定语从句与写作公开课

1、Grammar and writingLead-inEnjoy the song-the one you loveI know you need a friendSomeone you can talk toWho will understand what youre going throughWhen it comes to loveTheres no easy answerOnly you can say what youre gonna doI heard you on the phoneYou took his numberSaid you werent alone, but youd

2、 call him soonIsnt he the guyThe guy who left you cryingIsnt he the one who made you blueWhen you remember those nights in his armsYou know youve gotta make up your mindAre you gonna stay with the one who loves youOr are you going back to the one you loveI know you need a friendSomeone you can talk

3、toWho will understand what youre going throughWhen it comes to loveTheres no easy answerOnly you can say what youre gonna doI heard you on the phoneYou took his numberSaid you werent alone, but youd call him soonIsnt he the guyThe guy who left you cryingIsnt he the one who made you blueWhen you reme

4、mber those nights in his armsYou know youve gotta make up your mindAre you gonna stay with the one who loves youOr are you going back to the one you love Someones gonna cry when they learn theyve lost youSomeones gonna thank the stars abovePractice of the Attributive clause1.Aplaneisamachine_canfly.

5、2.Thecar_myuncleboughtlastweekwasstolen.3.Theman_iswalkingontheplaygroundismyoldfriend.4.Thewoman_yousawintheparkisourEnglishteacher.which/that(which/that)who/that(who/that)5.Isawawoman_bagwasstolen.6.Thereason_hewaslatewasthathegotuplate.7.Istillremembertheday_IfirstcametoBeijing.8.Itisanimportantd

6、ay_Iwillneverforget.9.Thepark_theypaidavisittoisbeautiful.whosewhywhenWhich/thatWhich/that定语从句在写作中的应用定语从句在写作中的应用Part1: 高考满分作文中的定语从句欣赏：高考满分作文中的定语从句欣赏：1. 2013年全国高考新课标年全国高考新课标你知道，我的叔叔李明要去你知道，我的叔叔李明要去你居住的你居住的城市参加一个会议。城市参加一个会议。You know, my uncle Li Ming is going to the city where you live to attend an in

7、ternational meeting.我让叔叔带去我让叔叔带去你想要的你想要的中国画。中国画。Ive asked my uncle to bring you the Chinese painting you have asked for before.2. 2013 年广东高考年广东高考那些那些做普通简单工作的做普通简单工作的人也在推动着社会的发展。人也在推动着社会的发展。Those who do simple and ordinary jobs are also promoting the development of the society.正如我们都知道的那样，正如我们都知道的那样，扫

8、大街是最为困难的工作扫大街是最为困难的工作之一。之一。As we all know, cleaning streets is one of the hardest work.Part 2: 写作中定语从句的主要作用写作中定语从句的主要作用1. 增加词数增加词数2. 可以连接两个包含同一事物的句子，可以连接两个包含同一事物的句子， 避免单避免单词的重复和句式单一。词的重复和句式单一。3. 补充细节，以丰富文章内容。补充细节，以丰富文章内容。Part 3: 如何写出定语从句如何写出定语从句1. 题干中出现两句涉及同一事物的简单句。题干中出现两句涉及同一事物的简单句。Solution: 1找出这两个

9、简单句中都出现了的同一个事物。找出这两个简单句中都出现了的同一个事物。 2将其中一个简单句改成从句，去修饰另外将其中一个简单句改成从句，去修饰另外一个句子中那个相同的事物（注意关系词的选用）一个句子中那个相同的事物（注意关系词的选用）For example:我们班是一个我们班是一个大家庭。大家庭。这个大家庭这个大家庭包括包括17个男生和个男生和7个女生。个女生。 Our class is a big family.The family consists of 17 boys and 7 girls.Our class is a big family, which consists of 17

10、boys and 7 girls.Practice: 把下面各题中的句子合并为一个含有定语从句的主从复合句把下面各题中的句子合并为一个含有定语从句的主从复合句 1a. Seeing these changes, we cannot forget them. b. They gave us unselfish help when we were in trouble. _答案：答案：Seeing these changes, we cannot forget those who gave us unselfish help when we were in trouble.2a. I feel g

11、reatly honored to host the contest. b. The contest is sponsored by the Students Union. _答案：答案：I feel greatly honored to host the contest, which is sponsored by the Students Union.3a. They sent the elderly some fruits, cleaned the rooms and had a good chat with them.b. The elderly always feel lonely.

12、 _答案：答案：They sent the elderly who always feel lonely some fruits, cleaned the rooms and had a good chat with them.4a. The library is not far from here. b. The writer often does some reading there._答案：答案：The library where the writer often does some reading is not far from here. 5a. Ive always longed

13、for the days. b. I will be able to be independent then._答案：答案：Ive always longed for the days when I will be able to be independent. Practice:1. 我最好的朋友是李明，他的外号叫河马。我最好的朋友是李明，他的外号叫河马。2. 我不喜欢他的外号，原因是它深深地伤害了他。我不喜欢他的外号，原因是它深深地伤害了他。3. 他居住在开封，在这里人们可以游览很多美丽的景点。他居住在开封，在这里人们可以游览很多美丽的景点。4. 我们过去常常在一起上美术课，我不会忘记那段

14、日子。我们过去常常在一起上美术课，我不会忘记那段日子。我最好的朋友是李明，他的外号叫河马。我最好的朋友是李明，他的外号叫河马。My best friend is Li Ming.His nickname is hippo.My best friend is Li Ming, whose nickname is hippo.I dont like his nickname.The reason is that it deeply hurts him.The reason why I dont like his nickname is that it deeply hurts him.我不喜欢他的

15、外号，原因是它深深地伤害了他。我不喜欢他的外号，原因是它深深地伤害了他。她居住在开封，在这里人们可以游览很多美丽的她居住在开封，在这里人们可以游览很多美丽的景点。景点。He lives in Kai Feng.People can visit lots of scenic spots here.He lives in Kai Feng, where people can visit lots of scenic spots.(注意此处不再有注意此处不再有here)我们过去常常在一起上美术课，我不会忘记那段日子。我们过去常常在一起上美术课，我不会忘记那段日子。We used to attend

16、painting class together.I will never forget the days .I will never forget the days when we used to attend painting class together.2. 题干中只有一个孤立的简单句题干中只有一个孤立的简单句Solution: 找到这个简单句中的中心词，用定语从句将其丰富。找到这个简单句中的中心词，用定语从句将其丰富。For example: 开封是一个历史名城。开封是一个历史名城。Kai Feng is a famous historic city.Kai Feng is a fam

17、ous historic city, which has a long history of more than 2700 years and large numbers of historic spots, such as the Iron Pagoda, Longting Park and so on.有多久的历史？因何出名？有多久的历史？因何出名？Practice:1. 即将到来的端午节是中国的传统节日。即将到来的端午节是中国的传统节日。2. 李明是一个热心肠的人。李明是一个热心肠的人。The upcoming Dragon Boat Festival is a Chinese trad

18、itional festival.The upcoming Dragon Boat Festival is a Chinese traditional festival, which is celebrated to honor our national hero, Qu Yuan.( (节日的目的节日的目的) )李明是一个热心肠的人。李明是一个热心肠的人。Li Ming is a warm-hearted man .Li Ming is a warm-hearted man, who always lends a hand to others.( (具体化具体化) )直击高考直击高考（201

19、3年高考山东卷）年高考山东卷）描述你的假期打算描述你的假期打算 （包括兼职，旅游，志愿者等）（包括兼职，旅游，志愿者等）（用定语从句增添做这些事情的原因）（用定语从句增添做这些事情的原因）I would like to do a part- time job,which will help me earn money and accumulate working experience.Traveling is one of my choices,which will enrich my life and broaden my horizen.I would like to do volunta

20、ry work,which will make a great contribution to the society.Traveling is one of my choices,I would like to do a part- time job,Traveling is one of my choices,I would like to do a part- time job,Traveling is one of my choices,Translate the following English proverbs into Chinese and then pick out the

21、 attributive clauses.1. God help those who help themselves . 2. He who laughs last laughs best . 3. He who doesnt reach the Great Wall is not a true man .4. He who is content (满足满足) is always happy.根据下列句子，完成短文。根据下列句子，完成短文。 众所周知，北京已经成功地举办了众所周知，北京已经成功地举办了2008年奥运会。通年奥运会。通过本届奥运会，中国完美地向世界展现了自己。英语作过本届奥运会，

22、中国完美地向世界展现了自己。英语作为一种国际语言，在和外国人的交流中起着重要作用。为一种国际语言，在和外国人的交流中起着重要作用。本届奥运会上友好的志愿者们很好地利用了这个语言工本届奥运会上友好的志愿者们很好地利用了这个语言工具为各国运动员及客人服务，给他们留下了深刻印象。具为各国运动员及客人服务，给他们留下了深刻印象。我渴望有一天能做一名传播中国灿烂文化的志愿者，所我渴望有一天能做一名传播中国灿烂文化的志愿者，所以我现在应该努力学好英语。只有这样，才能为国家贡以我现在应该努力学好英语。只有这样，才能为国家贡献自己的力量。献自己的力量。注意：要使用定语从句注意：要使用定语从句. .play apart/ role in, seize the opportunity,make contributions to As is known to us all, Beijing has successfully hosted the 2008 Olympic Games. Thr