housework作文课件

1、简单句简单句l1. 主系表主系表 leg. I am a middle school student. He is fourteen.l2. 主谓主谓 leg. I ran fast.l3. 主谓宾主谓宾 leg. We will have dinner together.l4. 主谓宾宾补主谓宾宾补 leg. We keep our classroom clean and tidy.简单句简单句+状语短语状语短语l1. 时间状语时间状语 leg. I am a middle school student now. He is fourteen this year.l2. 地点状语地点状语 l

2、eg. We will have dinner together at home.简单句（主句）简单句（主句）+状语从句状语从句l1. 时间状语从句时间状语从句 leg. My parents helped me a lot when I was in trouble.l2. 条件状语从句条件状语从句 leg. If you have any questions, please write to me. l3. 原因状语从句原因状语从句 leg. I like English best because it is interesting and fun.主句主句+宾语从句宾语从句l我认为（我想

3、、我希望）我认为（我想、我希望）leg. I think he is helpful and great.leg. I believe you will love this city.leg. I hope I can be a volunteer some day. 使用定语从句使用定语从句l我喜欢可以跟着跳舞的音乐。我喜欢可以跟着跳舞的音乐。leg. I love music I can dance to.l父母是我最爱的人。父母是我最爱的人。leg. My parents are the people who I love most.简单句简单句+连词连词+简单句简单句l1. 并列连接并

4、列连接 leg. I am a middle school student and I study in No. 1 Middle School.l2. 转折连接转折连接leg. I work hard at English but my English is not good enough.l3. 因果连接因果连接leg. He is good at English so I often ask him for help. 总结写句子的方法总结写句子的方法l简单句简单句l简单句简单句+状语短语状语短语l简单句（主句）简单句（主句）+状语从句状语从句l主句主句+宾语从句宾语从句l使用定语从句使

5、用定语从句l简单句简单句+连词连词+简单句简单句五、结合话题，写作训练实例五、结合话题，写作训练实例09年北京市中考英语写作试题年北京市中考英语写作试题l课外生活话题课外生活话题家务方面家务方面l某英文报纸就家务劳动（某英文报纸就家务劳动（Housework）话）话题征文，请你投稿。题征文，请你投稿。l每个家庭都有许多家务，人人都应该学做每个家庭都有许多家务，人人都应该学做过一些。谈谈你经常帮父母做哪些家务，过一些。谈谈你经常帮父母做哪些家务，有什么体会，并打算在暑假为家里做什么。有什么体会，并打算在暑假为家里做什么。l提示词语：提示词语：every family, lots of house

6、work, learn to do, help, parents, be/feel proud of词汇的积累词汇的积累l本话题在教材中的相关单元（八上）本话题在教材中的相关单元（八上）单句训练单句训练l1. 我做家务。（简单句：主谓）我做家务。（简单句：主谓） I do chores. l2. 我经常做家务。（简单句：主谓我经常做家务。（简单句：主谓+频率状语频率状语 +地点状语）地点状语） I do housework at home every day.l3. 我一星期洗两次衣服。（简单句：主谓我一星期洗两次衣服。（简单句：主谓+频频 率状语）率状语） I do the laundry

7、once a week. 单句训练单句训练l4. 我每天叠被子，在我起床后。（主谓我每天叠被子，在我起床后。（主谓+时间时间 状语从句）状语从句） I make my own bed after I get up at 6:30 every morning.l5. 如果我做更多家务，我父母下班后将更轻如果我做更多家务，我父母下班后将更轻松。松。 （条件状语从句）（条件状语从句） If I do more chores, my parents will be relaxed at home after their hard work.l6. 我喜欢做家务因为它可以使我爸爸妈妈在我喜欢做家务因为它

8、可以使我爸爸妈妈在 家轻松。（原因状语从句）家轻松。（原因状语从句） I like / love / enjoy doing housework because it will make my parents relaxed at home. l7. 我希望分担父母的辛苦工作。（宾语从句）我希望分担父母的辛苦工作。（宾语从句） I hope I can share my parents hard work.单句训练单句训练l8. 对于我来说最简单的家务对于我来说最简单的家务-每天只花我每天只花我10分钟扫地，使我和父母都非常开心。分钟扫地，使我和父母都非常开心。 Spending 10 min

9、utes in sweeping the floor which is easy for me makes my parents and me very happy.单句训练单句训练写作环节写作环节l审题审题-中文小段中文小段-汉译英汉译英- 写简单句写简单句-连长句连长句-标亮点标亮点-文章升华文章升华-整体修改整体修改环节一：审题（定人称、定时态）环节一：审题（定人称、定时态）l人称：第一人称人称：第一人称l时态：必须使用一般现在时和将来时态：必须使用一般现在时和将来时；（可选择穿插使用过去式或现时；（可选择穿插使用过去式或现在完成时）在完成时）环节二：中文小文段（中文单句）环节二：中文小

10、文段（中文单句）l每个家庭都有许多家务。每个家庭都有许多家务。l人人应该学做一些家务。人人应该学做一些家务。l我经常帮父母扫地、洗碗。我经常帮父母扫地、洗碗。l我喜欢帮家长做家务，因为他们工作努我喜欢帮家长做家务，因为他们工作努力、辛苦，下班后非常累。力、辛苦，下班后非常累。l我希望他们能放松并且高兴。我希望他们能放松并且高兴。l暑假就要到了，我打算学做饭，我相信暑假就要到了，我打算学做饭，我相信父母会以我为自豪。父母会以我为自豪。环节三：汉译英环节三：汉译英l1. Every family has a lot of housework. l2. We should learn to do s

11、ome housework. l3. I often help my mom and dad do some. l4. I can sweep the floor and clean the dishes. l5. I love helping my parents with the housework.环节三：汉译英环节三：汉译英l6. They work hard every day and are very tired after work. l7. I hope they can relax and be happy at home. l8. The summer vacation i

12、s coming, and I am going to learn to cook. l9. I believe my parents will be proud of me.环节四：连长句环节四：连长句l3+4 lI often help my mom and dad do some such as sweeping the floor and cleaning the dishes.环节四：连长句环节四：连长句l5+6 lI love helping my parents with housework because they work hard every day and are ver

13、y tired after work.环节五：出亮点环节五：出亮点lEvery family has a lot of housework. In my opinion, teenagers are supposed to learn to do some housework. How about you? I often help my mom and dad do some such as sweeping the floor and cleaning the dishes. I love helping my parents with housework because they wor

14、k hard every day and are very tired after work. 环节五：出亮点环节五：出亮点lI hope they can relax and be happy at home. The summer vacation is coming, and I am going to learn to cook. I believe my parents will be proud of me.环节六：文章升华环节六：文章升华lEvery family has a lot of housework. In my opinion, teenagers are suppo

15、sed to learn to do some chores. How about you? lI often help my mom and dad do some such as sweeping the floor and cleaning the dishes. I love helping my parents with chores because they work hard every day and are very tired after work. 环节六：文章升华环节六：文章升华lAs for their daughter, I am eager to share th

16、eir hard work and want them to share my happiness. So I will try my best to do more chores to make them relaxed and happy at home. lThe summer vacation is coming, and I am going to learn to cook. I believe my parents with be proud of me. Lets do housework now! Being helpful to our parents is fantast

17、ic. 环节七：修改文章环节七：修改文章课堂练习课堂练习l在和谐社会里，人与人之间的互帮互助已构成我们生活中的重要组成部分。下周英国友好学校将来你校访问，你校的英语俱乐部将举行一次以“Helping Each Other Makes the World Wonderful”为主题的英语演讲比赛。假如李智要参加演讲比赛，请你以李智的名义用英语写一篇演讲稿。内容要点提示：1.帮助同学-友谊 2.帮助老人-幸福 3.帮助病人-快乐 4.帮助别人体会解析：解析：1.审题：本篇作文的题材为演讲稿，要求写一篇以“Helping Each Other Makes the World Wonderful”为主

18、题的演讲稿，语言要言简意赅，时态用一般现在时态。写作时，注意语言要准确，语篇上下连词的使用，使行文连贯。2.写作要点：（1）帮助同学：develop our friendship;(2)帮助老人：the meaning of pleasure;(3)帮助病人：happiness comes to us;(4)帮助别人体会：important in our life, get much, much better than receiving.3.重点短语及句型：help each other, helpwith,give a hand, as we know, in our life. 参考范文

19、参考范文Helping Each Other Makes the World Wonderful Hello, everyone. Im Li Zhi. Its nice to speak about help here. In our life we often help others and also get help from others. When we help our classmates with their study and other things, we can develop our friendship. If we give a hand to old peopl

20、e, we can understand the meaning of pleasure. As we know, patients need help most. When we help them, happiness comes to us. Helping others is very important in our life. I think we can get much when we help the people around us. As the saying goes, “Giving is much better than receiving.” Thank you

21、for your listening! 学生作文失分原因分析学生作文失分原因分析-内容内容： 1）偏题甚至离题如偏题甚至离题如: FriendMy friend My family lifeMy family v语法语法- 1）名词的单复数前后不统一）名词的单复数前后不统一 Exams are necessary because it helps improve ourselves in many ways. 2）时态、语态、主谓不一致）时态、语态、主谓不一致 Having family teachers are very common among students. 3）副词位置或选用不当）

22、副词位置或选用不当 We also can do something for our parents to show our thanks . 4)表达随意表达随意,中国式英语比比皆是中国式英语比比皆是 There are a large number of tourists visit Shanghai every year.5）语言表达繁琐或生硬）语言表达繁琐或生硬 Ill try my best to study hard. I want to get good marks. (建议用建议用in order to 连接连接) To buy things on line makes our

23、 life more convenient.(用用Shopping on line) Endless homework lets me have little time to do things I like.-Endless homework always keeps me too busy to do things I like.-I have little time to do things I like because of endless homework.开头开头 必须简明直接，亮出自己的必须简明直接，亮出自己的观点观点，如，如提倡提倡什么，什么，支持支持什么，什么，反对反对什么什

24、么, ,也可以借用也可以借用社会现象社会现象引出自己观点引出自己观点 开头的几种方法开头的几种方法直接法 As we all know, fast food is bad for peoples health.I think it is necessary for middle school students to wear school uniforms. 间接法Our junior school life is both busy and enjoyable.(归纳法归纳法)Its time for us to leave middle school. In the past few ye

25、ars, I have learned a lot.(触景生情法触景生情法) 主体段主体段 4/5部分两到三点论据(理由) 说服力 意思连贯性结构层次性句式多样性衔接词得当1/5部分生活感受感召力 简洁明了细腻真实紧抠主题结尾结尾呼应开头、避免重复句型提升主题展望号召建议 感悟 教学生列提纲教学生列提纲 Is a family teacher necessarydepend on a family teacher-cant listen to teachers attentively in class-work less efficientlywaste moneyreasonswaste t

26、ime - take a lot of time of ones weekend-do the same kind of excises -have little time to review other subjectsSuggestions-work hardimprove ways of learning instead of having a family teacherconclusionMy view on exams be fair to everyoneto know how we learn /if we learn well/what we are poor at-chan

27、ge or improve our ways of study (teaching)Show our abilities/ win more confidence (become more confident)Important part of school life/ learn a lot from mistakes through examsnecessityconclusionrealize the importance of examsbe not everything收集写作素材收集写作素材vA:了解一些新闻人物，如刘翔、姚明等了解一些新闻人物，如刘翔、姚明等 B:积累生活中让人难

28、忘、激动的事件积累生活中让人难忘、激动的事件 C:关注社会热点，如北京奥运、上海世博等关注社会热点，如北京奥运、上海世博等 D:了解时事新闻了解时事新闻 E: 体会学生佳作中有效素材及出彩语句体会学生佳作中有效素材及出彩语句 E: 利用好手头有效的教辅材料，英文报，选利用好手头有效的教辅材料，英文报，选取好的议论文体裁、题材多样的文章，选取取好的议论文体裁、题材多样的文章，选取精彩语段或语句进行背诵，积累好句，同时精彩语段或语句进行背诵，积累好句，同时拓展学生思路拓展学生思路 常用的衔接词常用的衔接词1 1、引出文章引出文章： nowadays , It is adj.to do 、I thi

29、nk, as we all know2、承接上文：承接上文：also/too、 of course、in fact、in other words 、besides、in addition、whats more、furthermore、more importantly3、转折：、转折： however , yet, though/although ,but, 4、举例举例：for example (跟句子）跟句子）,such as（短语）（短语）5、因果因果：therefore、That is to say.6、对比对比： while, on the other hand.7、总结：总结： fo

30、r these reasons, generally, in a word ，as the famous saying goes(如以下著名的谚语所说）如以下著名的谚语所说）介绍多种表达法介绍多种表达法 1)Reading is fun. 2)Reading is enjoyable. 3)Reading is a pleasure. 4)Reading makes us happy. 5)Reading brings /offers us a lot of fun. 6)It is fun to do some reading . 7)We can get great fun by read

31、ing.(from books)u9)Nothing can be more interesting and helpful than readingu8)Reading provides not only knowledge but also fun with us.u10)What other way can be more relaxing and enjoyable than reading!常用的谚语常用的谚语vA friend in need is a friend indeed. (写朋友）写朋友）vAll work and no play makes Jack a dull b

32、oy.（写如何享受生活）（写如何享受生活）vEarly to bed and early to rise makes a man healthy, wealthy and wise.（养成生活好习惯）（养成生活好习惯）vWhere there is a will, there is a way.（写志向（写志向）vIts never too late to learn.(学习的重要性学习的重要性)v可以用以下短语引出可以用以下短语引出: As the famous saying goes写作训练方法探讨写作训练方法探讨1、多读英文报英文报头版文章, 对其中的出彩句子进行中译中译英英等练习等练习

33、2、利用现有教辅材料中的有时代感、贴近学生生活的文章，多体会文章结构、思路、写作手法结构、思路、写作手法3、多读学生佳作，学会欣赏欣赏，然后仿写仿写4、重视写作训练过程、重视写作训练过程：说、选、整、写、改、写：说、选、整、写、改、写5、 重视作文批改批改及评讲（结构和小错并重）评讲（结构和小错并重）6、因人而异、分层要求因人而异、分层要求7、分阶段、分体裁训练、分阶段、分体裁训练8、鼓励学生搜集、整理写过的作文、鼓励学生搜集、整理写过的作文 谢谢！谢谢！家庭家庭生活作文题材生活作文题材第一类第一类:（以下题材应以（以下题材应以记叙记叙为主）为主）vMy mother(father)（写人）（

34、写人）vMy flat(neighbourhood)（写地方）（写地方）vMy favourite present(写物）写物）vA birthday party/ A trip to(写事情）写事情）第二类第二类:（以下题材应（以下题材应夹叙夹议，夹叙夹议，着重写自己着重写自己感受）感受）vMy family lifevMy thanks to my mother(my father)第三类（以下题材应以第三类（以下题材应以议论议论为主）为主）vHow to spend pocket moneyvThe importance of breakfastvThe advantages of do

35、ing housework学校学校生活作文题材生活作文题材v第一类第一类:vMy teacher(friend, classmate)vMy schoolv第二类第二类:vMy hobby/My My dream/My school lifev第三类第三类:vMy view on examsvThe advantages of after-school activitiesvHomework/Sports/ReadingvIs it necessary to wear school uniformsvMy good (bad) study habitsv第四类第四类:vA football match/An interesting lesson社会热点话题社会热点话题vThe Olympics and I (2008 and I )vBeing a lovely Shanghainese for the World Expo in 2010vMy view on online games vMobile phones at sch