专题限时集训1读后续写训练1

1、专题限时集训读后续写训练1A（2016绍兴市期中考试）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。LastsummerwhenmyfamilywasroadtrippingtoMontanawearrivedinGreatFallslateonenight.Thekidshadfallenasleepinthecar,somyhusbandwentandcheckedinwhileIstayedwiththekids.Whenhereturnedwiththeroomkeys,wewokeupourchildrenandtookthemoutofthecarthroughthe

2、hotel、uptheelevatorsandintoourguestroom.Wekepttheroomdarkleavingonlytheentrylighton,andquicklyputthekidsintobedhopingthey'ddriftbacktosleep.Myhusbandwenttoputourwatersinthemin-fridgeonlytonoticesomebeers.“That'sstrange*,hesaidandIagreedbuthavingdiscoveredleft-behinddrinksinhotelfridgesinthep

3、astIdidn'tthinkmuchaboutit.Ifiguredthehousekeepershadforgottentocheckit.InthemeantimemyhusbandrantothestoreandIwentintothebathroomtogetreadyforbed.AsIwashedmyfaceIlookeddowntoseecardboardbeercontainersinthetrash.Ifeltmyheartbegintopound.Wewereinsomeoneelse'sroom!Nowpanicked,Icheckedthecloset

4、.Nothing.Ithenwenttothedresserdrawers.Nothing.Myeyesscannedthedoorroom'sfloorandthereitwasAblackbagthatlookedlikeoneofours.Butitwasn't!Iimmediatelycalledthefrontdeskandthewaitressinchargerespondedwithan“Oh,myGod!Thisisnotgood!”Bynowthekidswerewide-awake,jumpingonthebedsasIwastryingtoputallof

5、ourthingsbackintoouroversizedsuitcaseJustwhilewewerepackingourthingsIheardsomeonewasunlockingthedoqrwhichmademyheartbeatingwildly.注意：1 .所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2 .应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3 .续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4 .续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:Thedooropenedandincameayoungman.Paragraph2:Ididn'tknowhowto

6、dealwiththematterbutluckilythewaitress【写作指导】读后续写的前提是将所给材料读透，弄清故事前半部分叙述的内容。根据所给材料可知，作者一家人旅途中去宾馆住宿，但却发现服务员把他们带进了别人的房间。根据续写部分第一段所给出的开头语可以判断，“ayoungman是登记入住这个房间的人；根据续写部分第二段中的“butuckilythewaitress可知，服务员恰当地处理了这件事。因此续写部分要抓住两个关键点：年轻人回到自己的房间却发现里面有陌生人，他们会面的场景会是怎样的？服务员又是怎样处理这件事的？因此学生在构思时应将重点放在怎样让故事衔接得更自然、更流畅。其

7、次，应注意续写时要使用5个以上原文中的画线词语。【参考范文】Thedooropenedandincameayoungman.Afterseeinguspackingourthingsintooursuitcase,hewasshockedandangry.Itriedtoexplainwhathadhappened.Howeverhewouldn'tlistentome.Hetalkedwithmeinaloudvoice,makingmykidsfrightened.Thekidsbegantocry.Justatthattimemyhusbandreturned,withsomet

8、hingsboughtfromthestoreinhishands.Thinkingtheyoungmanwasunfriendly,hestartedtoquarrelwithhim.Ididn'tknowhowtodealwiththematterbutluckilythewaitressarrivedoutofbreath.Watchingthewaitress,allofusstoppedtalking.Sheexplainedthathermotherbecamebadly川lastnightwhichcontributedtoherfault.Afterexplaining

9、thereasontousthewaitressburstintotears.Theyoungmanmyhusbandandevenmykids,triedtocomfortthewaitress.Wesaidsorrytoeachother.Thespecialexperienceinsomeoneelse'sroommademerealizeforgivenessisakindofvirtue.【导学号：85602023】B阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。IworkedfromthetimeIwasfourandraisedsevenchildrenal

10、lofthemcollegegraduates.ItseemedI'ddoneeverythingI'deverwantedtodoinmylifebutIhadoneregret.Iwasbornin1898,theoldestoffivekids.Papacouldn'tsparemetogotoschool,soIworkedinthefieldswithhimtillIwas21yearsold.EverywhereIwent,Ilearnedsomehardlessonsaboutwhathappenstoamanwhoevencan'treadthe

11、alphabePeoplecheatyououtofwages.Theysellyouatickettoonecity,takeyourmoneyandhandyouatickettosomewhereelse.By1928,I'dbeenwanderingfornineyears.ImetawomannamedElzenia.Wefellinlove,marriedandmovedtoDallas,whereIgotworkfixingroadsforthecity.WhenAmelia,theoldestofoursevenchildren,firstwenttoschool,It

12、ookmywifeaside."Elzenia,“Isaid."Idon'twantthekidstoknowIcan'treadorwrite.In1938,onedaymybosscalledmein'：George,"hesaid.“Nooneknowsthosemachineslikeyoudo.I'dliketopromoteyou."Butmythrillandsurprisewerecutshortwhenhesaid,“Filloutthisapplicationandwe'llgetyouarai

13、se“Icouldn'tadmitthetruth.Ithankedhimandwalkedoutofhisoffice.IdidstayrightwhereIwas,untilIturned65andmybossmademeretire.ButIdidn'tstopworking.Forthenext25years,Ilivedahappylife,butitstillseemedtomelikesomethingwasmissing.Ayoungfellowhandedmeapieceofpaper.It'sinformationaboutadulteducatio

14、nclassesPeoplecanlearntoreadandwrite.NowI'm98.IthoughtofmyfriendsandneighborsandwhattheymightthinkiftheyfoundoutIcouldn'tread.Afteralltheseyearsmysecretwouldbeout.ButallmylifeI'vewantedtoread.Itwashightimeforaction.注意：1 .所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2 .应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3 .续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4 .

15、续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:TheyoungmandrovemetoParagraph2:I'mstillgoingtoschool.【写作指导】文章大部分在叙述作者从小因家庭贫困而没有读书，因此在工作中错失晋升的良机。文章最后一段尤其是最后一句"Itwashightimeforaction给出了提示，说明接下来要续写的是作者自己重新走进学校的情况。根据关键词语展开适当的联想即可成文。【参考范文】Theyoungmandrovemetoanoldbuilding.Iknewitwellitwaswhereallmychildrenhad

16、gonetoschool.IlookedintotheclassroomtogetalookatwhoIwouldbegoingtoschoolwiththenextday.Thestudentsalllookedlikebabiestome.Therewasaladyinherfiftiesbutmostoftherestwereintheirtwentiesandthirties.Iwentbacktotheschoolthenextday.I'dbeeninsidethebuildingsomanytimesbeforewithmychildren.Thatoldbuilding

17、lookedthesame,anditsmelledthesame.Butthistimeitwasdifferentbecausethistimeitwasgoingtobemyschool.Firstcamelearningthealphabetthenwords.InthreemonthsIwasreading.Itwasnotveryexciting,butIlovedit.I'mstillgoingtoschool.Ididn'tstopthere.Afterall,nowIknowwhyI'mhere.I'mheretolearnI'mher

18、etotellthestudentsit'snevertoolate.C阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Itwasshortlyafteroneo'clockinthemorningandMr.Fairfaxwasreallytired.Hehadbeendrivingforoverfivehours,headingforasmalltownfarawayfromhome.TheweatherwasclearbutitwasdarkandMr.Fairfaxcouldnotfindamoteltospendthenight.Completelyexh

19、austedhedecidedtostopbytheroadsideforafewhours'sleepatthewheelofhiscar.Hefellasleepalmostthemomentheclosedhiseyes.Butsoonhewasawakenedbyamantappingonthecarwindow.say,youdon'thappentoknowthetime,doyou?”thestrangerasked.Mr.Fairfaxwounddownthewindowandthrusthisheadout."It'saroundoneo&#

20、39;clock,"heanswered.Thenhewounduphiswindowandsoonfellbackintoadeepslumber.Halfanhourlater,anotherguycameupandknockedonhiswindowwhoalsoinquiredaboutthetime.Onceagain,Mr.Fairfaxgatheredhisthoughtsandtoldhimthatitwasjustafteronethirty.Whenthesamethinghappenedyetagain,Mr.Fairfaxbecameincreasinglyi

21、rritated.Sleep-deprived,hebegantoraisehisvoiceatthepasserby："It'stwoo'clock,Goddamnit!Andwhycan'tyougetyourselfawatchliketherestofus”Thistimewhenhewaswindingupthewindow,Mr.Fairfaxfiguredouthowtomakesurenooneelsedisturbedhim.Hefoundsomepaperandapencilandwroteanotethatheplacedonthewin

22、dscreenofhiscar.Itsaid:"Idon'tknowwhattimeitis!”Amusedbyhisgoodideahehappilydriftedoffbacktosleepagain.Notlongafterwards,thenotewasspottedbyapolicemanonhisnightpatrol.IntentonfulfillinghisdulyJoassistmotorists,hetappedonMr.Fairfax'scarwindow.“Well,sir,"thepolicemansaid.“Nowitisfive

23、pastthree!”注意：1 .所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2 .应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3 .续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4 .续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:“ForthesakeofGod!”Withaloudnoiseoffisthittingthewheel,thecarwindowwaswounddown.Paragraph2:“I'msorryMister,butIthinksleepinginthecarbytheroadsideisnotagoodchoice,“saidthepolice.【写作指导】本篇读后续写是一篇记叙文。主要叙述了Mr.Fairfax夜间将车停在路边休息时多次被人打扰的故事。文章着重刻画了主人公睡觉时屡遭打扰后的情绪变化，随着情绪从刚开始的平静到不耐烦，再到想到好主意之后的高兴，最后变得愤怒，文章在用词上也有所变化，尤其是人物说话时的用词和语气。因此在续写时，学生应关注人物的情绪变化，并根据其变化采用不同的表达方式。同时，在描述人物的话语时，注意要口语化，从而更贴近实际生活。【参考范文】“ForthesakeofGod!”Withaloudnoiseoffisthittingthewheel,thecarwindowwaswounddown.Mr