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1、 一、出题内容一、出题内容六级考试的作文内容为社会、文化或日常生活的一般常识，不涉及知识面过广、专业性太强的内容。具体说来可以分为两个方面：（1）关于大学生的话题（2）关于社会问题的话题六级考试作文的出题方式有：命题作文，看图画或图表作文，根据所给文章（英文或中文）写出文章摘要或大意，给出关键词作文等。根据具体特点六级考试作文可以分为以下五个类型：对立观点型、解决问题型、谚语警句型、图表图画型、应用写作型。 六级考试作文要求在30分钟内写出一篇不少于150词的文章。 平均一行的合理字数为8 - 10个单词,六级写作最合理字数为180左右。成绩分为六个档次：13-15分、10-12分、7-9分、

2、4-6分、1-3分和0分。13-15分切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺、连贯，基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。10-12分切题。表达思想清楚，文字较连贯，但有少量语言错误。7-9分基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。4-6分基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。1-3分条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。0分未作答，或只有几个孤立的词，或作文与主题毫不相关。30分钟的合理安排： 5mins(审题和构思)+20mins(正文)+5mins(检查)5mins(审题和构思):1.审清题型题意 ：

3、a. 分清题型b. 揣摩题意 2.精心选材构思 ：a. 联想法 b. 提问法 3.整理文章框架 完整的句子，也可以使用单词或短语 。 outline ：一个有逻辑性的、有组织的对作文的概述。 Directions: For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled On the Importance of a Name. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below1. 有人说名字（或名称）很重要2. 也有

4、人觉得名字（或名称）无关紧要3. 我认为 There is no denying the fact that it is a controversial topic whether names are important or not. Some hold the positive view. They claim that a good name, or a name that can be easily remembered, can bring one a lot more opportunities than others. Some Chinese may also believe

5、that a name designed according to the traditional theory of five elements can bring good luck. Others, however, hold the opposite view. They argue that a name is nothing but a code to distinguish one from another. A person “good” name may not be as successful as the name indicates. In the same way,

6、a person who has a common or casually given name can also achieve tremendous success. Personally, I believe that both sides have something right, so we should not go to extremes. On the one hand, we have to admit that a well designed name can help a person to some extent. On the other hand, we shoul

7、d not exaggerate the effect of a name on a persons fate. Anyway, a persons success mainly depends on his hard work and desirable personalities. clear 字迹清楚，段落明朗 complete 内容完整，紧扣提纲 correct 先保正确，再求闪光 coherent 先总后分，连词用上 concise 语言简练，论据得当 一、长短句一、长短句二、主题句二、主题句三、顺序词三、顺序词四、多用短语四、多用短语五、多实词，少虚词五、多实词，少虚词六、多变句式

8、六、多变句式 Nice：generous, humorous, interesting, smart, gentle, warm-hearted, hospital 走出房间，general的词是：walk out of the room小偷走出房间应该说：slip out of the room小姐走出房间应该说：sail out of the room小孩走出房间应该说：dance out of the room老人走出房间应该说：stagger out of the room 高中水平I will never marry you. 高考水平Never will i marry you.

9、四级水平六级水平GRE水平You are the last man I am willing to marry.If you were the last man in the world, I would definitely remain single. Under no circumstances will I marry you. 大神水平 烈女水平If you were to marry me, I would go to the temple. If the sun rose in the west, I would marry you. I will marry anybody b

10、ut you. I can suffer anything but marrying you. If you were to marry me, I would jump to the water . Directions: For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay about making our cities green. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below:1. 现在人们绿化城市的重要性2. 绿化城市

11、的好处3. 我们应该【普通版】Recently, with the development of businesses and industries, more and more trees have disappeared in big cities. We have tried our best to prevent people from cutting trees. But, it is important to realize to make our cities green.【润色版】In contemporary society, while our industries and

12、 businesses have experienced a(n) rapid/ fast/ amazing/ marked/ fantastic development, the number of trees in many large cities has declined/ decreased/ reduced sharply/ dramatically. Although remarkable efforts have been exerted to prevent more trees from being cut, the realization of making cities

13、 greener is still of great importance.【普通版】 There are many advantages in making cities greener. First, it makes our air clean. Scientific research has proved that trees can reduce a great amount of carbon dioxide in the atmosphere through absorption. Second, it adds to the beauty of our cities. With

14、 trees and flowers everywhere, there is a pleasant feeling that we live in a beautiful garden and are closer to nature. Finally, it will bring us a lot of timber. And this is an effective way to solve the problem of lack of natural resources.【润色版】 What benefits can the program of making cities green

15、er bring to us? First, the air will be cleaner. Scientific experiments have already proved that trees can reduce air pollution by producing a lot of oxygen. This will improve the quality of the urban environment. Second, our cities will look more beautiful. Just imagine the city which is full of tre

16、es and flowers. What an attractive garden it is! Whats more, by making cities greener, we can provide our industry with timber the precious natural resources.【普通版】 Making cities greener requires peoples efforts all over the country. And people should not only realize that it is important to make cit

17、ies greener for its contribution to urban environment, but also plant trees and protect them from being used in business 绿化城市需要全国人民共同努力，人们不仅要广泛认识到城市绿化对城市环境的贡献，还应该同心协力栽植更多的树木并保护它们不受商业使用的侵犯。【润色版】 Making cities greener requires more than widespread awareness; it calls for an immediate commitment to planting more trees and growing more flowers. (Making cities greener requires the whole nations efforts. And not only should most people gain the awareness of the significant con