外研版版高三一轮高考语法与写作专题求助信教学案英语

1、写英文求助信的原因是目前自己遇到了一些困难，需要请求对方帮助。因此整篇文章应用一般现在时表达文意，当描述自己得到帮助后的进步时应用一般将来时。写作模板求助信自我介绍，写信目的说明求助事由表达期盼或感谢囱典考题（201 6全国卷I ）假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外资公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历 （resume 给外教Ms. Jenkins写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式（format 注意：1 .词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。满分范文Dear Ms. Jenkins ,lTm Li Hua and I plan to take a parttime job in a

2、 foreign capital company during the summer holiday. 21 have already filled in the application form and had my resume ready for it. 3 However Fm not sure about the words and format. 4Therefore, Pm writing to ask for your help and professional advice. 5 Would you please spare some time to read through

3、 the materials attached ?Would you mind finding out the mistakes in terms of words and format ? ©Besides, Fd like you to correct the mistakes found in the materials. I'd be most grateful if you could do me a favor.I'm looking forward to your reply.Yours ,Li Hua阅卷评析3表示转折关系的过渡词，把前两句看似平淡的叙

4、述提到了一定的高度，很好地为下句做了铺垫。4 therefore关系明确，因果适当，不但使上下文融会贯通，而且突出了写信目的。5 Would you please do. ?是请求别人帮助的句型，用得恰到好处,符合说话者的身份；过去分词 attached作定语，使句子更加简练地道,增加了文章的可读性。Would you mind doing. ?不同的句式表达了相同的意思，避免了表达形式的单一化，语气委婉。这是文章提档次的句子。most grateful道出了作者希望得到帮助的迫切和感激之情，也显示了作 者较高的语言运用能力。增分靓句1 .文章开头佳句集锦1 My name is. I'

5、;m writing to you for some help.我叫，写信的目的是向你寻求一些帮助。2 I'm writing a letter to you to ask you to do me a favor.我给你写信想请你帮我一个忙。2.活动内容部分佳句集锦1 Faced with so much difficulty, I have to ask you for help.面对这么多的困难,我不得不向你求助。2 In the meanwhile/At the same time, I beg you to. so that. Also, I would like you t

6、o.同时，我恳求你以便我也想让你31 would like you to introduce some good ways to learn grammar.我想让你给我介绍一些学习语法的好方法。32 文章结尾佳句集锦1 I'm sure with your help I can make great progress.我相信在你的帮助下我会取得很大的进步。21 will appreciate any of your help.我将非常感谢你的一切帮助。热点押题（2018四川双流中学月考）假定你是李华，你的加拿大笔友Peter七月份要带父母来成都市旅游,发邮件向你咨询相关信息。请按下列

7、要点给他回信。1 .介绍成都及景点如都江堰；2 .体验成都人文文化；3 .推荐交通工具。注意：1 .词数100左右；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。4 .可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；5 .开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Peter,I'm glad to learn thatBest wishes!Yours sincerely ,Li Hua答案Dear Peter,I'm_glad_toean_that you are planning to visit Chengdu with your parents in July. Fm writing to offer

8、 some information to you.Chengdu, the capital city of Sichuan, is loaded with somuch history and splendid cultures. In Chengdu there are many tourist attraction such as WuHou Temple and DuFu Cottage. You'd better go to The Dujiangyan Damz dating from more than 2,000 years ago. It is used for irr

9、igating farming land and benefits all the people around Chengdu.While travelling, you can experience various Chengdu cultures, learning about the relaxing life of people here and the history of ancient Chengdu.Besides, if you want to explore Chengdu, sharing bikes are worth using, which is convenient for you to get around in Chengdu. If you want to visit The Dujiangyan