漫画作文练习(就业+勤俭)(2)

1、漫画作文练习漫画作文练习1.1.就业类就业类2.2.品质类品质类( (勤俭勤俭) )漫画作文练习漫画作文练习Direction:Write an essay of 160200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should1) describe the drawing briefly,2) explain its intended meaning and3) give your comments.漫画作文练习漫画作文练习文章布局文章布局(一)介绍背景段：失业人群巨大，暗示再就业十分必要(二)论证分析段：失业人群的

2、现状，再就业的重大意义(三)个人评价段：如何让中国的就业状况稳定发展第一段1.介绍背景2.描述图片3.介绍文字4.过渡第一段第一段 介绍背景 在这样一个激烈竞争的社会，很多人处于失业的状态 In a world moving on the wheels of fierce competition, many employees have lost their jobs.第一段第一段 描述图片 如图所示，一个求职者正站在梯子旁边，期待着自己能找到一份新的工作，梯子能帮他进入再就业的碗里 As is illustrated in the sketch, an applicant is standi

3、ng beside a ladder, expecting to find a new job/saying wonderful, with the ladder helping him.第一段第一段文字描述 在图片的中间的碗上写着中文汉字：再就业In the middle of the cartoon lie some Chinese characters reading: re-employment.第一段第一段过渡 尽管图片很简单，但却生动显示出下岗员工对于再就业的渴望 Despite its simplicity, it vividly reveals the desire of be

4、ing employed again from the bottom of the laid-off workers heart.第二段1.(主题句)：再就业2.列举因素3.举例论证4.本体喻体第二段1.(主题句) 毫无疑问，大量的待业状态不利于社会稳定 Undoubtedly, the existence of large number of unemployment is adverse to the social stability. Undoubtedly, finding a job/employment, exerts a profound impact on both the u

5、nemployed and the whole society.第二段2. 列举因素(原因结果) 由于缺乏职业技能或者其他原因，有些员工被解雇 Owing to the lack of professional skills or the like, many employees were fired.第二段2. 列举因素(普遍特殊) 更糟糕的是，越来越多大学生刚刚毕业就面临失业 Even worse，college graduates in growing number are in times of the unemployment just after leaving school.第二

6、段3. 举例论证(普遍示例) 很多学生找工作有难度，从而出国或者考研就是一个例子 A case in point is that having difficulty in finding jobs, many undergraduates go abroad or further their study.第二段2. 列举因素(透析本质/原因结果) 并非为了事业上的成就感，很多人工作是为了生活下去.因此，帮助这些人再就业非常重要。 Rather than the sense of accomplishment in career, many people work just to make a

7、living. Hence, it is quite vital to help them find a job again.第二段4. 本体喻体 图片中的碗代表中工作机会，很多求职者想要进入那个碗 The bowl in the drawing epitomizes job opportunities, into which many applicants make every effort to get.第三段1.客观评价/个人评价2.提出建议3.展望未来第三段1. 客观评价 如果高失业率持续下去，整个国家经济和稳定将受到影响 Were the high unemployment rate

8、 to continue, the countrys economy and stability would be badly affected.第三段1. 客观评价 情况如此严重，国家发改委还有很长的一段路要走 The present situation being so critical, the National Development and Reform Commission still have a long way to go.第三段1. 客观评价 总之，有必要扭转低就业率的趋势第三段1. 个人评价第三段2.(提问)第三段3.提出建议 首先，只有政府投入更多的资金才能缓解就业压力

9、 Initially, only by pouring more investment form the government can the employment pressure be relieved.第三段3.提出建议 其次，待业者应该自己想办法去找到一份工作养活自己 Secondly, the ones who are in need of a job should strive for finding a job to support themselves.第三段4.展望未来 如果这些措施被采取，那么社会稳定和高就业率将不再遥远 With all these measures ad

10、opted, the prospect of social stability and high employment rate will be far from dim.漫画作文练习漫画作文练习勤俭，节约勤俭，节约thrifty，frugal, economical文章布局文章布局(一)介绍背景段：人民生活水平提高，忽视了勤俭的美德(二)论证分析段：人们不够节俭的原因，及危害(三)个人评价段：如何能够变得更加节俭第一段1.介绍背景2.描述图片3.介绍文字4.过渡第一段第一段 介绍背景 在追求更多利润的同时，很多中国人忽略了节俭的美德 Pursuing for making more prof

11、it, many Chinese people have always been neglecting the virtue of being thrifty.第一段第一段 描述图片 如图所示，孩子正在家长的帮助下穿衣服，开心的笑着，他们的衣服都已经被缝补过 As is illustrated in the sketch, a child is wearing a coat, smiling happily，with his clothing sewed.第一段第一段文字描述 在图片的中间的碗上写着中文汉字：再就业Under the cartoon lie some Chinese chara

12、cters reading: managing a household by being thrifty.第一段第一段过渡 尽管图片很简单，但却生动显示出中华民族的传统美德 Despite its simplicity, it vividly reveals the traditional Chinese virtue.第二段1.(主题句) 毫无疑问，浪费的行为不利于构建和谐社会 Undoubtedly, the deed of wasting anything will be adverse to building a harmonious society. Undoubtedly, bei

13、ng frugal exerts a profound impact on both individuals and the society.第二段2. 列举因素(原因结果) It is due to the following two points that Chinese people are not as economical as before. Initially, 第二段2. 列举因素(宏观微观&普遍特殊) Wasting does not only exist in daily life. Even worse, human race are abusing our natura

14、l resource. 第三段1.客观评价/个人评价2.提出建议3.展望未来第三段1. 客观评价 如果浪费的现象持续下去，整个社会将会收到极大的恶劣影响 Were the behavior of wasting to continue, the entire society would be badly affected.第三段1. 个人评价第三段2.提出建议 首先，相关的教育人士应该通过有效的方式再次唤起民众节俭的重要性 For one thing, educators are supposed to call up the significance of being thrifty by effective methods. 第三段3.提出建议 其次，公民应该节制，不论是在金钱上还是在能源的使用上 For another, c