托福综合写作模板分享

1、托福综合写作模板分享托福综合写作经典模板分享开头段Thelectureapparentlydisproveswhatisarguedinthereadingmaterial.AccordingtothepassageHowevertheprofessorassertsthatacloserscrutinyofthisargumentwouldrevealhowflimsyitis.Hethenpresentsseveralevidencestodemonstratehisstatement.内容第一段Tostartwith,theprofessorclaimsthatthereadingpas

2、sagefailstotakeintoaccountthatTherefore,theassertionoftheauthorseemstooabsolutesinceotherpossibilitiescouldnotbeeliminatedbyanycurrentevidence.内容第二段Furthermore,thepassageassumesthat.Theprofessor,however,suggeststhatthisassumptionmaynotbemeritedbytheevidence.Say,.Thecontradictionisobviousherewhen.Ont

3、hebasisofthispointthelecturee_plicitlyrefutesthepassage., but one内容第三段Lastbutnottheleast,thepassagemayberightaboutcriticalfactisbeingleftoutofconsideration.Pointedoutbytheprofessor,theauthortotallyneglectsthetruththatOnaccountofabove-mentionedgravemistakes,theauthorsassertionturnedouttobeaprepostero

4、usidea.结尾段Inconclusion,basedontheargumentsofferedabove,theprofessorclearlyidentifiesthedefectsinthereadingpassageandforcefullyshowsthat其它说明细节文中至少有一个举例形式,如果实在用不到上面句型,可以用转述凑字数:Inotherwords,thatistosay,其他有用句型Thereadingassumesthat,asituationthatseemstobeatoddswith与是矛盾的托福写作:怎么做到善用例子如动物-鸟类，现代交通方式-飞机，上面的举例

5、是简单的形式，即对单个词/短语,或说单个对象举例.我们在独立写作中会遇到对单个对象的举例,这也是大家都能做好的;但我们更常遇到的是需要对一个句子,或说多个对象互相联系而串成的观点举例的情况,这时我们就需要留意我们所举的例子的有效性了.托福写作举例的基本原则:a. 细节性原则细于被举例者.b. 一致性原则良好体现与要用举例证明的观点的一致对应关系,观点中的重点信息应在例子中不多不少地体现.新托福写作真经介绍的举例的具体操作方法:粗举,细举,引调查,列数字.(1)粗例粗犷的例子粗例即一类人.物或事,或一个公认事实的例子,说白了就是多数人都能认可的信息.寻找这类例子的时候比较轻松,只要在观点中找出可

6、以继续细化的重点信息然后narrowdown就可以了.观点1:Employersarewillingtopayapremiumforhighlyqualifiedapplicants.粗例1:Internationalcompaniesdesirebilingualemployeesandofferhighersalariestoattractthem.粗例可以建立面对线的关系,但需要注意不能太空洞,同时也要控制使用的量;粗例子需要搭配因果分析.比较论证来使用,才能使整个段落更有血肉.托福写作之常犯的错误1. 不完整的句子(1) Ifyoufindthatwritingishardisbeca

7、useitishard.Oneofthehardestthingsthatpeopledo.Ifyoufindthatwritingishardisbecauseitishardoneofthehardestthingsthatpeopledo.(2) Stereotypesareakindofgossipabouttheworld.Agossipthatmakesusprejudgepeoplebeforeweeverlayeyesonthem.Stereotypesareakindofgossipabouttheworld,agossipthatmakesusprejudgepeopleb

8、eforeweeverlayeyesonthem.Stereotypesareakindofgossipabouttheworldthatmakesusprejudgepeoplebeforeweeverlayeyesonthem.2. 分词短语作状语的错误Holdingherinhisarms,themoonhidbehindthecloud.Assoonasthemoonhidbehindthecloud,heheldherinhisarms.3. 修饰词错位(1) RomeoreceivedwordthatJulietwasdeadfromanothermessenger.Romeore

9、ceivedwordfromanothermessengerthatJulietwasdead.(2) Afterleavingthestage,theaudiencesapplausecalledthemusiciansbackforanencore.Afterthemusiciansleftthestage,theaudiencesapplausecalledthembackforanencore.(3) Disruptiveintheclassroom,ateachermaybecomee_asperatedwithhyperactivechildren.Disruptiveinthec

10、lassroom,hyperactivechildrenmaye_asperateateacher.4. 串句Unproductiveoruncooperativeworkerscanseriouslyharmanorganization,forthisreason,employersneedtohaveaccurateinformationaboutemployeeperformance,butwhenemployeeshavefullaccesstotheirownpersonnelfiles,co-workersandevensupervisorswilloftenfinditdiffi

11、culttogivefrankcriticismofunderachieversortoreporttroublemakers.Unproductiveoruncooperativeworkerscanseriouslyharmanorganization;forthisreason,employersneedtohaveaccurateinformationaboutemployeeperformance.Butwhenemployeeshavefullaccesstotheirownpersonnelfiles,co-workersandevensupervisorswilloftenfi

12、nditdifficulttogivefrankcriticismofunderachieversortoreporttroublemakers.5. 时态错误Theresearchersadmittedthattheyfalsifiedcrucialdatainthestudy.Theresearchersadmittedthattheyhadfalsifiedcrucialdatainthestudy.6. 代词错误(1) Toooftenpeopleeitherkeeptheirfeelingstothemselvesortakeitouronothers.Toooftenpeoplee

13、itherkeeptheirfeelingstothemselvesortakethemouronothers.(2) Eachgirlandboymustdotheirparttokeepthehomefiresburning.Eachgirlandboymustdoherorhisparttokeepthehomefiresburning.(3) Thiscollegehastheirownentrancerequirements.Thiscollegehasitsownentrancerequirements.(4) Ifonewishestoparticipateinthepoliti

14、calprocess,youcanbeginbyvotingregularly.Ifonewishestoparticipateinthepoliticalprocess,onecanbeginbyvotingregularly.(5) Thefireinthelibrarywasfinallyputout.Forawhile,theythoughtanunhappyemployeemighthavestartedit.Thefireinthelibrarywasfinallyputout.Forawhile,thelibrarystaffthoughtanunhappyemployeemighthaves