大学英语写作3

1、v 2007年v Nowadays, the internet has become part of peoples life, and millions of young people have made friends online.v Write on ANSWER SHEET TWO a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:v Is It Wise to Make Friends Online?v Nowadays, it has been a fashion to make friends online, and

2、 more and more teenagers, college students and even many adults will spend a lot of time chatting with people on the Internet. But I dont think it is wise to make friends online. v Firstly, most of people will not reveal their real identity on the Internet, which will not enable you to make true fri

3、ends. Just imagine a young lady you are talking with may be an old man, and Im sure we will feel very bad when we are exposed to the truth.v Besides, the friends online can bring bad effect to people, especially for teenagers. The unhealthy stuff will both physically and psychologically influence yo

4、ung people and, in a certain degree, can lead an unproper way to their whole life. v And last, making friends online can do bad to the relationship between you and you family and friends in real life. Being addicted to the Internet makes you ignore the reality. You will be angry about your parents p

5、ersuading and after a long time, maybe you will find you have lost the ability of how to communicate with others properly. v In a word, it is not wise to make friends online. I hope everyone can focus on the reality instead of wasting too much time making friends on the Internet. v 范文四（12分）v 内容：观点明确

6、。v 结构：清晰。关联词准确，各部分字数比例合理。v 语言：比较流畅，有一定说服力，错误占10%。细节问题，不影响理解。整句错误较少。v With the Internet becoming an indispensable part of modern peoples life, making friends online enjoys its great popularity, especially among young people. However, is it wise to make friends online, as many parents and teachers are

7、 worrying about? As far as I am concerned, I strongly oppose being addicted to making friends online.v Firstly, too much attention to online friends distracts your concerns to the true friends and families in the real world. If we look around, we often find a lot of young people staying online and c

8、hatting with online friends all day long. By the same time the communication between them and the friends around them are becoming less and less. Therefore, they feel lonelier in real life and spend more time on Internet.v Besides, online friends are often disguised. A large number of cases have pro

9、ved that many criminals make use of Internet to cheat of money or love. Even if they are not cheaters, they tend to be totally different persons when you get in actual contact with them. Theres always a gap between the real world and the imaginary one.v Nevertheless , its unwise to make friends onli

10、ne. Those who are indulging in Internet should cast your eyesight to the friendship and kinship in the real life. What you should do is to seek solution, but not to escape. v *pay attention to; attach importance tov 范文五（14分）v 1、内容 ：观点明确，论据充分，表达到位。首尾呼应，说服力很强，有实证、有例证。v 2、结构：结构清楚，关联词准确，各部分比例合理。v 3、语言：自

11、然流畅，语气恰当，用词准确，几乎没有错误IV Types of Writingv 2013: Most of us, as students, are careful with our money in daily life: we collect all kinds of coupons; we look for group-buy deals if we eat out or travel; we dont buy clothes unless in a sale. However, some people think that all this may not make us smart

12、 consumers. What is your opinion?v 2012: The dragon boat festival is one of the important national festivals in China. The Dragon Boat Festivalv 2011：Should Private Car Owners be Taxed for Pollution?v 2010： Should College Students Hire Cleaners?v 2009：Will Tourism Bring Harm to the Environment? v 20

13、08: The Benefits of Volunteeringv 2007: Is It Wise to Make Friends Online? v 2006：some students think that saving money is a good habit while the rest believe that using tomorrows money is better. What do you think? v 2005: My Idea of a University Arts Festivalv 2004: Will Phones Kill Letter Writing

14、?v 2003: The Importance of Keeping a Good Moodv 2002: The Best Way to Stay Healthyv 2001: Travel Broadens the Mindv 2000: The Importance of Extracurricular Activitiesv 1999: A Major Advantage/Disadvantage of Advertising on Television 第一类：正反对比利弊类v 2011：Should Private Car Owners be Taxed for Pollution

15、 v 2010: Should College Students Hire Cleaners?v 2009: Will Tourism Bring Harm to the Environment?v 2007: Is It Wise to Make Friends Online? v 1999: A Major Advantage/Disadvantage of Advertising on Television v 第一句：Background information 背景介绍v “领域/社会在某个时间发生了巨大的变化，但与此同时，关于主题却引起了一场热烈的讨论。”v The society

16、 has changes.v The society has had amazing changes during the last years.v The last years have witnessed amazing/ remarkable/ incredible changes in the society.v A debate was triggered as to v A debate/ A discussion/ An argument/ A contentious issue was triggered/ stimulated/ inspired as to v eg. Th

17、e last years have witnessed amazing changes in the society, while in the meantime, a contentious issue was triggered as to whether private car owners should be taxed for pollution/ whether college students should hire cleaners/ whether tourism brings harm to the environment. 第二句：General talk of the

18、topic 引出主题v “一些人认为对我们有好处，而另一些人持相反观点。”v Some indicate can benefit us, while others take the opposite stand/view。v 认为：maintain/ claim/ believe/ argue/ hold/ insist/ assume/ take/ hold the view/ opinion v 第三句：Thesis 我的观点 v “我同意前者/后者。“v Personally, I prefer the former/ latter. v I, personally, prefer th

19、e former/ latter.v 模板句型：The last year has witnessed amazing changes in society/领域（某一个领域），while in the meantime, a contentious issue was triggered as to 主题（文章标题）. Some indicate can benefit us, while others take the opposite stand. I, personally, prefer the former/ latter.Example:v 2011年：Should Privat

20、e Car Owners be Taxed for Pollution?v The last year has witnessed amazing changes in society，while in the meantime, a contentious issue was triggered as to whether private car owners should be taxed for pollution. Some indicate tax on cars can benefit us, while others take the opposite stand. I, per

21、sonally, prefer the former. 47个词，还好。第二类：正反对比选择类v 2006：Some students think that saving money is a good habit while the rest believe that using tomorrows money is better. What do you think? v 2004: Will phones kill letter writing.v 第一段v 第一句：背景介绍 v “领域/社会在某个时间发生了巨大的变化，但与此同时，关于主题却引起了一场热烈的讨论。” v 模板句：The

22、last year has witnessed amazing changes in society/领域，while in the meantime, a contentious issue was triggered as to 主题. 第二句：引出主题（两方观点） v “一些人认为A是最好的选择，然而其他人持相反的观点。”v Some take A as the premier choice, while others hold the opposite opinionv 第三句：我的观点v 我同意前者/后者。v Personally, I prefer the former/ latt

23、er.v I, personally, prefer the former/ latter. v 模板句型：v The last year has witnessed amazing changes in society/ 领域，while in the meantime, a contentious issue was triggered as to 主题. Some take A as the premier choice, while others hold the opposite opinion. I, personally, prefer the former/ latter.v

24、2006年：Some students think that saving money is a good habit while the rest believe that using tomorrows money is better. What do you think? v The last year has witnessed amazing changes in society，while meanwhile, a debate was triggered as to whether students should save money or use tomorrows money

25、. Some take saving money/using tomorrows moneyas the premier choice, while others hold the opposite opinion. I, personally, prefer the former. 第三类：给定观点类v 2008: The benefits for volunteeringv 2003: The importance of keeping a good mood v 2001: Travel broadens the mindv 2000: The importance of extracu

26、rricular activities第一段 第一句：背景介绍 v “主题 近年在学生/ 人们中间非常普及流行。” v 主题 has found its popularity among students/ people during the last years. v 第二句： 引出主题v “我非常同意你的观点。” v I agree with it very much. v As for me, I can not agree more with it. （比较级的否定表示最高级）写作中的比较级: v 1.“说比做容易”v “Easier said than done” more A th

27、an B、 A rather than B、 prefer A to Bv 2. 无比较级 v . 极限形容词 Perfect 完美v . “A比B年长” v A is senior to B. / B is junior to A v . “A比B好” v A is superior to B. / B is inferior to A. v 3. 比较级的否定式=最高级v I can not agree more with it.v I can not thank you more. 第三句： 我的观点（重申观点）v “主题毫无疑问已经成为我们的生活/成功的必不可少部分/因素。”v 主题s

28、hould undoubtedly be an indispensable part of our life / factor of our success. v “重要”important: significant/ vital/ essential/ crucial v eg. 2003: The importance of keeping a good moodv Keeping a good mood should undoubtedly be an indispensible part/ factor of our life/ success.v 第一段模板句型：主题has foun

29、d its popularity among students/ people during the last years. As for me, I can not agree more with it. 主题should undoubtedly be an indispensable part/ factor of our life/ success.v 2001年：Travel broadens the mindv Travelling has found its popularity among students during the last years. As for me, I

30、can not agree more with it. It should undoubtedly be an indispensable part/ factor of our life. v 2000年：The importance of extracurricular activitiesv Extracurricular activity has found its popularity among students during the last years. As for me, I can not agree more with it. It should undoubtedly

31、 be an indispensable part/ factor of our life.v 2008年：The benefits for volunteeringv Volunteering has found its popularity among students during the last years. As for me, I can not agree more with it. It should undoubtedly be an indispensable part/ factor of our life.v 一、原因论证v 二、举例论证v 三、细节论证v 四、其它角

32、度论证一、原因论证v 引言：v 找到这个现象/ 问题的原因并不是一件容易的事。v Finding the reasons for this problem/ phenomenon is difficult.v It is difficult to find the reasons for this problem/ phenomenon.（动宾结构作主语用形式主语句）v It is no easy task to identify the reasons for this problem/ phenomenonv 1. 如何写句子v 主谓宾。v 介词结构作主语，用到装。v 当动宾结构作主语时，

33、用形式主语句。 v 2. 形式主语句（万能拓展）v It is common knowledge that v It is as clear as writing on the wall thatv It is beyond the shadow of doubt thatv It is a fact thatv eg. Internet, undoubtedly, is becoming increasingly important. v Along with the development of the society, it is a fact that Internet, undoub

34、tedly, is becoming more and more important.v 3. 连词的使用v 首先：first and foremost ; first of all; to begin withv 其次：What is more, in addition, furthermore, additionallyv 最后：Last but not leastv Needless to say v Moreover v Most importantly v 4. 表示因果的词汇v because, because of, since, now that, owing to, due

35、to v cause, result in, lead to, therefore, thus, consequently, as a result, as a consequencev The reasons why.can be traced to.v The causes for.are as follows.万能理由（二v 事件产生的原因v (1) 危害类事情产生的原因v 2. 好处/ 坏处v 事件产生的原因v (1) 危害类事情产生的原因v . 人与经济v 供：supply 求：demandv 供大于求 Sth. is in a short of demand.v 供小于求 Sth.

36、 is in a short of supply. v . 人与科技v 科技： double-edged sword 双刃剑v science and technology is a double-edged sword.v . 人与健康v 疾病：diseasev . 人与其它v 是人与社会不和谐关系在某领域里面的一个小的缩影。v It is a miniature of the disharmonious relation between the society and human being in the specific aspect of 领域v 是某领域不断调整的过程中必然会出现的问

37、题。v It is not without its problem under the constant adjustment of 领域v (2) 流行类事件产生的原因v 生活节奏加快：quickening rhythm of modern lifev 全球化的趋势：the trend of globalizationv 2. 好处/ 坏处v (1) 好处v 增长知识：enrich ones knowledgev 开阔视野：enlarge/broaden ones horizonv 我们不仅能够收到教育，而且能够得到快乐。v Sth. educate(s) as well as entert

38、ain(s) us v (2) 坏处（几乎没有）v “过犹不及/ 欲速则不达”v “Haste makes waste”v eg. “Haste makes waste”. Often do we hear such proverb. That is to say spending too much time online to make friends will be harmful to us.v 二、举例论证v 引言：v 1. 我认为我们人类历史上充满着许多与之相关的例子，下面这个最具说服力。v Never do I remain suspicious of the view that

39、our human history has been fraught with an overwhelming majority of corresponding examples, with the following being the v foremost.v 2. 在我所经历的所有事情当中，下面这个印象最深。v Among all the touching facts that I have ever experienced, the most impressive one is as follows. v 3. 除了下面的例子，我想不到更好的了。v I can think of no

40、 better example other than the following one. v eg. 2009 Will Tourism Bring Harm to the Environment?v 例子一：黄金周的时候，众多游客蜂拥而至去爬黄山、在天安门广场徘徊，活在长城脚下拍照。所有这些游客都对环境造成了很大的压力；v I can think of no better example other than the following one. During Golden Week, a host of tourists are climbing up Yellow Mountain,

41、wandering around Tiananmen Square and taking their picture in front if the Great Wall. v 例子二：他们造成了要有更多财力被用在这些景点，他们造成了堆积如山的垃圾，在珍贵的植被上践踏，把小动物吓跑。v All these people put a large strain on the environment; they require more resources to be directed to the area, produce mountains of garbage, trample on pre

42、cious plants and scare away animals.v 三、细节论证v 1. 数据统计法v “根据统计，希望工程收到捐款上亿，它能够让更多的学生上学”v According to a statistics, the money collected from Hope Project has reached as much as one hundred million, which can help many students finish their education.v hundredv thousand v ten thousandv twenty thousandv

43、 hundred thousandv million v ten million v hundred millionv billion v 模板句型：“According to a statistics, the money/number of 主题 has reached as much as数字，非限定性定从。”v eg. 2009 Will Tourism Bring Harm to the Environment?v According to a statistics, the number of visitors has reached as much as ten million,

44、 which bring huge profits to the GDP.v * 修辞：v . 明喻（simile） 暗喻（metaphor）v busy beev deep ocean v pure angelv black coffee v as busy as beev as deep as ocean v as pure as angelv as black as coffee v The symbolic meaning is as deep as ocean. v . 提喻v grey-hair “老人”v support the grey-hair “赡养老人” v . 并列修辞

45、v I came, I saw, I conquered.v government of the people, for the people, by the people 民有， 民享， 民治v _ and / or _ 用and / or连接两个词性相同，词义相近的单词。v a small towna small and peaceful townv a responsible teachera responsible and warm-hearted teacherv University education can enrich our social experience.v Univ

46、ersity education and instruction can enrich our social experience.v When you see someone in difficulty, dont hesitate to give your love to him.v When you see someone in difficulty or in trouble, dont hesitate to give your love and support to him.v eg. If we look around, we often find a lot of young

47、people staying online all day long.v If we look around, we often find a lot of young people staying online and chatting with online friends all day long.v (4). 矛盾修辞v tearful smilev radiant smilev “根据最近的调查，的数量增加/减少了”v “According to one of the latest surveys, the number of _has increased/ decreased by

48、 _% from 时间 to 时间.”v eg. “According to one of the latest surveys, the number of tourists who travel around the country has increased by nearly 60% from 2000 to 2010.v 2. 名言谚语v 引言：v As the saying goes/ Just as the proverb says, v As a remote oriental philosopher has said, v 常用谚语v Every coin has two s

49、ides.v Every sword has two edges.v Health is better than wealth.v Man proposes, God disposes.v An apple a day keeps a doctor away. v 四、其它角度论证v practice perfect v will wayv love hope/happyv * A 导致 B；v A lead to/ contribute to Bv * B 来源于 A；v B come from/ derive from/ result from Av * 介词的使用v from: 来源、拒

50、绝（远离）v keep/ prevent/ persuade v on: 在之上；开始，继续v to: 目的 in order to v in: 在之内 v at: 在点上v * A增加，B也增加；v The more the more v eg: The more you practice, the better you will be.v * 非A导致非B。v you will never without v eg: You will never be perfect without practice.v 六、第三段：结论段（conclusion）v 一、重申论点（Restate of t

51、he thesis）v 注意同意替换v Never do I remain suspicious of that(第一段)v All in all, I believe/ argue/ hold the view that (第三段）v 二、建议措施 / 展望未来（suggestions/ future）v 1. 展望未来（future and suggestions）v 我认为在我们生活中发挥着重要的作用，而且我们很难决定这个东西是好是坏，但是有一点是肯定的，改变了我们的娱乐、休闲和生活方式。v Never do I remain suspicious of the view that has played a vital role in our daily life, and it is hard for us to determine whether it is blessing