英语写作辅导讲义

1、专四写作辅导讲义写作要求及评分标准 样卷分析 Section A Composition Nowadays, the Internet has become part of peoplse life, and millions of young people have made friends online.Write on Answer Sheet Two a composition of about 200 words on the following topic: Is it Wise to Make Friends Online?You are to write in three pa

2、rts.In the first part of your article you should clearly present your view.In the second part you should support your opinion with appropriate details.In the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or summary.Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar a

3、nd appropriateness. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.(14 Pts)Is it Wise to Make Friends Online?With the Internet becoming an indispensable part of modern peoples life, making friends on line enjoys its great popularity, especially among young people. However, is

4、 it wise to make friends online, as many parents and teachers are worrying about? As far as I am concerned, I strongly oppose being addicted to making friends online.Firstly, too much attention to online friends distracts your concerns to the true friends and families in the real world. If we look a

5、round, we often find a lot of young people staying online and chatting with online friends all day long. By the same time, the communication between them and the friends around them are becoming less and less. Therefore, they feel lonelier in real life and spend more time on Internet.Besides, online

6、 friends are often disguised. A large number of cases have proved that many criminals make use of Internet to cheat of money or love. Even if they are not cheaters, they tend to be totally different persons when you get in actual contact with them. There s always a gap between the real world and the

7、 imaginary one.Nevertheless, it is unwise to make friends online. Those who are indulging in Internet should cast your eyesight to the friendship and kinship in the real life. What you should do is to seek solution, but not to escape.(12 pts)Is it Wise to Make Friends Online?Nowadays, it has been a

8、fashion to make friends online, and more and more teenagers,college students and even many adults will spend a lot of time chatting with people on the Internet. But I don t think it is wise to make friends online.Firstly, most people will not reveal their real identity on the Internet, which will no

9、t enable you to make true friends. Just imagine, a young lady you are talking with may be an old man, and I m sure we will feel very bad when we are exposed to the truth. Besides, the friends online can bring bad effect to people, especially for teenagers.The unhealthy stuff will both physically and

10、 psychologically influence young people and, in a certain degree, can lead an unproper way to their whole life. At last, making friends online can do bad to the relationship between you and your family and friends in real life. Being addicted to the Internet makes you ignore the reality. You will be

11、 angry about your parents persuading and after a long time, maybe you will find you have lost the ability of how to communicate with others properly.In a word, it is not wise to make friends online. I hope everyone can focus on the reality instead of wasting too much time making friends on the Inter

12、net.(9 pts)Is it Wise to Make Friends Online?There is a tendency we can t deny that most of us have access to Internet. Susequently,making friends online has become a common thing. Some may argue that making friends online isn t a good choice, however, personally, I hold the idea that it is wiser to

13、 make friends online.On one hand, its a kind of company. When we live in our apartment, we seldom communicate to the neighbors, esp. that our family members are outside, the sense of feel lonely overcome us. Therefore, in order to get rid of this, we need to find someone to talk with. Then making fr

14、iends online is a good way to solve this problem. Meanwhile, we can not only gain friendship, but also exchange our minds. In this way, we obtain a sense of satisfaction from talking with a stranger who will tend to say beautiful words towards us.On the other hand, making friends online help us enri

15、ch our sight. We make friends, coming from different areas, accordingly, we obtain a lot of information that we cant get from our limited knowledge. Sometimes, friends online encourage us to read helpful books where will be able to learn more.All in all, from my point of view, making friends is help

16、ful for enriching our knowledge and helping us encourage with others, hence, it is advisable to makes friends on line as long as we use it properly.(7 pts)Is it Wise to Make Friends Online?People would like to make the best of Internet to broaden their minds, they can get large information, they can

17、 play interesting games, even they can mak friends online. While a question has been arisen“:Is it wise to make friends on line?”The Internet is not reality, you can not trust a person through the Internet. Now I would not like to talk about the advantages of the Internet, while the disadvantages yo

18、u can not deny is existing. Many people make the most of it to do bad things, such as trick you that he is need of money eagerly and wise you would help him as a friend, or character as your friend to inform your family that you are in danger and need money to save you. All the things can be seen on

19、 the newspapers magazines,etc. So it is unwise to trust a so called online friend.I can Jump to the conclude that it is unwise to make friends on line, because it is not reality, also we can not trust others without knowing the person well. So let s doutmost to make the base use of the advantagesof

20、the Internet. Cherish the friends around us!(5pts)Is it Wise to Make Friends Online?I think it is wise to make friends online. First, Now job s pressure more and more. Everyone cannot better talk face to face. Second, Friends online may speak everything of them.Third, Friends online may help somethi

21、ng of them and solve some problem.The forth,Friends online may gain more knowledge and information.All in all, make friends online is wise in the society. Make friends online cann t change a 潮流。 Everyone may enjoy Everyone with his friends online.!Section B Note-writingWrite on Answer Sheet Two a no

22、te of about 50-60 words based on the following situation:Your classmate, Jimmy, is head of the universitys swimming club. He has invited you to join the club, but you like some other sport. Write him a note, declining his invitation and explaining why.Marks will be awarded for content, organization,

23、 grammar and appropriateness. (9 pts)April 22 nd, 2007Dear Jimmy,Its very kind of you to invite me to join the university s swimming club. I am most grateful to be asked. However, Ive already joined a basketball club. You know I like playing basketball very much. I am afraid I do not have enough tim

24、e to take part in two sports. I am very sorry for that and really regret that I would miss such an excellent chance of enjoying swimming with you. Good luck to your club.Yours,Mike(7 pts)22 April, 2007Dear Jimmy,Thank you for your inviting me to participating in the university s swimming club. But I

25、 regret to tell you that I m not able to join you, since I found myself more interested in the basketball club. I hope you will not be angry to me.Yours,Mike(5 pts)Dear Jimmy,Sorry! I couldn t take part in your university swimming club, because I more like football. I have to decline your invitation

26、. What a pity! I am sure you will not beangry at me, because you are always my best friend.Sorry again!Yours,TomApril 22, 2007（3pts）Hello, Jimmy:I m shy to tell you I like other sport. So I don t take part in you club. You may ask : why? Not because other reasons, I interested more in pingpong and i

27、t is more cheaper. I think, except me, more people will support you.Tony专四写作常用句式1）主语从句It is common knowledge that honesty is the best policy.It is well-known that.It is self-evident/ conceivable / obvious / apparent that.It goes without saying that. It is universally acknowledged that.It is / that2）

28、宾（表）语从句We cannot understand why he was so cruel to his roommates.The problem is not who will go, but who will stay.3）定语从句（限定性和非限定性）As is shown/ demonstrated/ illustrated/ depicted/ described.in the cartoon/ picture/ graph/ table.,There are many reasons why I want to study in your university.It is es

29、timated that tens of billions of pounds spent on cigarettes every year in our country, which is a huge waste.4）状语从句（时间，原因，地点，条件，让步，转折等）When the man is enjoying the cigarette, the smoke becomes a monste怪物）which will devour him.Whatever the reason, there are still some problems with student use of com

30、puters.5）分词短语做定语或状语Prof. Kang came to our university, giving us a lecture on how to acquire English better.6）倒装句Only through these measures can we hope to solve the problem.Scattered around the globe are more than 100 small regions of isolated volcanic activity known to geologists as hot spots.7）被动句

31、Some measures should be taken to deal with the problem.He is said to have accomplished a lot of great deeds.Many people believe that.（ It is believed that.）8）设问句Do you still remember the boy who cried wolf for several times so no one would trust him?写作模板（ 1）开头Recently, the problem of最近，问题已引起人们的关注has

32、 arousedpceoonpcleern.Internet has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life. It has brought a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well.互联网已在我们的生活中扮演着越来越重要的角色.它给我们带来了许多好处,但也产生了一些严重的问题.Nowadays, （overpopulation） has become a problem we have to face.如今,（人口

33、过剩）已成为我们不得不面对的问题了.It is commonly believed that / It is a commctuhOtel ief人们一般认为Many people insist that 很多人坚持认为With the development of science and technology, more and more people believe that 随着科技的发展，越来越多的人认为A lot of people seem to think that 很多人似乎认为引出不同观点:People ' s views on vary from person to

34、 person. Soim ehat .However, others believe that人们对的观点因人而异.有些人认为.然而其他人却认为 People may have different opinions on 人们对可能会有不同的见解.Attitudes towards (drugs) vary from person to person.人们对待吸毒的态度因人而异.There are different opinions among people as to关于.人们的观点大不相同.Different people hold different attitudes toward

35、(failure). 对 (失败)人们的态度各不相同.( 2) 中间论证From my point of view, it is more reasonable to support the first opinion rather than the second.在我看来,支持第一种观点比支持第二种观点更有道理.I cannot entirely agree with the idea that 我无法完全同意这一观点 .Personally, I am standing on the side of 就个人而言;我站在的边.I sincerely believe that我真诚地相信 In

36、 my opinion, it is more advisable to do than to do在我个人看来，做比做更明智.Finally, to speak frankly, there is also a morepractical reason why 给出原因:This phenomenon exists for a number of reasons. First, Second, Third, 这一现象的存在是有许多原因的.首先，第二，第三，Why did ? For one thing For another . Pephiapsryhreason is 为什么会？ 一个原因

37、是 令一个原因是或许其主要原因是.I quite agree with the statement thatateecheasoias follows.我十分赞同这一论述，即，其主要原因如下：预示后果:Obviously, if we don ' t control the problechathees are that will leadn danger.很明显,如果我们不能控制这一问题,很有可能我们会陷入危险.No doubt, unless we take effective measures, it ivery likely that 毫无疑问，除非我们采取有效措施，很可能会I

38、t is urgent that immediate measures should be taken to stop the situation. 很紧迫的是,应立即采取措施阻止这一事态的发展.列出解决办法:Here are some suggestions for handling这是如何处理某事的一些建议.The best way to solve the troubles is解决这些麻烦的最好办法是People have figured out many ways to solve this problem.人们已找出许多办法来 解决这个问题.批判错误观点和做法:As far as

39、something is concerned,就某事®言，It was obvious that 彳艮显然，.It may be true that ，but it doesn ' t mean that 可能是对的，但这并不意味着 It is natural to believe that，but Wgrshouldatt认为.是很自然的，但我们不应忽视 .There is no evidence to suggest that 没有证据表明 ( 3)结尾Taking all these factors into consideration, wenaturally com

40、e to the conclusion that 把所有这些因素加以考虑，我们自然会得出结论 Taking into account all these factors, we may reasonably come to the conclusion that 考虑所有这些因素，我们可能会得出合理的结论 Hence/Therefore, we ' d better come to the conclusion 因此，我们最好得出这样的结论 There is no doubt that (job-hopping) has its drawbacks as well as merits.

41、毫无疑问,跳槽有优点也有缺点.All in all, we cannot live without But atrthevsoimest try to find out newways to cope with the problems that would arise.总之，我们没有是无法生活的.但同时，我们必须寻求新的解决办法来对付可能 出现的新问题.提出建议:It is high time that we put an end to the (trend舷是我们停止这一趋势的时候了 . It is time to take the advice ofand terpph apecon t

42、he improvementof 该是采纳的建议，并对的进展给予特殊重视的时候了 .There is no doubt that enough concern must be paid to the problem of 毫无疑问，对问题应予以足够的重视.Obviously, .If we want to do somethinges senttas that显然，如果我们想做某事，很重要的是Only in this way can we只有这样，我们才能It must be realized that我们必须意识到 如何连接强调still, Indeed, apparently, oddly

43、 enough, of course, after all, significantly, interestingly, also, above all, surely, certainly, undoubtedly, in any case, anyway, above all, in fact, especially. Obviously, clearly.比较like, similarly, likewise, in the same way, in the same manner, equally.对比by contrast, on the contrary, while, where

44、as, on the other hand, unlike, instead, but, conversely, different from, however, nevertheless, otherwise, whereas, unlike, yet, in contrast.列举for example, for instance, such as, takeexample: Efocept (for), to 川ustrate.时间later, next, then, finally, at last, eventually, meanwhile, from now on, at the

45、 same time, for the time being, in the end, immediately, in the meantime, in the meanwhile, recently, soon, now and then, during, nowadays, since, lately, as soon as, afterwards, temporarily, earlier, now, after a while.顺序first, second, third, then, finally, to begin with, first of all, in the first

46、 place, last, next, above all, last but not the least, first and most important.可能presumably, probably, perhaps.解释in other words, in fact, as a matter of fact, that is, namely, in simpler terms.递进What is more, in addition, and, besides, also, furthermore, too, moreover, furthermore, as well as, addi

47、tionally, again.让步although, after all, in spite of，despeveeVhodfgh, though, admittedly,whatever may happen.转折however, rather than, instead of, but, yet, on the other hand, unfortunately. whereas原因for this reason, due to, thanks to, because, because of, as, since, owing to.结果as a result, thus, hence,

48、 so, therefore, accordingly, consequently, as consequence.总结on the whole, in conclusion, in a word, to sum up, in brief, in summary, to conclude, to summarize, in short.其他Mostly, occasionally, currently, naturally, mainly, exactly, evidently, frankly, commonly, for this purpose, to a large extent, f

49、or most of us, in many cases, in this case,重点话题与句型1) With more emphasis put on “ building a harmonious society ” , people begin to realize the importance of solving the problem of inequality (solving the problem of unemployment/ enabling some people to get rich and helping the disadvantaged )2) Sinc

50、e “ sustainable development” is our main goal, we should pay more attention to striking a balance between economic development and environmental protection (producing more goods and saving natural resources )3) As the central task of our country is to “ build a well-off society in an all-roundway” ,

51、 more efforts are being made to improve the livingstandards of the people (people need more comfortable housing and more convenient transportation )4) With the rapid growth of our economy(transportation system/ market economy/ private enterprises/ housing industry )，an increasing number of problems

52、have arisen, such as 5) With the rapid development of science and technology (electronic industry/ higher education )，more and more people cometo realize that 6) Currently, there is a widespread concern over high unemployment rate (desertification/ widespread corruption/ energy crisis/ traffic jams/

53、 water shortage/ increasing traffic accidents).7) Nowadays, a heated debate about private cars (China s football/ brain drain) is under way in China.8) As the public awareness of market economy (population control/ human rights/ competition/ laws and regulations )heightens , 9) Unless we put more em

54、phasis on environmental protection (interpersonal relationship/ equality/ how to deal with stress)，theproblem will be a hindrance to our building a “ harmonious society ”.10) Different people hold different views on accession to WTO(studying abroad/ private cars/ Internet surfing).Some are in favoro

55、f ，while others are against 2011) The case only reveals the tip of an ugly iceberg of serious environment al pollution (widespread waste/ organized crime)12) When it comes to the problem (the issue/ the case)of eatingwild animals (net chatting/ morning exercise)13) As far as family planning (adult e

56、ducation/ recycling)isconcerned, there is much room for improvement.14) All these statistics (pictures )reveal a painful fact that corruption is spreading rapidly in our country (more and more fish have been killed )15) Without love, my classmate Xiao Wang would have died in the hospital. But with o

57、ur love and care, he survived the illness and can enjoy his life now.16) Without computers (cell phones/ private cars/ the Internet),it would be difficult to imagine modern life.17) It is imperative for us to take effective (drastic/ immediate/ prompt-) measures to correct the situation (eliminate environmental pollution/ fight against corruption/ ban drug abuse)18) The participating Slogan should be an embodiment of the concept of “ Green Olympics, Hi - Tech Olympics and People s Olympics ” with “ People s Olympics ” a