牛津深圳版英语七年级上册Unit 3 The Earth Period 6 Writing 课件

1、Module 2 The natural worldOxford EnglishThe Earth1A In pairs, look at the photos below and discuss the problems with your classmate. What can we do to solve these problems?people/catch a lot of fish every day/ fewer and fewer fish in the sea each yearpeople/burn things to make energy/ pollute the ai

2、rpeople/throw away a lot of rubbish everyday/pollute the landpeople/put waste into rivers and seas/ pollute the water B Use the information in A to complete the report below.PROTECT THE EARTH What problems do we have? l People _. There are _. l People _. This _. l People _. This _.l People _. This _

3、. What can we do to protect the Earth? l We must stop _.l _Tell your own ways of protecting the Earth with the information on the blackboard and in the textbook.In groups, with the help of the information on the blackboard and in the textbook, make a poster on protecting the Earth.Protect the Earth

4、We must catching a lot of fish every day .(or) We must stop burning things to make energy .(or) We must stop throwing away a lot of rubbish every day .(or) We must stop putting waste into rivers and seas 写作口诀写作口诀一审二写三修改，一审二写三修改，意义原因把头开，意义原因把头开，正文要点不能少，正文要点不能少，观点愿望末尾在。观点愿望末尾在。时态一致不忘怀，时态一致不忘怀，加入名句高分来。

5、加入名句高分来。以以“Saving waterSaving water”为题写一篇为题写一篇7070字左右的段文。字左右的段文。1. 1. 水在我们生活中很重要。水在我们生活中很重要。 2. 2. 有人不关心节约用水，洗完手不关水龙头。有人不关心节约用水，洗完手不关水龙头。 3. 3. 工厂往河里排放污水，河流、湖泊的水被污染了，工厂往河里排放污水，河流、湖泊的水被污染了，鱼死了。鱼死了。 4. 4. 我们一定要采取措施保护水。我们一定要采取措施保护水。5 5、让我们的河流、湖泊更干净。、让我们的河流、湖泊更干净。 提示词：提示词：care about, tap, pour waste wat

6、er care about, tap, pour waste water into, do something into, do something 文体文体要点要点提示词提示词Water is very important in our lives. We cant live without it.But some people dont care about water. They dont turn off the taps after they have washed their hands .What is worse, some factories even pour waste

7、water into rivers and lakes. Some fishes has died.In order to make rivers and lakes cleaner,We must do something to protect water.Environment protection is the duty of everybody.开头-写明写什么，意义、原因。have正文-中心要点结束-你的愿望、观点Good beginning开门见山开门见山 揭示主题。揭示主题。 Water is very important in our Water is very importa

8、nt in our lives.lives.2. 2. 交代人物、事情、时间开头。交代人物、事情、时间开头。Last week we went to the lake and Last week we went to the lake and found that it was very dirty. found that it was very dirty. 3. 3. 回忆性的开头。回忆性的开头。 I still remember my first trip to I still remember my first trip to the river near my hometown.th

9、e river near my hometown.Good ending首尾呼应。首尾呼应。 We must do something to protect water in We must do something to protect water in order to make the world more beautiful.order to make the world more beautiful.重复主题句。重复主题句。I love my home town, and I love its I love my home town, and I love its people. p

10、eople. 名句结尾。名句结尾。 I believe we can do better in protecting I believe we can do better in protecting our world. Where there is a will there is our world. Where there is a will there is a way.a way.写作常见基本问题：1、要点描述是否齐全。2、非语法错误：拼写、标点、大小写。3、语法错误：时态、词形变化等。4、句型多样化：过渡句、从句的使用。5、书面整洁。 Now more and more people

11、 get to know its important to protect our living environment.As a student，its my duty to do something for the earth. From now on, Ill go to school by bike or on foot instead of in a car. Ill use fewer plastic bags 【少用塑料袋】to reduce white pollution【减少白色污染】. In order to save energy Ill plant more trees

12、 so that the air will be fresher. Ill take less lift and reuse water【循环用水】. At last l will use second-hand books【使用二手书】,so we dont need to cut down more trees. If everyone takes action, our enivronment will be better and better. Our world will be more beautiful.1.众所周知，环境变得越来越糟糕。1)As we all know, the

13、 environment is getting worse and worse. (Zhangyuyue)2)It is well-known that the environment is getting worse and worse. 2. 环境变得越来越糟糕的原因是 The reason why the environment is getting worse and worse is that (Dangmengmeng)3.所以，必须采取有效的措施来解决那些问题。 1)So effective measures must be taken to solve those proble

14、ms(Liuwenshuang) 2)So we must take effective measures to solve those problems.4.真的到了我们该立即采取行动保护环境的时候了。 Its high time that we took immediate action to protect our environment. (Lijia)1.时态问题Our environment get worse and worse.2.There be 句型There had a beautiful and clear river.3.冠词问题The environment is a important problem.is gettingwas或者或者used to bean4.词性混淆The fresh air is importance to our health.5.时态一致问题 Not only is it harmful to our life, but also it caused6.第三人称问题 It is well-known that t