四六级作文模式与练习

1、1. Doing Sth.My Most Rewarding Experience 理由陈述理由陈述2. Views on Sth. 各抒己见各抒己见3. The Effect of Sth. upon Our Society 影响分析影响分析4. The Importance of Sth. to Sb. / Sth. Else 重要性重要性5. How to Break with Something Unwanted 建议类建议类6. Contributors to Changes /Success / Failure in Sth. 原因分析原因分析7. Changes in the A

2、ge Distribution of Drug Addicts 图表类图表类8. Why I See/Choose Sth. over Sth. Else 对比分析对比分析9. In the Face of Something Challenging 建议类建议类10. Should We Leave Some Room for Sth. Undesirable? 批驳分析批驳分析1. Doing Sth.My Most Rewarding Experience( (理由陈述理由陈述) )Paragraph Writing下一页下一页Paragraph Writing1) As one of

3、my most rewarding experiences, doing something has brought a lot of benefits to my life.（划线部分可替换）Detail 1Detail 2Detail 3ConclusionTopic Sentence写作模式写作模式下一页下一页上一页上一页 1) As one of my most rewarding experiences, chatting online has brought a lot of benefits to my life. 2) For one thing, it helps me av

4、oid nervousness and embarrassment I used to feel in regular talks. 3) Unlike the face-to-face conversation, it offers me much freedom in time to think out my ideas and prepare them well before posting them on the screen. 4) For another, Reference model: Chatting Online My Most Rewarding ExperiencePa

5、ragraph Writing上一页上一页下一页下一页it adds no little to the improvement of my English. 5) Through online chatting, I have more chances to speak with native speakers, thus bathing myself in the sea of genuine English. 6) The most valuable result of chatting online is that it gives me insights into other cult

6、ures and keeps my mind open to better ways of seeing things. 7) Now I tend to see things from a more objectiveParagraph Writing上一页上一页下一页下一页Paragraph Writingperspective. 8) In short, there is not anything in my free time that is more beneficial than chatting online.2. Views on Sth. （my viewmy view）下一

7、页下一页写作模式写作模式1 1（my viewmy view） 1) When it comes to sth., peoples ideas are not cut from the same cloth. 2) Some people hold /argue that (观点一观点一) 3) They base their argument on the ground that (理由理由) 4) But others react to the problem the other way around and contend that the opposite is just reason

8、able or right. (观点二观点二) 5) From their angle of view, (理由理由) 6) I am of the opinion that(我的看法我的看法) 7) (理由理由) 8)(结论句结论句). 下一页下一页上一页上一页写作模式写作模式2 2（my viewmy view） When asked about _ (主题主题), some people hold the idea that _ (观点观点A). As far as they are concerned, _ (展开观点展开观点A). But I could not agree with

9、 them in several points. In my opinion, _ (观点观点B). The reasons for my choice are listed as follows. In the first place, _ (支持观点支持观点B的理由的理由1). In the second place, _ (支持观点支持观点B的理由的理由2). In the third place, _ (支持观点支持观点B的的理由理由3).For the reasons mentioned above, I firmly believe _ (重申观点重申观点B).下一页下一页上一页上

10、一页 1) When it comes to the problem of generation gap, peoples ideas are not cut from the same cloth. 2) Most of the old argue that young people should be responsible for the problem. 3) They base their argument on the ground that young people either turn a deaf ear to the elders experience-based adv

11、ice or set themselves against what the elders have been proud of. 4) Yet the younger Reference model: Views on Generation Gap下一页下一页上一页上一页generation reacts to the problem the other way around and holds that the opposite is just reasonable. 5) From their angle of view, the older generation is too cons

12、ervative to accept anything new, as a result of which, their voices are not taken into account, and their efforts are far from the requirements set by the elders. 6) I am of the opinion that both generations should take the responsibility for the problem. 7) Much evidence proves that the generation下

13、一页下一页上一页上一页gap results just when the two generations miss connecting or understanding with each other. 8) As long as both sides keep their minds open to each others outlooks on the world and get ready for adjustment of their own ideas to the social needs, the gap between them will be narrowed down i

14、n time.上一页上一页 My View on the “Campus Star” Contest 1. 校园里也涌现出了各种选“星”比赛 2. 这种现象带来的问题 3. 你的看法My View on the “Campus Star” ContestAt an age of character and individuality being encouraged and demonstrated, we see various “stars” popupsinging stars, dancing stars, movie stars and sport stars, etc. Many

15、school seven hold contests to choose their “Campus Stars”. Although these activities make our cultural life in campus more colorful and varied, a lot of problems spring up at the same time.First of all, these activities can result in the swelling of vanity in some students, making them become arroga

16、nt, or even feel superior to other students. Moreover, these activities can greatly distract the students from their study. In order to become a star, they will, without any doubt, spend a lot of time and energy on the preparation and competition. The focus of their academic life will be shifted, an

17、d even worse, they can become too enthusiastic about extracurricular activities and hate the academic knowledge and skills they need to grasp for their future development。On the whole, I think these various “Campus Star” contests should be controlled in the campus. After all, schools are different f

18、rom any other social institutions. Extracurricular activities should be encouraged, but they should be helpful to the students academic study and all-round development。Credit Cards1. 越来越多的人使用信用卡，越来越多的人使用信用卡， 信用卡有哪些好处信用卡有哪些好处2. 信用卡的弊端信用卡的弊端 3. 你自己的观点你自己的观点Credit CardsPersonal credit cards are becomin

19、g more common in China. Banks and other financial institutions are encouraging their customers to change the way they buy things. Credit cards, otherwise known as “plastic money”, are being offered on very good terms to encourage the change. Consumers will be able to “buy now, pay later”, and many s

20、ee this as an advantage.But people need to be careful. There are dangers associated with credit cards. Some people find it very easy to exceed their budget. They are tempted to purchase goods that they do not really need, and can become quickly overburdened by debt. The credit cards often charge a h

21、igh rate of interest, which exacerbates （加重）the problems for these people.However, used wisely credit cards can improve the quality of peoples lives. They can give people access to money to meet sudden unplanned expenses. Properly handled, they can let people control their expenditure and the monthl

22、y statements provide a record of where their money has gone.3. The Effect of Sth. upon Our Society下一页下一页写作模式写作模式（影响分析）（影响分析） 1) The effects / influences / impacts / mark of sth. on our life / society are (is) positive/ negative/ profound/ far-reaching / a mixed one.（主题句）（主题句）. 2) On the one hand, (分

23、析分析I). 3) (进一步阐述进一步阐述). 4） On the other, (分析分析II). 5) (进一步进一步阐述阐述). 6) On the whole,_ (分析分析III). 7)(进一步阐述进一步阐述). 8) Therefore, _(结尾句结尾句). 上一页上一页下一页下一页 1) The effects of SARS on our society are both negative and positive. 2) On the one hand, it has brought about a heavy loss to our economy. 3) Accord

24、ing to the official report, it is a foregone conclusion that there is a great loss in such industries as transportation, food, recreation, and tourism. 4) On the other, it will serve as a reminder of Reference model: The Effects of SARS upon Our Society下一页下一页上一页上一页what the healthy lifestyle should b

25、e like. 5) We will think of it when we spit anywhere, when we help ourselves to wild game, and when we are careless of our personal hygiene. 6) On the whole, SARS has made a great difference to our long-honored ways of seeing things. 7) Despite our efforts, for example, our wish to better economy ha

26、s invited heavy losses in it as a result of our ignorance of other factors, such as the attack of SARS. 8) Although SARS is bound上一页上一页下一页下一页to die out, its influences will not fade away in the years to come. 上一页上一页4. The Importance of Sth. to Sb. / Sth. ElseParagraph Writing下一页下一页Paragraph Writing1

27、) The importance of sth. is now draw- ing more of our concern than ever before.（划线部分可替换）Analysis1Analysis2Analysis3ConclusionTopic Sentence写作模式写作模式下一页下一页上一页上一页 1) The importance of body language to our success in social contact is now drawing more of our concern than ever before. 2) To begin with, i

28、t has a strong hold on the reactions of others to us . 3) What we tend to show through our eyes, faces, bodies and gestures often brings about a chain of reactions from others, ranging from appreciation to disgust. 4) Besides, it serves asReference model:Paragraph Writing下一页下一页上一页上一页The Importance o

29、f Body Language to Our Success in Social Contacta litmus test( (试金石试金石) )for our true feelings. 5) Every time we make insincere remarks, our facial expressions, the tones of our voices and even our posture may reveal more to others than our speech. 6) And most of all, it has the power to determine w

30、hether or not we will succeed in social contact. 7) If you have a decisive date with a girl / boy and your manners or the way you conduct yourself doesnt match yourParagraph Writing下一页下一页上一页上一页social status, for example, your chances of winning the others heart will be slim. 8) In short, where there

31、 is a better exercise of body language in social contact, there will be more hope of success. Paragraph Writing上一页上一页 5. How to Break with Something UnwantedParagraph Writing下一页下一页( (建议类建议类) )Paragraph Writing1) If you find it hard to get rid of sth., you are not alone, for many people have tried to

32、 break with sth. but without any success.（划线部分可替换）ProblemSolution写作模式写作模式Topic Sentence下一页下一页上一页上一页 1) If you find it hard to get rid of your bad habit of smoking, you are not alone, for quite a few smokers have tried to break with it but in vain. 2) Like other bad habits, smoking, once you have bec

33、ome addicted to it, is very hard to break. 3) For instance, one friend of mine, a chain smoker, has done everything he could to give up smoking but now he is still living with it. How to Break with Smoking下一页下一页上一页上一页Reference model:2011.12 “Quitting smoking is the easiest thing in the world, Ive do

34、ne it hundreds of times”4) But if there is every reason for you to rid yourself of it, here is how: 5) Build up your will to abandon it by frequently reminding yourself of its harmfulness. 6) Replace your bad habit with a good one, such as coffee drinking or bubble-gum chewing. 7) And listen to the

35、regret the victims of smoking express from the bottom of their hearts. 8) As long as you cling to the steps as mentioned above, you will be amazed at how effective they are. Paragraph Writing上一页上一页(changes: decline / rise / improvement, etc)下一页下一页6. Contributors to Changes /Success / Failure in Sth.

36、写作技巧写作技巧（原因分析）（原因分析）1）Just as what has happened to anything in the world, many factors lead to the changes in sth. 2) In the first place, (原因原因I). 3) (进进一步阐述一步阐述). 4) In the second, (原因原因II) 5） (进一步阐述进一步阐述) 6) And above all, (原因原因III) 7) (进一步阐述进一步阐述) 8) Our list of contributors could go on, but the

37、foregoing (前面的，上述的）前面的，上述的） ones are already enough to give us a deep insight into the changes.(划线部分可被替代划线部分可被替代) 下一页下一页上一页上一页Back 1) Just as what has happened to anything in the world, many factors lead to their success in marriage life. 2) In the first place, a positive psychological suggestion pl

38、ays a role. 3) If a couple often utter syllables, like “We will love each other and live a happy life”as shown in their story, about the bright side of their marriage, they will bring more spirits of love and happiness Reference model:Contributors to Success in Marriage Life下一页下一页上一页上一页Backinto thei

39、r life whereas, if a couple constantly speak of poison-words such as “terrible”, “painful” or “exhausted”, they will build one little ghost of bitterness after another to live with. 4) In the second, a common and good taste for life counts much to a couples thirst for each other. 5) As told in their

40、 story, the couple used to underline favorite passages to share with each other, which added color to their marriage life. 6) And above all, readiness to devote more to the other serves下一页下一页上一页上一页as a solid basis in their marriage life. 7) Like many other couples, the couple in the story also had m

41、uch to complain about in their daily life, but both acted to fill each others needs as time and opportunity allowed. 8) Our list of contributors to their success in marriage life could go on, but the foregoing ones are already enough to give us a deep insight into the problem. Paragraph Writing上一页上一

42、页 话题：【大学生就业难话题：【大学生就业难】 1) 近年来出现大学生就业难的现象近年来出现大学生就业难的现象 2) 产生这一现象的原因产生这一现象的原因 3) 如何解决这一问题如何解决这一问题 1) 近年来出现大学生就业难的现象近年来出现大学生就业难的现象 Nowadays, the employment of college students is becoming more and more of a problem. About a decade ago, university students could find satisfactory and enviable jobs aft

43、er graduation, while at current situation, about 30% of graduate students cant find a job but stay at home after graduation. 2) 产生这一现象的原因产生这一现象的原因 Employment difficulty of college students is due to the following reasons. Among these, the increasing recruitment of colleges and universities plays a v

44、ital role. In addition, many colleges and universities fail to adapt their courses to the development of economy. 3) 如何解决这一问题如何解决这一问题 Considering such a rough job market, I think it is high time that we took effective measures to solve the problem. Above all, college students should realize their ow

45、n defects and further improve themselves to keep their competitive edge in society. Moreover, colleges or universities should provide more trainings and internship opportunities before the students enter the society. Besides, college students should hold a right attitude towards jobs and set their job expectations at a suitab