上海中考英语作文宝典徐汇新王牌中考补习班精选讲义

1、简XQ 初中英语 新王牌 上海中考英语作文学习宝典【考点扫描】    书面表达是每年中考必考题型，是考查学生交际能力的一个重要组成部分。书面表达通常有三种形式：1、书信、日记、通知、留言、假条；2、看图作文；3、根据汉语提示文。    无论是那一种书面表达形式，考生所写的短文都要紧扣主题、文理通顺，要素完整，语言准确、得当、格式正确、无大、小写和拼写错误，标点符号正确，能达到交际目的。【名师解难】一. 训练方法1. 记。认真系统复习和背诵基础知识和优美的句子、句型。中国有句古话，叫“熟读唐诗三百首，不会吟诗也会作”。同样，要使自己具有

2、较强的写作能力，首先应该熟读和背诵一些句型和短文。许多同学写出来的语言根本不符合英语的语言习惯，相当一部分人有对照中文逐字翻译的不良习惯，不去理会中英文的差异。大量的背诵和阅读是提高写作能力的有效办法，同学们若有大量的现成语言积累在脑海里，自己写起文段来，就可以做到脱口而出，或是模仿、套用，甚至发挥。2.练。每练一篇书面表达题，都要真正学到一点东西，不可贪多而边学边忘。平时可以采用循序渐进、灵活多样的练习方式。从根据提示词写单句开始，到写单句，然后到写几句话，最后到写流利的文段。尽量尝试多种形式的写作，如短信、说明、通知、便条、明信片、看图写作、根据表格或记录写短文等。3.写。要进行实战写作。

3、要求自己在20分钟内写出100个词左右的短文，并且质量高、内容全、形式正确。这样形成习惯，考试时就能得心应手。  二. 应试策略1. 审题目：要切中题意。中考考试说明指出，书面表达要切中题意。怎样才能切中题意？就是要认真审题，看到考题后，先不要急于动笔，要仔细看清题目要求的内容。在自己的头脑中构思出一个框架或画面，确定短文的中心思想，不要匆匆下笔，看懂题意，根据图画、图表、提纲或短文提供的资料和信息来审题。审题要审格式、体裁、人物关系、故事情节、主体时态、活动时间、地点等。2. 圈要点：防止遗漏要点。要点是给分的一个重要因素。为了防止写作过程中遗漏要点，同学们要充分发挥自己的观察力，

4、把情景中给出的各个要点逐条列出。3. 列提纲：为写作做好准备。根据文章要点短文的中心思想将主要句型、关键词语记下，形成提纲。 4. 定基调：定出时态、人称、顺序、开头、结尾。5. 写全文：写短文时要做到以下六个方面：(1)避免使用汉语式英语，尽量使用自己熟悉的句型。几种句型可交替使用，以避免重复和呆板。(2)多用简单句型，记事、写人一般都不需要复杂的句型。可适当多使用陈述句、一般疑问句、祈使句和感叹句。不用或少用非谓语或情态动词等较复杂的句型。(3)注意语法、句法知识的灵活运用。1）语态、时态要准确无误。2）主谓语要一致，主语的人称和数要和谓语一致。3）注意人称代词的宾格形式。4）注意冠词用法

5、，例如： He is an honest student.中的an不能写成a。5）注意拼写、标点符号和大小写，例如：receive, believe, fourteen, forty, ninth, restaurant等。(4)描写人物时，要生动具体，例如：1）外表特征：tall, short, fat, thin, strong, weak, ordinary-looking 等。2）服饰颜色：red, yellow, blue, white, green, brown, black 等。3）内心境界：glad, happy, sad, excited, anxious, interest

6、ed 等。4）感情描写：love, like, hate, feel, laugh, cry, smile, shout 等。5）动作描写：come, go, get, have, take, bring, fetch 等。(5)上下文要连贯。上下文的连贯性也是评分的一条原则，因此同学们应把写好的句子，根据故事情节，事情发生的先后次序（时间或空间），使用一些表示并列、递进等过渡词进行加工整理，使文章连贯、自然、流畅。同学们应注意下面过渡的用法：1）表示并列关系的：and, as well as, or 2）表示转折关系的：but, yet, however 3）表示时间关系的：when, wh

7、ile, after, before, then, after that 4）表示因果关系的：so, therefore ,as a result 5）表示目的的：in order to, in order that , so as to, so that 6）表示列举的：for example , such as 7）表示总结性的：in general, in all, in a word, generally speaking (6)不会表达，另辟蹊径。中考作文给分是以要点和语言准确度而定，不以文采打分。造句越简单准确越好，造复合句容易出错，容易被扣分，阅卷场上有句话：“错误面前人人平等，

8、文采好不加分”。如遇到个别要点表达不出来或难以表达，可采用变通的办法，化难为易，化繁为简。总之，所造句子要正确、得体、符合英语表达习惯。(7)改病句：认真检查，改正错误。中考作文时，由于时间紧、内容多，同学们出错在所难免。因此，改错这一环节必不可少。中考作文评卷是根据要点、语言准确性、上下文的连贯性来给分，根据错误多少来扣分。因此，中考时花几分钟时间用来检查错误显得尤为重要。检查错误应从以下几个方面入手：1）格式是否有错。2）拼写有无错误。3）语言是否用错。4）时态、语态错误。5）标点错误。6）人称是否用错。三. 注意事项      

9、  书面表达要特别注意书写工整，卷面整洁。每年阅卷老师在十来天的时间里要看十几万考生的作文，工作量之大，时间之紧，可想而知。书写是否工整，卷面是否整洁与得分高低直接有关。四.评分标准 上海中考英语作文总分为20分，其中内容分8分、语言分8分、组织结构分4分。以下为上海中考英语作文官方评分标准：1.内容分8分。内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚完整。2.语言分8分。学生需用语规范，表达准确，无或少见语法错误，词汇拼写正确，句型使用恰当。首先是字数，少于60字的作文要酌情扣分。3.组织结构分4分，也就是我们常说的文采分。根据学生使用复杂句型/单词和谚语/俗语的情况来加分。五. 注意点：每少5个

10、词扣0.5分，拼写错误每处扣0.5分，标点，大小写错误每2处扣0.5分，内容和语言表达总分达15分及以上，得23分，内容和语言总分1314分，如确有好句型或表达用语，可酌情给12分，通篇句型，句式单一，词汇贫乏者，即使无语法错误，也不给分。 开头句+给的几个参考点+结尾句+亮点。先划档次：A档 1815分 B档 14.512分 C档 11.58分 D档 3.50分然后再仔细批阅看有否语法错误,最后给出总分。六. 常见问题： 1.内容空洞，没有清晰的思路，表达能力不强，总是用一些不合适的句子内容来表达，所以可能让老师觉得理由或是内容太假，当然也就得不了高分。 2.议论过多，描写不足。大多数情况下

11、，我们把议论当成的作文的重点，所以常常会跑题。 应当多描述提示的内容或加以想像，不能只翻译了事。 3.总是使用同一个主语写句子，重复太多。尽量使用不同的主语来表达，比如：I must learn English well. 就可以换成：It is important for me to learn English well. 4. 结构散漫，想哪儿写哪儿，乱七八糟。应该使用总分或总分总的结构。 5.都是简单句，缺少复合句。多用状语从句，宾语从句，定语从句及一些重要的句型，也 人教版新目标初二下英语同步辅导（一）初中二年级下un.初中二年级下Un.可以用用被动语态。 6. 连词的使用较少，句子之

12、间的连接很生硬。可以加入一些：比如: to my surprise (让我惊 讶的是), whats more（而且，还有）等，让上文与下文衔接更紧密。意思也能更流畅地表达。七 中考写作高频使用词组、句法1.作文开头的有用句As we all know, As it is known to all, Its known to all that Its common knowledge that Its commonly accepted that There is no denying that How time flies! In a blink of an eye, Time flies

13、like a speeding arrow, Time goes like the flowing water. 2、中间分层部分的有用结构: 分正反两面论述:On one hand, On the other hand 分两点：For one thing, For another, 分三点：Firstly, Secondly, Last but not least 3、结尾部分 All in all, In a word, In conclusion, In brief, In short, To put everything in a shell, 概括的说，简单的说 Last but n

14、ot least 组织语言 发表观点的 In my opinion, From my point of view, In my eyes, As far as I am concerned, Believe it or not, 表示递进的 In addition Furthermore More importantly Whats more Moreover 其他与“我”有关的写作材料 1、重点句型 Its+a. for sb.to do sth. So +a./ad. That such a +a.+n. that tooto do Not.until Thats why+句子 那是。的原

15、因 Its said that +句子 Theres no doubt that+句子 毫无疑问··· It goes without saying that+句子 毫无疑问··· Theres no need to do 没必要做··· Theres no point in doing 做某事毫无意义 2、 提建议 Had better do/not do How/what about doing Why not do/why dont+句子 I think you should do I sugges

16、t that you should do If I were you, I would do 我要是你的话，我会做 Its best to do 3、表示喜欢，感兴趣 Like/love/enjoy doing Be fond of/be keen on sth. Prefer to do A rather than do B Be interested in doing=show/take great interest in 4、努力做 Try to do/strive to do Make efforts to do=make every effort to do Try ones bes

17、t/do ones best to do Do what/everything sb can to do 5、打算做···/计划做··· Intend to do/plan to do Be going to do Decide to do Determine to do=be determine to do Make up ones mind to do 6、表示想/希望 Want to do=would like to do Hope to do Expect to do Wish to do Consider doing 7、其

18、他有用的短语 From now on/sooner or later/in the near future Have positive attitude towards/enrich my knowledge/learnby heart/ Meet with various kinds of difficulties /face difficulties bravely/overcome the difficulties Play an important role/part in. 8、其他有用的句式 For the reason above,/After all/As for me,/Fr

19、ankly speaking/Generally speaking/Believe it or not,/As a Grade Nine student,/The reasons are as follows, Peoples view onvary from person to person 4、增添亮点 使用复合句和谚语 谚语举例 I firmly believe that “A foreign language is a weapon in the struggle of life”. As a famous saying goes, “A man becomes learned by

20、asking questions.” Its common knowledge that the road to success is not always full of roses. An old saying goes, “Nothing is impossible to a willing heart.” 八2002-2016 上海中考英语作文题目集锦2002 My favorite thing(s) 我的心爱之物 2003 To be a lovely Shanghainese 做一个可爱的上海人 2004 Leave School 毕业时分 2005 Growing pains a

21、nd gains 成长的烦恼 2006 I have a dream 我有一个梦 2007 A Story about My Parent(s) 一个关于我父/母的故事 2008 Love Around Me 爱在我身边 2009 I want to do something for my school 我想为我的学校做点什么 2010 I'm proud of myself 我为我自己感到自豪 2011 My Favourite Thing（s） 我的心爱之物 2012 If you are Joe.your friend Betty is upset because she car

22、es too much about the result. 写给一个考试焦虑考生的一封信，并给予建议。2013 Write at least 60 words about the topic “How to protect myself”(以“如何保护自己”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文)2014 This time next year2015 I want to invent _2016 .九2009-2013年上海中考英语真题范文分享2009命题作文Write at least 60 words about the topic “I want to do something for my

23、 school”. (以“我想为学校做件事”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)(注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。)Use the following points as a reference. (以下内容仅供参考)l. What do you want to do for your school?2. Why do you want to do it?3. How are you going to do it?例文1：I want to make school clean. You may think it is very simple. Bu

24、t I don't think so. Our teacher said, "School is your home, you should keep it clean." But I have never done anything to make school clean. For example, I have never told my classmate to pick up rubbish after he threw it on the ground. I also threw the rubbish on the ground. So I want

25、to make school clean so that everyone can forgive me. During this summer holiday, I will go to school to make school clean. Of course, I will do it with my classmates. We will make school clean every weekends next term as well. Now, do you think it is simple?2 One possible versionI want to do someth

26、ing for my school I'm leaving my school. I want to plant a tree in my school garden. I have found there are too many buildings and few trees in our school yard, so I want to make my school much greener and more beautiful. If I plant a tree there, maybe more and more students will do as me. In th

27、eir spare time, the students can read under the trees.2010命题作文上海中考英语作文题:I'm proud of myself1、What kind of person are you?2、What makes you proud of yourself(Give an example/examples)3、Why are you proud of yourself?要求：至少60字范文：1I am a boy of less confidence. I always hate running. But as we all kno

28、w, the students of Grade nine have to take part in the sports exam. At that moment, I just wanted to give up. But my parents encouraged me: "impossible is nothing," "you could challenge yourself!" so with the encouragement of them, I tried my best to run and insisted on running.

29、When I got to the finishing line, I felt proud of myself, though I didn't get the good mark, I knew, I won. I created a miracle for myself and I was so proud of myself!2. I am proud of myselfThe wheel of life has rolled fast through the past fifteen years. By looking backwards, Im so proud of my

30、self because Ive grown into a strong-minded person. It was the first time for me to climb a high mountain alone. At first, I felt my body was filled with energy. As time went by, tiredness made my step slow down. For many times, the idea of giving up the journey appeared in my mind. But the saying “

31、Accumulated water becomes a river.” enabled me to move on. Though the power of one step seemed so weak, I insisted on climbing to the top. When I succeeded, I felt I had reached a new height in my life. How proud Im of being a strong-minded person. 3. I am proud of myselfI used to be a girl with few

32、 words. Last month I failed in the exam. I felt so depressed that I couldnt help crying. However, my mother told me, “The life is a tough road full of ups and downs. Everyone has to experience the low times.” Her encouraging words lifted me up. I made up my mind to prepare for the next exam. I alway

33、s listened to the teacher carefully and did my homework attentively. To my surprise, I achieved the best grade in the exam. At that time, I actually felt proud of myself. Im proud because I achieved success as well as courage. Now Im more active than before, and I always believe as long as you keep

34、your heart facing the sun, the world will always bring you new hopes.2011话题补全式作文 Writing (作文) 共18分Write at least 60 words about the topic “Im a member of _ “ (以“我是的一员”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格子”提示： 你可以作为任意兴趣小组或者社团的一员，或者作为家庭，班级，社区额的一员，写出你的经历，感受等。Use the following points as a reference Are you glad to b

35、e a member of ？What do you do in it?How do you feel as such a member? 例文：1Im a Member of the Singing and Dancing ClubHello, everyone! Im very glad to be a member of the Singing and Dancing Club. I have been in this club for 2 years. Im an actor in the club. I like singing and dancing very much. I si

36、ng and dance with my classmates on weekends. Though I am very tired, I like to sing and dance every day. It makes me feel very happy.2In this world, every family has a mother, a father, a daughter or a son. For plenty of people, families are very important .when you are very said, you can found one

37、or two persons to make you feel happiness, this is you family. I am very gold to become my family member, because I have a pretty good parent and a fairly younger brother. When I come back, I always feel freedom and relaxed. My mother is a kind cook; she has lots of experience in cooking, so my brot

38、her and I are healthy. As a daughter， I shouldn't make my parents worry .As a sister ,l should look after my brother .l want to be a great member of my family ,l would try my best to do what l should do in the family2012 书信类作文Writing (作文): (共20分) Write a letter in at least 60 words according to

39、the given situation(根据所给情景写一封不少于60词的信)Suppose you are Joe. Your friend Betty is upset about a coming exam for she cares too much about the result. What do you think? Try to offer her some advice.(假设你是Joe，你的好朋友Betty因为过于在意考试结果而感到焦虑。请给他写一封信，谈谈你的看法，并给她一些建议。)例文：1Knowing that you care too much about the r

40、esult, I am quite worried. Actually, it is no use being upset despite the importance of the result. There are some effective ways to calm down. Above all, keeping reminding yourself to stay in peace is the most helpful. Besides, it will help you to relax if you spare some time for recreational activ

41、ities like sports. Finally, talk to your parents and friends, who are always ready to comfort you. As is said by Steve Jobs, “the journey is the reward.” I am sure you will get through this situation.2.Dear Betty, How time flies! The exam is finally near at hand. Important as it is to you, you reall

42、y shouldn't care too much about the result and get yourself overly upset. Remember all the hard work you have put in! As long as you go with a calm mind and a positive attitude, I'm sure there will be nothing difficult for you and the exam will be smooth sailing. I suggest you talk more to p

43、arents and teachers about your anxiety and take better care of your health such as getting enough sleep and doing more exercise. Above all, no matter what the result, all you need to do is to act more and think less because action is worry's worst enemy. Keep faith and calm down, and you are sur

44、e to come out with flying colors. All the best of luck. Yours, Joe2013自由命题类作文 Writing(作文) (共20分)99Write at least 60 words about the topic “How to protect myself”(以“如何保护自己”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)提示：自我保护是青少年需要掌握的重要技能。请谈谈你在生活中怎样进行自我保护(可 结合生活中的某一个情景或具体事例，如：面对灾难如何自救，如何预防受骗或侵害，如何避免生活中的意外，等等)。 Phrases f

45、or reference(以下短语仅供参考)： sskfor help calm down in danger preventfrom (注意：文中不得出现具体人名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分)范文1As a student, I think it important for me to protect myself from dangerous situations. First of all, I must calm down as soon as possible, for panicking is of no help. Then, as is know to all, callin

46、g 119 immediately is the most effective way to save myself. As well as that, it is best to take the stairs instead of elevators. IN conclusion, with positive attitude and sufficient preparations, I will be able to protect myself from fires. 2：How to protect myself Everyone in my family was awaked by

47、 the unusual shaking. The first word that came to my mind was earthquake. When I looked outside of the window, I found everyone running here and there, and I could hear the shouting from the neighbors. Despite the fact that I was in danger, I told myself to calm down and think about the ways to prot

48、ect myself in an earthquake. I should get outside instead of hiding inside the building. I couldnt take the lift but walk downstairs. No sooner had I got outside than I asked the police for help. And I should always be aware of the unexpected drop overhead. Following these ways, I managed to prevent

49、 myself from being hurt, and survived the earthquake. I believe that these are useful ways to protect myself in an earthquake.3： A terrible fire in Jilin took many peoples lives recently and brought endless pains to a large number of families. So if I were caused in a fire, I would try my best to pr

50、otect myself. First, I would stay calm. A cool head can prevent me from taking rash actions and help to pick out a right solution the first time. Then, I would call 119 with my exact location and the situation then. Most importantly, I would cover myself with wet clothes and made my way to the secur

51、e channel instead of jumping out of the windows. With above tips, I will surely be able to protect myself from fires.十热点话题背诵篇目关于上海的变化 1.Great changes in Shanghai With the development of science and technology, great changes have taken place in Shanghai. Many years ago, there used to be narrow bridge

52、s, roads and houses in Shanghai .But now, we can find big bridges, wide roads as well as high buildings everywhere. People live in Shanghai used to live in small houses in narrow streets, but now most of them are living in big and comfortable apartments. Whats more, we can see grass, lakes and parks

53、 here and there. To our great joy , the 2010 World Expo will be held in Shanghai as well. As a shanghainese, I am pound of all these changes .We are sure Shanghai will have a bright future. 关于学校生活 2. Our school life Our school life is very colorful. They are many hobby groups in our school, such as

54、singing group, dancing group, science group and so on. We can learn a lot by joining these groups. For example, we hold a Singing Festival in May. We can enjoy ourselves by singing. Its so interesting that everyone likes it very much. We also have a sports meeting in October. It always makes us exci

55、ted. Sometimes we even have friendly matches with other schools. What an enjoyable school life we have! 关于网上购物 3.Shoppign on the internet Nowadays，shopping on the internet has become a new way of shopping. Indeed，it offers people a lot of advantages. So I prefer to do some shopping on the internet.

56、For one thing, it is convenient because the online shops are open 24 hours a day and we dont have to queue. For the other thing, it is often cheaper to buy goods on the Internet and it is also easy to find out what we want. Additionally，we can save a lot of time. Isnt it great to do shopping on the

57、Internet? 关于学习 4.My way of Learning English As we all know, English is one of the most important language in the world. So its important for us to learn it .Then how can we it well？In my opinion, the best way to learn English is to do more listening, speaking, reading and writing. Whats more, we should practice these skills every day. Of course, interest is the best teacher. The more we learn, the more interesting and helpful well find English. As the saying goes,”Practice makes perfect. 关于节日 5.The Spring Festival As we all know, the Spring Festival is