling to keep in touch with friends.C. First, teenagers of twenty year

15、s ago learn from Lei Feng and Zhang Haidi, while now we consider Bill Gates and as our role models. D. What great changes they are!E. Great changes have taken place in teenagers life during the past twenty years. right order : _E C A B DExample:国外某网站举办新的一轮网上讲座活动，正面向国外某网站举办新的一轮网上讲座活动，正面向全球中学生征集话题。假设你

16、是新华中学的学生全球中学生征集话题。假设你是新华中学的学生李华，经常访问该网站。现请你用英文给该网站李华，经常访问该网站。现请你用英文给该网站发送一封电子邮件，向其推荐话题。内容包括发送一封电子邮件，向其推荐话题。内容包括: 自我介绍自我介绍 写信目的写信目的 话题：我们应该感恩（话题：我们应该感恩（thankful). 推荐理由推荐理由 预祝活动成功预祝活动成功注意：注意：1.词数词数100左右左右; 2.邮件格式已为你给出；邮件格式已为你给出；3.邮件出不能出现本人信息；邮件出不能出现本人信息；4.在答题卡上作答。在答题卡上作答。 My name is Li Hua. I am a stu

17、dent and I study in XinHua Middle School. I often visit your web, and from it I know you are finding themes from students all over the world. Now, I write this letter because I want to recommand a theme. We should be thankful is a good topic. Our father and mother throw thick and thin raise us, we s

18、hould be thankful to them. Our teachers teach us how to study, leading a lot of knowledge into our head. we should thank to them. as a Chinese, we should be thankful, because where there is thankful, therere hopes to make the world better, and with a thankful heart, we can realize how beautiful life

19、 is. I really hope you can choose my theme. I wish the activity will have an successful end.Aslooking for topicsrecommendtopictopicthrough thick and thinthankfulness 分分161. My name is Li Hua. I am a student and I study in XinHua Middle School.2. I often visit your web, and from it I know you are loo

20、king for topics from students all over the world.I am Li hua, a student from Xin Hua Middle school.Make the sentences better! I often visit your website, where I got the news that youre looking for topics from students all over the world.（同位语）（同位语）（定从（定从+同位从）同位从）1. We should be thankful is a good to

21、pic. 2. Our father and mother through thick and thin raise us, we should be thankful to them. 3. I really hope you can choose my topic. 4. I wish the activity will have a successful end.5. With a thankful heart, we can realize how beautiful life is.6. Now, I write this letter because I want to recom

22、mend topic.Have a try to make the sentences better!Now, Lets check whether our writing has been better? 我们的文章我们的文章起来了么起来了么？ Im Lihua, a student from Xin Hua Middle School. I often visit your website, where I got the wonderful news that youre looking for topics from students all over the world. Here,

23、 Im writing to recommend one. In my opinion, that we should be thankful is a good idea. Firstly, it is our parents who brought us up through thick and thin, so we should thank them. Besides, we should thank our teachers, for we couldnt be who we are now without their hard work. Whats more, thankfuln

24、ess is also our traditional Chinese virtue. Where there is thankfulness, there are hopes to make the world better. Only with a thankful heart, can we fully realize how beautiful life is. Id appreciate it if my topic will be chosen. Wish the activity a great success.24-25分分Tips in your daily English

25、learning:1.Collect good words/phrases/sentences;2.Read more;3.Practice makes perfect;4.Be confident anytime.Homework Have a try! 每年每年12月你们学校都要举行为期一个月的体育月你们学校都要举行为期一个月的体育节，在今年体育节来临之际，请给学校体育节节，在今年体育节来临之际，请给学校体育节组委写一封信，表达你对体育节的看法和建议。组委写一封信，表达你对体育节的看法和建议。 主要内容如下：主要内容如下： 1 推荐至少两项活动；推荐至少两项活动； 2 说明开展这些活动的理由；说明开展这些活动的理