增强英语书面表达效果的策略

1、高考写作之高考写作之：Tips on how to enhance the effectiveness of your writing（增强写作效果（增强写作效果的策略）的策略） 临高中学临高中学 陈卫民陈卫民仔细审题仔细审题 理清要点理清要点译写单句译写单句连句成篇连句成篇检查润色检查润色定稿誊抄定稿誊抄Learning objectives:学习目标学习目标 After this lesson, you are expected to master the following writing skills to achieve the necessary effectiveness of

2、your writing.1. Using some advanced words.2. Using some advanced structures.3. Using Some proper connective words.1、先根据文章的内容和语言初、先根据文章的内容和语言初步步确定档次确定档次。第五档第五档. 2125分分第四档第四档. 1620分分第三档第三档. 1115分分第二档第二档. 610分分 第一档第一档. 15分分 0分分语言地道，语言地道，规范规范覆盖所有内覆盖所有内容要点容要点2、主要内容：、主要内容： a a内容要点齐全内容要点齐全 b b词汇和语法的运用丰富并准确

3、词汇和语法的运用丰富并准确 c c上下文连贯并富有逻辑性上下文连贯并富有逻辑性 d d语言地道，得体语言地道，得体应用了较多应用了较多的语法结构的语法结构和词汇和词汇有效地使有效地使用了语句用了语句间的连接间的连接成分成分 策略策略1. 使用较高级的词汇使用较高级的词汇3. 使用恰当的连接词使用恰当的连接词词汇反映你知识贮存量的词汇反映你知识贮存量的多少，也是衡量英语水平多少，也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标志。的一个重要标志。运用得当的句子结构可以运用得当的句子结构可以给文章增色不少，从而使给文章增色不少，从而使整篇文章因此而生辉整篇文章因此而生辉 。使用恰当连接词，对写一使用恰当连接词，对写一

4、篇有篇有“英语味英语味”的文章很的文章很重要，能使文章上下衔接重要，能使文章上下衔接自然、紧凑。自然、紧凑。2. 使用较丰富的句式使用较丰富的句式1. Because the weather was good, our journey was comfortable.(thanks to/owing to/because of)2.We all think he is a great man.(think highly of)3.Suddenly I thought out a good idea.(hit/strike/occure)4.The students there neednt p

5、ay for their books.(free of charge) 5. As a result the plan was a failure.(turn out/prove to)The plan turned out / proved to be a failure.Thanks to the good weather, our journey was comfortable.一、怎样使用较高级的词汇一、怎样使用较高级的词汇We all think highly of him . A good idea occurred to me. A good idea suddenly stru

6、ck me.Books are free of charge for the students there.We all regard him as great man.A good idea hit my mind. 6When she heard he had died, she went pale with sorrow.At the news of his death, she went pale with sorrow.On hearing that he had died, she went pale with sorrow.巧用习语巧用习语-增加文采增加文采 7.In our s

7、chool, there are twenty-six classrooms. 8.You can find my house easily. Our school consists of twentysix classrooms.Youll have no trouble finding my house. 洋味十足洋味十足-才是好文章才是好文章9. I dont want to live with a stranger in a hotel room.10. I was very eager to go home.I dont want to share a hotel room with

8、 a stranger.I couldnt wait to go home. I am dying to go home.1 They sang and laughed as they went home.（使用V-ing形式）.2. To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things.（使用名词性从句）3. Though Im weak, Ill make the effort. (使用as倒装句)4. He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the

9、 newspaper.(使用强调句型) 5. I won the competition because of her help.(用虚拟语气）On his arriving, please give me an e-mail.What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things.二、怎样使用较丰富的句式二、怎样使用较丰富的句式Weak as I am, Ill make the effort. It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he

10、knew what had happened. I couldnt have won the competition without your help. 二、怎样使用较丰富的句式二、怎样使用较丰富的句式 1.She walked out of the lab and many students followed her. (使用过去分词)2. They sang and laughed as they went back to school.( 使用V-ing形式)3.I wont believe what he says. （使用no matter+让步状语从句） 4.If you stu

11、dy hard, you will make rapid progress. （用祈使句+陈述句并列句）5.He had no sooner come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad. (使用倒装句)Followed by many students, she walked out of the lab.Singing and laughing, they went back to school.No matter what he says, I wont believe. Study hard and youll make rapid pr

12、ogress.No sooner had he come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad.丰富而高级的句式有：丰富而高级的句式有： 1.名词性从句 2.定语从句 3.状语从句 4.强调句 5.倒装句 6.虚拟语气 7.独立主格结构 8.非谓语结构等。6. She walked out of the lab and many students followed her. (使用过去分词)7. They sang and laughed as they went back to school.( 使用V-ing形式)8.I wont believ

13、e what he says. （使用让步状语从句） 9.If you study hard, you will make rapid progress. （用并列句）10He had no sooner come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad. (使用倒装句)No sooner had he come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad.Followed by many students, she walked out of the lab.Singing and laughing, the

14、y went back to school.No matter what he says, I wont believe. Study hard and youll make rapid progress.三、怎样使用恰当的连接词三、怎样使用恰当的连接词逻辑角度逻辑角度合适的过渡性词汇合适的过渡性词汇时间顺序 first, finally/at last , immediately suddenly,when,before空间顺序here, there, on one sideon the other side,in front of, at the back of, next to 对称顺序

15、for one thing, for the other thing, on one hand,on the other hand转折顺序but, however, while, though, otherwise因果顺序because, since, thanks to, as a result (of), so 条件顺序as long as, on condition that, if, unless ,as soon as,让步顺序though, as, even if/though, who , what,when, where+ever,no matter+递进顺序whats mor

16、e, besides, in addition ,to make the matter worse,whats worse表示总结in a word, altogether, all in all, in general三、怎样使用恰当的连接词三、怎样使用恰当的连接词 一、补全句子请在下列句子中（间）填上恰当的关联词或意思有联系的短语。1. Xiao Ming was walking in the street _ he heard someone cry for help.2. He advised that I hire a car _ I could travel around in t

17、he west .3. It was not long _ the police came .4. _he heard the cry for help, he jumped into the water to save the girl.whenin order that/so thatbeforeAs soon as 5. Do you agree with my arrangement ? _ , do write to me soon.6. We can go downtown and do some shopping. _, we can pay a visit to some pl

18、aces of interest.7. I shared the cost of the gas with my friends ._, I saved $80.8. Eating sugar is bad for our teeth. _ , it may make us fat.If not/soIn additionAs a resultWhats worse二二. 行文逻辑训练行文逻辑训练 阅读短文，选择适当的过渡性词汇填空阅读短文，选择适当的过渡性词汇填空。first, whats worse/more, besides/in addition, now/nowadays, in m

19、y opinion/As far as Im concerned. _1_ many middle school students are fat and there are reasons for it. Some eat too much met and too many snacks. Some sit too long but seldom exercise. Getting fat has quite a few disadvantages. _2_, being fat makes it difficult for one to walk or move as others.Now

20、 First _3_ , to be fat usually means to be weak, and it is easy for a fat person to suffer from many kinds of diseases. At the same time. A fat person gets tired easily, which decreases his study efficiency. _4_, to be fat is not a good thing for us middle students. We should try to eat less meat bu

21、t more vegetables. _5_ we should try our best to take part in all kinds of sports. If so, we are sure to lose weight and stay healthy.Whats more In my opinion Besides, Try to use what we just learn to improve the following writing. Dear Editor， As a student reader，I am writing to talk about the Engl

22、ish textbooks .Thay are published by your house.These books have many good things.One of them is that we can find many topics，such as science，culture and history.These topics，I think，are very popular with us students.Along with the texts there are many good pictures.They can help us understand Engli

23、sh better.Even the students who used to dislike English have turned out to be interested in the subject.Some of the texts have too many new words and expressions .They are hard for us.Id like to suggest changing them into easier ones. Best regards， Li HuaDear Ralph, Im a middle school student. Im wr

24、iting to tell you my problem. It has troubled me for a long time. It is about my mother and me. My mother is a university professor, and she works very hard. She is strict with me, but she is very busy with her work and she has little time to talk to me. She loses her temper easily. I love her and I

25、 do well in my studies, but I still feel a little afraid of her. I dont know how to communicate with her. Maybe its because we have seldom talked with each other . I hope we can know more about each other and understand each other better. I do hope well be closer. What can I do?Looking forward to yo

26、ur reply.Best wishes!Yours sincerely,Li Xiaohua，5、检查润色、检查润色Dear Ralph, Im a middle school student. Im writing to tell you my problem. It has troubled me for a long time. It is about my mother and me. My mother is a university professor, and she works very hard. She is strict with me, but she is very

27、 busy with her work and she has little time to talk to me. She loses her temper easily. I love her and I do well in my studies, but I still feel a little afraid of her. I dont know how to communicate with her. Maybe its because we have seldom talked with each other . I hope we can know more about ea

28、ch other and understand each other better. I do hope well be closer. What can I do?Looking forward to your reply.Best wishes!Yours sincerely,Li Xiaohua，whichthe relationship betweenwhosothatsat down and exchanged our feelings and thoughts6、定稿誊抄、定稿誊抄Dear Ralph, Im a middle school student. Im writing

29、to tell you my problem which has troubled me for a long time. It is the relationship between my mother and me. My mother is a university professor, who works very hard. She is strict with me, but she is so busy with her work that she has little time to talk to me. I love her and I do well in my studies, but I still feel a little afraid of her because she loses her temper easily. I dont know how to communicate with her. Maybe its because we have seldom sat down and exchanged our feelings and thoughts . I hop