读后续写素材库之环境描写系列(4)

1、读后续写素材库之环境描写系列（4） The Descriptionof Dawn and Morning4-1 Dawn sent shimmering rays over the placid ocean, bestowing a golden path from the shore to thehorizon .|幻：黎明在平静的海面上放射出出闪闪发亮的光线，留下一条从海岸到地平线横亘而过的金色道路。亮点词汇shimmering发出微弱的闪光；闪烁；shimmer的现在分词rays光线；射线；一点，少量；鱼工，解;ray的复数placid 温和的；平和的；文静的；平静的；宁静的；安静的ho

2、rizon 地平线；范围，眼界生词难词bestowing 给予，授予，献给 ；bestow 的现在分词技法讲解：画面感要想把景物写生动、写活，就要捕捉到该环境下特有的细节场景，营造出一种画面感，让读者身临其境，感同身受。就像4-1的这个例句就有极强的画面感，抓住了黎明太阳初升时金光闪闪的场景，不是泛泛地写阳刚照耀，而是把光芒具象成a golden path from the shore tothe horizon ,这样一来，画面感就出来了。本套资料中类似的句子还有很多，请读者在阅读过程中细细体会这种写法。4-2 Bird song welcomes in a new day, sweet m

3、elodiouschorus of seemingly never repeated notes, cascading through the branches, tumbling into the crisp morning air, flowing into the surrounding countryside like a great river of music.年幻：鸟鸣中迎来了新的一天，悦耳动听的合唱声似乎从未重复过，从树枝上倾泻而下，跌入清脆的晨风中，像一条流动的音乐之河流入周围 的乡村。亮点词汇melodious 悦耳的；优美动听的；像音乐的chorus 副歌；合唱曲；合唱团

4、；歌咏队；合唱；齐声说；异口同声地说seemingl y看似；貌似；表面上；据说；听说；看来cascading倾?写;流注；大量落下；大量垂悬；cascade 的现在分词tumbling 跌倒，摔倒，滚落，翻滚下来；倒塌;坍塌;暴跌，骤P$ ; tumble 的现在分词crisp 脆的；酥脆的；鲜脆的；脆嫩的；洁净的；挺括的；油炸土豆片，炸薯 片；变脆flowing 流；流动；涌流；流畅；flow 的现在分词，这里形容音乐，十分形象?4-3 Only an hour ago the blackness was absolute, butnow the mist was visible, sil

5、very . Against this backdrop thetrees were silhouettes , still as an oil painting and darker thanthe ravens.三:就在一小时前，还是完全黑暗，但现在那银色的雾已经可见了。在这样的背景的映衬下，树的轮廓仍然像油画一样，比乌鸦还黑。亮点词汇silvery闪着银光的；银色的；银铃般的；悦耳的backdrop 背景幕布；周围陪衬景物；背景silhouettes 暗色轮廓；体形；形状；剪影；侧影；使呈现暗色轮廓；silhouette的第三人称单数和复数oil painting油画；油画艺术生词难词r

6、avens 渡鸦；raven 的第三人称单数和复数?4-4 The sky was a billion pure eyes of light and thegrass green underfoot, it was as if night and day had becomeone beautiful moment. Dawn had come.运:天空像是一亿只纯净的眼睛拼接在一起，脚下是青草，仿佛黑夜 和白昼已成为一个美丽的时刻。黎明已经来临。?4-5 The sun rises as a canopy of gold, bright amid theblue, bidding the s

7、tars to take their nightly rest. Asdarkness surrenders , every color changes from tingesof charcoal to the vibrancy.三:太阳升起，像一个金色的大篷，在蓝色的天空中闪闪发光，让星 星们休息。随着黑暗的消退，每一种颜色都从木炭色变得充满活力。亮点词汇canopy 罩篷，遮篷，罩盖 ；顶篷；大篷；大篷似的树荫；座舱盖amid 在一过程中；在中；四周是surrenders 投降；放弃，交出；surrender的第三人称单数tinges 给着色，给染色；使略带 感情；微量，少许，一丝，几分

8、；tinge 的第三人称单数和复数生词难词charcoal 炭，木炭；深灰色?4-6 The sky glows like a summer peach and the sun ispure gold in the sky. The colors of the foliage return to greenand the air warms to an ambient twenty or so. It is the perfectdawn, one to be savored insteadof squandered . Underthis radiant beauty I can see the path ready for a meaningful day.反幻：天空像夏天的桃子一样发光，太阳在天空中像是纯金的一样。树 叶的颜色又变绿了，空气也变暖到大约二十度左右。这是一个完美的黎明，一个值得被品味而不是被挥霍浪费的黎明。在这光芒四射的美景下，我可以看到已经为一个有意义的一天而准备好了的道路。亮点词汇glows发出微弱而稳定的光；发出暗淡的光；发红，发热，显得红，感