2020-2021年中考英语书面表达压轴试题分类汇编及答案(word)1

1、2020-2021年中考英语书面表达压轴试题分类汇编及答案（word） 1一、中考英语书面表达（含答案详细解析）1 .近日，某中学 “iPa进课堂”的消息引起了学生和家长们的讨论。你们学校的 EnglishNewsletter正在以iPads, coming into the classrooms为题举行征文活动，请根据右侧表格提 示的内容，用英语写一篇征文。学生们认为1 .不需要背沉重的书包去上学2 .很新鲜，学习更感兴趣3 .家长们认为1 .影响孩子视力2 .增加家庭负担你的观点1.2.注意：1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；2）所写内容必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，观点可作适当发挥；3

2、）词数：90词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。iPads, coming into the classroomsCan you use an iPad in the classroom? The answer is yes! Recently, students and parents are arguing about the new teaching method.【答案】iPads, coming into the classroomsCan you use an iPad in the classroom? The answer is yes! R

3、ecently, students and parents are arguing about the new teaching method.The students don t think they have to carry heavy bags any more. Itver cool to have lessons oiPads. It s very interesting to study like that. They believe that they will learn more and better.However,parents think using ipads fo

4、r too long will influence children s eyesight. And some pfamilies can t afford to buy iPads.I think in some ways iPads are good for us. We can search for information on the Internet at any time. It s easy for us to chat with our classmates and teachers about our lessons.【解析】根据题目要求，需要书写一篇议论文，探讨iPad进课

5、堂这一现象，以及人们对此的不同观点和态度。文章需要使用一般现在时态，第三人称。结合观点式议论文的段落格 式，首先在第一段提出问题现象，第二段表达支持这种行为做法的原因和好处，第三段描述反对人的观点及原因，最后一段表达自己的观点。注意多使用固定短语，固定句型，使文章增色。点睛：对立观点式第一段：提出现象。第二段：Some people are in favor of the idea of doing X.They point out the fact that 支持 X 的第个原因。 They also argue that 支持 X 的另个原因。第三段：However, other peop

6、le stand on a different ground.They consider it harmful to do X.They firmly point out that 反X 的第个理由。 An example can give the details of this argument: 一个例子。第四段：There is some truth in both arguments.But I think the advantages of X overweigh the disadvantages.In addition to the abovementioned negative

7、 effects it might bring about, X also may X 的有一个 坏处。2 书面表达假如你是九年级学生李华，你的美国笔友Billy 发来邮件询问你平时锻炼的情况。请你根据以下信息，给Billy 回封电子邮件，并建议他每周都要花些时间锻炼身体。写作要点：1 .你最近正忙于为即将到来的体育测试（ physical test）做准备。2. 介绍你平时锻炼的情况：（ 1 ）每天锻炼的时间：不到一个半小时。（ 2）偶尔不锻炼的原因：作业多，没时间。（ 3）擅长的体育运动：球类运动。3. 谈谈锻炼给你带来了哪些好处。写作要求：1. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。2. 可适当加

8、入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。3. 字迹工整，语言精练，表达准确，条理清晰。4. 至少 80 词。Dear Billy,It s my great pleasure to receive you-rmeail.Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Billy,It s my great pleasure to receive yourmail. You wanted to know about my usual exercise. I ll tellit to you.I am busy preparing for the coming physical test.

9、 So I take exercise less than an hour every day.Sometimes I don t do exercise, because I have so much homework that I have no time to do it. I do well in playing balls.Doing exercise can help me keep a strong body, and it is good for my health. Besides, I think it can make me relaxed by doing exerci

10、se. So I advise you to spend more time doing exercise every week.Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】这是一篇给材料作文，给Billy回封电子邮件，介绍自己平时的锻炼情况，并建议他每周都要花些时间锻炼身体。【详解】结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：I ambusy ；- because I have Doing exercise can help , So I -advise you to

11、等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关 系。【点睛】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头表示很高兴收到Billy的来信，接下来介绍我平时的锻炼情况，最后指出锻炼给我带来的好处以及我建议Billy要多锻炼。此处be busy doing sth,prepare for, do well in, be good for, advise sb to do sth 等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。3.亚洲文明对话大会近期在北京召开，你的印度朋友Danny收看了大会相关报道，对华夏文明产生了浓厚的兴趣，来信向你了解中国文化。假设你是李华，请根据以下内容提示用英语

12、写一封回信给 Danny。要点内容历史文化历史悠久，文化各异；传统节日，多彩习俗（举一例）文明行为相互尊重，以礼相待；互学共鉴，共同成长（或自拟）身边文明校园文明（自拟一点）注意：1.词数90词左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。2.回复必须包括所以要点，可是当发挥，是短文连贯，通顺。3.文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。参考词汇：civilized文明的Dear Danny,I m glad to receivyeour letter. Since you are interested in civilization （文明）of China, I wouldlike to sha

13、re something with you.I hope you can come to China someday to experience the ancient culture of China. Look forward to hear from you soon.All the best,Li Hua【答案】Dear Danny,I m glad to receive your letter. Since you are interested in civilization （文明） of China, I would like to share something with yo

14、u.Chinese civilization is one of the oldest and longest civilizations in the world. China is a country of 56 nationalities. Different nations have difficult cultures. In my country, we have many traditional festivals, such as, the Spring Festival, Mid-Autumn Festival and the Dragon Boat Festival . T

15、hey are also called “ three major Chinese holidays ” ien tChheincau.stHoemrse oafr eating Zongzi and racing dragon-boat on the Dragon Boat Festival.China is a nation of etiquette （礼仪）. Chinese people can respect, trust and help each other.We all learn and grow together. Everyone in my school should

16、protect the whole public environment. Climbing the trees, picking the flowers and throwing garbage at random are not allowed there.I hope you can come to China someday to experience the ancient culture of China. Look forward to hearing from you soon.All the best.Li Hua 【解析】【分析】本文要求给你的印度朋友Danny 写一篇关于

17、华夏文明的回信。【详解】文章需要介绍下中国的文化。表格中列举了三个要点，写作时注意不要漏写。平时注意多多积累句型、短语。细心检查避免疏漏。以图表展示的作文要以“读 ”为主，首先要认真读懂图表中的要求，对所给信息加以分析、推断、筛选、概括，去粗取精；在写作时目的要 明确，要注意内容的准确性和严肃性。【点睛】写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系，上下文之间可以适当使用连接词。如but, so, then等。可以适当使用高分句子。本篇文章写的好的句子有：Chinese civilization is one of theoldest and longest civilizations in the wo

18、rld 中华文明是世界上最古老、最悠久的文明之一。 China is a nation of etiquette （礼仪），中国是一个礼仪之邦。4 书面表达初中即将毕业，同学们都感到压力很大。就此问题，老师要求你在英语课上做一个以“ LessPressure Makes Life Better 为题的报告，谈谈你的做法，与同学分享经验。请根据以下要求 ”写一份发言稿，内容包括：1. 普遍存在的压力：同学关系；考试2. 我过去的压力：父母的期望；学习3. 我成功缓解压力的办法及效果；要求：1. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；2. 词数80 左右，短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。Less Pres

19、sure Makes Better LifeHello, everyone!Pressure is a serious problem in today s world. Most students in our class are under too muchpressure. 【答案】Hello, my classmates!Pressure is a serious problem in todays world. Most students in our class are under too much pressure. Some students cant get on well

20、with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams too much.I was always under pressure, too. My parents wanted me to be the top student in my class. They always sent me to all kinds of after-classes on weekends.I had a talk with my parents and told them I had done my best. Finally, the

21、y understood me. In this way, I feel less stressed out so that I can concentrate more on my studies.Less pressure makes better life. Thank you.【解析】【详解】这篇作文要求我们针对现在同学们普遍感到压力大这种现象，以Less Pressure Makes LifeBetter 为题，谈谈自己的看法，和同学们分享一下自己的经验。审题可知，文章中应主要包括以下几个内容：首先介绍同学们普遍感到压力这种现象；然后讲述自己过去曾面对的压力；最后介绍自己如何成功缓解

22、压力。题目中只给出了大概的提纲，其中具体的内容应由学生们自己发挥想象力来补充，并用正确的英语表达出来。学生们可以从自身的经历和体会出发，选取生活中常见的场景进行介绍。文章应使用一般现在时和一般过去时，注意根据表达的需要使用正确的时态，并变化谓语动词的正确形式。句式结构可以简单句结构为主，这样的句式表达简洁、明了，易于掌握。但为提升作文档次，应穿插使用并列句和复合句，或使用一些复杂结构，如非谓语动词、被动语态等。语句之间使用恰当的连接成 分，使文意连贯。【点睛】这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，谈了自己对同学们普遍感到压力大这种现象的看法，并分享了自己的经历。短文有如下几个优点：首先短文

23、内容完整，包含了题目中要求的所有信息，且层次清晰，文章分成了四段，每一段的中心话题也很明确。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，文章主要使用了一般现在时和一般过去时，谓语动词形式准确。句式结构以简单句为主，叙述清晰、简洁。也使用了并列句和复合句的结构，如宾语从句、状语从句等。短文中使用了丰富的句式，如Some students cant get on well withtheir classmates, while others may worry about their exams too much. 、 My parents wanted me to be the top student i

24、n my class 、 In this way, I feel less stressed out so that I can concentrate more on my studies 等等。5 书面表达假如你是华,你的英国笔友对中国文化很感兴趣,想到中国旅行感受中国文化。你想请他来你的家乡一安徽一游，请你根据以下提示用英文给他写一封电子邮件。1 位置: 中国东部, 安做省南部:2 .气候:春暖花开,秋季凉爽3 .景点:山和古村落:4 .文化:茶、黄梅戏5 .建议提示词:黄梅戏Huangmei Opera注意:1.词数80-1006 .可适当增加细节,使行文连贯。7 .文中不得出现自己真

25、实的校名和人名8 .开头和结展己给出,不计入总词数Dear DaveI know that you are interested in Chinese culture and Im glad you are planning a trip to China.Why not come to Anhui, my home town, to have fun?【答案】Dear Dave，I know you are interested in Chinese culture and I m glad you are planning a trip to China. Whynot come to A

26、nhui, my hometown, to have some fun.Anhui Province lies in the east of China. The best time to come here is in autumn, because it really cool and you can just take some light coats. There are many famous places to see. For example, Mt. Huangshan, where you will see wonderful plants and special rocks

27、. Besides, Anhui is also famous for ancient villages such as Xidi, Hongcun and so on. As a fan of Chinese culture,don t forget to try green tea in Anhui which smells good and tastes better. Whatand watch Huangmei Opera. It s easy to understand and won t let you down! Welcome to Anhui! I m looking fo

28、rward to seeing you here!Yours, Li Hua 【解析】 【详解】 这篇作文要求我们以李华的身份给自己的笔友Dave 写信，邀请他来你的家乡安徽一游，题目中列出了文章的提纲，审题可知，短文应从以下几个内容叙述：首先介绍家乡的位 置；然后介绍来这里最好的时候；接下来是介绍家乡的景点和文化，并给出建议。短文应 使用一般现在时，注意谓语动词的正确形式。写作时应合理安排几个内容，分清主次，并 注意上下文的连贯。另外，英语的表达习惯和汉语是不同的，因此写作时不能按照汉语思 维逐词翻译，应从句子的整体结构出发，写完整的句子。如可以使用简单句结构，易于掌 握，不容易出错。但为提

29、升文章档次，也应穿插一些并列句结构或复合句，以及使用一些 复杂结构，如非谓语动词、被动语态等。 【点睛】 这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求邀请Dave来自己的家乡旅游，并介绍了家乡的景点和文化。短文有如下几个特点：首先文章内容完整，包含了题目中要求的所有内容，并对细节进行补充和修饰，使内容更加充实、丰富。短文先对 Dave发出邀请，然后具 体介绍了家乡的位置、景点、文化等，并提出了建议。全文叙述清晰，层次清楚，主次分 明。第二，短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，用词准确，句式结构完整，符合 英语的表达习惯。短文以一般现在时来叙述，注意了谓语动词第三人称单数形式的变化。 句式结构以

30、简单句为主，也使用了并列句、宾语从句、状语从句等复合句，还有一些好的句型，如The best time to come here is in autumn, because it s really cool and you can just takesome light coats 、 Besides, Anhui is also famous for ancient villages such as Xidi, Hongcun and so on. 、 What s more, come and watch Huangmei Opera. It s easy to understand an

31、d wondown!、I m looking forward to seeing you here等。s more,t let you6 环境保护人人有责，如果我们每一个人都能珍爱美丽地球保护自然资源，相信我们的家园会越来越美好。某英文网站正在开展以“Going Green为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈我们面临的主要环境问题是什么，为改善环境我们能做什么，以及你的期望。提示词语：pollution, protect, save, recycle, take action提示问题： What are the main environmental problems w

32、e have? What can we do in ourdaily life? What s your wish?Now there are many environmentalproblems.【答案】例文Now there are many environmental problems. Such as air pollution, water pollution and so on.I believe that there are many things we can do in our daily life, we can save energy by go to school by

33、 bike or on foot. We can use less water by turning off the tap while we brush our teeth, and taking shorter showers. When we see litter on the ground, we must pick it up and put it into different bins.I hope everyone can take action. Although each one of us may only do a little, together we can make

34、 a big difference. Let s work together to make a better place to live.【解析】【详解】题干解读：该题目属于说明文写作，写作时要把我们面临的主要环境问题是什么，为改善环境我们能做什么，以及你的期望全部包括。例文点评：例文采用的是三段式；用第一人称来叙述为改善环境我们能做什么；时态采用的是一般现在时，描述建议时，描写具体，条理清晰。高分亮点：短语： save energy； brush our teeth ； put it into different bins ； take action ； make a bigdiffere

35、nce 。句型： When we see litter on the ground, we must pick it up and put it into different binsAlthough each one of us may only do a little, together we can make a big difference 。【点睛】首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达，例如save energy； brush our teeth ； put it into different bins ； takeacti

36、on; make a big difference。以及状语从句等；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词 数是否符合要求等。7 .李华的英国笔友 Jessica来信说，她想了解中国的传统节日中秋节。假如你是李华，请你给Jessica写一封信，介绍该节日。内容须包含以下所有要点：1. 中秋节的时间；2. 中秋节的传统习俗及庆祝方式：全家人一起吃饭, 赏月 , 吃月饼等

37、；3. 我最期待的活动。要求： 1.80-100 词开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数）；2.语句通顺, 意思连贯, 书写工整。Dear Jessica,Im glad to hear from you. Now let me introduce the Mid-Autumn Festival toyou.Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Jessica,Im glad to hear from you. Now let me introduce the Mid-Autumn Festival to you. The MidAutumn Festival falls on the 1

38、5 th of the 8th lunar month. It s a big day for us Chinese people. All the family members get together to celebrate the festival. In the evening, we usually have a big dinner. And then we go outside and enjoy the full moon. The moon that night looks the brightest.With the beautiful moon up in the sk

39、y, we sit together to eat mooncakes, and share our stories.For me, the best part is to enjoy the moon and eat mooncakes. Mooncakes taste very delicious.They look like the moon, big and round.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【详解】本篇写作是以书信的方式向笔友介绍中国的传统节日中秋节，要用一般现在时来写。全文 可分两大部分，第一部分写中秋节的时间、传统习俗及庆祝方式，第二部分写我最期待的活动。亮点说明：这是

40、一篇优秀的作文，很好地完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态，主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如get together ， enjoy the fullmoon ， share our stories 等。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，句子通顺，行文连贯。8 假如你是李华，请你根据以下提示用英语写一封保护大象的倡议书。提示：陆地上最大的哺乳动物，可以活到80 岁。目前数量在减少，因为：1 ）人们砍伐森林，大象渐渐失去家园；2）人们捕杀大象，获取象牙。3）应如何保护它们（不少于三条）。要求： 1）恰当运用比较级和最高级；2） 80 词左右。倡议书的结尾已给出，不计入总词数

41、。参考词汇：哺乳动物mammal; 象牙 ivoryDear classmatesI believe everyones contribution （贡献）can make a big difference.Yours,Lihua【答案】Dear classmates,Elephants are the largest mammals on the land and they can live up to be eighty years. But now the number of the elephants is decreasing because of the following rea

42、sons. Firstly, people cut down trees in the forest, so elephants are losing their homes. Secondly, people also kill elephants for their ivory.As a result, we need to do something to help them. First, we should plant more trees to build the homes for elephants. Second, we can put up post on the stree

43、t to tell people that it is against the law to kill elephants. Or we can also hold some activities in some public places to spread the idea of protecting the elephants.I believe everyones contribution （贡献）can make a big difference.Yours, Lihua 【解析】【详解】本文是一封倡议书,倡议大家保护大象。文章共分为三个方面的内容，首先描述大象想在所处的现状，然后说

44、明出现这种状况的原因，最后为了保护的大象我们应该如何去做。时态主要为一般现在时。提出倡议时可以使用We can/ We should/ Let sW d be示建议的句子。写作时注意不要使用太复杂的句型，以免出现语法错误，为使句子具有连贯性，可以适当使用连词。本篇文章内容完整，符合材料要求，Elephants are the largestmammals 及 First, we should plant more trees 也使用到了比较级和最高级；Firstly, .Secondly,等词的使用使文章具有层次性，条理清晰。并且一些连词的使用，比如 so, or, but 等也使文章具有连贯

45、性，是一篇不错的文章。9.书面表达。76.某英语教育网站正在开展主题为How can aetenager have a successfullife?的讨论，为此你采访了一些同学（结果见下表）。请据上经用英语写一篇短文参与讨 论，并阐述你的观点。同学主要观点你的观点努力学习尊重父母服务社会（至少两条）计划未来注意：(1)短文必须包括表中所有内容，可适当增加细节；(2)你的观点至少两条；(3)词数：80100;(4)短文首句仅供选择使用，不计入总词数。参考词汇：尊重 respect短文首句：I have recently done a survey about how a teenager ca

46、n have a successful life.【答案】I have recently done a survey about how a teenager can have a successful life.Most students believe it s necessary to study hard. After all, study plays a key role in their life.They also agree they should respect their parents, who look after them every day. Besides, th

47、ey re ready to serve the society and in their opinion it s really meaningful. What sthink each teenager is supposed to make a good plan for future.From my point of view, we need to make some good friends so that we can learn from each other.Also, we must be active and exercise more to keep healthy b

48、ecause it s important to a successfulife.【解析】试题分析：英语教育网站开展主题为How can a teenager have a successful life?的讨论,“采访了一些同学参与讨论，写出他们的观点及自己的观点。因为是叙述同学的现在的观点， 所以句子应该用一般现在时，叙述同学的观点用第三人称，叙述自己的观点用第一人称。注意不要遗漏要点，所写的句子应该符合英语语法，不能是汉语式的句子，要使用一些高 级词汇及句式。写作亮点：短文用了一些短语和句式，如： do a survey about sth关于某事做调查；respect their pa

49、rents,尊敬他们白勺父母;look after照顾；make a good plan for sth为某事做一个好的 计划；make some good friends交一些好朋友；keep healthy保持健康。用了宾语从句，如： Most students believe it s necessary to study hard. What s more, they think each teenager is supposed to make a good plan for future.用了 because 弓|导的原因状语从句， 如： Also, we must be acti