2020年考研英语高分写作技巧-真题版

1、、真题小作文2011张剑老师文章Dear Xiao Ping,How are things with you? I watched the film“2012”n DVDyesterday and found it awonderful film. I strongly recommend it to you.The film is about an ancient prophesy which forecasts the end of theworld in the year 2012.Several ancient civilizations, such as Jewish and May

2、an, have foretold thedisaster and therefore made the story look rather believable . But the film isless an adaptation of the prophesy than a story of escape from the disaster.The film explores the complicated behaviors of people confronted withdeath and asks a soul-searching question about human nat

3、ure: Is therealtruism or complete selflessness when people face the final moment of ones life? I find the film one of thebest movies produced by Hollywood in rece nt years.I wish you would not work too hard in your study and would find time torelax and enjoyfilms from time to time.Sincerely yoursLiM

4、ing语言亮点1. wonderful a.精彩的2. forecast/foretold v.预言3. believable a.可信的4.less A than B不是A而是B5. adaptati on n.改编6. explore v探究7. soul-search ing a.令人深思的思路解析第一段：首先用How are things with you?寒暄，接着写明写信的目的：看了一部很好的电 影，推荐给对方。第二段：本段从剧情（1-2句）和电影的深刻意义即对人性的拷问（3-4句，其中第3句为过渡句）两方面入手介绍该电影值得推荐的主要理由。最后一句对该片进行总体评价。第三段：以学

5、业和休闲平衡为理由，建议对方观看电影，回应主题并且再次与对方进行寒暄。万能模板Dear Xiao Ping,L_m_wr.iting .tQ.reco.mmend. you一.a. wonderful, film.“2012”w atched.lhis. film. yesterday . and. found it one of the bestmovies produced by Hollywood in recent years.This film is recommendable first because of its interesting plots. It isabout an

6、 ancient prophesy which forecasts the end of the world in the year2012. Several ancient civilizations, such as Jewish and Mayan, haveforetold the disaster and therefore made the story look rather believable.This film is appealing also because it explores the complicated behaviors ofpeople confron te

7、d with death and asks a soul-searchi ng questi on abouthuma n n ature: Is there complete selflessness when people face the finalmoment of ones life?I am sure you will love this film. Hope to discuss it with you later.Sincerely yoursLi Mi ng参考译文亲爱的小平：我写信向你推荐一个精彩的电影一2012。我昨天看了这部电影，发现它是好莱坞这几年出品的最好的电影之一

8、。这个电影值得推荐首先在于它精彩的故事情节。它关于一个古代预言， 其预见世界将于2012年毁灭。一些古代文明，比如犹太和玛雅都预言了这场灾难，因此使这个故事显得非 常可信。这个电影吸引人还在于它探索了人们面对死亡的复杂行为，询问了一个有关人性的令人深思的问题：当人们面临生命尽头时，会彻底的无私吗？我相信你会喜欢这部电影。希望今后和你讨论它。诚挚的，李明2010张剑老师文章Volu nteers for Intern ati onalConferenceThe PostgraduatesAssociistiioiviting applications from students whoare w

9、illing to be volunteers for an international conference on globalization.A group of ten volunteers will be recruited to provide secretarial support forthe conference organization. They are required to work an average of 8hours per week from 10 June to 10 October 2010. Can didates should besec on d-y

10、ear graduate stude nts of this uni versity and should speak fairlygood En glish, preferably with TEM 4 certificate. Applications, containingCVs of the applicants, should be sent to PostgraduatesAssociatio n, 15Uni versity Avenue, before 1 May 2010.PostgraduatesAssociati on语言亮点1.invite v.征求，邀请2. recr

11、uite v.招聘3. provide secretarial support提供秘书工作服务4. be required to do被要求做.5. a n average of平均思路解析整篇启事显得比较正式，第1句开门见山提出研究生会正在招聘国际会议志愿者；第2-3句具体介绍招聘职位相关事宜包括招聘人数、应聘者所需从事的基本工作性质和时间；第4句规定应聘者的条件；第5句介绍如何应聘。万能模板Recruitme nt Announ ceme ntThe Postgraduates Association is inviting applica tions from studentswho a

12、re willing to provide secretarial support for an international conferenceon globalization. Ten volunteers will be recruited and they are required towork an average of 8 hours per week from 10 June to 10 October 2010. Candidates should be sec on d-year graduate stude nts of this uni versity andshould

13、 be able to speak fairly good En glish, preferably with TEM 4certificate.Whoever is interested should send his application to PostgraduatesASsociation, 15 University Avenue, before 1 May 2010.PostgraduatesAssociati on参考译文招聘启事研究生会正邀请愿意为全球化国际会议提供秘书工作服务的同学进行工作申请。我们将招募10名志愿者，他们将在2010年6月10日至2010年10月10日期间

14、平均每周工作8小时。申请人应该是该校研究生二年级学生，且应该能够说流利的英语，最好有专业四级证书。感兴趣的人可以将申请于2010年5月1日前送到大学路15号研究生会。研究生会2009张剑老师文章Dear editor,The ban on the free use of plastic bags has come into effect since lastyear, but I am afraid the situati on in this city does not give us any reas on forcelebrati on . We still face a lot of

15、white pollution around the streets, in thetrees, and on the lakes. People do not seem to care whether their actionshave damaged the environment.Urgent actions should be taken to deal with this problem. I suggestthat publicity pamphlets be printed and delivered to homes in the city toraise peopleawar

16、eness of the environmental crisis. Laws should be madeto impose heavier punishment on supermarkets, departme nt stores or anybus in esses that are still offeri ng free plastic bags to customers. We canalso encourage people to use re-usable bags, such as cloth or paper bags,and subsidise the manufact

17、urers of these bags. If these actions are put intoplace , I believe we shall see enormous cha nges a year from now.YourssincerelyLiMing语言亮点1. the ban on对.的禁令2. come into effect生效3. does not give us any reason for celebration没有理由庆祝4. urge nt actions立即行动5. publicity pamphlets宣传册6. raise peoples aware提

18、高s人的.意识7. impose heavier punishment on对.实施更重的处罚8. be put into place实施思路解析第一段：第1-2句介绍限塑令不成功的客观情形：第1句总述情形不容乐观；第2句举例说明白色污染的表现。第3句指出限塑令不成功的主观情形：人们似乎不在乎其行为对环境造成的危害。第二段：第1句总述，提出应该采取措施。第2-4句提出减少塑料袋使用的具体措施：第2句提出应该印刷、分发传单提高人们对环境危机的意识；第3句提出应该严肃惩罚免费提供塑料袋的商家；第4句提出应该鼓励人们使用可重复使用的袋子，并补助生产可重复使用的袋子的厂家。第5句指出建议实施的效果。万

19、能模板Dear editor,Im writ ing to express my deep concern about the in effective ness ofthe ban on the free use of plastic bags. Although the ban has come intoeffect since last year, serious white pollution still exists around the streets,in the trees, and on the lakes. Whats more worrisome, people do n

20、ot seemto care whether using plastic bags has damaged the environment.To deal with this problem, more actions should be taken. Publicitypamphlets should be printed and delivered to raise peoples awareness ofthis environment crisis. Laws should be made to impose heavier puni shment on supermarkets, d

21、epartme nt stores or any bus in esses that are stilloffering free plastic bags to customers. People should be encouraged touse re-usable bags, such as cloth or paper bags, and the manufacturers ofthese bags should be subsidized. If these actions are put into place, adesirable cha nge can be graduall

22、y achieved.YourssincerelyLiMing参考译文 亲爱的编辑：我写信来倾述我对限塑令没有取得相应成效的担忧。虽然从去年开始，限塑令开始实施，街道、树木、湖面上仍然存在严重的白色污染。更糟糕的是，人们似乎不在意使用塑料袋是否会损害环境。解决这个问题，应该采取更多的行动。 应该印刷和分发宣传册以提高人们的对环境危机 的意识。应该制定法律对仍然向顾客提供免费塑料袋的超市、商场和其它企业实施更重的处罚。应该鼓励人们使用可重复利用的袋子，比如布袋或纸袋。生产这些袋子的厂家应该有补贴。如果这些行动能得到落实，所期望的改变会逐渐实现。诚挚的，李明2008张剑老师文章Dear Bob,A

23、fter a pleasant journey I have arrived safely in Beijing. In my luggage,however, I discovered with great surprise the CD which you had kin dly lentme earlier on. I do not know how it en ded up in my bag, but it must be by amistake.I am sincerely sorry for this, but I have already put the CD into a p

24、arceland sent it back to you by registered mail. If everything goes smoothly , thepost office told me, you shall get the parcel in a weeks time.My study in Canada was a happy time and your wonderfulaccommodation added much tothe pleasure of my stay. I believe this experie nee will rema in in my memo

25、rythe rest of my life . If ever you have a cha nee to come to Chin a, I shall behere to welcome you.YourssincerelyLiMing语言亮点1. have arrived safely已安全抵达2. with great surprise十分惊奇3. end up最终4. everything goes smoothly事情进展顺禾U5. accommodati on n.提供食宿6. add much to the pleasure增加了愉悦之情7. rema in in my mem

26、ory the rest of my life在今后的岁月里我将一直记得思路解析第一段：第1-2句交代写信的原因 一在抵达北京后发现借的CD没有归还；第3句提出此错误是次意外。第二段：第1句表示歉意并提出弥补措施一已经将CD寄回去。第2句补充说明邮寄的CD的抵达日期。第三段：第1句回顾在加拿大的美好时光以及对方对自己的照顾；第2句在第1句的基础上提出永远不会忘记加拿大的经历；第3句表示期望有机会能回报对方。万能模板Dear Bob,After a pleasa nt journey I have arrived safely in Beijing. As I was unpack ing my

27、 luggage, I discovered with great surprise the CD which you hadkin dly lent me. I am sorry I have forgotte n to return the CD. To make up formy carelessness, I have already mailed the CD to you by registered mail. Ifeverything goes smoothly, you will get it in a weeksetimMy study in Canada was a hap

28、py experienee and your wonderfulaccommodation added much to the pleasure of my stay. I believe thisexperie nee will remain in my memory the rest of my life and hope I will havea cha nee to repay you for your kin dly help.Yours sin cerely Li Mi ng参考译文亲爱的鲍勃：愉快的旅行之后，我已经安全抵达北京。当我收拾行李时，我吃惊地发现你好心借给我 的CD。抱

29、歉，我忘记归还CD了。为了弥补我的粗心，我已经将CD通过挂号信寄给你了。 如果事情顺利，你会在一星期后收到它。在加拿大的求学是愉快的经历，你的热情接待大大增加了我的愉悦之情。我相信在今后的日子里，我将一直记得这个经历，希望有机会回报你的好心帮助。诚挚的，李明2007张剑老师文章Dear Sir or Madam,I am a student from Computer Scienee Department of this university. Iam a frequent user of the university library. I have benefited a great dea

30、lfrom the books which I borrow there.However, I find that we do not have many new books on ComputerScience. Especially small is the collection of books from foreign publishers.Therefore, I suggest that more recent books on Computer Scienee andmore foreign books be purchased by your library, so that

31、students like meshall be able to keep up with new developme ntsin the IT field.Thank you very much for giving attention to my letter.YourssincerelyLiMing语言亮点1. frequent user常客2. ben efit a great deal from受益匪浅3. collectio n n.收藏品4. purchase v.购买5. keep up with new developments跟上.的发展思路解析第一段：第1句介绍自己的身份

32、。第2-3句开始引入主题，介绍自己与图书馆的关系，第2句说自己是常客，第3句表明自己从借书中获益良多。第二段：第1-2句转折指出图书馆服务的不足：计算机科学领域新书少以及外国出版的书更少。第3句提出相应建议（购买计算机科学领域新书、购买外国书籍）以及建议的积极意 义（学生能跟上IT发展）。第三段：为客套语，感谢对方阅读自己的信。万能模板Dear Sir or Madam,I am a stude nt from Computer Scie nee Departme nt of this uni versityand also a freque nt user of the uni versit

33、y library. I have ben efited a greatdeal from the books I borrow there. To further improve the service there, Iwould like to put forward two suggestio ns.Firstly, I suggest that more recent books on Computer Science,especially foreign books, be purchased by your library, since I find that thereare f

34、ew new books on Computer Science in library and rather smallercollection of books from foreign publishers. Secondly, I hope the openingtime of the library can be adjusted, so that students can borrow books onSaturday as well.I will be appreciative, if those improvements can be achieved. Thank youver

35、y much for giving attention to my letter.Yours sin cerely Li Mi ng参考译文亲爱的先生或女士：我是本校计算机科学院的一名学生，同时也是大学图书馆的一名常客。我从图书馆借的图书中获益颇多。为了进一步改善图书馆的服务，我想提两点建议。第一，我建议图书馆多买一些计算机科学领域的新书，尤其是外文图书，因为我发现图书馆里很少计算机领域的新书，外国出版的新书就更少了。第二， 我希望图书馆的开放时间能做出调整，因此学生在周六也能借书。如果实现上述改善，我将很感激。谢谢你对来信的关注。诚挚的，李明2006张剑老师文章Dear Sir or Mad

36、am,I am a university student from Beijing. I would like to offer my limitedfinancial help to support a school pupil in West China.Although I am not rich, I am living a better life than many children in thewest. I know some of them are dropping out of school because of financialproblems . This is mos

37、t regretful because if they grow up without education,they will have little chance of changing their life and will probably rema in inpoverty all the time.Therefore, I would like to give up some entertainment and use the 200Yuan which is saved each month to support a girl in Sichuan Province tofinis

38、h her primary school. She should be 7 or 8 years old and should be verykee n to go to school. Can you find a can didate for me?Your kind reply will be deeply appreciated.Yourssincerely,LiMing语言亮点1. financial help经济援助2. financial problems经济困难3. regretful a.惋惜4. give up some entertainment放弃娱乐5. be kee

39、n to do迫切想要做思路解析第一段：自我介绍并且说明写信的目的一愿意捐助西部小学生。第二段：论述愿意捐助的理由。第1句论述理由1:自己自身比西部人更富裕；第2-3句论述理由2:一些人因为经济紧张而辍学， 而他们可能因缺乏教育而永远不能改变贫穷的命 运。第三段：介绍资助具体细节。第1句介绍资助计划，提出每个月捐助200元，以帮助完成小学学业。第2句指明受助者的条件，提出受助者年龄要7、8岁并对学习非常渴望。第3句回应写信的目的，希望对方找到合适的受助者。第四段：为客套语，指出对对方回复的感激。万能模板Dear Sir or Madam,I m writ ing to ask if you c

40、an recomme nd a child as the recipie nt of myfinan cial assista nce.I am a uni versity stude nt from Beijing and would like to finan ciallysupport a girl in Sichua n Provi nce to finish her primary school. The propercan didate should be 7 or 8 years old and should be very kee n to go toschool.I choo

41、se to help a girl, because girls are more likely to drop out ofschool because of finan cial stress. Those girls without educati on will havelittle cha nce to grow out of poverty trap. Therefore, although I am not rich, Iwould like to offer my help. I will give up some en terta inment and use the200

42、Yuan which is saved each month to pay her tuiti on.Your kind reply will be deeply appreciated.Yours sincerely, Li Mi ng参考译文亲爱的先生或女士：我写信来询问您是否可以推荐一个孩子作为我经济援助的对象。我是一名来自北京的大学生，希望资助一名四川的女孩完成小学学业。合适的人选应该7、8岁，并且应该很期望上学。我选择帮助女生，是因为女孩更有可能因为经济压力而退学。没有受过教育的女生几乎没有机会摆脱贫困。因此，虽然我并不富裕，我仍然愿意提供我的帮助。我将放弃一些娱乐， 用每个月节省下

43、的200元钱付她的学费。如蒙回复，不胜感激。诚挚的， 李明2005张剑老师文章Dear Mr. Wan g,I was recruited by your magaz ine two mon ths ago. I have bee n working as an editor at the sports department. Every day I read and select thearticles which are to be used in the magazine. I have bee n work ing hard.But after two mon ths, I find

44、that I am not suitable for the job. I havetried my best to do the job well, but I cannot. While at university, I wastrained as a reporter. I was determined to be a journ alist, going around thecountry to in terview people and report even ts. But at the magaz ine I haveno chanee of realizing my dream

45、 .For this reas on, I have decided to quit. I am sorry for any troublewhich might arise because of my departure . I am sure you will find a betterperson to replace me. I wish you all well.Yourssincerely,LiMing语言亮点1. recruit v.招聘2. select v.选择3. be suitable for对.适合4. be trai ned as被训练成为5. be determin

46、ed to do决定做6. realize sbs dream实现梦想7. departure n.离开8. replace v.代替思路解析第一段：对自己进行简单介绍。第1句说明自己入职时间；第2-4句说明自己工作职位、性质和状态。第二段：说明自己辞职的理由。第1句总述原因：工作不适合自己；第2-4句具体说明工作哪些方面不适合自己：第2句指出能力不足以完成工作；第3-4句指出自己理想职业与现实不符。第三段：第1句提出辞职。第2句对自己的行为表示歉意。第3-4句对工作单位今后的工作做出美好的展望。万能模板Dear Mr. Wan g,I was recruited by your magaz

47、ine two mon ths ago. I have bee n working hard as an editor at the sports department. Every day I read and selectthe articles which are to be used in the magaz in e. I am grateful for thisopport unity to work here. However, I am afraid that I have to quit my job.After two mon ths, I still find that

48、I am not suitable for the job. Firstly, Ihave tried my best to do the job well, but I cannot. In addition, I was trainedas a reporter at university, but at the magazine I have no chance of realizingmy dream to be a journalist, going around the country toin terview people and report even ts.I am sorr

49、y for any trouble which might arise because of my departure.I am sure you will find a better person to replace me. I wish you all well.Yourssincerely,LiMing参考译文亲爱的王先生：我于2个月前加入您的杂志社。我在体育部一直努力工作。每天我阅读选择将会被用在 杂志上的文章。我很感激能有在这工作的机会。但恐怕我不得不辞职。两个月后，我仍然发现我不适合这份工作。首先，我尽力做好工作，但却不能。其次， 我在大学被训练成为记者，但在这几乎不可能实现我成

50、为走遍全国采访、报道的记者的愿望。对因我的离开而可能有的问题我深表歉意。我相信您能找到个更好的人选替代我。希望您一切顺利。诚挚的，李明二、真题大作文2011张剑老师文章In the picture we see a traditional wooden boat with a boatmansteering it with a long wooden pole. In the boat, two tourists seem to beenjoying not just the cruise , but also the food they bring on the boat. One ofth

51、em throws the unwan ted left-over food and the wrapp ing paper into thelake.These two men are obviously not the first to throw food and packagesinto the lake, which has already bee n littered with a great deal of similarrubbish. From what looks now on the lake, it has already been heavilypolluted wi

52、th the garbage that tourists left behind, or what thepicture-caption calls“Leftrfv&Durism”.The picture strikes me as a thought-provokingcriticism of touristsbad habits. It forces usto review our behavior and ponder if we should only think of our ownpleasure and convenience, and ignore the order and

53、tidi ness of the placeswe visit. It forces us to recon sider our relati on ship with nature and ponderwhat we should do to make our activities friendly to the environment . I knowfrom n ews reports that, not just is such bad tourist behavior tak ing place inside our own country, but some of our coun

54、trymen are also taking their badhabits abroad. In this sense, the picture poses challe nging questi ons onthe relati on ship betwee n in dividual behavior and public interests, as wellas on our very idea of morality.Obviously, many of our coun tryme n n eed educati on, not just inenvironmen tal prot

55、ecti on, but also in moral prin ciple . Every one shouldknow that n atural beauty bel ongs to all the society. No in dividual has theright to damage or litter the beautiful environment.语言亮点1. traditional wooden boat传统木船2. steer v .驾驶3. seem to do似乎做某事4. cruise n.乘船旅行5. u nwa nted a.不需要的6eft-over n.所

56、剩之物（近义：rubbish, garbage）7. wrapping paper包装纸8. package n.包装纸9. be littered with到处丢弃10. heavily pollute严重污染11. strike sb as给某人.印象12. thought-provoking a.令人深思13. review our behavior审视自己的行为14. pon der v.思考15. relationship with nature与自然之间的关系16. friendly to the environment对环境友好17. poses challenging ques

57、tions on提出挑战性的问题18. public interests公众利益19. moral principle道德规范思维解析第一段：以船为中心按地点顺序展开描写。第1句描写船夫正在撑船；第2-3句描写船内两人行为。第二段：第1句将向湖里扔垃圾的两人的特殊行为延伸到所有旅行者的普遍性行为；第2句揭示出湖面被旅游者扔弃的垃圾污染了，点出图片标题旅游之“余”。第三段：第1句总述图片批判了旅行者的坏行为，令人深思。第25句论述图片带给我们的思索，从行为T人与自然关系T道德观，逐渐深入：第2句指出图片让我们思考我们是否应该只顾自己而不顾环境；第3句指出图片让我们重新思考与自然的关系，思考如何才

58、能与环境保持友好关系；第4句提出游客的不良行为不仅在国内有体现，甚至带到了国外；第5句在第4句的基础上提出，图片提出事关个人行为和公众利益的关系以及道德的问题。第三段：探讨如何解决问题：第1句指出需要在保护环境，及道德规范方面教育民众；第2-3句从正反两个方面论述个人应该采取的行为，第2句说每个人应该意识到环境属于社会，第3句说每个人都没有权利破坏环境。万能模板In the picture we see a traditional wooden boat with a boatmansteering it with a long wooden pole. In the boat, two to

59、urists seem to beenjoying not just the cruise, but also the food they bring on the boat. One ofthem throws the unwan ted left-over food and the wrapp ing paper into thelake. These two men are obviously not the first to throw food and packagesinto the lake, since the lake has already bee n littered w

60、ith a great deal ofsimilar rubbish. It is sad that the lake has already been heavily polluted withthe garbage that tourists left behind, or what the picture-caption calls“Leftvers of Tourism”.The picture strikes me as a thought-provoking criticism of sometourists bad habits. Those immoral tourists o