全国卷改错及答案

1、2011 年（全国卷I）One of my unforgettable memoryof my school in Xinjiang is that of lunches we brought from our homes. I hold my lunch-box in my hand when I was going to school. The smell from it was very good. Since the lunch bell finally rang, my friends and me met under a tall tree and had our lunches.

2、 My best friend Aigulie was used to share her Nang with me. Nang is a specially kind of cake in Xinjiang. I like them very much. Now Aigulie and I study at different colleges or we can only see each other during the summer vacation. I think over her a lot and I miss the food and the good time we had

3、 together.2011 年（全国卷II）Dear George,It's been a week after we left your family and we are nowback home. Thank you very much for showing them around your city and providing us for the wonderful meals. After we said goodbye to you, we went to Washington D.C. ,thatwe stayed for three days. My brothe

4、r was so much fond of the museums there that he begged my parents to staying another couple of day. However, my father had to return to work on Monday so we fly back last Saturday afternoon. It was really a nice experience. If you'd like to make trip to our city some day, I will be better than h

5、appy to be your guide.Yours,Mike2012年（全国卷I）Every one of us can make a great efforts to cut off the use of energy in our country. To begin with, all of us can start reducing to the use of oil by driving only when we have a real need. That won't easy, I know， but we have to start anywhere. What

6、9;s more, we can go to work by bike once and twice a week, and we can also buy smaller cars that burn less oil. Other way is to watch our everyday use of water and electric at home. For example, how many times have you walked out of a room and leave thelights or television when no one else was there

7、?2012年（全国卷II）Dear Editor,I m writing to tell you opinion about water saving. Water is important. We, as well as animal, cannot live without water and neither agriculture or industry can go without it. Yet it seemed water is becoming less and less. Many countries in the world find we don t have enoug

8、h water. To deal with a problem, I think, we should first go all out to plant trees though trees will help save water. Next, no drinking water should left running. Third, we should find ways to reuse the water using in washing, especially bath water for which is quite a lot, and that will save much

9、water.Sincerely, Li Hua2013年新课标1I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs. I was only four when she passes away. She is just a distant memory for me now. I remember my grandfather very much. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from

10、black toward gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful. In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have never known.2013年（全国一卷）

11、My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month. It is in the downtown area, but it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport.We lived in a comfortably double-room with a big bath. What I liked best were the free high-speed Internet conne

12、ction in the room. I checked my email messages every day. I also shared for my friends many photos taking in Beijing. The food was wonderful with reasonable prices, and we enjoyed several local dish.It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of me who is going to Beijing.2014年 （全

13、国一卷）Nearly five years before ,and with the help by our father, my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoe（s 圣女果） in our back garden, since then-for all these year-we had been allowing tomatoes to self seed where they please . As result, the plants are growing somewhere. The fruits are small in size

14、, but juicy and taste. There are so much that we often share them with our neighbors .Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year, but we have never had any disease or insect attack problem. We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at on cost!5 / 152014年 （全国二卷）My dream schoo

15、l starts at 8:30 a.m and ends at 3:30 p.m. They are three lesson in the morning and two in the afternoon. We didn t need to do so many homework. Therefore , we have more time with after-school activities. For example, we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sport for one hour every day.My

16、 dream school look like a big garden. There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom, buildings. We can lie on the grass for a rest, sat by the lake listening music. The teachers here are kind and helpfully. They are not only our teachers but also our friends.（ 2015全国一卷）When I was

17、 a child, I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there. Now I am living in a city,but I miss my home in countryside. There the air is clean or the mountains are green. Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted. Lots of studies have been

18、shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem. The airs we breathe in is5 / 15getting dirtier and dirtier. Much rare animals are dying out. We must found ways toprotect your environment. If we fail to do so,we ll live to regret it.（ 2015全国二卷）One day, little Tony went to a sho

19、pping center with his parent. It was very crowded.Tony saw a toy on a shop window. He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop. After looks at the toy for some time, he turned around and found where his parents were missing. Tony was scared and begun to cry. A woman saw him crying

20、and telling him to wait outside a shop. Five minutes later. Tony saw parents. Mom said,“ Howsee you again! Dad and I were terrible worried.” Tony promised her that this wounever happen again.16 / 152016全国卷一My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that I live. Though not very big, but the resta

21、urant is popular in our area. It is always crowded with customers at meal times. Some people even had to wait outside. My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest. Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking. My uncle says that he never dreams

22、becoming rich in the short period of time. Instead, he hopes that our business will grow steady.2016全国卷二The summer holiday is coming. My classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday. We can chose between staying at home and take a trip. If we stay at home, it is comfortable but th

23、ere is no need to spend money. But in that case, we will learn little about world. If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden you view and gain knowledges we cannot get from books. Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby. I thought that it is a good idea. It does not cost many,

24、 yet we can still learn a lot.2011 年（全国卷I） 76.把 memory 改为 memories 。 77.在 lunches 前面加 the 。 78.把 hold 改为held。 79.把Since 改为 When/After 。 80.me 改为 I 81. 把 was 去掉。 82. 把 specially 改为special。 83. 把 them 改为it。 84. 把 or 改为and。 85. 把 over 改为of。2011 年（全国卷II） 76. after-since77.them-us78. for-with 79.That 改为W

25、here 80. 去掉 much81.staying-stay82.day-days83.fly-flew84.trip 前 a85.better-more2012 年（全国卷I） 1. efforts 改为 effort 2.off 改为 down 3. 把 to 删掉 4. won't be 5.anywhere-somewhere6. and or 7. Other-Another 8. electric electricity 9.and 改为 but10 television 后加 on2012 年 （全国卷II） 76.you 后加 my 77.animal-animals

26、78.or-nor 79.seemed-seems80.we-they81.a-the/this/that 82.though-because/since/as 83. left改为 be left 84.using-used85.去掉for2013 年新课标11.hold 改为 hold 2.passes 改为 passed 3.much 改为 well/clearly 4.shoulder 改为 shoulders5.toward 改为 to/into 6.himself 改为 him 7. he was 改为 and he was 8.去 a 9.during 改为 when10.nev

27、er 改为 ever2013 年新课标2 1.去 of 2.Have 改为 Having 3.that 改为 which 4.becomes 改为 became 5. of day改为 of the day 6. Interesting 改为 Interestingly 7.by 改为 with/to 8.drank 改为 drunk 9. good cup 改为 good cups 10. grow 改为 growth2013 年（全国一卷）1.visit 改为 visited 2.but 改为 and/so 3. comfortably 改为 comfortable4.were 改为 wa

28、s 5.for 改为 with 6.for fwith 7 . taking ftaken take 8 . dishfdishes 9. such 后 力口 a such 10. mefmine2013年（全国二卷）l.before 改成 ago。 2. for 去掉；3.Unfortunate 改为 Unfortunately 4. week 改为 weeks;5.so 改为 but; 6.will 改为 would; 7.myself 改为 me 8.farther 改为 far。 9.interested 改为 interesting 。 10.truth 前面力口 the2014年（

29、全国一卷）Xearly five years Wore 7anj the help by our my sister andl pEntri some cherry tomitoes 3goOf（星女果）in our back garden, since then-for all these year -we had been allowing tomatoes to self years haveseed ivtutre they please . AsArtsulL rhe plants 3rt growing somewhere. The fniits are small m size,

30、 butjuicy and 五厘丁 There are so much that often share them w 由 cur neighbors .Although wetastymanytomato plartj to grow 出 the same place yfar after yearr tawt h船飞 imvh had any di疑as占 or insert 或yetauack problem 飞/ are showing wonderfully tamaioes ar on cost?Wonderiul2014年（全国二卷）My dream school starts

31、at 8:30 a.m. and ends at 3:30 p.m. They are three lesson Therein the morning and two in the afternoon. We didn't need to do so many homework.don'tmuchTherefore , we have more time with after-school activities. For example, we can do reading forfor one and a half hour and play sport for one h

32、our every day. hoursMy dream school look like a big garden. There are all kinds of the flowers looksand trees around the classroom, buildings. We can lie on the grass for a rest, sat by thesitlake listening A music. The teachers here are kind and helpfully.They are not only ourtohelpfulteachers but

33、also our friends.（2015 全国一卷）When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there.Now I am livingthought in a city,but I miss my home in A countryside. There the air is clean orthe mountains are green.theandUnfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environ

34、ment has been polluted. Lots with of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem. The airsseriousairwe breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. Much rare animals are dying out. We must found ways toManyfindprotect your environment. If we fail to do so,we

35、' ll live to regret it.our/the（2015全国二卷）.71. parent 改为 parents 72. on 改为 in 73. very 去掉72. 74. looks 改为 looking 75. where 改为 that 76. begun 改为 began77. telling 改为 told 78. a 改为 the 79. saw 后加 his80. terrible 改为 terribly2016全国卷1 that f where 2 去掉 but 3 had f have4 honest f honesty 5 or - and6 usi

36、ng used 7 dreams后力口 of 8 the - a 9 our f his 10 steady fsteadily2016全国卷二答案】1 .how 改为 what 2.chose 改为 choose 3.take 改为 taking4.but 改为 and 5.about 后加 the6.your 改为 our7.knowledges 改为 knowledge8.删除 can 或 can 改为 should9.thought 改为 think 10.many 改为 much试题分析：考查记叙文J'我”和同学们对暑假的旅游计划的讨论。1-how改为记出考查特殊结构。“特珠疑问词TO时I在本句中作为短语他业皿演语，其中好就还要 作为初词加的逻辑宾语。句意；同学们和我在谈论暑假期间做什么。2工Mse改为choose考查句子结我”情态动词一动向原形”才可以在句卬作为谓语部分，而本句