牛津沪教版英语六年级下六年级下写作技巧讲解

1、牛津沪教版英语六年级下六年级下写作技巧讲解六年级下写作技巧讲解I好文章的特征1 .中心积极2 .内容丰富，结构有逻辑，层次分明，3 .用词恰切，句子结构合理，要表达的意思非常清晰4 .行文简洁，流畅，读起来，甚至有美感II根本方法1 .积累，词汇与语法2 .多听或多看原汁原味的英语广播，电影电视；多阅读原汁原味的英语书籍，报纸，杂志等。3 .多以英语加工、表达信息，形成丰富的，流畅的英语思维4 .适当运用写作技巧，比如谋篇，修辞等。5 .多练笔III步骤一审。即审题。看清题目含义和要求；确认文体；准备写作的人称和时态：如果是日记和故事， 宜采用过去时态；如是简介，宜采用现在时态。二纲。即列提纲

2、。根据表达中心的需要，把要写的文章分为 3段：1.导入。用简单的几句话，导出话题，或文章的中心思想。2.正文。根据短文的内容要求，确定先写什么，后写什么，按照表述内容的情节发展和实际需要，一般分成三段。3.结尾。紧扣主题，两句话内结束，对文章进行总结和升华。三写。但要注意句式的灵活运用，长、短句，简单句，复合句要搭配运用。 选用单词、词组、句型时，要能根据自己的英语水平，尽量扬长避短，避难就易。遇到想不起的词、句时，就用同（近）义词或同义句代替，不要使用没有把握的词句，并且要综合考虑所涉及到的情景、场合， 语言要地道。使用衔接词，或过渡句，过渡段，使结构层次分明。四修。即修改与润色。看全文是否

3、符合题目要求，行文是否流畅，有没有遗漏要点；语法是不是 正确，包括词的拼写、大小写、标点符号、时态、语态、单复数、主谓一致、冠词等IV常用A开头1. Just as every coin has two sides.2. Compared to ., . is more.3. Opinions are divided on the advantages and disadvantages of .D. As we all know,.4. Why do you .?With the development of.6. As a student(.)7. s an old saying goes

4、 8. 连词1表层: first, firstly, second, secondly, third,thirdly,to begin with,to start with,what is more, last,also,andthen,next,besidesthen/next/after thaAtt first; at last; in the endwhen/while/as soon as/not until in addtionfinallyOnonehand .on the other haneach/one coin has two side2 表转折 but,however,

5、though, although, after all, in spite ofortunatelunfortunatelat the sametim3 表递近 in addition, besides, moreover, what's mor4 表因果 because, so, because of, thanks to, due to,for, since, owing to, as a result(of), hence, thu5 表例证 for example, for instance, such a6 表利弊 be good/bad for sb.; be harmfu

6、l to sb.; do harm to sb.;have great/much influence on sb.; sth.benefit sb.; sb benefit from sth.; affect; have an effect on sb1.;/ 8 牛津沪教版英语六年级下六年级下写作技巧讲解7)表喜爱：love/like/enjoy ；be fond of ；be interested in ； show great interest in ；lose oneself in ；put one's heart into；8)总结， As we all know, in g

7、eneral, generally speaking, I think., in fact, in aAs I see, As for meword, in brief, in conclusion, in short, in summary, to sum upC. 万能句式1. I hope the dream will come true one day.2. It's important/necessary/useful/useless/common (for sb.) to v3. It's nice/kind of sb. to v.4. It's time

8、 for sb. to do sth.5. It's a waste of time to 6. It's - years/days since sb. +ved7. It's great fun to do=sb. have great fun doing8. It's a pity that 9. It's an honor to Part3 范文赏析AWhat' s the matter?【写作要求】Jack 最近身体不太舒服，经常头疼发烧，并感觉身体虚弱疲劳。看过医生后，他收到了下面一张诊断表，请根据其要点并结合以上内容以“Jack

9、9; s problem ”为题写一篇 80 词左右的文章。Name :JackIllness: A bad coldAdvice: Take medicine twice a day; have a good rest; drink lots of water; eat more fruit and vegetables; exercise more; enough sleep【写作指导】根据要点提示，文章的内容大致分为两部分：先描述Jack 的病症，然后根据表格要点叙述医生的诊断结果和所给的建议。【范文】Jack' s problemJack ist feeling well th

10、ese days. He often has a headache and has a fever. And he is feeling weak and tired. So he went to see the doctor. Here is what the doctor said:Jack has a bad cold. He should take medicine twice a day and have a dood rest. Of course, he should have a healthylifestyle. For example, he should drink lo

11、ts of water and eat more fruit and vegetables. And he should exercise more andhave enough sleepI hope he can be better soon.B.【写作要求下面是你最好朋友张力的资料，请根据下表内所给的提示，写一篇不少5 字的英文短文介绍他姓 :张年 : 12外貌特 : 中等身材，戴眼镜，短头发，小眼性有点儿害羞，非常友业余爱看书，打篮梦想当一名作【写作指导介绍人物，重点是介绍这人物的外貌和性格，在仔细审题之后，要按照一定的逻辑顺序，把表格内给的中文提示用英文表达出来。不要遗漏任何要点【范

12、文Zhang Li is my best friend.He is 12 years old. He is of medium build, and wears a pair of glasses. He has short hair and small eyes. He is a veryfriendlyboy,butheisalittlebitshy.Heisgoodatallhissubjectsatschool,andhishobbiesarereadingandplaying basketball. He wants to be a writer when he grows up,

13、because his father is a writer. His fatherhas writt4en twenty booksso far. Being directed ed by his father, he writes a composition very week. I think his dream may come true one day.Some times, we go cycling at weekends, and sometimes we play computer games at my home,for I have a very smart 2 / 8

14、牛津沪教版英语六年级下六年级下写作技巧讲解computer.It is really a pleasure to have such a good friend.part4. 排序 给下列的文段重新排序A.1. Getting enough sleep is also important for us to stay healthy. So we should go to bed early and get up early.2. At last, we need to do some exercise often because it can keep us active. We '

15、 d betterdo exercise every day.3. First of all, we should have a good eating habit.4. To stay healthy, we must have a healthy lifestyle.5. Try to eat a lot of fruit and vegetables, but try not to eat too much junk food. Drink milk every day.答案： (Key: 43512)B.1. From the chart, we find most of them s

16、pend their pocket money on fast food and computer games.2. About half of them use their pocket money to buy fast food. 12 of them spend their pocket money playing computer games. A few of them spend their pocket money in buying presents, clothes or seeing films.3. So as students, we' d better sp

17、end our pocket money in the right way, such as buying books and something useful4. But as we know, eating too much fast food is bad for our health and playing computer games is a waste 浪 ) of time.5. The chart shows how the 50 students in Class1, Grade8 use their pocket money.6. Only 7 of themspend

18、their pocket money on books.答案 (Key: 526143)C.1. In the afternoon, we played games with them.2. Last Saturday, I volunteered to go to a poor mountain village school with several of my friends.3. We were glad to see the kids were really hard -working and lovely.4. In the morning, we taught some kids

19、to learn English and then told some stories to cheer them up.5. After that, we gave away some books and toys to them.6. My name is Sally. I think volunteering means a lot.7. I hope to go to help them next time if possible.答案 Key:6341537Part5 改改正下列作文的错误ALi Ming,who has been working as postman for 1.t

20、wo years,always wears a suit of green uniforms. 2.3 / 8牛津沪教版英语六年级下六年级下写作技巧讲解He worked with care as well as with effort.He 3.serves for the people heart and soul.Every day he 4.gets up early to deliver newspapers or magazines. 5.He is so careful and he has never been wrong. 6.One day he had to send a

21、 dead letter and it happened 7.to be raining hardly outside.But he set out immediately. 8.He had asked nearly everybody in the district after 9.he managed to hand letter to the right person. 10.答案解析1. 在 postman 前加a。 postman 是可数名词的单数形式，需要在前面加不定冠词。2. uniforms 改为 uniform 。 uniform “制服”之意。此处不能用复数。3. wor

22、ked 改为 works 。短文的基本时态是一般现在时。4. 去掉for。 serve 为及物动词。5. or 改为 and 。这里不是选择关系。6. and 改为 that 。后面是一个结果状语从句。7. 正确。8. hardly 改为hard。 hardly 是“几乎不”的意思，意义矛盾。9. after 改为 before 。10. 在letter 前加the。B.It is on Sunday today.Early in the morning my 1.classmate and I went to Xi Shan by bus to plant 2.Trees.As soon a

23、s we got there,we began work. 3.Some were digging,some planted,and there were 4.still some watering.Both of us were trying hard to 5.plant as much as we could.All of us were afraid of 6.falling behind.After work,we were wet all over.Looking 7.at lines of young trees,we forgot our tiredness.We 8.came

24、 back at 12.we all think it is necessary of us to take 9.part in this kind of physically labor. 10.答案解1. 去 on2. classmate 改为复 classmates。从下文 some,still some 看，有一群学生3. work 之前tbegin to dosth. 的用法4. planted 改 planting 。与上文digging 并列，省略wer5. Both 改 Alboth 用于二者的情况，现在是一群学生，应al6. much 改 man 其后省去tree7. 正确8

25、. lines之前the。特指种下的那一行行树9. of 改 fo10. physically 改 physical 。要用形容词作定语修饰名词CDear editor,My name is Xiao Hai,boy student in senior Three. I don't think it is necessary to write the “ S”in a capital letter what doyou think, Editor? 1.Recently I've read in Shanghai Students' Post that 2.4 / 8牛

26、津沪教版英语六年级下六年级下写作技巧讲解you need some students reporters.I am anxious to 3.be one of them.I very like English.I have been 4.learned it since eight years ago.Now I can talk 5.with foreigners with English.I can read China Daily. 6.I took the first place in writing an English composition 7.contest.Besides,

27、I do well in a computer competition. 8.Would you be so kind as to receive me? 9.I am looking forward to hear from you soon. 10.Yours, Jimmy 答案解析1. boy 前加 a。2. 正确。注意in Shanghai Students' Post 不是动词read 的宾语，故不能去掉in 。其宾语是that引起的名词性从句。3. students 改为 student 。除 woman,man 修饰复数名词时用复数外，其它名词作定语时均用单数。4. 去掉

28、very。中国人常说"很喜欢"，英语中则该说"likevery much "。very much通常不放在 like 之前，故不要在very 之后加 much 。5. learned 改为 learning。 have been doing， 主动的现在完成进行时。6. 第二个with 改为 in 。用某一语言介词用in 。7. 去掉writing 。不是“在写作文中”，而是“在作文竞赛中”。8. do 改为 did 。电脑竞赛显然是以前的事。9. receive 改为 accept 。不是“收到我”，而是“接受我”。10. hear 改为 hearin

29、g 。其前的to 为介词，故用动名词。Part 6 写作A上周的体育课上，有个同学忽然肚子痛，引发了学校对 “体育课安全”的关注。请以 “ How tokeep safe in PE 为题在班会课上作主题发言。内容包括1 描述意见发生在你身上的或你看到的发生在体育课上的意外事件（经过和结果2 提出解决这种意外的建议（至条）3 呼吁每个学生要注意体育课安全要求：语句连贯，字8 个左右。作文开头和结尾已经给出，不计入字数How to keep safe in PEGood afternoon !Do you know that our PE class could be dangerous if we are not careful enough?For example,Thas all. Thank you.思路：第一步：三确确定体 确定时态确定人称第二步：拟提5 / 8牛津沪教版英语六年级下六年级下写作技巧讲解第一自然段第二自然段第三自然段第三步：四检查 写作点字数点格式点语法点改错：B目前，提倡“节俭型社会"e economized society ),和“光盘行动：(Clean Plate Campaign)。请根据下表格中的信息，为英语报社写一篇短文，谈谈作江-名中学生，在日常生活中如何勤俭节约，反对浪费， 并作简要评论。What