2020届高考英语全国卷书面表达专项高效训练--读后续写

1、2020届高考英语全国卷书面表达专项高效训练-读后续写1. 第一节读后续写Afarmergrewsomevegetablesinhisgarden.Onedayhiswifewasillandhehadnomoney.Hehadtosellsomecabbagesandcarrotsinthemarket.Thenextmorninghetooktwobasketsofvegetablestotown.Butitwasraininghardthatafternoonandtherewerefewpeopleinthestreet.Whenhisvegetablesweresoldout,itw

2、asdark.Heboughtsomemedicineandhurriedtohisvillage.Onhiswayhomehesawapersonlyingonthesnow.Heplacedhisbasketsonthegroundandwasgoingtohelpthepersontogetup.Atthattimehefounditwasadeadmanandtherewasmuchbloodonhisbody.Hewassoafraidthatheranawayquickly,withouttakingthebasketswithhim.Thenextafternoonthefarm

3、erwassenttothepolicestation.Havingshownthebaskets,anofficerasked,"Aretheseyours""Yessir.thefarmeransweredtimidly（胆怯地）."Haveyoukilledtheman""No,no,sir."thefarmersaidinahurry."Whendidyouseethedeadmansevenlastevening.""Didyouseewhokilledtheman"&quo

4、t;No,sir."Theofficerbroughtoutaknifeandasked,"Haveyouseenityet""No,sir."Theofficerbecameangryandtoldthepolicementobeathimupandsenthimintoprison.theofficerwantedtotrapthefarmerintotheconfession（供认）,butthefarmerdidn'tadmithewasthemurderer.注意：1. 所续写的短文词数应为150左右；2. 应使用5个以上短文

5、中标有下划线的关键词语3. 续写部分分为二段，每段的开头语已经为你写好4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:Theofficerwassoangrythatheaskedthepolicemantobeathimupagain.Paragraph2:Thefarmerwaslucky.Afewdayslater,2. 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Therewasathickforestonthesidesofamountain.Manykindsofanimalslivedintheforest.Adeerwaseatingg

6、rassandleaveswithhertwoyoungones.Theyoungoneswanderedhappilyhereandthere.Thedeerfollowedherfawns（幼鹿）intoacave.Thedeerwasfrightenedbecauseitwasatiger'scave.Therewerebonesofdeadanimalsalloverthecave.Fortunately,thetigerwasnotinsidethecaveatthetime.Thedeerwastryingtoleadheryoungonesoutofthecavewhen

7、sheheardaloudroar.Shesawthetigeratadistancecomingtowardsthecave.Itwasdangeroustogooutofthecavenow.Shethoughtofaplan.Thedeerraisedhervoiceandshouted,"Mydeeryoungchildrendonotweep.Ishallcapture（捕捉）atigerforyoutoeat.Youcanhaveagooddinner."Thetigerheardthesewordsandbecamefrightened.Hethought,&

8、quot;Whoseisthatstrangevoicefromthecave?Adangerousanimalisstayinginsidetocaptureme.Ishallrunawaytoescapedeath."Thetigerbegantorunawayfromthereasfastaspossible.Ajackal（胡狼）sawtherunningtiger."Whyareyourunningingreatfeja?也thasked.Thetigersaid,"Myfriend,apowerfulandfierceanimalisinmycave.

9、Theyoungonesarecryingforatigertoeat.Themotherispromisingtocaptureatigerforthem.So,Iamrunningaway."Thecunningjackalwasnowsurethetigerwasacoward（懦夫）.Itsaid,"Don'tbeafraid.NoanimalisfiercerorstrongerthanatigerLetusgotogethertofindout.”Butthetigersaid,"Idonotwanttotakeachance.Youmayru

10、naway.Iwillbeleftalonetodie.So,Iwillnotcomewithyou."Thejackalsaid,"Trustme.Letusknot（打结）ourtaistogether.ThenIwillnotbeabletoleaveyou."Thetigeragreedunwillinglytothisproposal.Sothejackaltiedtheirtailsinaknot.Nowtheywalkedtowardsthecavetogether.Para.1Thedeersawthejackalandthetigercoming

11、together.Para.2Thetigerwasshockedtohearthisandhewassurenowthejackalcheatedhim.注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2. 应使用至少5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词；3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词。3. 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。SaraSavickremembersonespecialEasterwhenshewasnineyearsold.Herparentsgaveherababyducklin

12、ginayellowbasket."Momsaidlaterthatsheboughtthelittleduckbecauseshefeltsorryforit,recalledSara.ThepeopleatthepetstorecoloredthefeatherspinkforEaster.SaranamedtheduckPinky.Sara'smotherreallydidn'tthinkthebabyduckwouldsurviveverylong.Buttohersurprise,Pinkygrewandgotstrongerandstronger.Soon

13、,thelittleducklingwasahealthy,hungryduckwithwhitefeathers."WefedPinkyoatmeal,cookedanduncooked,andsmallpiecesofvegetables,"saidSaraPinkylivedinsidethehousewithSaraandherfamily.ShespeciallyfanciedtakingbathswithSara.EveryonetreatedPinkyasafamilymember.Butjustwheneverythingappearedtobeperfec

14、t,thenightofthe"talk"came.Sara'sMandDadsatherdown,explainingthatthebestthingforPinkywastoliveanormalducklife,withotherducks.Itwasnotnaturalforduckstoliveindoorswithafamily,herfathertoldher.HeaddedPinkyneededtoswiminpondsanddoallthesamethingsthatducksinthewilddo.Sarastartedtocry,knowing

15、whatwasgoingtohappen.Sara'sparentsdecidedtotakePinkytoapark,whichwastwomilesaway.Therewasapondwithalotofotherducks.PinkywouldhavethechancetoliveanaturallifeandSaracouldstillvisither.Thebigdaycame,SaraandherparentsputPinkyinaboxanddrovetothepark.SarasaidthatPinkydidnotlookhappy;maybePinkywasconvi

16、ncedthatshewasahuman,notaduck.注意：所续写短文的词数应为l50左右；至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1EveryonewassadwhentheyleftPinkyatthepond,evenSarafather.'sParagraph2Thenextmorning,whenlookingoutofthekitchenwindow,Saracouldn'tbelievehereyes!4. 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一

17、个完整的故事。Jack,aclerkatthelocalbank,waswanderingaloneonthestreet.Itwasacold,silentwinternight.HismindwasonhiswifeLinda,whohadbeeninacaraccidenttwomonthsagoandwasnowlyinginahospitalbed,waitingformoremoneyforheroperation.Jackhadsoldeverythinghehad,andhehadtriedhisbesttoborrowmoneyfromallthepeopleandbanks

18、hecould.Buttherealworldiscruel.Alargeamountofmoneywasstillneeded.ToJack,itwouldmeanagreatdealofsufferingtoseehiswifediewithoutanyhelp."lhaveonlyoneoptionleft,"Jacksaidtohimself.Thenhewenttothebank,hisworkplace,again.Forseveraldays,heobservedthebankandplannedatheft.Thenthenextday,hewenttowo

19、rkasusual.Everythingseemednormal:hejokedwithhisworkmatesandhelpedhisclientsashealwaysdid.Butnoonenoticedthathehadbroughtabiggersuitcasetowork,insteadofthesmallonehealwayscarried.At5:00pm,thebankclosed,andtheclerksandtheguardshadallgonehome.However,atthatmoment,Jackwasinthebathroom,andtheguardsdidn&#

20、39;tnoticehofcourse.Whenthenoisescomingfromthestreetwerereplacedbysilenceandeverythingturneddark,Jackcameoutfromthebathroom.Hefirstcutthelinesofthealarmsandmonitorswithtoolsfromhisnewsuitcase.Hewasalltoofamiliarwiththeequipmentsincehehadbeenworkingtherefor8yearsandhadbeenstudyingthesecuritysystemfor

21、thepast30days.Usingaspecialkeyandsomeothertools,hetheneasilyopenedthedoorsofthesafes.Thebank'ssecuritysystemwasn'tverygood,whichallowedJacktotakealotofmoney.Severalminuteslater.Jackleftthebankwithaheavybagfilledwithmoney.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2. 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4.

22、 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:AfterJackhadbeenawayfromthebankforawhile,thealarmsbegantoring.Paragraph2:Butthemostunluckymanwasthemanagerofthebank,anoldman.5. 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Aknockatthefrontdoorannouncedavisitor.PhilRadcliffeopenedthedoor,lookeddown,andfoundasmallboyofabout10,head

23、downandfacehidden,nosesniffling（抽鼻子）,obviouslyinsomeunhappiness.PhilandhiswifeMollylivedinthisneighbourhoodforalmostthreedecades.Thefamilieshereallknewandtrustedoneanother.Youngstersbouncedfromhometohomelookingforfriendsandentertainment.Intheschoolholidays,MollyandPhilhadbeenknowntotakechildrenatati

24、metothelocalcinematogivesomeoftheparentsabreak.Havingtakenhimtothelivingroomandhadhimseated,Philaskedtheboy,"Philip,what'shappened?”Theboyseemedgenuinelyupsetbytheinquiry."Sorry,MrRadcliffe,''hesobbed,''Mydajustlefthome.He'snotgoingtolivewithusanymore.Mum'scryin

25、g.It'smademecry.IthinkI'mgoingtoseehimagain.”Philsatdownnexttohimandputacomfortingarmaroundhisshoulders,tryingtoreassuretheyoungster,"I'msurethatyou'llseeyourfatheragainverysoon,Philip.You'realovelyboyandhe'llwanttoseeyoualot.And/ourteacherswillunderstandifsometimesyou&#

26、39;reabitsad.”Theboywipedawayhistearswiththebackofahand."Letmegetsomethingforus,'Philsuggested.Hewentintothekitchen,andthenreturnedwithanorangejuicefortheboy,acoffeeforhimselfandaselectionofbiscuitsforthem.Howeverupsethemighthavebeen,youngPhilipwasobviouslyhappywiththedrinkandconcentratedon

27、thechocolatesamplesamongthebiscuits.Oncetheboyseemedmoresettled,Philproposed,kkPerhapsyoushouldcallyourmumandtellherwhereyouare,sothatshedoesn'tworry.”"It'sOK,MrRadcliffe,"heinsisted."I'llgohomeinafewminutes.ButIliketalkingtoyou."Youcanstayaslongasyouwant,Philip.Ijust

28、donyourmothertowankthatshelost'syou.注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。andtroubledPhilip.Paragraph1:TheresponsesurprisedParagraph2:Onthedoorstep,youngPhiliplookedupathisfriendlyneighbour.6. 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Jennywasaprettye

29、ight-year-oldgirl.Onedaywhensheandhermotherwerecheckingoutatthegrocerystore,Jennysawaplasticpearlnecklace,bywhichshewastotallydefeated.Howeagerlyshewantedit!Butwhenhesawtheprice,herheartsankalittle.Shegathereduphercourageandaskedhermotherifshewouldbuyitforher,hermothersaid,Well,itisaprettynecklace,b

30、utitcostsanawfullotofmoney.Icanbuyyouthenecklace,butwhenwegethomeweshouldmakeupalistofhouseworkthatyoucandotopayforthenecklace."Jennyagreedimmediately,feelingaburstofjoy.Sohermotherboughtthepearlnecklaceforher.Jennyworkedonherhouseworkdeterminedlyandearnestlyeveryday.SoonJennyhadpaidoffthepearl

31、s.Jennyhadaverylovingdaddy.WhenJennywenttobed,hewouldreadJennyherfavoritestory.Onenightwhenhefinishedthestory,hesaid,loveJmenty,doy6unyes,Daddy,youknowIloveyou,"thelittlegirldelightedly,withabroadsmileonherface."Well,then,givemeyourpearls.Hearingthat,Jennyfrozethere,ananxiousexpressiontwis

32、tingherface."Oh!Daddy,notmypearls!ButyoucanhaveRosy,myfavoritedoll.Rememberher?Yougavehertomelastyearformybirthday.Okay?”"Ohno,darling,that'sokay."Herfatherbrushedhcheekwithakiss,gentlyandcalmly."Goodnight,littleone."Aweeklater,herfatheronceagainaskedJennyafterherstory,&

33、quot;Doyouloveme?”Daddy,youknowIloveyou."thelittlegirlmurmuredsoftly,tryingtoescapefromherfathereyes."Well,then,givemeyourpearls.”"Oh,Daddy,notmypearls!ButyoucanhaveRibbons,mytoyhorse.Doyourememberher?She'smyfavorite."Thelittlegirlbegged."No,that'sherfathersaid,smili

34、ngbroadlyandsweetlyandbrushedhercheekagainwithakiss."Gyou,littleone.Sweetdreams.”注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2. 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语：3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraphl:Severaldayslater,whenJenny'sfathercameintoreadherastory,JennyParagraph2:Holdingtheplasticpearlhisdaught

35、eroffered,thefatherdraggedoutabluebox.7. 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。SamWattswasa37-year-oldfishermanlivingandWorkinginCanada.Oneday,SamplannedtoheadoutintothePacificat9amandworkstraightthroughuntil5pmthenextday.JoiningSamwouldbehiscrewman,24-year-oldTomBuck.AlthoughSamhadbeenw

36、arnedthatastormwascoming,therewaslittlethatwouldkeephimfromgoing.Ashesailedthroughthewavessome120kilometersfromland,Samletouthisthree-kilometer-longfishingline.Thestormwasgainingstrengthonlandbuthadyettoreachthemenfaroffshore.Thatchangedaround1am.Wavesrockedthesmallboat,whichbegantoturnsidewayslikea

37、namusementparkride.aGustoutofhere!”ToscreamedtoSam."Letgosback!”Withthewindsandwaveskickingup,theboatbegantofillwithwater.SamandTomtriedtopullinthefishinglinetogether,butthehighwavesfilledtheboatwithwater,forcingSamtomakeaharddesicion.Hecuttheline,losingthousandsofdollars'wooftiequipmentand

38、fishinthesea.Hethenpointedtheboattowardaportfivehoursaway.Samthencalledhisboss,WilliamFox,toreporthisposition.Withdawncoming,Samspottedtheriseofthemountainsonthehorizon.Hewasfiguringoutaroutethroughthedangerouswaterswhensuddenlythemotorstopped."Icouldn'tbelieveit,said."Wewere24kilomete

39、rsoffthecoast,andthemotordied."Highwavesraisedanddroppedthboat,sendingthemencrashingintothesides."William,William!yelleidanrntotheradio."Ifyou'recomingtogetme,comenow!”"Wdrecoming!”Williamshoutedback.Paragraphl:Shortlyafter,theradiodiedandthewindcontinuedtoblowstraightoffshor

40、e,drivingthemenfartherouttosea.Paragraph2:Thenextmorning,Stunspottedafishingboatinthedistance.参考答案1. 答案：Paragraph1Theofficerwassoangrythatheaskedthepolicemantobeathimupagain.Thefarmerwasveryafraid,hethoughthewouldbesentencedtodeathbykillingpeople,buthedidn't,hewasinnocent.Hemusttellpeoplethetrut

41、h,butnoonecouldhearhisvoice.hehopedthatsomeonecouldcomeandsavehim.Paragraph2Thefarmerwaslucky.Afewdayslater,ayoungmancametothepolicestationwithalotofjournalists,sayingthathesawthemurderer.Itwasthepoliceofficerwhokilledthemanonthesnow!Hesawthepoliceofficeusedaknifekillingthemanlateintheevening.hewass

42、ofrightenedandranaway.Buttheyoungmanthoughtthefarmerwasinnocent.Sohetookthegreatcouragetoexposetherealcriminal.Aftertheinvestigation,theyoungmanwasright.Thepoliceofficerwassentintoprisonandthepolicemanwhobeatupthefarmerwasfired,andthebraveyoungmanwasregardedastheherobythevillagers解析：2. 答案：Para.1Thed

43、eersawthejackalandthetigercomingtogether.Sheagainraisedhervoice.Sheshoutedtowardsherchildrenstandinginsidethecave,"Mydearchildren,Irequestedmyfriend,thecleverjackal,tocaptureatigerforus.Nowlookthejackalhascapturedatigerforus.Hehastiedthetiger'stailtohistail.Thisistopreventthetigerfromescapi

44、ng.Youwillsoonhavethetigerfordinner."Para.2Thetigerwasshockedtohearthisandhewassurenowthejackalcheatedhim.So,thetigerdecidedtoescapefromtheterribleanimalstandinginsidehiscave.Hestartedrunning.Heforgotaboutthejackal.Hedraggedthejackaloverrocksandthorns.Inthemadescapethejackalwascaughtbetweentwor

45、ocks.Thetigerpulledwithallhismight.Hisiajjgotcut.Thejackalwaskilledinthisincident.Thetail-lesstigerranawaytoanotherpartoftheforest.Thedeerandheryoungonesleftthetigerscave.Theyjoinedtheirherdsafely.Presenceofmindandintelligencecansaveonefromdangeroussituations.解析：3.答案：EveryonewassadwhentheyleftPinkya

46、tthepond,evenSara'father.ButhetriedtoconvinceSarathatPinkywasfine.Walkingtowardsthecar,SaralookedoverhershoulderandsawPinkystandingalone.Theotherduckswereswimmingaroundincircles,lookingatPinky.ToSara,itseemedthattheyweretryingtoidentifythestrangeanimal.Theydidn'trecognizeaduck.WorriedaboutPi

47、nky,SaradreamedofPinkybeingbulliedbyotherducksthewholenight.Thenextmorning,whenlookingoutofthekitchenwindow,Saracouldn'tbelievehereyes!TherewasPinky,happilywalkingaroundonthegrass.Thrilledatwhatshesaw,shekeptaskingherself,"Howdidshemakeit?"Afteratwitwalesawayandhemanagedtowalkbackthrou

48、ghthecitystreet.Incredible!ButherparentsdrovePinkybacktothepondagainregardlessofherrequest.Thefollowingmorning,therewasPinkyagainonthegrass!SeeingPinkyagain,herfather,wavinghisarmsaboutwildly,movedhislipswithoutsayinganything.Meanwhile,Sarah,overjoyed,huggedPinkytightly,tearsstreamingdownhercheeks.解

49、析：【分析】这是一篇读后续写作文。阅读部分主要阐述了故事的主人公收到了一个圣诞节的礼物黄色的小鸭子，随着小鸭子的长大，父母认为小鸭子应该和其他正常的鸭子一样生活，于是决定放生小鸭子。【详解】第一步：把握文章主题。仔细阅读所给短文，把握短文核心内容是完成续写的前提。本文讲的是一个故事，故事的主人公Sara收到了一个圣诞节的礼物一一黄色的小鸭子，随着小鸭子的长大，父母认为小鸭子应该和其他正常的鸭子一样生活，于是决定放生小鸭子。第二步：预测故事的发展。根据已知人物、事件及续写段落的首句进行预测。根据Paragraph1的首句EveryonewassadwhentheyleftPinkyatthepo

50、nd,evenSara可预漏1家.人怀着不舍和担忧放走了小鸭子，再根据Paragraph2的Thenextmorning,whenlookingoutofthekitchenwindow,Saracouldn'tbelieve审ereyes鸣子居然又回到了一家三口身边。第三步：罗列写作要点，结合文本中划线词语和预测，展开想象，罗列出故事情节发展。第四步：连词成篇。结合罗列的要点，恰当使用衔接词。避免重复使用同一个单词或短语，避免只使用一两个句式。，句子结构是否清晰第五步：认真检查。检查行文是否流畅、合逻辑、时态、人称是否一致短语使用、单词拼写是否正确等。【点睛】范文叙述流畅，逻辑清晰，

51、上下文转换自然，词数适当，并试了一些高级句式：非谓语动词（动词-ing）做伴随状语:Walkingtowardsthecar,SaralookedoverhershoulderandsawPinkystandingalone.固定句型:itseemedthat-独立主格:Meanwhile,Sarah,overjoyed,huggedPinkytightly,tearsstreamingdownhercheeks.4. 答案：Paragraph1:AfterJackhadbeenawayfromthebankforawhile,thealarmsbegantoring.Thepolicearr

52、ivedatthebankveryquickly,onlytofindnoonethere.Thenextdaywasareallyspecialdayforthetown,whichwasfilledwithnewspapersandTVreportscoveringthestrangetheft.Theclerksatthebankwerebusydiscussingthecase,ofcourse%includingJack.Thepolicecouldonlypromisetocatchthethievesassoonaspossible,eventhoughnoclueshadbee

53、nfoundyet.Paragraph2:Butthemostunluckymanwasthemanagerofthebank,anoldman.Heseemedtobetheonlypersontoblameandwasremovedfromhisposition.Atlast,withenoughmoneyforheroperation.Jackwifewassaved.However,Jackfeltguiltyaboutthemanagerofthebank.Hecouldnotforgetwhathehaddonetotheoldman.Hisguiltdeepenedastimew

54、entby.Finally,heturnedhimselfintothepoliceandacceptedhispunishment.解析：5. 答案：Paragraph1:TheresponsesurprisedandtroubledPhilip.HeaskedPhilifhewouldloseheroneday.Hewasworriedaboutshewoulddieandhewouldbewithouther.Philcomfortedhim,"Philip,pleasedon'tworryaboutyourmother.She'sstillyoungandsh

55、e'llbewithyou.Ofcourse,oneday,shewilldie一butwealldie.henthathappens,yoAIlbeadifferentperson,anolderperson.ItwillbehardbutyouHlmanageitsuccessfullybelieveme.”Paragraph2:Onthedoorstep,youngPhiliplookedupathisfriendlyneighbour."Thankyouverymuch,MrRadcliffe.Ifeelabitbetternow.CanIcallagainsomet

56、ime?""Ofcourse,''Philpromised."Coandtalkwheneveryoulike.MollyandIloveseeingyouandyourfriends."Theboythensaidveryquietly,"Butyoumightbeout.Oryoumightmoveaway."Philcastakindlookattheboy,placedacomfortinghandonhisshoulder,andassuredhim,"Don'tworry.Whenever

57、youwantme,Ithere.5Whateverhappens,IpromiseyouthatTilbeyourfriendaslongasyoutrustme.”(172words)解析：思路点拨从原文可以看出,Phil是一个热心的人，小菲利普登门是要请他给自己排忧解难的。由此可知续写部分的内容也与小菲利普的心事和Phil对他的帮助有关。结合续写的两个段首句，可知第一段主要是关于菲利普的新的心事以及Phil如何帮助他化解的；第二段应该写小菲利普如何表达他的感激之情以及Phil如何回应。续写也可以写其他合理的情节，但注意一定要与文章主题有关联。高分揭秘本写作能够依据前文及两个段首句，紧密围绕文章主题展开续写，故事情节合理，叙述流畅自然,与前文的语言风格一致。高级句式和短语的使用，体现了对语言的驾驭能力。本题满分25分，本范文得22分。6.答案：Sever