高考英语二轮复习读后续写深度解读(十)

1、2021届高考英语二轮复习读后续写深度解读（十）2021高考英语读后续写深度解读（十）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Washington is hometo lots of trees it is the Evergreen State , after all-and lots of fireplaces and wood burning stoves too 。 With these, you can keep yourself from the freezing cold weather.But what if yo u lived there and cou

2、ldn ' t chop （砍）wood or couldn't afford to pay someone to doLuckily, Shane McDaniel and his twin sonsit ?then donate it to those people who need it.Harrison and Henry McDaniel , 21, are happy tolend an ax 。 The three men chop truckloads of wood“I want people who are burning cardboard because

3、 they've got nothing,“ Shane explained tothepress 。”Or someone with no money who has a broken shoulder and cant cut wood."The idea started as a father-son bonding project, he told the press.“I had to cut wood withmy dad。 He just loved doing it,says Shane, 48, a divorced father of six。 He wa

4、nted to passalong that feeling , so he and the twins spent the whole summer of 2018chopping wood. The resultwas a great wall of wood piled up around their house in Lake Stevens , 35 miles outside of Seattle 。Technically , it was 40 cords a cord measures four feet high, four feet wide,and eight feetd

5、eep. To buy that much would cost about$ 10,000 。It was too much for the McDaniels to use themselves. Whenthe weather turned colder and colderthat November, Shane started thinking of others 。 He wanted to keep as many people warmas possible 。So he posted on the Internet“IF YOU ARE IN NEED OF FIREWOOD

6、 AND CANNOT AFFORD IT, PLEASE PMpersonal message ME!。 If you know someonewho BURNSWOQD and they ' re looking at a cold housethis holiday season , please help us help them. Please help me and my boys make sure NO ONE GOESCOLD IN OUR HOOD”续写要求：1.所续写短文词数应为 150左右;2.至少使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段，每

7、段的开头语已为你写好;4。续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1:The response was immediateParagraph 2 ：However, not every receiver was as grateful.【思路点拨】1. 文本细解读, 确定续写结局本文是一篇记叙文，讲述了 Shane McDaniel 和他的双胞胎儿子乐于砍柴无偿奉献给社区居民过冬御寒的故事。 Shane McDaniel 父子利用 2018 年夏天砍了价值一万美元的木柴，到了十一月，天气越来越冷，他们自己御寒用不了这么多木柴， Shane McDaniel 就想到无偿

8、捐赠给那些需要的人们，并在互联网上发起倡议，让爱心人士都能帮忙援助。续写部分是倡议后的反响， 根据常识以及续写部分的段首句可知， 不同的人群看待这件事的观点也不相 同.2. 段首句解读，确定续写方向续写第一段首句写道“很快有了反响” ，第二段首句写道“然而，并不是所有受赠者心怀感激” . 由此可知 , 第一段应该着重讲述那些感恩的受赠者和称赞这种行为的人们， 可以适当发挥想象， 进行举例阐述 . 第二 段开头的 However 笔锋一转，讲述一些不懂感恩的受赠者，但是基于文章的故事情节可知，要体现ShaneMcDaniel 乐于奉献的高尚品格 , 就要写明负面舆论没有影响到他的乐善好施。3.

9、划线词解读，规划续写细节1）分类划线词人物 - Shane McDaniel, others事物 - wood burning stoves, wood动作 - donate, help, need感觉 cold时间 holiday媒介-Internet2）构思具体细节第一段情节：很快有了反响有人愿意捐献（donate）熔炉（a wood-burning stoves）（取暖用具，前文有 画线）-有人愿意捐献木柴（wood）-有人节假日（holiday）前受赠得益（可以展开想象，举例说明）-不少 人对此赞叹褒奖（承接下文） 。第二段情节：然而有些受赠者并不感恩一不感恩的心理（他们憎恨世界不公平

10、、受赠是无可奈何等）一写明主人公（Shane McDaniel ）对此的态度，进一步体现主人公乐善好施（ help）、施恩不图报的高尚品格。【范文欣赏】Paragraph 1:The response was immediate. One man offered to donate a wood-burning stove. Others raced over to contribute more wood for the pile 。 A single mom and her four-year old daughter , who relied on a wood-burning stov

11、e as their only source of heat, couldn ' t be more thankful to receive atruckload of firewood from the McDaniels before the holidays. They were moved to tears, saying that to get that much wood was a relief and so much stress and anxiety was off their shoulders。Even people who didn't need th

12、e wood appreciated the action。Paragraph 2 :However; not every receiver was as grateful. Some weren ' t even friendly 。 They were mad at the world and mad that they had to ask for help 。 They just had no other option than freezing。But Shane McDaniel was OK with that. "I am just doing what I

13、think is worth doing。 Giving isthe reward, " he sa id 。”It has nothing to do with how well it's received; it's about how muchit ' s needed。"亮点积累：1 。 词汇：relief n.安慰、轻松；grateful adj。 感谢的；reward n.报答、酬谢2 .短语：offer to do主动提出做 ;be off one ' s shoulders（重担、负担）卸下肩头be mad at 对生气3。提

14、分句式：It has nothing to do with how well it' s received; it ' s about how much it ' s needed.分析It has nothing to do with 。.。与无关，句中两个how都引导宾语从句，分别作介词with和about的宾语。译文受赠后是否收效好（受赠人是否感恩）并不重要，重要的是他们究竟多么需要（捐赠活动的帮 助）。2021届高考英语二轮复习读后续写深度解读（十）自主练习阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Success is a greedy wan

15、t. Its victories are pleasant, its defeats are disastrous. It is a small , seven letter word that can only truly be defined inside each one of us individually.The pathto achieving it, in our minds , is clear, but it ' s the invisible that test our will. Failure is its shadow, always following cl

16、ose behind。Second born to a poor family, my mother defined, “Food on the table and a roof over our heads" as success. School work never gave me the instant satisfactionthat sports did. Athleticachievement , fueled by my increasing popularity, placed me on top of a mountain surrounded by clouds

17、。After graduation, I didn ' t know where I was going。 Wherever it was, I am sure that I would be outstanding; I was attracted by Kevlar. In High School I had many opportunities to express my manhood. But I couldn ' t claim her as mine , although I admired her dearly. I could not get her out

18、of my head.Uncle Sam was looking for a few good men and I was looking for him。 Ranger（骑警）Schoolwas the most challenging thing I had ever done in my life and I was determined not to fail. When I graduated , my fuel tank of invincibility（无敌）was full.I was a successful Army Airborne Ranger.However, som

19、ething was lacking in my life. Aftersome deep soul searching , I found out it was her.I left the Army to find her, sweep her off her feet and carry her off into wonderland。 Shewas living in Brooklyn 。 When we met, it was as if we both had found the missing pieces to our lives. After a short courtshi

20、p, we fell in love, then we were married。For twenty four years now we have lived together 。 We have two beautiful boys. I have worked for three Fortune 500 companies , and currently, run three businesses. I feel a great sense of accomplishment 。 But the inspiration through it all has been her.Our pe

21、rsonalities are so different, it is truly amazing we ' ve been together this long. Sheis a water lily and I'm a lion。 She' s elegant and I ' m crude。 She cries and I shout 。续写要求：1。所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.至少使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语3。续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4。续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1:Somet

22、ime that feeling of being“superman“ still overwhelms me., without hesitation I'd sayParagraph 2Today, if someone were to ask me if I consider myself a successayes。【范文欣赏】Paragraph 1:Sometimes, that feeling of being“superman" still overwhelms meDuring my last birthday,we were sitting in the sofa where I am determined to make this statement to her, “Honey, I ' m as