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1、学习目标学习目标1、通过回顾所学知识，能够描述人物特征，书面介绍成通过回顾所学知识，能够描述人物特征，书面介绍成功人士。功人士。2 2、掌握掌握书面表达写作技巧书面表达写作技巧第1页/共18页 Pen Name: Mo Yan Real Name: Guan Moye (管谟业管谟业) Job: A Chinese writer Place of Birth: Gaomi, Shandong Date of Birth: February 17,1955Personal information第2页/共18页Experience and achievementsWhenWhat he did1

2、955197619812012he was borndropped out of schooljoined the armyhis first short story was publishedwon the Nobel Prize in literaturewhen he was 12第3页/共18页Fryderyk Chopin was a famous pianist and music writer. Today many piano music lovers still listen to his famous works such as Minute Waltz. He was b

3、orn on March 1, 1810 in a small village in Poland. Everyone in Chopins family was a musician. His father played the violin, and his mother and sister played the piano. When he was 6 years old, he started to take piano lessons. Soon he played even better than his teacher. At that time, he also starte

4、d to write music, and began to give concerts when he was only seven! In 1825, when he was 15 years old, people said he was the best pianist in Warsaw. They called him the poet of the piano because his music could touch the hearts of his listeners. In his last years, he was very weak but kept on writ

5、ing music until he died in 1849. The world lost a musical talent, but his spirit continues to live in his works today. Beginning BodyEnding第4页/共18页 Describe a personhis familyDate / place of birthappearanceJobName:Beginning: personal informationhobbyFryderyk Chopin was a famous pianist and music wri

6、ter. Today many piano music lovers still listen to his famous works such as Minute Waltz. He was born on March 1, 1810 in a small village in Poland. Everyone in Chopins family was a musician. His father played the violin, and his mother and sister played the piano.Fryderyk Chopina famous pianist and

7、 music writerHe was born on March 1, 1810 in a small village in Poland.Everyone in Chopins family was a musician .第5页/共18页When he was 6 years old, he started to take piano lessons. Soon he played even better than his teacher. At that time, he also started to write music, and began to give concerts w

8、hen he was only seven! In 1825, when he was 15 years old, people said he was the best pianist in Warsaw. They called him the poet of the piano because his music could touch the hearts of his listeners. Body第6页/共18页 whenwhat happenedWhen he was 6 years oldwhen he was only sevenIn 1825In 1849he starte

9、d to take piano lessons. he also started to write music, and began to give concertspeople said he was the best pianist in Warsaw. They called him the poet of the piano. Experience and achievements以时间为序一般过去时He died.第7页/共18页The world lost a musical talent, but his spirit continues to live in his works

10、 today. Ending: 评价，启示，祝愿，鼓励第8页/共18页BeginningBodyEnding name, job, birth,familyappearance (外貌)hobby opinion评价，启示，祝愿，鼓励Experience and achievementsPersonal information第9页/共18页Lets have a try！WritingWriting3a.Read the information about John Lennon.A famous pop musician.Then write an article about him.要求

11、： 1. 词数 80-100。 2. 字体工整,语句要通顺连贯 。第10页/共18页Useful sentences:hobbyHe likes / loves very much.He is good atAt the age of., heHis favorite. is He is interested in. Experience and achievementsWhen he was.years old, heIn 2008 / ., he When he was a child, heHis hobby is .人物介绍的时态：一般现在时和一般过去时第11页/共18页 John L

12、ennon,a famous musician,always loved music.He was born in 1941 in Liverpool in the UK. When he was a child ,he lived with his aunt and uncle. He began to play music at the age of 12 and later he started first music group,The Quarrymen. In 1960 ,The Quarrymen became The Beatles,one of the most famous

13、 groups in music history.Two years later,the groups first song,Love Me Do,got to number 17 on the music charts in the UK.Finally,The Beatles broke up in 1970.On December 8,1980,John Lennon died in New York.Not long after his death, his famous song,Imagine,entered the UK charts and got to number 1. H

14、e enjoyed great success in music history. His success depends on his talents and hard work.第12页/共18页Lets have a try！WritingWritingMake notes about a famous or important person you know.Then write a short article about him/her.要求： 1. 词数 80。 2. 字体工整,语句要通顺连贯 。第13页/共18页写作技巧点拨写作技巧点拨1 1、确定话题：、确定话题： 3 3、 细

15、读要求细读要求, ,确定要点确定要点人物介绍人物介绍一般现在时、一般过去时一般现在时、一般过去时1.写前：仔细 题2 2、确定时态、确定时态: : 2.2.写中：写中： 布局谋篇布局谋篇, , 提纲提纲巧用巧用 结词结词, ,衔接衔接自然自然 首尾首尾，使结构完整使结构完整选好词句，选好词句， 化文章化文章3. 写后：认真检查加加美美第14页/共18页 The person I like 第15页/共18页Thank You第16页/共18页 中考作文评分标准中考作文评分标准一档（1215分）要点齐全，能写出要求中的所有或大部分要点；语篇结构完整；语言结构丰富；句子通顺，行文连贯，表达清楚；语言基本无误（不超过3处）；书写工整；词数符合要求。二档（911分）要点基本齐全，能写出要求