读写任务写作技巧训练(公开课)

1、.读写任务写作技巧训练 Learn to write the topic sentence of each paragraphPart 1 学生作文点评2011年茂名一模读写任务In China, people , especially youngsters, are becoming more and more conscious of their looks and are willing to go to great lengths to make themselves look more attactive. Plastic surgery (外科医生) is becoming pop

2、ular with young people. Ding Xiaobang, a plastic surgeon at the Peking Union Medical College Hospital, said that in the past decade, he had seen a growing number of patients, who were young and naturally good looking because they see plastic surgey as the key to love, wealth and success. But just a

3、few days ago, it took the life of a pop singer in China. Wang Bei, 24, a former singer on Super Girl, died on Nov.15 during plastic surgery in Wuhan, Hubei province. The young singers jaw suddenly started bleeding during the procedure, blocking her throat and causing her to suffocate(窒息而死).Wangs dea

4、th has raised concerns about the dangers of plastic surgery in China. The Ministry of Health stepped in on Nov 27, calling on health authorities all over China to increase supervision of the countrys medical plastic surgery industry. It also told the Hubei health department to look into Wangs death

5、and “to make the results of the investigation public as soos as possible”. 写作内容 1. 以约30个词概括这段短文的内容。 2. 然后以120词就“The price of beauty”为题进行议论， 内容包括： （1）分析中国整容手术的现状及青少年进行整容手术的原因。 （2）分析整容手术带来的危害。 （3）你认为怎样对待自己的外貌。Part 2 主题句模式常用词组：in my view 模式1. _Model: 假如你处在那些动物的处境，你会有什么反应？ （2009广东高考读写任务要点2） If I were an

6、 animal in the wildlife park, I could feel annoyed when people keep photographing me.Ex. 你理想中的大学生活是什么样的？模式2. _ Model: 你认为是否应该禁止游客和动物拍照。(2009年广东高考读写任务要点3) I believe that taking photos with animals should be banned. Discussion: 表示支持或赞同的句型：I approve of the idea that表示反对或不赞同的句型：I disapprove of the idea

7、thatEx. 你对用金钱鼓励孩子学习的看法。(2010年广东高考读写任务要点1)模式3._Model: 在生活中谅解他人有何重要意义From the story I learn that understanding and forgiving others plays an important role in our life.词组积累:有何重要意义有何影响有何密切联系有何危害有何不同Ex. 中学生活和大学生活的差别 (2008高考读写任务要点3)模式4. _ Model. 你认为使我们生活发生变化有哪些原因？ There are three reasons for the changes

8、that have taken place in our life.Discussion:常用句型：My views are based on the follwing reasons. Ex. 你支持青少年的秘密应该与父母分享的理由是什么？ 模式5. _ Model: 说说人们对环境保护所采取的措施。 Luckily, more and more measures are being taken to protect the environment. Ex. 如何才能获得快乐？句型积累: 模式6. _简述你经历过的一次困难或考验。 (2010茂名一模)句型积累: Part3 巩固练习 根据给

9、出的要点写出主题句1. 你认为是否应该穿校服上学。表明立场 2. 这个故事使我想起了自己一年前参加英语演讲比赛的经历 引出经历 3. 应该采取措施解决住房问题。引出建议、方法、措施、步骤等 4. 你认为好老师应该具有什么样的好品质。回答要点 5. 简述你支持拆旧图书馆的理由。总述原因 6. 分析学生之间存在竞争的利弊。（2010深圳五校联考）重述要点 Part 4 综合运用阅读下面的短文，然后按照写作要点写出段落主题句。I am talking about the “post-90”, the group born during Chinas gloden decade. Because of

10、 the unexpected timing of their births, the post-90s are an individual type.In public discussion, the post-90s are normally characterized as a selfish, unwelcomeing, and friendless group. They are lacking in enthusiasm about trying their best, yet have experience tastes, fed by the collective caring

11、 of six parents and grandparents. In school, they are apparently indifferent in life, lazy.The only thing that holds their interest is the Internet. The sample post-90s child spends his days on a PC, chatting with hundreds of strangers who are also doing their best to avoid communicating with real p

12、eople, especially their parents.Is there truth to this cruel description? Are the post-90s really so strangely different, and if so, why?The adults-parents and teachers especiallycertainly think that their charges are in fact unusually different. I myself have observed post-90s children at home on weekends, plugged into three electronic devices and ignoring all conversation directed their way.There are a few common explanations for why the post-90s are the way they are. Economic success during the decade is seen as the main reason, Born into the laps of lu