河南省郑州市2014高考英语一轮 短文改错、书面表达训练（13）

1、郑州市 2014高考英语短文改错、书面表达一轮训练（13）附参考范文Passage *Fred and I havent many in common. I sometimes 1. _wonder why we were friends at all. Fred is 2. _always busy make things. Everything he makes is3. _so perfect that I sometime feel envy at his skill.4. _My trouble is that Im one of those lazy people. 5. _Out

2、side my work at the office, the only thing which 6. _interests me is listening to the music. I have a 7. _big collection of records but all day long the 8. _only thing I can think is when Im going to9. _get home listen to a new piece.10. _【参考答案】Key 12 1) many-much 2) were-are 3) make - making 4) som

3、etime-sometimes 5) right6) which that 7)去掉 the 8) but - and 9) think 后加about10) listen 前加to *结束*结束高考英语书面表达讲义：表格作文(2)(25 min.)假定你在参加一场英语辩论赛。你是正方辩手，试用英语简要地表明自己的观点。词数：不少于120。主题Shall a senior student take a part­time job in holidays？观点 1. 高中生重视功课，而对社会知道甚少。2. 假期做兼职是很好的社会实践。3. 通过书本学到的东西不如通过实践学到的东西有效。

4、4. 通过社会实践，我们可以在知识和能力两个方面取得进步。5. 假期做兼职的报酬或多或少对家里有些帮助。结论高中生_【参考范文】One possible version：Dear friends, Here are my points. We students of today have to pay much attention to our lessons and know little of society though it's not our fault. A holiday is the best time to make up for that. Taking a par

5、t­time job is a good form of social practice. What is learned in books can't have the same deep effect on us as what is learned through experience. In social practice, we can surely make progress in both knowledge and ability. Besides, taking a part­time job, we may get paid more or le

6、ss to help our family. Thus, I will say a senior school student should take a part­time job in holidays, if possible, of course.*结束短文改错 (2010*保定调研)Last Sunday I went to the Bird's Nest Stadium. At gate1._I happened to meet some young America tourists.I greeted2._to them in English and then

7、we began to chat. From the chat3._I learned that they were college students traveling in Beijing4._but most of them were fond of Chinese culture. They were5._busy taking pictures and they seem to be much impressed by6._the changes which had been taken place in the past few years.7._After come out of

8、 the Stadium, we went to the Water Cubic(水立方)8._and had a good time there. We exchanged our email address so that9._we could write to each other later. They thanked us again and again.10._I was very glad to have the chance to practise my oral English.答案与解析：1gate前加the此处表示特指，指的是鸟巢体育馆的大门。2AmericaAmeric

9、an应该用形容词来修饰名词。3去掉第一个togreet是及物动词，可直接加宾语，不必加to。45butand来北京和喜欢中国文化为并列关系而非转折，应用and表示并列。6seemseemed根据事情发生的时间last Sunday和全文的时态可知，此处也应用一般过去时。7去掉beentake place无被动语态。8comecoming介词after后要用动名词形式。9addressaddresses交换的是双方的邮箱地址，故此处应用复数形式。10usme是“我”帮助了他们，因此用me。*结束假设你将要参加学校举办的英语作文比赛，请你根据右图，写一篇120词左右的英语作文。内容包括：1描述图画

10、的主要内容；2分析出现这种现象的原因；3谈谈我们应该如何保护地球，拯救野生动物。参考词汇：北极熊polar bear；企鹅penguin_参考范文：From the picture we can see a polar bear sitting on a small piece of ice with a penguin on its head.It shows that our environment is worsening day by day and some wild animals are in great danger.In recent years，with the devel

11、opment of science and technology，the Earth is faced with a variety of environmental problems，including global warming.As a result，many animals have lost their natural habitat.I think it is time that we took effective measures to protect the environment.We should avoid using fossil fuel to reduce gre

12、en house gas，and we can plant more trees to take in carbon dioxide.*结束【2】Its easy to see how the sawfish got its nameThese frightful creatures can grow to be more than 6 meters longTheir bodies are flat and winged，like underwater airplanesAnd their noses are shaped like chainsaws Sawfish are food hu

13、nters of the seaWhen a sawfish is hungry，it waves its sharp­toothed snout (口鼻部) through a group of fishThen，it lifts its nose and uses its mouth to draw the injured victimsHardy (适应力强的)population of sawfish thrived in warm waters along coastlines around the world for thousands of yearsOver the

14、past 200 years，however，human actions have severely endangered sawfishThreats include fishing nets that trap the huge animals，often by mistakeSome people collect sawfishs snouts as prizes：One snout recently sold for nearly $ 1,600 onlineIn some Asian cultures，the toothy snouts are used in ceremonies

15、to drive evil and disease awayAnd sawfish are also deliciousA growing demand in Asia for the fishs fins for a pricey soup has contributed to the fishs lovesCompared with other fish，sawfish give birth late in life and at slow rates，which makes it hard for them to recover from overfishingNew efforts n

16、ow aim to restore sawfish populationBeginning next month，an international agreement will provide protection for all seven of the worlds sawfish speciesScientists are hoping that its not too late to save the sawfishUntil 1998，“this fish had never been formally studied in the United States，”says Tonya

17、 Wiley of the Mote Marine Laboratory in Sarasota，Fla“We didnt know such basic things as where they live，what habitat they use，how often they breed，how many young they haveeven what age sawfish are when they begin breeding”Through historical studies and field research，scientists have become aware of

18、how much the fishs numbers have decreasedToday，there may be 90 percent fewer sawfish than there used to beWiley estimates that only 3,000 to 6,000 sawfish remain in US watersSawfish1 Size2 3 Body：Flat and wingedNose：Like a chainsawWays to hunt for foodAttacking fish with 4 Drawing the injured victim

19、s with its mouth5. sawfishs disappearance6 Sawfishs snouts relates businessAsians interest in eating fishIts 7 and slowly which makes it hard to recover from overfishing8 Only 10% sawfish left3,000 to 6,000 remain in US watersEfforts9 MeasureTo restore sawfish population10 to all seven of the worlds

20、 sawfish species【参考范文】1Descriptions/Features/Characteristics2Shape/Appearance3Over 6­meter long4its sharp­toothed snout5Factors/Reasons for/Causes of6Peoples fish­catching activities7giving birth/breeding late 8Present/Todays situation9Aim/Goal/Purpose10Offering protection*结束 下列图描述的是M

21、rand Mrs white购物后，到停车场取车时发生了一场误会。请用英语将下列图示叙述清楚。短文必须包括图画的主要内容，可以适当增减细节，使其连贯完整。 词数80100。 参考范文After shopping, Mr. and Mrs. White went back to the car park. Mr. White carried a lot of packets in his arms. And just as his hands were full, Mrs. White asked him where he put his key to the car. He told her

22、that it was in his pocket. But she was unable to find the key in his right pocket. Mr. White told her it was in his left pocket and she got it. But when she was unlocking the door, the key just didn't fit in it. Mr. White was wondering what had gone wrong, when the owner of the car came up, aski

23、ng angrily, "What are you doing to my car?" It was then that they realized it was a wrong car that was exactly like theirs. Mr. White answered, "We are very sorry, we've made a mistake."*.(典型题)*结束（201*·重庆卷） 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1份，满分10分）以下标有题号的每一行均有一个错误，请找出，并按下列情况改正：此行多一个词：把多余的

24、词用斜线（）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。注意：请在答题卡上作答。Today is Sunday .Ive been in Canada for two months .This is the first time that Ive been away my family for such a 76. long time. With the help of Katia, a roommate of me, Ive 77. soon got

25、used to live without my parents around. Katia,like 78. many other Russian girls, are nice and lively. We became 79. friends shortly after we meet each other. Although her English 80. is a little hardly to understand, we enjoy chatting and we 81. usually talk a lot about our own family. Were both surprised 82. that Chinese culture or Russian culture are so different. Now, 83. we are planning a small party for the next Sunday.There ,Katia 84. will introduce me to some of her friends,