writing--notice的写作

1、 -书面通知 福州民族中学福州民族中学 林林 芽芽Notice WritingMr. White, please inform all the students of an English lecture at our school. All right？OK An English Lecture In order to develop the interest in English, our school hold a lecture in the lecture hall at 4 p.m. on Saturday, June 10,2015.purpose+ activity + pla

2、ce+timeparticipantsTitleAll are welcome to be there on time. The Students UnionThursday, June 8 A famous professor from USA will make the lecture on how to learn English . After the lecture, you can ask any questions.details of the activityOrganizer DatebodyAn English Drama Show 福州外国语学校在福州外国语学校在1111

3、月举办一个为期一个月的英语文月举办一个为期一个月的英语文化节。你校学生会将在本周五举办英语话剧表演，请根据化节。你校学生会将在本周五举办英语话剧表演，请根据以下内容用英语写一则书面通知。要点如下：以下内容用英语写一则书面通知。要点如下： 时间：时间： 20152015年年1111月月2020日，周五晚日，周五晚7:307:30 地点：学校报告厅地点：学校报告厅(lecture hall)(lecture hall)二层楼二层楼 目的：目的：. 内容：内容：a. a. 校长和学生代表校长和学生代表(delegate)(delegate)发言发言 b. b. 节目节目: :神话故事神话故事( fa

4、iry tales)( fairy tales)和原创作品和原创作品 c. c. 外教外教Mr. SmithMr. Smith点评、提建议点评、提建议 要求：要提早要求：要提早2020分钟入场；分钟入场；注意：注意： 1.1.词数词数100100左右；左右； 2.2.可以适当增加细节，并使行文连贯、通顺。可以适当增加细节，并使行文连贯、通顺。审题1. Personal Pronoun:2. Tense (时态时态):3. structure(结构结构) :4. Points: title, body, organizer, date常用第二和第三人称代词常用第二和第三人称代词the prese

5、nt tense一般现在时一般现在时; the present future tense一般将来时一般将来时Cover all the points.(内容要完整内容要完整,充实充实)three or four paragraphsStyle of the writingpractical writing (notice)BrainstormWhat are they doing?enrich after-class school lifehold an English drama showimprove English（ In order to, .）give/make/deliver a

6、speechnot onlybut alsocomment on; give some advicecivilized audiencebehave wellleave litter / throw litter about/throw litter here and therePhrases1. 为了为了2. 丰富校园课外生活丰富校园课外生活2. 举办英语话剧表演举办英语话剧表演3. 发言发言4. 作出点评作出点评5. 提出建议提出建议6. 文明观众文明观众7. 乱扔垃圾乱扔垃圾enrich after-class school lifehold an English drama showg

7、ive/make/deliver a speechcomment oncivilized audienceleave litter / throw litter about/throw litter here and thereReading aloudgive some advicein order tobetter expressionsThere will be an English drama show held byso as to.In order to enrich the after-school activity, our school will hold an Englis

8、h drama show on the second floor of our school lecture hall. 1) Please get there twenty minutes earlier. 2) Please get there 20 minutes earlier before the drama show begins. 3) Those who are interested in English are required to get there 20 minutes earlier.Which is the best ?内容：内容：要提早要提早20分钟入场分钟入场在

9、写作中应尽量使句在写作中应尽量使句型结构多样化，如状型结构多样化，如状语从句、被动语态、语从句、被动语态、定语从句、并列句等。定语从句、并列句等。 1) Dont throw rubbish. 2) Make sure that you dont leave rubbish behind. 3) Be sure to behave yourself and keep the hall clean.Which is the best?内容：内容：不乱扔垃圾不乱扔垃圾 1. 1. 语言语言的准确性；的准确性； -无误的表达无误的表达2. 2. 语言的丰富性；语言的丰富性； -丰富的表达丰富的表达3

10、. 3. 行文的连贯性；行文的连贯性； -流畅的表达流畅的表达4. 4. 内容的相关性；内容的相关性； -相关的表达相关的表达5. 5. 书写的美观性；书写的美观性； -增加得分点增加得分点 What is a good writing?correctnessdiversitysmoothnessrelevanceSum Upattraction Assessment(评价评价) Content: *Cover all the points.(内容要完整内容要完整,充实充实) Structure: * Good beginning and ending.(好的开头结尾好的开头结尾) * Wel

11、l organized and smoothly developed. (结构合理结构合理,行文流畅行文流畅) Language： * No Chinglish (避免中文式英文避免中文式英文)* No Grammatical mistakes (没有语法错误没有语法错误)* With correctly used words and relatively changed sentence patterns (词语的准确运用和句式的富于变化词语的准确运用和句式的富于变化) Handwriting： * Excellent handwriting is attractive. (漂亮的书写是写作

12、得分的亮点漂亮的书写是写作得分的亮点) What is a good writing？Homework 1. Finish your writing and exchange it with your peers and make assessment according to the standard given.Thanksgiving Day is coming soon!November 26, 2015gamescranberry game 蔓越桔竞赛蔓越桔竞赛 pumpkin run with a teaspoon南瓜赛跑南瓜赛跑 （用小勺推着南瓜跑）（用小勺推着南瓜跑） turk

13、eyfeastWithout a turkey or pumpkins, it shouldnt be a good Thanksgiving Day.Thanksgiving Day is a time to celebrate, a time for giving, a time for sharing,a time to give thanks to your parents, teachers and friends.It is a time to remember everything we are thankful for.Homework2.Write another notic

14、e about Thanksgiving Day. 福州外国语学校在福州外国语学校在11月举办一个为期一个月的英月举办一个为期一个月的英语文化节。假设你是该校学生会主席李华。语文化节。假设你是该校学生会主席李华。11月月26日日恰好是感恩节，学生会将在感恩节当天邀请所有外教恰好是感恩节，学生会将在感恩节当天邀请所有外教参加感恩节活动，请根据以下内容用英语写一则书面参加感恩节活动，请根据以下内容用英语写一则书面通知。要点如下：通知。要点如下： 要点如下：要点如下：时间：时间：2015年年11月月26日日(星期四星期四) 下午下午4点点30分分地点：操场地点：操场目的：目的：.对象：全体高中同学对

15、象：全体高中同学内容：外教内容：外教Mike介绍介绍“感恩节感恩节”的由来的由来 要求：文明举止要求：文明举止 注意：注意： 1.词数词数100左右；左右；2.可以适当增加细节，并使行文连贯、通顺。可以适当增加细节，并使行文连贯、通顺。Thank you for Thank you for attendance!attendance!Happy Happy study,study,Healthy Healthy life !life !An English Drama Show In order to enrich the students school life after class, o

16、ur school will hold an English drama show on the second floor of the school lecture hall at 7:30 p.m. on Friday, November 20,2015. All the students are welcome to the show 20 minutes earlier before the show begins. Not only will our president give a speech but also a student delegate will do. The show includes English Fairy Tales and original plays. After the show, Mr. Smith, our foreig