上海中考英语作文

1、上海中考英语作文学习资料一.评分标准 上海中考英语作文总分为20分，其中内容分8分、语言分8分、组织结构分4分。以下为上海中考英语作文官方评分标准：1.内容分8分。内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚完整。2.语言分8分。学生需用语规范，表达准确，无或少见语法错误，词汇拼写正确，句型使用恰当。首先是字数，少于60字的作文要酌情扣分。3.组织结构分4分，也就是我们常说的文采分。根据学生使用复杂句型/单词和谚语/俗语的情况来加分。二. 注意点：每少5个词扣0.5分，拼写错误每处扣0.5分，标点，大小写错误每2处扣0.5分 3内容和语言表达总分达15分及以上，得23分 内容和语言总分1314分，如确有好句型

2、或表达用语，可酌情给12分 通篇句型，句式单一，词汇贫乏者，即使无语法错误，也不给分 开头句+给的几个参考点+结尾句+亮点。先划档次：A档 1815分 B档 14.512分 C档 11.58分 D档 3.50分然后再仔细批阅看有否语法错误,最后给出总分。三.学生常出现的问题： 1. 内容空洞，没有清晰的思路，表达能力不强，总是用一些不合适的句子内容来表达，所以可能让老师觉得理由或是内容太假，当然也就得不了高分。 2. 议论过多，描写不足。大多数情况下，我们把议论当成的作文的重点，所以常常会跑题。 应当多描述提示的内容或加以想像，不能只翻译了事。 3. 总是使用同一个主语写句子，重复太多。尽量使

3、用不同的主语来表达，比如：I must learn English well. 就可以换成：It is important for me to learn English well. 4. 结构散漫，想哪儿写哪儿，乱七八糟。应该使用总分或总分总的结构。 5. 都是简单句，缺少复合句。多用状语从句，宾语从句，定语从句及一些重要的句型，也 人教版新目标初二下英语同步辅导（一）初中二年级下un.初中二年级下Un.可以用用被动语态。 6. 连词的使用较少，句子之间的连接很生硬。可以加入一些：比如: to my surprise (让我惊 讶的是), whats more（而且，还有）等，让上文与下文衔

4、接更紧密。意思也能更流畅地表达。四 中考写作高频使用词组、句法1.作文开头的有用句As we all know, As it is known to all, Its known to all that Its common knowledge that Its commonly accepted that There is no denying that How time flies! In a blink of an eye, Time flies like a speeding arrow, Time goes like the flowing water. 2、中间分层部分的有用结构:

5、 分正反两面论述:On one hand, On the other hand 分两点：For one thing, For another, 分三点：Firstly, Secondly, Last but not least 3、结尾部分 All in all, In a word, In conclusion, In brief, In short, To put everything in a shell, 概括的说，简单的说 Last but not least 组织语言 发表观点的 In my opinion, From my point of view, In my eyes, A

6、s far as I am concerned, Believe it or not, 表示递进的 In addition Furthermore More importantly Whats more Moreover 其他与“我”有关的写作材料 1、重点句型 Its+a. for sb.to do sth. So +a./ad. That such a +a.+n. that tooto do Not.until Thats why+句子 那是。的原因 Its said that +句子 Theres no doubt that+句子 毫无疑问 It goes without saying

7、 that+句子 毫无疑问 Theres no need to do 没必要做 Theres no point in doing 做某事毫无意义 2、 提建议 Had better do/not do How/what about doing Why not do/why dont+句子 I think you should do I suggest that you should do If I were you, I would do 我要是你的话，我会做 Its best to do 3、表示喜欢，感兴趣 Like/love/enjoy doing Be fond of/be keen

8、on sth. Prefer to do A rather than do B Be interested in doing=show/take great interest in 4、努力做 Try to do/strive to do Make efforts to do=make every effort to do Try ones best/do ones best to do Do what/everything sb can to do 5、打算做/计划做 Intend to do/plan to do Be going to do Decide to do Determine

9、to do=be determine to do Make up ones mind to do 6、表示想/希望 Want to do=would like to do Hope to do Expect to do Wish to do Consider doing 7、其他有用的短语 From now on/sooner or later/in the near future Have positive attitude towards/enrich my knowledge/learnby heart/ Meet with various kinds of difficulties /

10、face difficulties bravely/overcome the difficulties Play an important role/part in. 8、其他有用的句式 For the reason above,/After all/As for me,/Frankly speaking/Generally speaking/Believe it or not,/As a Grade Nine student,/The reasons are as follows, Peoples view onvary from person to person 4、增添亮点 使用复合句和

11、谚语 谚语举例 I firmly believe that “A foreign language is a weapon in the struggle of life”. As a famous saying goes, “A man becomes learned by asking questions.” Its common knowledge that the road to success is not always full of roses. An old saying goes, “Nothing is impossible to a willing heart.” 五20

12、02-2013 上海中考英语作文题目集锦2002 My favorite thing(s) 我的心爱之物 2003 To be a lovely Shanghainese 做一个可爱的上海人 2004 Leave School 毕业时分 2005 Growing pains and gains 成长的烦恼 2006 I have a dream 我有一个梦 2007 A Story about My Parent(s) 一个关于我父/母的故事 2008 Love Around Me 爱在我身边 2009 I want to do something for my school 我想为我的学校做

13、点什么 2010 Im proud of myself 我为我自己感到自豪 2011 My Favourite Thing（s） 我的心爱之物 2012 If you are Joe.your friend Betty is upset because she cares too much about the result. 写给一个考试焦虑考生的一封信，并给予建议。2013 Write at least 60 words about the topic “How to protect myself”(以“如何保护自己”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文)六近5年上海中考英语真题范文分享2009

14、命题作文Write at least 60 words about the topic “I want to do something for my school”. (以“我想为学校做件事”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)(注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。)Use the following points as a reference. (以下内容仅供参考)l What do you want to do for your school?2 Why do you want to do it?3 How are you going to do

15、it?例文1：I want to make school clean. You may think it is very simple. But I dont think so. Our teacher said, School is your home, you should keep it clean. But I have never done anything to make school clean. For example, I have never told my classmate to pick up rubbish after he threw it on the grou

16、nd. I also threw the rubbish on the ground. So I want to make school clean so that everyone can forgive me. During this summer holiday, I will go to school to make school clean. Of course, I will do it with my classmates. We will make school clean every weekends next term as well. Now, do you think

17、it is simple?2 One possible versionI want to do something for my school Im leaving my school. I want to plant a tree in my school garden. I have found there are too many buildings and few trees in our school yard, so I want to make my school much greener and more beautiful. If I plant a tree there,

18、maybe more and more students will do as me. In their spare time, the students can read under the trees.2010命题作文上海中考英语作文题:Im proud of myself1、What kind of person are you?2、What makes you proud of yourself(Give an example/examples)3、Why are you proud of yourself?要求：至少60字范文：1I am a boy of less confiden

19、ce. I always hate running. But as we all know, the students of Grade nine have to take part in the sports exam. At that moment, I just wanted to give up. But my parents encouraged me: impossible is nothing, you could challenge yourself! so with the encouragement of them, I tried my best to run and i

20、nsisted on running. When I got to the finishing line, I felt proud of myself, though I didnt get the good mark, I knew, I won. I created a miracle for myself and I was so proud of myself!2. I am proud of myselfThe wheel of life has rolled fast through the past fifteen years. By looking backwards, Im

21、 so proud of myself because Ive grown into a strong-minded person. It was the first time for me to climb a high mountain alone. At first, I felt my body was filled with energy. As time went by, tiredness made my step slow down. For many times, the idea of giving up the journey appeared in my mind. B

22、ut the saying “Accumulated water becomes a river.” enabled me to move on. Though the power of one step seemed so weak, I insisted on climbing to the top. When I succeeded, I felt I had reached a new height in my life. How proud Im of being a strong-minded person. 3. I am proud of myselfI used to be

23、a girl with few words. Last month I failed in the exam. I felt so depressed that I couldnt help crying. However, my mother told me, “The life is a tough road full of ups and downs. Everyone has to experience the low times.” Her encouraging words lifted me up. I made up my mind to prepare for the nex

24、t exam. I always listened to the teacher carefully and did my homework attentively. To my surprise, I achieved the best grade in the exam. At that time, I actually felt proud of myself. Im proud because I achieved success as well as courage. Now Im more active than before, and I always believe as lo

25、ng as you keep your heart facing the sun, the world will always bring you new hopes.2011话题补全式作文 Writing (作文) 共18分Write at least 60 words about the topic “Im a member of “ (以“我是的一员”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格子”提示： 你可以作为任意兴趣小组或者社团的一员，或者作为家庭，班级，社区额的一员，写出你的经历，感受等。Use the following points as a reference Are

26、you glad to be a member of ？What do you do in it?How do you feel as such a member? 例文：1Im a Member of the Singing and Dancing ClubHello, everyone! Im very glad to be a member of the Singing and Dancing Club. I have been in this club for 2 years. Im an actor in the club. I like singing and dancing ve

27、ry much. I sing and dance with my classmates on weekends. Though I am very tired, I like to sing and dance every day. It makes me feel very happy.2In this world, every family has a mother, a father, a daughter or a son. For plenty of people, families are very important .when you are very said, you c

28、an found one or two persons to make you feel happiness, this is you family. I am very gold to become my family member, because I have a pretty good parent and a fairly younger brother. When I come back, I always feel freedom and relaxed. My mother is a kind cook; she has lots of experience in cookin

29、g, so my brother and I are healthy. As a daughter， I shouldnt make my parents worry .As a sister ,l should look after my brother .l want to be a great member of my family ,l would try my best to do what l should do in the family2012书信类作文Writing (作文): (共20分) Write a letter in at least 60 words accord

30、ing to the given situation(根据所给情景写一封不少于60词的信)Suppose you are Joe. Your friend Betty is upset about a coming exam for she cares too much about the result. What do you think? Try to offer her some advice.(假设你是Joe，你的好朋友Betty因为过于在意考试结果而感到焦虑。请给他写一封信，谈谈你的看法，并给她一些建议。)例文：1Knowing that you care too much abou

31、t the result, I am quite worried. Actually, it is no use being upset despite the importance of the result. There are some effective ways to calm down. Above all, keeping reminding yourself to stay in peace is the most helpful. Besides, it will help you to relax if you spare some time for recreationa

32、l activities like sports. Finally, talk to your parents and friends, who are always ready to comfort you. As is said by Steve Jobs, “the journey is the reward.” I am sure you will get through this situation.2.Dear Betty, How time flies! The exam is finally near at hand. Important as it is to you, yo

33、u really shouldnt care too much about the result and get yourself overly upset. Remember all the hard work you have put in! As long as you go with a calm mind and a positive attitude, Im sure there will be nothing difficult for you and the exam will be smooth sailing. I suggest you talk more to pare

34、nts and teachers about your anxiety and take better care of your health such as getting enough sleep and doing more exercise. Above all, no matter what the result, all you need to do is to act more and think less because action is worrys worst enemy. Keep faith and calm down, and you are sure to com

35、e out with flying colors. All the best of luck. Yours, Joe2013自由命题类作文 Writing(作文) (共20分)99Write at least 60 words about the topic “How to protect myself”(以“如何保护自己”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)提示：自我保护是青少年需要掌握的重要技能。请谈谈你在生活中怎样进行自我保护(可 结合生活中的某一个情景或具体事例，如：面对灾难如何自救，如何预防受骗或侵 害，如何避免生活中的意外，等等)。 Phrases for refe

36、rence(以下短语仅供参考)： Askfor help calm down in danger preventfrom (注意：文中不得出现具体人名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分)范文1As a student, I think it important for me to protect myself from dangerous situations. First of all, I must calm down as soon as possible, for panicking is of no help. Then, as is know to all, calling 119 i

37、mmediately is the most effective way to save myself. As well as that, it is best to take the stairs instead of elevators. IN conclusion, with positive attitude and sufficient preparations, I will be able to protect myself from fires. 2：How to protect myself Everyone in my family was awaked by the un

38、usual shaking. The first word that came to my mind was earthquake. When I looked outside of the window, I found everyone running here and there, and I could hear the shouting from the neighbors. Despite the fact that I was in danger, I told myself to calm down and think about the ways to protect mys

39、elf in an earthquake. I should get outside instead of hiding inside the building. I couldnt take the lift but walk downstairs. No sooner had I got outside than I asked the police for help. And I should always be aware of the unexpected drop overhead. Following these ways, I managed to prevent myself

40、 from being hurt, and survived the earthquake. I believe that these are useful ways to protect myself in an earthquake.3： A terrible fire in Jilin took many peoples lives recently and brought endless pains to a large number of families. So if I were caused in a fire, I would try my best to protect m

41、yself. First, I would stay calm. A cool head can prevent me from taking rash actions and help to pick out a right solution the first time. Then, I would call 119 with my exact location and the situation then. Most importantly, I would cover myself with wet clothes and made my way to the secure chann

42、el instead of jumping out of the windows. With above tips, I will surely be able to protect myself from fires.七热点话题背诵篇目关于上海的变化 1.Great changes in Shanghai With the development of science and technology, great changes have taken place in Shanghai. Many years ago, there used to be narrow bridges, road

43、s and houses in Shanghai .But now, we can find big bridges, wide roads as well as high buildings everywhere. People live in Shanghai used to live in small houses in narrow streets, but now most of them are living in big and comfortable apartments. Whats more, we can see grass, lakes and parks here a

44、nd there. To our great joy , the 2010 World Expo will be held in Shanghai as well. As a shanghainese, I am pound of all these changes .We are sure Shanghai will have a bright future. 关于学校生活 2. Our school life Our school life is very colorful. They are many hobby groups in our school, such as singing

45、 group, dancing group, science group and so on. We can learn a lot by joining these groups. For example, we hold a Singing Festival in May. We can enjoy ourselves by singing. Its so interesting that everyone likes it very much. We also have a sports meeting in October. It always makes us excited. So

46、metimes we even have friendly matches with other schools. What an enjoyable school life we have! 关于网上购物 3.Shoppign on the internet Nowadays，shopping on the internet has become a new way of shopping. Indeed，it offers people a lot of advantages. So I prefer to do some shopping on the internet. For one

47、 thing, it is convenient because the online shops are open 24 hours a day and we dont have to queue. For the other thing, it is often cheaper to buy goods on the Internet and it is also easy to find out what we want. Additionally，we can save a lot of time. Isnt it great to do shopping on the Interne

48、t? 关于学习4.My way of Learning English As we all know, English is one of the most important language in the world. So its important for us to learn it .Then how can we it well？In my opinion, the best way to learn English is to do more listening, speaking, reading and writing. Whats more, we should prac

49、tice these skills every day. Of course, interest is the best teacher. The more we learn, the more interesting and helpful well find English. As the saying goes,”Practice makes perfect. 关于节日 5.The Spring Festival As we all know, the Spring Festival is the most important festival in China. On the New

50、Years Eve, families always get together and have a big dinner. Many people like to set off firecracker. People also eat dumping- a kind of traditional Chinese food. Especially, children like the festival very much because they can nit only have delicious food, wear new clothes but also receive red p

51、ackets from their parents or their elders. It is said that the money in the red packets will bring children good luck. Chinese people have a good time during the festival. 关于保护环境 6.Environment around us The environment is very important to us. We need the fresh air, the clean water and so on. There

52、used to be many trees around us, the air was fresh and the river was clean. But now, people cut down too many trees and the environment around us becomes worse and worse. So as students, we should try to protect our environment. First of all, we should plant as many trees as possible. Second, we sho

53、uld ride bikes or walk to school instead of taking buses or cars. Third, we shouldntt use plastic bags. In a word, if everyone knows the importance of environment protection, well have a green world. 关于电脑7.My view on computer With the development of science and technology, computers are playing more

54、 and more important roles in our daily life. They can do most of the things people can do. By using computers, we can gain huge amount of knowledge and information, especially, computers have made the communication with our friends and relatives more convenient and easier. But some students are so k

55、een on playing games online that they even dont want to go to school. I dont think it is right. In my opinion, we should make good use ot computers. 关于出国8. Is it helping to study abroad In recent years, more and more students in China go abroad for their further studies. Most Chinese people think it

56、 is helpful to story abroad. But I dont think so. For one TOEFL or GRE, and this will surely waste us plenty of money and time. In addition, if we study home, we can stay with our family and friends, and we can study in a more friendly environment In a word, I prefer to study home. 关注时事 H1N1流感 范文01.

57、 根据中文大意和英文提示词语，写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的短文.所给英文提示词语供选用.请不要写出你的校名和姓名. 世界上已有许多国家发现了新型H1N1流感病毒(H1N1 flu virus)病例.据了解，人感染该病毒后会出现咳嗽、发烧、疲劳等症状.为了加强同学们的预防意识，(21世纪中学生英语报正在举办征文活动，请你给该报投稿，描述感染该病毒的症状并谈一谈为了预防该病毒我们该怎么做，最后表达我们能战胜病毒的信心.提示词：cough, have a fever, feel tired, prevent, wash, exercise, sleep, believe Nowadays, many countries in the world have found cases of the new H1N1 flu virus. Its said that people with H1N1 flu virus will cough, have a fever and feel tired. To prevent the virus, we can do many things. Firstly, wed better