新高考读写课程-第2讲-人与社会-公益事业与志愿服务-练习案(共8页)

1、精选优质文档-倾情为你奉上新课标、新高考、新思路-聚焦核心素养、获取关键能力语篇精深、读写结合（练习案）语篇二2017年6月浙江省高考读后续写真题阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。On a bright, warm July afternoon, Mac Hollan, a primary school teacher, was cycling from his home to Alaska with his friends. One of his friends had stopped to make a bicycle repair, but they had e

2、ncouraged Mac to carry on, and they would catch up with him soon. As Mac pedaled (骑行) along alone, he thought fondly of his wife and two young daughters at home. He hoped to show them this beautiful place someday.Then Mac heard quick and loud breathing behind him. “Man, that's a big dog!” he tho

3、ught. But when he looked to the side, he saw instantly that it wasnt a dog at all, but a wolf, quickly catching up with him.Macs heart jumped. He found out his can of hear spray. With one hand on the bars, he fired the spray at the wolf. A bright red cloud enveloped the animal, and to Mac's reli

4、ef, it fell back, shaking its head. But a minute later, it was by his side again. Then it attacked the back of Mac's bike, tearing open his tent bag. He fired at the wolf a second time, and again, it fell back only to quickly restart the chase（追赶）.Mac was pedaling hard now. He waved and yelled a

5、t passing cars but was careful not to show down. He saw a steep uphill climb before him. He knew that once he hit the hill, hed be easy caught up and the wolfs teeth would be tearing into his flesh.At this moment, Paul and Beeky were driving their car on their way to Alaska. They didnt think much of

6、 it when they saw two cyclists repairing their bike on the side of the road. A bit later, they spotted what they, too, assumed was a dog running alongside a man on a bike. As they got closer, they realized that the dog was a wolf. Mac heard a large vehicle behind him. He pulled in front of it as the

7、 wolf was catching up fast, just a dozen yards away now.注意:所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右；1. 应使用 5 个以上短文文中标有下划线的关键词语：2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；3. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1：The car abruptly stopped in front of him.Paragraph 2：A few minutes later, the other two cyclists arrived.写作思路微技能之G-N策略: 运用Given-New策略，

8、我们可以基于原文本和首句（Given information）提供的信息，采用围绕中心词问一些相关问题，然后回答这些问题（New information）的方法，拓展我们的思路和角度，最终形成合力的故事情节线。从续写第一段首句：The car abruptly stopped in front of him.抓住段首句设问：1. Did Paul and Becky offer help?2. What did Paul and Becky do to help Mac out?3. How did the wolf react?4. Was Mac rescued at last?5. Ho

9、w did Mac feel?然后进行详细的回答，我们就可以写出这样的一段文章：_根据续写第二段首句：A few minutes later, the other two cyclists arrived.我们是否可以这样设问：1. After their arrival, how did they react?2. Were they grateful to the life savers?3. Did they continue their bike tripp to Alaska?然后进行详细的回答，我们就可以写出这样的一段文章：_牛刀小试-句子翻译与句型转换1. 没能够逮到那猎物，这只

10、垂头丧气的狼离开了，消失在森林里。Failing to get the prey, the disappionted wolf left, _（运用连动句句型）Failing to get the prey, the disappionted wolf left, _（运用非谓语动词结构）2. 一想到那只狼的血盆大口，Mac几乎吓晕过去。Mac was nearly dead with fright _（运用时间状语从句）_, Mac was nearly dead with fright.（运用非谓语动词结构）3. 这只狼怒火中烧，开始咆哮并用爪子猛烈地拍击车窗。_that it roare

11、d and smacked the window violently.（运用so.that.句型）_that it roared and smacked the window violently.（运用倒装结构）4. 过了很长时间这只狼才知道想要抓到Mac是不可能的。It was quite a while before the wolf knew_（运用宾语从句）5. 他们惊讶地发现Mac的自行车横躺在路上，而Mac看上去也是一副狼狈模样。They were surprised to find_and Mac was like a drowned mouse.（运用宾语从句）They wer

12、e surprised to find_and Mac was like a drowned mouse.（运用非谓语动词）6. 是的，如果没有他们的及时帮助我早已是狼的盘中餐了。Yes, _, I _the food of the wolf.（运用if引导的虚拟语气）Yes, _, I _the food of the wolf.（运用隐含条件的虚拟语气）7. 漆黑的雨夜，风雨交加，电闪雷鸣，我全然被这种力量镇住了。The dark, rainy evening, the wind, the thunderding clouds _（运用拟人的修辞手法）8. 仿佛世界末日来了。It seem

13、ed as if _.（运用as if 的非虚拟用法）It seemed _.（运用as if的非虚拟用法进行仿写）9. 看上去他命不久矣。You cannot imagine how _.（运用how引导的宾语从句，approach做名词）You cannot imagine _（运用how引导的宾语从句，approach做动词）10. 虽然被吓了个半死，Mac还是挣扎着爬起来用尽全力把他的自行车朝狼扔去。_, Mac struggled to crawl up and threw his bicycle at the wolf with all the strength.（运用分词作状语）

14、_, Mac struggled to crawl up and threw his bicycle at the wolf with all the strength.（运用倒装句）KEY:1. and disappeared into the woods Disappearing into the woods2. When he thought of the wolfs bloody mouth The wolf was so angry3. The wolf was so angry So angry the wolf was4. that it was impossible to ca

15、tch Mac5. That Macs bicycle was lying on the road Macs bicycle lying on the road6. if they hadnt help me timely, could have been Witout/But for their timely help, would have been7. held me entirely in their power 8. the world was at an end as if his life had come to an end9. frightened I was at the

16、approach of the wolf how frightened I was when the wolf approached me10. Though scared to death Scared to death as he was参考范文欣赏1：Paragraph1: The car abruptly stopped in front of him. “Come on, get in the car quickly!” Paul yelled. Without any hestiation, Mac jumped off his bicycle and dashed to the

17、back door of the car. It was locked! Thinking of wolfs bloody mouth, Mac was nearly dead with fright. He could even imagine the wolfs teeth tearing into his flesh. Just at that moment, the door was unlocked by Becky and the frightened man dived in, shutting the door just before the wolf pounced on h

18、im. So angry was the wolf that it kept roaring and smacking the window violently. Luckily, the car was strong enough to protect them. After quite a while, realizing whatever he did was in vain and that it was impossible to catch Mac, the disappointed wolf left, disappearing into woods eventually. Ma

19、c sat in the car, his heart still fluttering with fear.Paragraph2: A few minutes later, the other two cyclists arrived. They were surprised to find Macs bicycle lying on the road, his tent bag torn and Mac just like a drowned mouse. “Mac, what on earth has happened?” “I was almost killed by a wolf!”

20、 When told about Macs thrilling experience, they couldnt help crying out, “What a narrow escape!” “Yes, without their timely help, Id have ended up in the wolfs stomach!” Macs friends were also grateful to Paul and Becky. Afraid that there might be more potential dangers ahead, Paul and Becky offere

21、d to drive them to Alaska. Would they enjoy the rest of the journey? Only Mac could tell.参考范文欣赏2：Paragraph1: The car abruptly stopped in front of him, Paul shouted at Mac “Get in the car quickly!” Without thinking twice, Mac pedaled towards the car as fast as he could. Five yards, four yards, three

22、yards.Mac could feel the thumping of his heart against his chest and sweat drench his clothes. Suddenly the bicycle was tripped and Mac threw himself down on the ground heavily. The wolf caught up and its murderous look and bloody mouth seemed to tell Macs fate. Scared to death as he was, Mac struggled to crawl up the threw his bicycle at the wolf with all his strength. Meanwhile, Paul tried honking the horn loudly to scare it away. Angry but painful, the wolf had to step back, growling and glaring at Mac angrily. Mac held his breath, daring not to make a movement. The air seemed to be