浙江新高考作文公开课概要写作新闻文体（课堂PPT）

1、1英语组 郑志鹏Summary Writingfor news reports2of a news reportStructure3女孩睡前戴耳机听歌，第二天却再也没能醒过来！ 你有经常戴耳机听歌的习惯吗？19岁女孩Gabrielle Samuels与男友通完电话后，躺在床上用耳机听音乐，但第二天，家人发现Gabrielle Samuels一直迟迟没有起床。 推开她的房间门，就闻到一股焦味，家人们看到Gabrielle Samuels奄奄一息的躺在床上。她全身都是血迹和烧焦的痕迹，不知道经历了什么。 等警方赶到，Gabrielle Samuels已经死亡。调查结果显示，她当晚听音乐时手机同时在

2、充电，充电器接头短路，强大电流瞬间从耳机灌入女孩头部。女孩的死让家人很伤心，这本来是可以避免的悲剧。很多人喜欢在电子产品充电时仍继续使用，这样直接就把你手中的电子产品变成有致命威胁的危险品。Event in generalEvent in _ of the eventdetailReason4StructureRetell the event in general Retell the event in detail Conclude the reason/influenceof the event5StructureRetell the event in general Retell the

3、 event in detail Conclude the reason/influenceof the event6StructurePara. 1Para. 2Para. 3Para. 4General descriptionThe process of the story in detailThe result of the storyThe influence of the story7StructurePara. 1Para. 2Para. 3Para. 4General descriptionThe process of the story in detailThe result

4、of the storyThe influence of the story8StructureGeneral descriptionThe process of the story in detailThe result of the storyThe influence of the storyof the summary writingSentenceSentence 2Sentence 3Sentence 419SentenceHow to use oneto tell a story?10SentenceWhat should we write in the11What does c

5、onsist ofstorya?12讲故事 有座山 从前13讲故事 有座山。 有座庙。 有个 ，他每天都下山 。从前山上庙里和尚挑水喝14 有座山。 有座庙。 有个 ，他每天都下山 。 从前山上庙里和尚挑水喝讲故事15从前山上庙里和尚whenwherewherewhowhat挑水喝16whenwherewhowhatwhyhowstoryElementsof17whenwherewhowhatwhyhow18 有座山。 有座庙。 有个 ，他每天都下山 。 从前山上庙里和尚挑水喝19从前 山上 庙里 和尚 挑水喝20Pick proper elements to write a sentence

6、 for each paragraph.whenwherewhowhatwhyhow21Pick proper elements to write a sentence for each paragraph.Para. 1Para. 2Para. 3Para. 422Pick proper elements to write a sentence for each paragraph.Para. 1Para. 2Para. 3Para. 4Recently, a wild fish restaurant in Harbin faced being shut down and a large f

7、ine.23Pick proper elements to write a sentence for each paragraph.Para. 1Para. 2Para. 3Para. 4A customer named Chen Yan exposed his being overcharged and the violent treatment of the restaurant to the public. 24Pick proper elements to write a sentence for each paragraph.Para. 1Para. 2Para. 3Para. 4T

8、he restaurant as well as some r e l e v a n t g o v e r n m e n t departments received their punishment. 25Pick proper elements to write a sentence for each paragraph.Para. 1Para. 2Para. 3Para. 4Similar cases happ e n e d elsewhere and the government will punish these actions. 26Similar cases happen

9、ed elsewhere and the government will punish these actions. Recently, a wild fish restaurant in Harbin faced being shut down and a large fine.A customer named Chen Yan exposed his being overcharged and the violent treatment of the restaurant to the public. The restaurant as well as some relevant gove

10、rnment departments received their punishment. Can we simply put sentences together into a whole passage?27Polish your writing28Polish your writing1. Use connective words2. Use special sentences291. Connective Words关联词30there is no doubt that31there is no doubt thatas a matter of fact32there is no do

11、ubt thatas a matter of factit is universally acknowledged that33there is no doubt thatas a matter of factas far as sb is concernedit is universally acknowledged that34there is no doubt thatas a matter of factas far as sb is concernedin my opinionit is universally acknowledged that35there is no doubt

12、 thatit goes without saying thatas a matter of factas far as sb is concernedin my opinionit is universally acknowledged that36关联词精华段落间逻辑句子间逻辑37段落间逻辑起合转承firstbesides, meanwhilewhereas, whilein summary关联词精华句子间逻辑38句子间逻辑因果目的让步对比therefore, thereby doingin contrastwhile, despiteso as to 举例for instance关联词精

13、华段落间逻辑39_, similar cases happened elsewhere and the government will punish these actions. Recently, a wild fish restaurant in Harbin faced being shut down and a large fine.A customer named Chen Yan exposed his being overcharged and the violent treatment of the restaurant to the public. _, the restau

14、rant as well as some relevant government departments received their punishment. ThereforeBesides402. Special sentences412. Special sentences(1) 倒装句Never will/can/should sb do sth.(2) 非限制性定语从句主句, which 422. Special sentences(1) 倒装句Never will/can/should sb do sth.解释：某人绝不会/能/应做某事。举一反三：怎么用该句型写“某人一定要做某事”

15、。Never will/can/should sb stop/ignore doing sth.432. Special sentences(1) 倒装句Never will/can/should sb do sth.Never will/can/should sb stop/ignore doing sth.适合作为文章的_句。A. 总起 B. 总结 C. 过渡总结总结44_, similar cases happened elsewhere and the government will punish these actions. Besides实战练习：将第四段主旨句改成倒装句Besid

16、es, similar cases happened elsewhere and _.never will the government stop punishing these actions 452. Special sentencese.g. Harry Potter is an interesting book, which we all know. (2) 非限制性定语从句主句, which which指？462. Special sentencese.g. Harry Potter is an interesting book, which we all know. (2) 非限制

17、性定语从句主句, which 前一个句子里的事件与第二句有逻辑关联，就可以用该句型合成长句。472. Special sentences(2) 非限制性定语从句主句, which 因果：He got awarded. He felt proud. 改写：_, which made him proud. 目的：He hugged her. He wanted to show love.改写：_, which was to show his love. 48A customer named Chen Yan exposed his being overcharged and the violent

18、 treatment of the restaurant to the public. _, the restaurant as well as some relevant government departments received their punishment. Therefore实战练习：将第二、三段主旨句合成长句提示：两段之间是什么逻辑关系？49A customer named Chen Yan exposed his being overcharged and the violent treatment of the restaurant to the public, whic

19、h led to punishment on the restaurant and some relevant government departments. 实战练习：将第二、三段主旨句合成长句A customer named Chen Yan exposed his being overcharged and the violent treatment of the restaurant to the public. _, the restaurant as well as some relevant government departments received their punishment. Therefore50A customer