高考英语书面表达写作指导课件

1、 Fang XianNo.1 Middle School审题Logic（逻辑性）（逻辑性）Key words（信息词）（信息词）Key sentences(信息句）信息句）Genre(体裁）Person(人称）Tense(时态）请仔细观看左边漫画，结合请仔细观看左边漫画，结合自己的实际生活，写一篇自己的实际生活，写一篇关于关于“节能环保节能环保”的英语短文。的英语短文。要求：要求：1 简要描述图中的现象；简要描述图中的现象；2 分析产生这种现象的分析产生这种现象的 原因（如：没有良好原因（如：没有良好的习惯等）；的习惯等）；3提出你的建议。提出你的建议。提示：图中在睡觉的是提示：图中在睡觉的是

2、小明，妇女是他的母亲小明，妇女是他的母亲 As can be seen in the picture, Late at mid-night, Xiao Ming_asleep with TV _, which always annoys his mother. And his mother enters, _ him for forgetting to turn TV off. Task1:A model with some missing key words. Answers varies.fallsoncomplainingPara.1casesense / awarenessPara.2

3、 The picture is trying to convince us of a fact that we are wasting electricity and ignore the importance of saving _ resources. What is it that accounts for the _ above? Firstly, Lack of _ of saving energyis a major cause, which, of course, leads to such a bad habit. Secondly, there being no strict

4、 laws to obey in society, the public will easily forget their duty. energyenvironmentallyPara.3 Therefore, if we intend to live an _friendly life, we should make it our habit to turn off electrical equipment. In a word, what we should do is to _our environment through small things in our daily life.

5、 Every tiny action tectWith the development of science, our earth is becoming dirtier than before, But many people have not realized the problem now. To judge whether they can be used in the writingillogicalThe picture is talking about mother and the son. The son is sleeping and the mother

6、 is trying to turn off the TV.Hearing the sound of “ZZZ”, Xiaomings mother came to the TV and shouted angrily, “ Why do you always forget to turn off TV!” But the reply from Xiaoming was just more “ZZZZZ.”too simpleinformalTask2: Make a list of key sentences in the model writing. As can be seen in t

7、he picture, The picture is trying to convince us of a fact that. What is it that accounts for the above case? Firstly, .Secondly,. Therefore, if you intend to. In short, / In a word, what we should do is . Every tiny action counts.be valuableTask3: Lets imitate more key sentences!1 Xiao Ming falls a

8、sleep with/ leaving TV on, which always annoys his mother.模仿要点：模仿要点： with +n. +宾补宾补模仿模仿1：Somebody is sleeping in the class now. His eyes are open. Somebody is sleeping in the class now, _.with his eyes open模仿模仿2：The pig is standing here, _.with sunglasses on2 his mother entered, complaining him for

9、forgetting to turn TV off。模仿要点：主句模仿要点：主句 + 现在分词（作状语）现在分词（作状语）模仿模仿1：The children watched the game and stood for an hour.The children stood for an hour,_the game.watching模仿模仿2：The baby jumps into the air, _score a goal.score a goal 进球进球hoping to/ attemptingto/ aiming to模仿模仿3：男孩手拿一本书坐在桌边，正努力在书中男孩手拿一本书坐

10、在桌边，正努力在书中寻找如何解开粽子的方法。寻找如何解开粽子的方法。The boy is sitting at the table _, _find how to _ zongzi.模仿要点：模仿要点： with复合句，复合句，+ 现在分词（作状语）现在分词（作状语）with a book in his handtrying tounwrap3 The picture is trying to convince us of a fact that we are wasting electricity .模仿要点：句型模仿要点：句型 The picture is trying to convin

11、ce us of a fact that (同从）同从）模仿模仿1：这幅画试图让我们相信这样一个事实：这幅画试图让我们相信这样一个事实：很多年轻人正失去日常生活中的动手能力很多年轻人正失去日常生活中的动手能力The picture is trying to _ that many of the young are losing their basic hands-on ability in everyday life.convince us of a fact模仿模仿2：老师想要让我们相信：通过努力：老师想要让我们相信：通过努力我们可以成为最棒的学生。我们可以成为最棒的学生。The teach

12、er is trying to convince us of afact that we can be top students throughhard work/efforts.4 What ( is it that) accounts for the case above?模仿要点：强调句的特殊疑问模仿要点：强调句的特殊疑问句句模仿模仿1：到底谁愿意借这么大一笔钱呢？到底谁愿意借这么大一笔钱呢？_ _ _ _is willing to lend you such a large sum of money?Who is it that模仿模仿2：到底在哪儿你才能借到这么大一笔钱呢？到底在哪儿

13、你才能借到这么大一笔钱呢？_ _ _ _ you can borrow such a large sum of money?Where is it that5 we should make it our habit to turn off electrical equipment.模仿要点：模仿要点：（feel. think, make, find, consider）itadj. / n. to do sth.think it necessary feel it urgent.make it a rulemake it our dutymake it a habit模仿模仿1：我规定自己每天

14、晚饭后散步我规定自己每天晚饭后散步I make _ _ _to have a walk after supper every day.it a rule模仿模仿2：我们有责任培养自我独立意识我们有责任培养自我独立意识We should make _ _ _to develop ourselves to be independent.it our duty随着生活的不断现代化，很多年轻人逐渐失去了动手实践随着生活的不断现代化，很多年轻人逐渐失去了动手实践的能力。仔细观察下图，结合自己的生活实际，写一篇的能力。仔细观察下图，结合自己的生活实际，写一篇120-150词的英语短文，词的英语短文，描述漫

15、画内容，分析原因，提出描述漫画内容，分析原因，提出你的建议。你的建议。(动手能力动手能力 hands-on ability) 1. paragraph 1: to describe the picture paragraph 2: to analyze the reasons paragraph 3: to give your opinions 2. key words? 3. key sentences?Suggested drafting:随着生活的不断现代化，很多年轻人逐渐失去了动手实践随着生活的不断现代化，很多年轻人逐渐失去了动手实践的能力。仔细观察下图，结合自己的生活实际，写一篇的能

16、力。仔细观察下图，结合自己的生活实际，写一篇120-150词的英语短文，词的英语短文，描述漫画内容，分析原因，提出描述漫画内容，分析原因，提出你的建议。你的建议。(动手能力动手能力 hands-on ability) Key Words & Phrasesinteresting / ridiculoushave no idea / be at a lossunwrapno chances/ opportunitiesover-protective : care too muchindependentpractice/ experienceawarenesson ones ownhand

17、s-on ability Key Words & PhrasesCan you use the sentence patterns to write the composition1 with +n. +宾补宾补2 主句主句 + 现在分词（作状语）现在分词（作状语）3 The picture is trying to convince us of a fact that.（同从）（同从）4 what is it that? 5 we should make it our duty to Key sentences:6 so.that.7 What we should do is示例示例

18、:1 The boy is sitting at the table with a book in his hand, trying to find how to unwrap zongzi.2 The picture is trying to convince us of a fact that many of the young are losing their basic hands-on ability in everyday life.3 We should make it our duty to develop ourselves to be independent. As can

19、 be seen in the picture, sit before a plate of zongzi, the boy is at a loss of how to open them and eventually turns to a book for instructions. The picture is trying to convince us of a fact that many of the young are losing his basic hands-on ability in everyday life. What is it accounts for the i

20、nteresting case above? Firstly, a lack of awareness of practice is a major cause, which, of course, leads to such an embarrassed situation. Secondly, parents are such over-protective that their children had no chances to deal with problems independently in daily life. However, if we intend to live a

21、n independent life, we should make it is our duty to explore things on our own. Meantime, what our parents should do is give us more chances to improve our basic skills through small things. Every tiny action counts.Ten mistakes!Ten mistakes!As can be seen in the picture, sit before a plate of zongz

22、i, the boy is at a loss of how to open them and eventually turns to a book for instructions. The picture is trying to convince us of a fact that many of the young are losing his basic hands-on ability in everyday life. sittingunwraptheirWhat is it accounts for the interesting case above? Firstly, a lack of awareness of practice is a major cause, which, of course, leads to such an embarrassed situation. Secondly, pa