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1、读后续写考前必背赏析:Everybody was fixing their eyes on Jenny, waiting for an explanation. Embarrassed, Jenny didn ,say anything. Dead silence suddenly fell. Then came Miss Walker ' s voice." Why isLee' watch on your wrist? " Jenny hesitated for a while and decided to tell everybody about th
2、e truth. However, thinking of the well-prepared speech, the magic of the watch, she changed her mind." But Miss Walker, could I give thespeech first and then explain? ” She made a request in a tone of begging.0 wordsAt that, Miss Walker smiled and asked the class to listen to Jenny s speech fir
3、st. Jenny mhde her way to the platform with every confidence. Words began to flood out of her. " How could she make it? We ' ve never seen Jenny give so terrific a speech. Whispers went around the classroom , and even Miss Walker nodded with approval. Immediately Jenny finished her speech,
4、a storm of applause erupted from the class. Relieved, Jenny told everyone the truth , and especially the magic of the watch." But it ' s just an ordinary watch witno magic ” , Lee announced. 80 words好句式学习:1. Embarrassed, Jennydidn ' t say anything容词作状语,精简高级。后文还有: Relieved, Jenny told ev
5、eryone the truth.2. Dead silence suddenly fell.无灵主语,有灵谓语动词,高级。形容词dead修饰微妙,恰到好处。包括后文多次运用到抽象名词作主语:Words began to flood out of her.Whispers went around the classroom, and even.Immediately Jenny finished her speech, a storm of applause erupted from the class.3. Then came Miss Walker' s voe.完全倒装,高级句式
6、。类似的还有:Then的完全倒装:The chairman came then=>Then came the chairman.Computer was used in teaching then =>Then computer was used in teaching.4. 衔接词however的使用,让上下文语义衔接自然。5. 复合形容词well-prepared的使用。6. 分词作状语的使用:7. However, thinking of the well-prepared speech, the magic of the watch, she changed her min
7、d.8. 高级词汇和语块的使用: made a request in a tone of begging, made her way to, with everyconfidence, nodded with approval , erupted 等。9. Immediately引导的时间状语从句的使用。Immediately Jenny finished her speech, a storm of applause erupted from the class.10. 读后续写细节描写到位,几种说”的表达各不相同。关于读后续写,除了灵活使用各种高级句式,还要注意语言组织的简练。另外,细节描
8、写的积累也 很重要。场景描写句子的使用,如鼓掌。下面介绍几种鼓掌的精彩句子:1 .A thunderous applause burst out.2 .People broke into a storm of applause.3 .Mr. Smith made a main speech and received nearly 30 rounds of warm applause.4 . The announcement of the election won a burst of long and warm applause.5 . They are winning waves of ap
9、plause.6 .Cheers and applause took over the whole room7 .The experts really deserve a big round of applause for their efforts to constantly make progress in the AI field.8 .Everyone started to clapped their hands. Suzy Khan gave them a shy smile and the applause was deafening.9 .A polite ripple of a
10、pplause accompanied the chairwoman as she approached the stage.读后续写细节描写素材积累一:身体动作描写手的动词: Stunned, I stood up and gave her an awkward hug / hugged her in an awkward way Speechless, she smiled radiantly and gathered her son into her arms .The nearer it got, the more she waved the yellow blouse wildly
11、.The man took the sacks, reached into his pocket and placed four coins in Reuben's hand.Then, clutching the tin can, he headed for the shop.He parked down the street from Bobby ' s house, and rtaishfedrtbdoor, trembling with excitement.The man gently wrapped the gift in brown paper and place
12、d the parcel in Reuben's hands. Dora lifted the lid, tears beginning to blur her vision.Seeing no other people notice us, I placed the Christmas present down and pounded his doorbell. She didn ' t say a word, but smiled a watery smiand held my hand tightly .As we shook hands with the new own
13、ers, I told them how fortunate they were.He patted my head , and inquired:"Is there anything particular you want?“Of course there is a Santa Clause.He was squeezing my wrist so hard that it ached.She stroked her fingers through my hair , and said:"I'm Nancy Drew,She handed the napkin t
14、o me, and three $20 bills fell onto my desk when I opened it. Stevie looked at me, and then at his mother, then pulled out one of the napkins.shehoaidn g out her hand.The class clapped warmly as Mr. Lee presented me with the reward.He reached into his pocket and withdrew a note.Mrs. Damon pointed to
15、 the quotation from Albert Einstein hanging on the wall.Calmly he picked up the brush and started again to whitewash.脚的动词: Then Lisa stood up and made her way through the crowd toward me.Lisa planted her feet firmly in front of me.She managed to climb onto it and waited patiently.Reuben ran/rushed d
16、own Water Street, trembling with great panic.The shadows were lengthening when Reuben arrived at (动作)the factory.Then, clutching the tin can, he headed for the shop.Racing home, Reuben burst through the front door.Disappointed and frustrated, the poor man made his way back to his family.Suddenly, th
17、e woman stood up and entered the house in tears.And yet, they all just stood there staring at me, motionless .Belle Ringer nodded thoughtfully, and Frannie hurried off to wait on the rest of her tables.I led them toward a large corner booth. I could feel the rest of the staff following behind as we
18、marched through the dining room.I dragged myself through daily chores, feeling exhausted.The elderly man fled away with great panic.The man stepped back/stepped onto the platform to take a good look at the paintings.眼的动词:We all gather in front of the television, praying to catch a glance/glimpse of
19、his face.Seeing no other people notice us, I placed the Christmas present down and pounded his doorbell.Her eyes fell on the photos of her and me at my fourth birthday party.Singing happily, she gazed at her surroundings with large, innocent eyes .The woman was staring eagerly at the girl, trying to
20、 make a conversation.I watched helplessly, as the woman felt more and more frustrated and hopeless.Then I crept downstairs and examined the tags attached to each of the packages.When he finished he raised/lifted his eyes and looked out the window.She had spotted a man pacing down the hall.When the s
21、tudents stepped off the bus, James eyes widened sn surprise.We recognized the famous comedian on his arrival.Meghan nodded seriously, eyes glistening with held-back tears .Swallowing hard, I stared into Meghan' s eyesor a long moment, wondering how I could cope with it.Then he jumped up, eyes tw
22、inkling as he ran to fetch some of his prized Matchbox cars.I was taking my time, strolling in the park and looking in shop windows.口 的动作: Reuben murmured a thank you and ran home all the way.“Here, Mum! Here! ” Reubenimed as he ran to her side.A young man came to the police station, surrounded by a
23、 group of journalists, declaring that he had spotted the murderer.I was getting ready to blow out all the candles and she ' s getHngieeadme in case I ran out of air.“Time to go. whispered to the girl, wishing she could follow me right away.My teammates were all screaming as I dashed toward the f
24、inish line.I picked up the ball one last time and grumbled ,“ Please just come to get the damn ball.”Frannie quickly told Belle Ringer and the other two drivers about Stevie's surgery, and then sighed.The house got really noisy at that time, with everybody hollering and shouting at the top of hi
25、s voice.“How can I let you throw away the thing that means the most to you? pleaded with him. " IThey let out a surprisingly loud voice.The smile froze on his face; his mouth fell wide open.He interrupted the silence with an announcement : "Thedeadline to enter for the Competition is tomor
26、row.”11 haven ' t finished; I need more time, begged. 11 That ' s what Michelangelo said.jokeMr. EdgarShe greeted James andinquired ."Are you ready for our field trip?respames didn ' t“What do you think matters for a bird?” qiMsscDamon身的动作:She felt asleep and dreamed of seeing Tom.S
27、uddenly a tall figure dressed in a dark cloak appeared before him.Death spoke with a threatening voice, and disappeared .Dr. Urssenbeck suddenly found himself in a large room where thousands of candles were burning.The little girl slowly pushes herself on the swing.They are sitting outside in the co
28、ol night on a wooden porch, talking quietly.One of them approached and asked politely if I would throw the ball back to him. |Wanting to appear agreeable, I bent down , picked up the ball and, eyes half-shut, threw it back as hard as I could.Once I was on the bus, I crouched in a seat and shut my ey
29、es.In a flash my friend was in the car and gone, disappearing in a cloud of dust.For a moment I just stood there, paralyzed (呆若木鸡).心理动词: These events constantly remind me of my father ' s absence.I immediately picture/imagine him walking through the door, wearing a shining smile.Most days I hope
30、 that maybe he will turn up at my doorstep one day.At that very moment, he wondered whether he would be sentenced to death for killing people.He was determined to tell people the truth, but no one could hear his voice.So the young man realized the police had arrested the wrong person, and he took th
31、e great courage to expose the real criminal.I focused my thoughts on every part of myself.We nodded our heads in agreement , understanding each other.Somehow I got the idea it would be fun to waken my father by firing it.I was wondering where he was. I had a new joke to tell him.I was afraid to go t
32、o sleep, for fear that I would wake up the way I had been before.Then I tried to figure out what I should do. Follow my friend to the hospital?There was nothing I could accomplish there, I convinced myself .All I could do at the hospital, I decided , was to get in the way.As I started my car, I real
33、ized that my friend had left his truck and keys at the courts.From that one experience I learned that the most important thing in life isn' t the money you make.I will cherish the fond memories for the rest of my life.He felt he could not continue and sat down on the lawn.At this dark and hopele
34、ss moment, a wonderful idea came to him. It filled his mind with a great, bright light.Tom thought for a moment , was about to agree; but he changed his mind .读后续写细节描写素材积累二:人物动作描写SlideIt's easy to slide into the bad habits like smoking and drinking,but it's hard to quit.The thief slid into t
35、he room. 小偷溜进房间。She is able to slide into a room without anyone noticing. 她能悄悄溜进房间而不被人发现。Creepcreep 多指哺乳动物四肢着地 “爬行 ”或蹑手蹑脚不发出响声地前行,强调动作无声crawl 多指虫类身体蠕动的缓慢动作或贴近地面手脚并用地爬行,强调动作之缓慢I felt a chill creep over me. 我感到周身发冷The cat is creeping silently towards the bird. 这只猫正在悄悄地向那只鸟爬去。The boys felt tired, so th
36、ey put out the fire and crept into their tent.孩子们感到累了,所以他们扑灭营火之后就爬进帐蓬了。No one noticed the boy as he crept off. 当那个孩子悄悄离去时,谁也没有注意到。The boy climbed up the tree. 那个孩子爬上了树。The old man climbed down the stairs. 那老人费劲地走下台阶。RushA schoolgirl rushed into a burning flat to save a man's life.Someone inside
37、the building rushed out 大楼里有个人冲了出来。The men left in a rush 男人们匆匆离开了。He felt a sudden rush of panic at the thought. 想到这点,他突然感到一阵强烈的恐慌。JumpI jumped over the fence 我跳过了栅栏。She jumped to her feet and ran downstairs 她突然站起来,跑下楼去了。The phone shrilled, making her jump. 刺耳的电话铃响了起来,把她吓了一跳He jumped out of a third
38、-floor window 他从 3 楼的窗户跳了出去。我拍了拍他的头。 I patted him on the head.她狠狠地拍了一下我的脑袋。 She smacked me on the side of the head.他吃完甜点,拍了拍他的大肚子。 He finished his dessert and patted his paunchHe reached forward and gave her a slap.他上前打了 她个耳光。I slapped him hard across the face 我重重地掴了他一记耳光。The facts have given them a
39、 slap in the face. 事实给了他们一记响亮的耳光。他滚了一个雪球。 He rolled a snowball.球滚到桌子下面去了。 The ball rolled under the table.岩石沿着山坡滚下来。 Rocks rolled down the hillside.感激的泪珠沿着她的面颊滚下来。 Her tears of gratitude rolled down her face那时太阳正毒,晒得他汗珠直往下滚The sun was at its fiercest and beads of sweat kept rolling down his face.Sho
40、ut/ Yell他们听到这事都高兴得叫了起来。 They all shouted for with joy when they heard it.Andrew rushed out of the house, shouting for help 安德鲁冲出屋子,大声呼救You don't have to shout at me 你没必要朝我嚷嚷。He gave a loud shout and scared the life out of the thief. 他一声断喝,吓坏了小偷。I'm sorry I yelled at you last night 很抱歉昨天晚上我冲着
41、你大吼大叫的。"Eva!" he yelled. 娃!“他大喊.这两个男孩打了一架。 The two boys had a fight.花瓶打得粉碎。 The vase was smashed to pieces.他打了我,所以我才还手打他。 He hit me, so I struck him back.The car smashed into a tree汽车猛地撞到了树上。Mark smashed his fist down on the desk. 马克狠狠地把拳头砸在桌上。He smashed the radio to pieces他啪的一声把收音机摔得稀巴烂。H
42、e had no recollection of the crash 那次车祸他一点也不记得了。He narrowly escaped in the air crash. 他险些在飞机失事中遇难。The car skidded and slammed into a tree.汽车打滑,重重地撞到树上。slam (sth) into/against sb/sthSigh爸爸叹了口气站了起来。 Dad sighed and stood up.她一直在门口站着,但是现在闪到了一边,让他们过去了。She had been standing in the doorway, but now she ste
43、pped aside to let them pass.他站在门口,挡住了她的视线。 He stopped in the doorway, blocking her view.弗格森站起身来,扣上了外套。 Ferguson stood up and buttoned his coat.他站起身,向警察示意他和他的当事人已经谈完了。He stood up, signaling to the officer that he had finished with his client"lie on one's back" 译为 “仰面躺着 ”“趴着 ”是 lie on on
44、e's face, 或 lie on one's belly, 或 lie on one's stomach“侧卧 ”是 lie on one's side杰克被一只没被拴住的狗追赶。 Jack was chased by a loose dog.小狗对着它正在追赶的一只海鸥吠叫。 A small dog barked at a seagull he was chasing.他没走多远我就追赶上了。 I caught him before he had gone far.widen/broaden/expand one's horizons/ broad
45、ened his outlook巴黎的服装广告使他大开眼界.The advertisements of costume in Paris这真使我开眼界.What an eye-opener it s been for me!开眼界,拓宽视野.Widen one s field ovfision.电视真使人大开眼界.Television is a real eye-opener.旅游使他大开眼界.Travel has greatly broadened his horizons.这让我大开眼界.This has really opened my eyes.In addition, friends
46、hip can enrich our life and broaden our outlook.此外,友谊可充实我们的生活及拓展我们的视野。Poor housing and family stress can affect both physical and mental health.住房条件差、家庭压力大会影响身心两方面的健康。Michael sighed wearily 迈克尔疲惫地叹了口气。Michael sighed with relief. 迈克尔松了口气。I breathed a sigh of relief. 我如释重负地松了口气。Giving a sigh, she fell
47、 to her knees at my feet 她叹了一口气,跪倒在我脚边。He let out a long sigh, mainly of relief, partly of sadness.他长叹一口气,主要是因为如释重负,也有一部分是因为伤心.He took a deep breath, and began to climb the stairs 他深吸了一口气,然后开始爬楼梯。He had stopped to catch his breath and make sure of his directions.他曾停下来歇口气,同时确定一下方向。I held my breath an
48、d sank under the water. 我屏住呼吸沉入水底。I heard this song on the radio and it just took my breath away.我是从收音机里听到这首歌的,它令我惊叹不已。She felt short of breath and flushed 她感到呼吸困难,脸颊绯红。She burst into tears and ran from the kitchen. 她突然哭起来,跑出了厨房。The crowd burst into cheers. 人群中爆发出一片欢呼声。get down on one sknees 跪下双膝get
49、 down on one s left knee 单膝下跪get down on the ground 趴在地上她晕倒了,把脑袋给磕了。 She'd fainted and banged her headSeveral children fainted because of the heat.好几个小孩子中暑晕倒了。I feel dizzy. I think I'm going to faint. 我觉得头昏,我想我快要昏倒了。I picked up the phone book and glanced through it 我拿起电话簿,匆匆扫了一遍。She took her
50、 eyes off the road to glance at me 她把视线从公路上移开,扫了我一眼。She stole a glance at Martin. 她偷看了马丁一眼He cast her an admiring glance 他向她投以钦慕的目光。Trevor and I exchanged a glance. 特雷弗和我迅速交换了一下眼色 a brief/casual glance 短暂的 / 不经意的一瞥I screamed and everyone stared.我尖叫声,众人者B盯着我看。He sat staring into space (= looking at n
51、othing) . 他坐在那儿凝视着前方。She gave him an angry stare. 她生气地白了他一眼。Alberg gave him a bleak stare. 阿尔伯格沮丧地凝视着他。Henry gave Paul a glassy-eyed stare. 亨利木然地盯着保罗。向夕卜伸:reach out someone's hand把手伸过来 :give me your hand她满怀深情地久久拥抱了我。 She gave me a very long and affectionate hug.她张开双臂,紧紧地拥抱了我。 She opened her arms
52、 and gave me a big hug.哭泣着的一家人相互拥抱并彼此安 The weeping family hugged and comforted each other学生们拥抱了他,把他举到空中。 The students embraced him and lifted him into the air.他们两个孤苦无依的人就那么互相依偎着。 cling, clung, clungThey just clung to each other like two lost souls.They clung together, shivering with cold. 他们紧紧地抱在一起,
53、冷得直发抖。He staggered home, drunk.他喝醉酒,踉跄着回了家。The injured woman staggered to her feet. 受伤的女人摇摇晃晃地站起身来。He was staggering and had to lean on the bar. 他走路摇摇晃晃,不得不靠在吧台上。He had to lean on Dan to keep from falling. 他不得不靠在丹身上以免摔倒She was feeling tired and was glad to lean against him她正感到有些疲倦,因此很高兴可以靠在他身上。I lea
54、ned back in my chair. 我仰靠在椅背上。She walked slowly, leaning on her son's arm. 她倚靠着她儿子的手臂缓慢行走。Jill crossed her legs and rested her chin on one fist, as if lost in deep thought吉尔盘着腿,一个拳头支着下巴,仿佛陷入了沉思。Pop crossed his arms over his chest and watched us 波普叉着胳月雪看着我们。He rubbed his hands together a few time
55、s. 他搓了几下手。His hands balled into fists 他攥起了拳头。Chris crawled on his hands and knees out onto the highway. 克里斯手脚并用爬上了公路。He hid his face in his hands, lost in his own thoughts. 他用双手捂住脸,陷入了沉思。He stood on the sidewalk with his hands buried in the pockets of his dark overcoat.他站在人行道上,双手插在黑色外套的口袋里。He cupped
56、 his hands around his mouth and called out for Diane 他双手拢在嘴边,大声呼喊读后续写细节描写素材积累三:情绪心理好句子1. 喜乐 The smile on her face shone like a diamond. 她脸上的笑容像钻石一样闪闪发光。 A smile of understanding flashed across his face.他脸上露出了种理解的微笑。 A ripple of excitement ranthrough them. 一阵激动声穿过他们。 Laughter lingered around the room
57、. 笑声在房间里萦绕。 His eyes twinkled with pleasure. 他的眼睛闪烁着快乐 。 A wild gaiety( 快乐 ) took hold of her. 一种疯狂的快乐控制了她。 Unforgettable were her eyes that shone like diamonds and lips held in a steady smile. 令人难忘的是她 的眼睛像钻石一样闪闪发光,嘴角保持着稳定的微笑。 I was wild with joy. 我欣喜若狂。 I was pleased beyond description. 我高兴得难以形容。 S
58、he wore a shining smile on her face. 她脸上带着灿烂的笑容。? Her smile lit up the whole room. 她的笑容照亮了整个房间。? She shed tears of joy.她高兴得流下了眼泪。? Her eyes were sparkling like diamonds. 她的眼睛闪着钻石般的光芒。? She was overflowing with happiness. 她洋溢着幸福。? Her flushed face was shining with excitement. 她激动得满脸通红。? Joy welled up inside her. 她心中涌起喜悦。? I was floating on air. 我漂浮在空中 。? Amusement gleamed in his eyes.他
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