专题五　短文改错

1、专题五 短文改错题组一Proofreading 1(2019河北石家庄二模)I went to buy some traditional Chinese medicine on last Sunday. Just before leaving the drugstore, I noticed that some foreigners seems to have difficulty communicate with the assistant. I went over to ask if I needed. The assistant told me that she couldnt make

2、 herself understand about how to boil the mixture correctly. Learning that I could give them the hand, they were relieved. Without some trouble, I translated that the assistant wanted to say. Both sides expressed thanks to me. I was delighted to help other. More importantly, as a Chinese, I felt pro

3、udly to see foreigners try traditional Chinese medicine.答案I went to buy some traditional Chinese medicine last Sunday. Just before leaving the drugstore, I noticed that some foreigners seemsseemed to have difficulty communicatecommunicating with the assistant. I went over to ask if I needed. The ass

4、istant told me that she couldnt make herself understandunderstood about how to boil the mixture correctly. Learning that I could give them thea hand, they were relieved. Without someany trouble, I translated thatwhat the assistant wanted to say. Both sides expressed thanks to me. I was delighted to

5、help otherothers. More importantly, as a Chinese, I felt proudlyproud to see foreigners try traditional Chinese medicine.解析考查介词。此处last Sunday作时间状语不需介词,故去掉介词on。考查动词的时态。根据语境可知,此处指发生在过去的事情,故将seems改为seemed。考查非谓语动词。have difficulty (in)doing sth.为固定句型,故应把communicate改为communicating。考查动词的时态和语态。此处指我走过去问我是否被需

6、要,根据语境,事情发生在过去,且从句的主语为I,故应添加was。考查非谓语动词。understand与herself为被动关系,故将understand改为understood。考查冠词。此处give sb. a hand为固定用法,故将the改为a。考查不定代词。without表否定意义,some常用于肯定句中,any常用于否定句或疑问句中,故将some改为any。考查名词性从句。此处引导宾语从句,且宾语从句中缺少say的宾语,而that引导宾语从句并不充当成分,故将that改为what。考查代词。此处指“其他人”,应用others,other表示“其他的”,故将other改为others。

7、考查形容词。看到外国人尝试传统的中药,我感到骄傲。felt为系动词,后面应用形容词作表语,故将proudly改为proud。Proofreading 2(2019东北三省三校一模)You must have heard about Dolly and have been amazed by the first cloned animal. But here came a problem:should we clone humans? When being asked about this question, a large number of people which are interest

8、ed in the topic hold the view that its beneficial to clone humans. Therefore, some other people, me including, are against this idea. Cloning humans can bring negative effects and wrong informations. In the first place, they may not be treated equal as normal people, which I believe will make him su

9、ffer a lot. In second place, human cloning may lead in some social disorder, and it is quite dangerous.答案You must have heard about Dolly and have been amazed by the first cloned animal. But here camecomes a problem:should we clone humans? When asked about this question, a large number of people whic

10、hwho/that are interested in the topic hold the view that its beneficial to clone humans. ThereforeHowever, some other people, me includingincluded, are against this idea. Cloning humans can bring negative effects and wrong informationsinformation. In the first place, they may not be treated equalequ

11、ally as normal people, which I believe will make himthem suffer a lot. In second place, human cloning may lead into some social disorder, and it is quite dangerous.解析考查动词的时态。此处需要用一般现在时,而非一般过去时,所以将came改为comes。考查非谓语动词。people与ask为被动关系,且根据句意可知不是表示正在被问,所以将being去掉。考查定语从句。先行词为people,指人,所以应当用who或that来引导,而不是

12、which。考查副词。根据前后两句关系可知,此处是转折关系而不是因果关系,所以将Therefore改为However。考查非谓语动词。me和include为被动关系,所以将including改为included。考查名词。information为不可数名词。考查副词。此处用副词修饰动词,所以改为副词equally。考查代词。前文提及they,根据前后一致原则可知,此处应为them,所以将him改为them。考查冠词。此处second是序数词,前面需要有形容词性物主代词或定冠词the来修饰。根据句意可知,此处需要加入the。考查动词短语。lead to为固定短语,意为“导致”。Proofread

13、ing 3(2018安徽合肥二次质检)Last Saturday our class went hiking in a countryside. We meet at our school gate and set off at 8:00 am. On the way, we were singing and laughing happily while a girl suddenly fell into a deep hole. She felt so frightening and even burst into tears. One of my classmate found a lon

14、g rope and we finally got him out. Fortunately, she didnt suffer seriously injuries, but it seemed that her ankle slightly twisted. We managed to sending her to the nearest hospital. It is an experience well never forget it, though we didnt enjoy ourselves very much that day.答案Last Saturday our clas

15、s went hiking in athe countryside. We meetmet at our school gate and set off at 8:00 am. On the way, we were singing and laughing happily whilewhen a girl suddenly fell into a deep hole. She felt so frighteningfrightened and even burst into tears. One of my classmateclassmates found a long rope and

16、we finally got himher out. Fortunately, she didnt suffer seriouslyserious injuries, but it seemed that her ankle slightly twisted. We managed to sendingsend her to the nearest hospital. It is an experience well never forget , though we didnt enjoy ourselves very much that day.解析考查冠词。句意:上周六,我们班去了乡下远足

17、。in the countryside为固定短语,意为“在乡下”,故将a改为the。考查动词的时态。根据上句中的Last Saturday及本句中的at 8:00 am可知本句应该用一般过去时,故将meet改为met。考查连词。句意:在路上,我们开心地又唱又笑,这时一个女孩突然掉进了一个深坑里。be doing sth. when.为固定句式,意为“正在做某事,这/那时”。when在该句型中为并列连词。故将while改为when。考查形容词。句意:她感到很害怕甚至突然大哭起来。frightened感到害怕的;frightening令人害怕的。本句表示“感到害怕的”,故将frightening改

18、为frightened。考查名词的数。根据“One of”可知需将classmate改为classmates。考查代词。错误处应该用her指代上文提到的a girl。考查形容词。错误处应该用形容词作名词injuries的定语,故将seriously改为serious。考查被动语态。her ankle与twist为被动关系,故本句需用被动语态,因此在her ankle后加was。考查非谓语动词作宾语。manage后需用不定式作宾语。manage to do sth. 意为“成功做某事”。故将sending改为send。考查定语从句。“well never forget”为定语从句,先行词expe

19、rience在定语从句中作宾语,省去了引导词that或which,it多余,故将it删除。题组二Proofreading 1(2019四川成都二诊)Last year, my friend and I went to visit the Yellow Mountain. We carried two backpacks, that turned out to be pretty heavier for the hike. I was not an experiencing hiker and those endless steps make me want to return to the s

20、afe and comfortable ground. But my friend encouraged me great. “Look, the top is coming closer and closer. We are almost there.” I pulled me together and kept going. After three-hour exhausting hike to the top, but with wonderful sceneries on the way, we got to the top finally. For our pleasure, we

21、also found a hotel that looked very much inviting.答案Last year, my friend and I went to visit the Yellow Mountain. We carried two backpacks, thatwhich turned out to be pretty heavierheavy for the hike. I was not an experiencingexperienced hiker and those endless steps makemade me want to return to th

22、e safe and comfortable ground. But my friend encouraged me greatgreatly. “Look, the top is coming closer and closer. We are almost there.” I pulled memyself together and kept going. After three-hour exhausting hike to the top, but with wonderful sceneriesscenery on the way, we got to the top finally

23、.ForTo our pleasure, we also found a hotel that looked very inviting.解析考查定语从句。根据句子结构可知,此处为非限制性定语从句,所修饰的先行词为指物的名词backpacks,所以把that改为which,which在定语从句中作主语。考查形容词。根据语境可知,此处没有比较的意思,所以应用形容词原级。考查形容词。experienced为形容词,表示“有经验的,经验丰富的”。考查动词的时态。根据文中的时间状语“Last year”可知,本文讲述的是过去的事情,所以应用一般过去时。考查副词。一般用副词修饰动词,所以应用副词grea

24、tly修饰动词encouraged。考查代词。根据该句的主语“I”可知,此处应用反身代词myself。I pulled myself together and kept going.意为“我振作起来,继续前进”。考查冠词。hike为可数名词,前面应加不定冠词,又根据three-hour的发音以辅音音素开头,所以应用不定冠词a。考查名词。scenery为不可数名词,没有复数形式。考查介词。此处为固定搭配,to ones pleasure表示“令某人高兴的是”。考查副词。much一般用来修饰比较级,根据该句可知,此处“very”修饰形容词原级“inviting”,所以把much删掉。Proofre

25、ading 2(2019山东济南一模)Dear Mr. Brown,We have learned that you were going back to America for the summer vacation. To express our thank for your excellent teaching in our school, we have decided have a party for you. The party which will start at 6:30 on Friday evening in the lecture hall. It will possi

26、ble last an hour. To start with, our monitor will give a speech on behalf of a whole class. Then we would like to invite you to join us and singing some English songs. In the end of the party, we will present you with some gifts and cards, mostly making by ourselves. I believe you will have a good t

27、ime together.Looking forward to your coming.Yours sincerely,Frank答案Dear Mr. Brown,We have learned that you wereare going back to America for the summer vacation. To express our thankthanks for your excellent teaching in our school, we have decided have a party for you. The party will start at 6:30 o

28、n Friday evening in the lecture hall. It will possiblepossibly last an hour. To start with, our monitor will give a speech on behalf of athe/our whole class. Then we would like to invite you to join us and singingsing some English songs. InAt the end of the party, we will present you with some gifts

29、 and cards, mostly makingmade by ourselves. I believe youwe will have a good time together.Looking forward to your coming.Yours sincerely,Frank解析考查动词的时态。根据语境可知,此处用现在进行时表将来,所以把were改为are。考查名词。thank v.感谢;thanks n.感激;谢意。考查固定搭配。decide to do sth.表示 “决定做某事 ”。考查句子结构。根据句子结构可知,此句为简单句,which多余,所以应删掉。考查副词。根据句子结构

30、可知,此处应用副词possibly修饰动词last。考查限定词。根据语境可知,此处特指整个班级或者我们整个班级,所以把不定冠词a改为定冠词the或者our。考查动词。根据该句中的and可知,此处和前面的join并列,所以应改为动词原形。invite sb. to do sth.表示 “邀请某人做某事”。考查介词。at the end of.表示“在结束时”,in the end 表示“最后”,单独使用,不与介词of连用。考查非谓语动词。根据句子结构可知,make与所修饰名词some gifts and cards为被动关系,所以应用过去分词made作后置定语。考查代词。根据语境以及该句中的 “

31、together ”可知,此处应表示 “我们”,所以将you改为we。Proofreading 3(2019河南郑州第二次质量检测)I used to be a person who hates exercising. But after I started playing baseball,I attracted by the sport. Therefore, I cut down on most of my spare time, like shopping. Though it wasnt the hard process for me, I needed to make more o

32、f an effort than others. I enjoy the feeling of work with my teammates as well as the time we spend it together. There is a proverb that goes, “The process is much beautiful than the outcome.”I am a beginner in this sport. Sometimes people will look down on me, and it doesnt matter. It will only mak

33、e me keep trying. Only with practising over and over again can I catch up with other fantastic player one day. The challenge encourages myself to go on.答案I used to be a person who hateshated exercising. But after I started playing baseball, I ttracted by the sport. Therefore, I cut down on most of m

34、y spare time, like shopping. Though it wasnt thea hard process for me, I needed to make more of an effort than others. I enjoy the feeling of workworking with my teammates as well as the time we spend together. There is a proverb that goes, “The process is muchmore或much后加more beautiful than the outc

35、ome.”I am a beginner in this sport. Sometimes people will look down on me, andbut it doesnt matter. It will only make me keep trying. Only withby practising over and over again can I catch up with other fantastic playerplayers one day. The challenge encourages myselfme to go on.解析考查动词的时态。根据句中的used可知

36、此处应用一般过去时,故将hates改为hated。考查动词的语态。句意:但是在我开始打棒球之后,我就被这项运动吸引了。主句中主语I与attracted之间为被动关系,故在I与attracted之间加was,构成被动语态。考查冠词。句意:虽然它对我来说并不是一个很难的过程,但是我需要比他人付出更多的努力。此处表泛指,不是特指,故将the改为a。考查非谓语动词。错误处work作of的宾语,所以需用动名词作of的宾语。故将work改为working。考查定语从句中代词的多用。we spend it together作定语修饰the time,省略了关系代词which或that,it就是which/t

37、hat作的成分,故将it去掉。考查比较级。此处指过程比结果更美好。此句中有than应考虑使用比较级。故将much改为more或在much后加more。考查连词。句意:有时人们会瞧不起我,但是没关系。前后两个分句构成转折关系。故将and改为but。考查介词。通过某种方式或手段做某事用介词by。故将with改为by。考查名词复数。句意:只有通过反复的练习,有一天我才能赶上其他出色的球员们。此处表复数概念,故应将player改为players。考查代词。句意:这个挑战鼓励我继续坚持下去。题组三Proofreading 1(2019陕西咸阳一模)Cell phones are very conveni

38、ent for students to search for learning information. Beside, they can bring us a lot of funs. However, once addicting to them, we are always wasting time on them where we should study.Last Monday I take my cell phone to school. During a lesson, I was secretly playing with it. Suddenly my teacher was

39、 standing nearby, glared at me. Then, I had to hand it in because it against the school rule. At first I felt very much angry, but later I realized that I was wrong. Thanks for the teacher, I know that the cell phone isnt the necessary part of school life.答案Cell phones are very convenient for studen

40、ts to search for learning information. BesideBesides, they can bring us a lot of funsfun. However, once addictingaddicted to them, we are always wasting time on them wherewhen we should study.Last Monday I taketook my cell phone to school. During a lesson, I was secretly playing with it. Suddenly my

41、 teacher was standing nearby, glaredglaring at me. Then, I had to hand it in because it against the school rule. At first I felt very angry, but later I realized that I was wrong. Thanks forto the teacher, I know that the cell phone isnt thea necessary part of school life.解析考查副词。句意:此外,它们可以给我们带来许多乐趣。

42、beside意为“在旁边”,故将Beside改为Besides。考查名词。fun为不可数名词,没有复数形式。故将funs改为fun。考查非谓语动词。addicted为形容词化的过去分词,意为“沉溺于”,故将addicting改为addicted。考查定语从句。句意:然而,一旦我们对它们上瘾,我们总是把我们应该学习的时间浪费在手机上。句中先行词为time,定语从句中缺少时间状语,故将where改为when。考查动词时态。根据时间状语Last Monday可知本句需用一般过去时,故将take改为took。考查非谓语动词。本句中主语my teacher与glare为逻辑上的主动关系,故用glarin

43、g表主动,作伴随状语。考查谓语动词。本句中because为从属连词,引导原因状语从句,主语为it,其后的against为介词,且主句中用的是一般过去时,故在it与against之间添加was。考查副词。本句中angry为形容词原级,very常修饰原级,而much常修饰比较级。故将much去掉。考查介词。本句中thanks to意为“幸亏;由于”,为固定短语。故将for改为to。考查冠词。句意:多亏了老师,我知道了手机不是学校生活必需的一部分。此处表泛指,故将the改为a。Proofreading 2(2019吉林辽源二模)After school, as usual, I went back

44、home. On the bus, I find a woman with a cute baby standing besides me and having difficulty holding on to the grab pole. In spite my own exhaustion, I rose from my seat and gave them away without hesitation to her and the baby. She thanked me several times sincerely, that made me feel extremely prou

45、d. I was realized my little favor could real make a difference to a person who was badly in need of it. Arrived home, I almost forgot my tiredness. I was lost in happinesses because I did a little for a stranger and gained a lot.答案After school, as usual, I went back home. On the bus, I findfound a w

46、oman with a cute baby standing besidesbeside me and having difficulty holding on to the grab pole. In spite my own exhaustion, I rose from my seat and gave themit away without hesitation to her and the baby. She thanked me several times sincerely, thatwhich made me feel extremely proud. I realized m

47、y little favor could realreally make a difference to a person who was badly in need of it. ArrivedArriving home, I almost forgot my tiredness. I was lost in happinesseshappiness because I did a little for a stranger andbut gained a lot.解析考查动词的时态。本文讲的是“我”在放学回家的路上发生的事情,全文基本时态是一般过去时,故将find改为found。考查介词。

48、“在旁边”应用介词beside,故将besides改为beside。考查固定短语。in spite of为固定短语,意为“虽然;尽管”,后为名词短语作宾语,故在spite后加of。考查代词。此处代词指代上文中的my seat,为单数形式,故将them改为it。考查定语从句。分析句子结构可知,此处为非限制性定语从句,that不能引导非限制性定语从句,且关系代词在定语从句中作主语,故将that改为which。考查动词的语态。句意:我意识到我的小恩惠对一个非常需要它的人来说真的能起到作用。主语I与realize之间为主动关系,因此谓语动词应用主动语态,故将was删除。考查副词。修饰动词make应该用

49、副词形式,故将real改为really。考查非谓语动词。句意:当我到家时,我几乎忘记了我的劳累。用现在分词短语作状语,与I构成主动关系,故将Arrived改为Arriving。考查名词的数。happiness为不可数名词,故将happinesses改为happiness。考查连词。句意:我沉浸于幸福当中,因为我为一个陌生人做了一点事但是得到了很多。此处表转折,故将and改为but。Proofreading 3(2019河北衡水一模)I am an animal lover. A few weeks ago, when I went home from school I saw a dog la

50、in on the roadside. I got closer to see that it was there. I felt shocked when I find it was unable to move. Someone told me that it was hit by the motorcycle. I decided to bring it home and look after it careful. Every day I gave it enough food or water before I went to school. And once I came back

51、 home, I would play it.To its great joy, it is now able to walk with little difficult. My efforts have been paid off.答案I am an animal lover. A few weeks ago, when I went home from school I saw a dog lainlying on the roadside. I got closer to see thatwhy it was there. I felt shocked when I findfound

52、it was unable to move. Someone told me that it was hit by thea motorcycle. I decided to bring it home and look after it carefulcarefully. Every day I gave it enough food orand water before I went to school. And once I came back home, I would play it.To itsmy great joy, it is now able to walk with li

53、ttle difficultdifficulty. My efforts have paid off.解析考查非谓语动词。句意:几周前,当我放学回家的时候,我看到一只狗正躺在路边。 see sb. doing sth.意为“看见某人正在做某事”,此处应用现在分词短语作宾语补足语,故将lain改为lying。考查宾语从句。句意:我走近去看为什么它会在那里。分析句子结构可知,此处引导宾语从句且在从句中作原因状语,应用why引导该从句,故将that改为why。考查动词的时态。句意:当我发现它不能移动时,我感到很震惊。此处叙述的是发生在过去的事情,故when引导的时间状语从句应用一般过去时,故将fin

54、d改为 found。考查冠词。句意:有人告诉我它被一辆摩托车撞了。此处泛指一辆摩托车,且 motorcycle是以辅音音素开头的单词,应用不定冠词a,故将the改为a。考查副词。句意:我决定把它带回家并仔细地照顾它。此处修饰动词短语look after,应用副词,故将 careful改为 carefully。考查连词。句意:每天我上学前都给它足够的食物和水。根据句意可知,此处food和 water为并列关系,并非选择关系,应用并列连词and,故将or改为and。考查固定搭配。 play with.为固定搭配,意为“与玩”,故在play后加with。考查代词。句意:令我高兴的是,它现在可以毫不费

55、力地走路了。结合句意可知,此处指“令我高兴的是”。故将its改为my。考查名词。句意见上题。此处作介词with的宾语,且其前有little修饰,应用名词,with little difficulty意为“毫不费力地”,故将 difficult改为difficulty。考查动词的语态。句意:我的努力得到了回报。pay off意为“取得成功;奏效”,为不及物动词短语,无被动语态,故删除been。题组四Proofreading 1(2019湖南益阳4月模拟)This morning, I found it was snowing heavily. Attracted by the beautiful

56、 sight, I decided to go out to take some photo. The snow finally stopped at noon, and I couldnt wait go outside with my camera. As I walked on the path in the front of our building, I saw a boy suddenly slip in the snow-covered ground. It was at that moment when I realized what I should do. Immediat

57、ely, I returned home to get a broom but started to sweep the path. I worked so hardly that I sweated a lot. An hour late, the thick snow was cleared away. Looked at the clean path, my neighbors all smiled and gave me thumbs up. I felt very happy that I have done something for my neighborhood.答案This morning, I found it was snowing heavily. Attracted by the beautiful sight, I decided to go out to take some photophotos. The snow finally stopped at noon, and I couldnt wait go outside with m