失败与成功英语作文4篇

1、失败与成功英语作文 4 篇走出中国式英语作文三大误区“为什么我的词汇量如此丰富却仍然写不出能让阅卷老师满意的作文？”相信不少同学都曾有过这样的疑问。对此，英语老师相楠分析指出， 词汇量的多寡往往并不是一篇英语作文质量好或者坏的关键。许多同学即便很努力地去准备作文， 但最终分数仍然不理想， 这很可能是因为他们陷入了某种写作的误区。 相楠老师特为我们列举了比较常见的三种英语写作误区，希望能帮广大学生“对号入座”，并施以针对性的改进。误区一：用中文思维串联英文词汇一些同学在绞尽脑汁也写不出英语作文的情况下，会先按照题目写一个中文稿出来， 然后再借助电子辞典翻译出一篇所谓的英语作文。还有一些同学习惯性

2、地用中文的表达方式来写英语作文。 这就造成了所谓的中国式英语作文。 在这样的作文里， 我们常常读到以下这类用中文的语法和英语单词拼凑出来的句子：“ When Iwas a child,myparentsvery loveme。 ” （ 正确的表达： WhenI wasa child, myparents loved me very much 。 ） “The supermarket s in front of is a guesthouse 。”（ 正确的表达： There is a guesthouse in front ofthe supermarket 。 ） 。解决之道：强化语法要想流

3、利的掌握一门外语，你需要能够使用该语言思考，而不用在头脑里来回翻译。 而将中文式思维转变为英语思维的最根本的途径之一就是强化语法知识。很多同学的词汇量很丰富，但是对于怎么用,什么时候用却并不明白。而这些恰恰是语法知识所能告诉我们的。 哪 些词要用在句中，哪些词应该用在句尾，语法里都有相应的规定。一 旦用错了位置就会写成英国人看不懂的英语作文。另外，对于词汇所存在的不同的形态也应该注意。误区二：过分“精雕细琢”而忽视了 “大局”不少同学在写英语作文时，将过多的注意力放在“优美的文笔” 上面。因此，他们不停地用电子辞典搜集华丽的词藻，并运用难度颇 高的句式，以期能让自己的作文“技高一筹”。但事实上

4、，多数情况 下会弄巧成拙。太生僻的单词同学们运用起来并不能得心应手， 而且 使用太复杂的句型也常常会出错。还有一些同学为了使句式错落有致 而将句子随意断开，或者是在句中插入一些短语，如果运用不当会有 哗众取宠之嫌，反而会使作文质量下降。解决之道：用平常心表达平常事写作要求学生能够综合运用逻辑、词汇和语法等多种知识和技能来完成一个写作任务，但并不苛求学生去做标新立异的创作。 因此同 学们无需力求完美地到电子辞典里去找生僻的词汇， 也不需要写得多 么高深莫测，而是应该抱着平常的心态去描述自己看到的东西， 表达 自己想到的内容，将学过的词从记忆深处调动出来， 复习语法课上学 到的知识。同时，考生应注

5、意用一些能反映自己观点的词，从而增加文章的 韵味。很多情况下，用这样的心态写出来的东西内容虽简单但不乏生 活气息，语言虽稚嫩，但却准确易懂。误区三：文章冗长细枝末节过多不少学生在写作中的一大担心就是文章的长度不够，再加上对于 “可适当增减细节，不可字对字的翻译”的误解，于是便充分发挥想象能力，加入了很多离题较远的细枝末节。 这样的文章写出来更像是 一篇“大杂炒”，从中找不到任何主题。还有一些作文，句子和句子 之间的连贯性不强，逻辑思维混乱，读起来让人摸不到头脑。解决之道：理清思路，言之有物英语老师认为，很多人之所以写不够题目要求的作文字数，其中 一个重要原因就是对于题目本身没有理解透彻。 建议

6、同学们不要急于 下笔，而是先考虑清楚自己要说几点内容， 这些内容之间的逻辑关系 是怎样的。作文开头不要写得太罗嗦，要找着恰当的切入点，快速入题，简 洁明快，结尾同样不要拖泥带水。建议大家多使用一些关联词。有了 这些词的连接，就会使文章变得语句通顺，层次清楚。另外，考生不 用过度迷信一些使用难度较高的复合句， 只要关联词搭配合理，短小 的句型、简单的短语同样也能使文章出彩。英语作文典型写作错误学生在英语写作中常常出现很多错误。下面我们对一些常见的错误进行了归纳， 并对一些典型的病句实例逐一加以分析， 希望能对大家有所帮助。一、“汉语式”英语例： His father s body is stro

7、ng. 他父亲身体很好。析： 汉语说 “某人的身体强弱” 时， 在英语中不必加 body 。 因此，在书面表达中要注意英语的习惯用法，否则容易杜撰出“汉语式”英语，使人难以看懂。同时不能先想汉语意思，然后再直译成英语，而要擅于直接用英语思考。正： His father is strong.二、难词解释例： the time fell sleeping 就寝时间析：同学们遇到要表达的术语有难词时，想不到用合适的单词来表达，于是就闹出了这样的笑话。因此，在平时学习中学生们就要知难而进，想方设法记忆必要的单词，同时增强解释的能力，只有这样才能提高英语书面表达能力。正： the sleeping ti

8、me三、单词堆砌例： Our go to school time is 8： 00. 上学时间是8 ： 00。析：同学们在书面表达中应尽量使用自己熟悉且有把握的习惯用语， 不能凭着自己的中文习惯主观臆造句子，否则不可能做到“语言准确，得当”。正： We go to school at eight.四、时态的误用她很例： She like it very much and reads it to the class.喜欢它并且读给同学们听。析： 在书面表达中， 应根据上下文或时间状语来确定动词的时态。正： She liked it very much and read it to the cla

9、ss.五、用词错误例： He gave me a very good advice yesterday. 昨天他给我一个非常好的建议。析： advice 表示“建议”时，是不可数名词，不能用不定冠词来修饰，而应用 a piece of 。正： He gave me a piece of very good advice yesterday.六、一致性错误所谓不一致不仅指主谓不一致，它还包括数的不一致、时态不一致以及代词不一致等。例 1： Once one have money ， he can do what he want to do.人一旦有了钱，他就能想干什么就干什么。析： one 是第

10、三人称单数， 因此本句的 have 应改为 has 。 同理， want 应改为 wants 。正： Once one has money ， he can do what he wants to do.例 2： Water will boil at 100. 水在100沸腾。析：表示客观真理的句子，其谓语动词应用一般现在时。正： Water boils at 100 .七、修饰语错位英语与汉语不同，同一个修饰语置于句子中不同的位置，句子的 含义就有可能发生变化。例： I can dance. I too can sing. 我会跳舞，也会唱歌。析： too 一般位于句尾，不能用于句首。正：

11、I can dance. I can sing too. 或 I can dance and sing too.八、结构不完整在口语中，交际可借助手势、语气、上下文等来理解结构不完整的句子。可是书面语就不同了，句子结构不完整会令句意表达不清。这种情况常常发生在主句写完以后，作者又想加些补充说明的时候。例： There are many ways to know the society. For example ，by TV radio ， newspaper and so on. 有许多方式来了解这个社会，例如通过电视、广播、报纸等等。析： 本句后半部分For example， by TV，

12、radio ， newspaper andso on 不是一个完整的句子，仅仅是一些不连贯的词语，不能独立成句。正： There are manyways to know the society ， for example，by TV ， radio ， and newspaper and so on.九、悬垂修饰语所谓悬垂修饰语是指句首的短语与后面句子逻辑关系混乱不清。例： At the age of ten ， my grandfather died. 在我 10 岁时，我祖父去世了。析： at the age of ten 只指出 10 岁时祖父去世了，但没有说明是“谁” 10 岁时。按

13、一般的推理不可能是my grandfather 。正： When I was at the age of ten ， my grandfather died.十、词性误用“词性误用”常表现为：介词当动词用，形容词当副词用，名词当动词用等。例 1： Few people can around the world. 很少人能周游世界。析： around 是副词，这里误当动词用。正： Few people can travel around the world.例 2： The place is danger. 这个地方危险。析： danger 是名词，这里误用为形容词。正： The place i

14、s dangerous. 或 The place is in danger.十一、指代不清指代不清主要指代词与被指代的人或物关系不清，或者先后所用的代词不一致。例 1： Mary was friendly to my sister because she wanted herto be her bridesmaid. 玛丽和我姐姐很要好，因为她要她做她的伴娘。析：此句让读者无法判断两位姑娘中谁将结婚，谁将当伴娘。正： Mary was friendly to my sister because she wanted my sister to be her bridesmaid.boys and

15、 girls. 孩子例 2： Help yourself to some drink们，随便喝些饮料吧。析：句中的 boys and girls 和反身代词 yourself 指代不一致。正： Help yourselves to some drink ， boys and girls.十二、间断句子我们不能把两个或两个以上的句子简单地连结起来，应注意连结时应加上适当的词。例： There are many ways we get to know the outside world.我们有许多方式来认识外面的世界。析： 这个句子包含了两层意思： There are manyways 以及 we

16、 getto know the outside world ，简单地把它们连在一起就不妥当了。正： There are many ways for us to get to know the outsideworld. 十三、累赘语言以简洁为贵。能用单词的不用词组；能用词组的不用从句或句子。例： Except the fact that he is lazy ， I like him. 除了他很懒外，我喜欢他。析：本句中的 the fact that he is lazy 是同位语从句，我们按照上述“能用词组的不用从句”的原则可以将其改写为：正： Except his laziness ， I

17、 like him.十四、不连贯不连贯是指一个句子前言不对后语，或是结构上不畅通。例： The fresh waterit is the most important things of theearth.淡水是世界上最重要的东西。析：The fresh water 与逗号后面的 it 不连贯，同时it 与things 在数方面不一致。正： The fresh water is the most important thing in the world. 十五、综合性语言错误所谓“综合性语言错误”，是指除了上述十几种错误之外，还有诸如时态、语态、标点符号、大小写等方面的错误。xx 年大纲要求考

18、生应能写不同类型的应用文，包括私人和公务信函、备忘录、摘要、报告等，以及一般描述性、叙述性、说明性或议论性的文章。写作时，考生应能： 1)做到语法、拼写、标点正确，用词恰当； 2) 遵循文章的特定文体格式； 3) 合理组织文章结构，使其内容统一、连贯； 4) 根据写作目的和特定读者，恰当选用语域。考生应能掌握的语言技能包括听，说，读，写四种能力。考研大作文(20 分 ) 的要求是很好地完成了试题规定的任务：包含所有内容要点；使用丰富的语法结构和词汇；语言自然流畅，语法错误极少；有效地采用了多种衔接手段，文字连贯，层次清晰。平时练习主要注意两个方面：首先，语言是第一要素；其次，结构层次要清晰。在

19、语言方面，应把语言错误降低到最低限度。语言错误大致在如下几个方面：第一，主谓一致；第二，时态；第三，冠词的用法；第四，名词的单复数；第五，搭配问题；第六，单词的拼写。检查的时候， 一般不要作内容上的修改。 阅卷者根本不会意识到所加的话有多么重要，文章多一句话少一句话是不会改变阅卷者印象的。应用文写作能力的提高不可能一蹴而就，必须经过长期的实践锻炼。重点要注意语域和格式两个问题。在复习阶段，应用文的写作，尤其是书信的写作要注意内容的格式安排， 首先要熟悉不同类型的应用文写作格式， 注意事项， 写作特点等。 其次要背诵大量的优秀范文。再次，是要多动手写作，要写出属于自己的文章。第一篇： I Eat

20、 WellFor many years,I have formed a good habit which helped megrow perfect.every morning,Idrink a bottle of milk and eatsielices of bread.At noon,my mother who is talented often show memanydishes.I just can stop myslaver.In the evening,I enjoy kings of fruit and vegetables.Above all ,I never show in

21、terest in junkfood .As a result ,i have strong musces!第二篇： I Eat WellI eat well every day .I like many different kinds offood,they are delicious , eggs is my favorite kind. Egg iscontains a lot of essential nutrients needed by the humanbody, and it's monly found in almost any part of the world.F

22、or breakfast ,I like to eat some fruit,such as apples , bananas, pears.Of cours,I also eat some milk,because milk is good for my health.I like eating some vegetables ,tomatoes and litte rice at noon.I like rice.I usually eat rice ,fish,potatoes and chick for dinner. Ithink chicken is delicious.I som

23、etimes eat noodles at nine thirty,if I hungry.in a word ,i eat well,i like the food i eat every day.第一篇： My Best FriendHello, everyone! My name is Xing Xiaoqing. You can call me Cherry.I min Class 0506. Li Nanis mybest friend.She s thirteenyears old. Her birthday is on 3rd October and she was born i

24、n Shen Zhen. She lives with her family in Haimen. She s 1.60 metres tall. She has black hair and she wears glasses. She is very lovely and pretty.She likes eating dumplings, chocolates, peanuts and vegetables. She dislikes pork, sweets and green tea.She loves listening to music. She has lots of CDs.

25、 She likes reading and writing. Sheis the newest memberof the Maths Club. She has manyhobbies, such as dancing, running and playing puter games. Her favorite hobby is drawing, because she likes all the different colors. It is fun to look at the pictures when she finishes drawing them. The Dragon Boa

26、t Festival is her favorite day. She wants to be a doctor when she grows up.We always have fun. We sit under the trees at lunchtime and have a good chat. Sometimes, we buy snacks from the tuck shop. On Sunday, we usually go to the bookshop. We often study together.My best friend is really great!第二篇 英

27、语作文 my best friendMy best friend is Mary. She lives in a tall building. She lives on the fifth floor. Everyday she takes the lift up and down. She is twelve years old. She is tall and thin. She has short black hair, two big eyes and a small mouth. She is very cute. I like playing with her. Weare in

28、the sameclass. I like to read books but she likes playing games. She likes to eat popcorn and ice creams. I like them, too. Her favourite food is fish, so she is clever. She loves her cat. She often plays with her. The cat likes Mary, too. They are cute.Do you have a best friend? Can you tell me som

29、ething about your friend?第三篇： My best friendLiu Cong is one of my best friends.This year ,Liu Cong is sixteen years old.He is not very tall,and dressed in a simple.He studied very hard,and he always finish the homework ontime.English is one of his favorite subjects.Last year,he took part in the scho

30、ol's English speech and won the Rank second. He is an honest and modest, and helpful boy,he often helps mewith my English.He likes music and doing sports.This is my good friend.Do you think about him?第四篇： My best friendI have a good friend.His name is LiuCong.He is 16 yearsold.He is not tall.But

31、 he is very healthy.He tries his best onhis studies.His favorite subject is English.He often helps mewith my English.He likes music best.His hobby is doing sports.This is myfriend.Do you like him?I believe I can get on wellwith him. 第五篇： My best friendHello, everyone. My name is maggie. I am twelve

32、years old.This is my best friend, her name is Cindy. She is twelveyears old too. She most like subject is music, because music, she felt very interesting. She most loves food is ice cream.She most likes swimming. She is in No1 . Middle school, GrandOne, Class Three. I ' m in hers class, so, we a

33、re classmates.She and I together every day, others will think we are twins!第一篇： My WeekendIt is weekend. I am excited, It s not because of weekendbut “ The Smurfs ” , a 3D moviepublished by Sony Pictures Releasing (Argentina). After I have my lunch, I go to the Red Starcinema with my several friends

34、 early. It s hot outside,evrybody thinks it s nothing. Time goes fast! On the way home, all of us fall in love with those lovely smurfs. What a nice movie !第二篇： My weekendThis is my weekend.It's so fun.In Saturday , I often playputer games and go to the park .Sometimes I do homeweek ,it's ti

35、red.In Sunday ,I usually go fishing .I'm very happy.第三篇：My Weeken俄的周末I had a great weekendlast sunday. I, together with myfamily, went to Mount Tai. Weenjoyed ourselves there very much. In the afternoon when we came home, I watched tv show, super girls.In the evening, I studied my Chinese for th

36、e next day's class.What a wonderful weekend!上周日我有一个愉快的周末。我和我的家人一起去了泰山。我们在泰山玩得很开心。下午回家后我看电视节目：超级女声。晚上我学习语文，因为第二天是语文课。多么美好的周末啊！ 第四篇： MyWeekendI think everyone will have a busy and interesting weekend.Now, let me introduce my busy weekend to you.On Saturday morning, I amgoing to the bookstore. I mg

37、oing to buy some story-books and a Chinese-English andEnglish-Chinese dictionary. I like reading story-books. I find them very interesting. Then I am going home. My home is near the bookstore. So I am going by bike. I like riding my bike.In the evening, I am going to play piano. Playing piano is my

38、hobby.On Sunday morning, I am going to do my homework. Now I am in Grade Six. I want to enter a good middle school next year.So I must study hard. In the afternoon, I amgoing shopping with my parents and my little brother. My mom says she is going to buy a pair of sneakers for me. I love going shopp

39、ing. I think all of the girls like going shopping. Am I right.On Sunday evening, I amgoing back to school by school bus.I love my weekend, how about you? Tell mesomething about your weekend.第五篇： My WeekendHappy weekend is ing,I will make some plans.快乐的周末就要来了，我做了一些计划。I have somethings to do at he wee

40、kend.Firstly,I will do my homework.Beacause I will really play happy when I finish the homework.Then I will play with my best friends.For example,wemay surfing the Inter, play at the park or just go shopping in the market.Lastly,I will prepare for the next week.我在这个周末有许多是要做。首先， 我要完成我的家庭作业。因为只有完成了作业我

41、才能玩的开心。然后我会和我的好朋友去玩。例如，我们可以上网，再公园玩游戏，或者在商场里购物。最后，我要为下周做一些准备工作。I believe I will be happy at my weekend.我相信我将度过一个快乐的周末。第六篇： My Weekendhello! I am a Chinese boy! I often do my homework at home on weekends. When I felt tired, I can watch TV for a moment , sometimes I also can play puter games . Feeling

42、bored, I will find partners to play together . On weekends , I often get up at 8 o'clock , have lunch at 11:00, have dinner at 5:00 pm , and then go to bed at 9:00 pm .This is my weekends , what about you ?第七篇： My WeekendI didn't enjoy my last weekend.I went shopping with my friends, and we

43、had lunch, and then we played tennis. Most of us wanted to go home, but somedidn't. So we went shopping again for them. After that, I went home, I was very tired , I did my homeworkthough i wanted to sleep. WhenI went to sleep, it was too late. So I didn't get up early for school. I had a ba

44、d and busy weekend.第八篇： My WeekendOn Saturday morning,I'm going to get up early.And I'm going to eat breakfast.I'm going to do my homework.I'm going to have lunch in the noon.Then,I'm going to park with my friends.I'm going to have dinner with my parents. I have a busy weeken

45、d第九篇： My WeekendI had a sad weekend last week. I wanted to sing songs with my sister but she was very busy. Then I wanted to swim with my friends, when we got to the swimming pool, it was closed. We had to go to a very small swimming pool and put ourselves in the dirty and dark water. Then in the af

46、ternoon, when we walked out of the swimming pool, we found all our money was gone. We didn't have moneyto go homeby bus, we had to walked back home for 10 miles. At last when i arrived at home, i found my key was at home and i had to sit outside my home the whole night.I hope next weekend, i can

47、 do better.介绍朋友在学校的一天第一篇： My friend dayI have a friend. She name is Anna. She had a busy day.she got up is on 6:00. Then she had a shower and had a quick beakfest.Next she took the subway to go to school. At school she was 6:50.In the afternooon, she had lunch. After that, she had threelessons in th

48、is afternoon. After school, it's 4:30. she wentto homeis on 5:00. At home, she had to do her homework. At 9:00, she went to bed .第二篇： -/rm I have a good friend, mike. He often gets up at 6:30, hebrushes his teeth at 6:45, he eats breakfast at 6:50. And hegoes to school at 7:00.In the evening, sh

49、e does his homework.He goes to bed at 9:30.篇一：面试技巧英语作文job interview skills图片已关闭显示，点此查看first, although in a short time we cannot judge a person by his appearance, the first impression, is always our start.secondly, good manners are equally important. in the interviewis neither too proud, too timid. j

50、ust a ceremony. in third, respondents must prove his ability and skills, employment andknowledge related to the work relevant to the field, he must clearly express their confidence. last but not the least, the respondents should be honest with his or her personal and academic background, honesty is

51、the best policy. in short, the interview is really important. there is no need too nervous,however, if the interviewer has made full preparations, itgives a fairly confident and honest performance, suess is half that of.求职面试技巧如今，在越来越严格的就业市场，具有重要意义已受到重视，可以这么说，已经成为不可或缺的获取一个满意的工作。首先，虽然我们在短时间内不能判断一个人，由他

52、的外貌，第一印象始终是我们的开始。其次，良好的礼貌是同样重要的。在面试时既不过于骄傲，也太胆怯。只是有礼。第三，受访者必须证明他的能力和技能， 为就业和知识有关的工作有关的领域， 他必须清楚地表达自己满怀信心。 最后但并非最不重要的， 受访者应以诚实的他或她个人以及学术背景，诚实是最好的政策。总之，面试的确是重要的。有没有必要过于紧张，不过，如果面试者已作出了充分的准备，它并赋予一个相当有信心及诚实的表现，成功是有一半保证的。篇二：英文面试技巧和范文临场发挥英语面试范文：【英语面试常用句型】：（ 1） 开场白1. let me introduce myself. / let me do som

53、e introduction.让我来介绍一下自己。2. which aspect do you want to know about me? 您想知道我哪方面的情况？3. what do you want to know about myself? 您想知道我哪方面的情况？4. good morning/afternoon/evening, my name is ? . it isreally a great honor to have this opportunity/chance tointroduce myself. i would like to answer whatever you

54、 mayraise,and i hope i can make a good performance today.上午好 / 下午好 / 晚上好！我的名字叫?。今天有机会进行自我介绍深感荣幸。 我乐意回答你们所提出来的任何问题。 我希望我今天能表现的非常出色。（ 2） 关于职位、工作1. i noticed that you advertised a job in this morning spaper. 我看到你们在今早的报纸上刊登的招聘广告。3. i have applied for the position of ?. 我申请了贵公司的 ? 职位。4. i haven t done an

55、ything like that before.我以前没有做过这种工作。5. i think i m quite fit for assistant s job. 我觉得我 很适合做助理的工作。s manager. 我以前做销售经理。6. i used to work as a sale我做过很多工作。我想找个每年我打算到学校找份7. i m quite familiar with editing.8. i want a job with a vacation every year.都能度假的工作。9. i was thinking of a job in a school.工作。10. i

56、worked in the aounting section of a manufacturer ofelectrical products. 我曾在电子产品制造商的会计组工作。12. i have been in the business for the last ten years, andworked as the superintendent in the personnel department.本人在过去十年在商界担任人事部主任迄今。14. for the past three years, i have been in the office ofthe brothers trad

57、ing co., where i have been ad still am anaountant. 本人曾经在兄弟贸易公司服务三年， 担任会计工作， 现仍 在职中。15. i amtwenty years of age, and have been employed for the last two years by the green trees co., in teh general clerical work of the office. 我今年 20岁，曾于绿林公司服务两年，担任一般文员工作。16. i am25 years of age, and have had two years experiencein my present post, which i am leaving to better myself.我 今年 25 岁，已在目前的职位工作两年，兹为寻找更上一层楼，准备离开此职位。17. i am nieen years of age, female and have had two18. i amjust leaving school, and am eighteen years of