2019第三部分第二步第四讲.doc

1、第四讲以“纲”悟“意”，洞察提纲类写作一、题型特点提纲作文要求考生根据所给出的提示性文字，首先确定文章的中心思想， 然后紧紧围绕中心思想展开论述， 表达主旨。它的特点是提纲既体现了文章的层次，又规定了各段大致的内容，为考生提供了写作思路。二、写作技巧1.仔细研读题目。做到三定：定体裁，定人称，定时态。2.分析整合要点。对所给的要点进行分析及重新整合，并适当进行细节扩展。3.斟酌具体表达。结合文章要点及关键词确定选用的具体词汇及句式。【典例示范】 (江苏卷 )生活中冲突时有发生。假设你班同学苏华和李江打篮球时发生争执，导致关系紧张，请你结合此事，并根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文，向学校英文报”

2、Happy Teens”专栏投稿。简要描述事情的经过打篮球 碰撞 争执，等等分析发生冲突的原因1.遇事不够冷静2.谈谈避免冲突的做法(请考生根据自己的经历或感想，提出至少两种做法 )注意： 1.对所有要点逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。2.词数 150 左右。开头已经写好，不计入总词数。3.作文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。 参考范文 Conflicts with others are common in everyday life. During the basketball game yesterday afternoon, Su Hua and Li Jiang

3、 bumped into each other, trying to catch the ball. Then they started shouting and yelling, and it turned into a horrible quarrel.To be honest, it was Su s fault but Li was also to blamethey were not calm enough第 1页and both said some really mean things. They cared too much about winning and losing. A

4、s a matter of fact, blocking, pushing and bumping are just part of a tough game.To avoid such conflicts, we should be kind to one another, which is essential toenjoying a harmonious life. It is also a virtue to forgive and forget, especially in sucha competitive and stressful society. Instead of bla

5、ming each other, we shouldcommunicate more and put ourselves in others place.Don tbe self-centered and try to be considerate. We must learn to handle conflictscalmly and wisely.能力提升练 1(2019 常州一中质检 )假如你是新华中学的学生李华， 偶然看到在你市求学的美国学生 Tom 在网上发帖，要大家给他推荐一本学习汉语的书。你手头正好有一本合适的书可以借给他。请你给他发一封电子邮件，要点如下：1.说明写信原因；2.

6、描述书的情况；3.约定见面时间和地点。注意： 1.词数 150 左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Tom，I m Li Hua, a student of Xinhua Middle School.Best wishes.Yours，Li Hua 参考范文 Dear_Tom，I mLi_Hua,_a_student_of_Xinhua_Middle_School. The other day, I learned quite by chance that you were in need of a book to help you impro

7、ve your Chinese. I happen to have one, which I think might help you.第 2页The book is entitled New Practical Chinese and it is intended for beginners at your level.Not only does it include the basic conversations in our daily life, but it is also a window through which you can get to know Chinese cult

8、ure and customs.Edited by three language experts, it has been popular with the readers ever since it came out two years ago.If it is convenient to you, let smeet at 3 pm, this Sunday at the entrance to the People s Park, where I can give you the book face to face.If not, try to find another time tha

9、t is suitable for both of us.Best_wishes.Yours，Li_Hua能力提升练 2(2019 苏北四市 (淮安、宿迁、连云港、徐州)高三年级摸底考试 )人们对待机遇有不同的态度，请以 “Opportunities favour the prepared mind为题，按”要求用英语写一篇 150 词左右的文章，要点如下：对待机遇的态度结果你的观点梦想着成功，却迟迟没有行只能看着机遇从身边悄悄动，等着天上掉馅饼溜走(请举例说明 )默默努力着，为机遇的到来做最终迎来成功的喜悦好充分准备注意： 1.可参照以上内容适当发挥；2.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。 参

10、考范文 Opportunities favour the prepared mindThere are two kinds of people taking completely different attitudes to building a bright future.One is dreaming of opportunities for a promising future，but without any action， while the other devotes himself earnestly to his work to get fully prepared.The me

11、ssage conveyed above is crystal clear: Opportunities favour the prepared mind.The difference between the two lies only in the way each treats第 3页opportunities.Successful people always make adequate preparations to seize opportunities.Unsuccessful people，on the other hand，work little and just wait ，s

12、eeing them pass by.To further highlight the importance of our attitude towards opportunities，let s take the Chinese diver Wu Minxia for example.In order to win the gold medal in the Olympics，she trained hard day after day and eventually made it. Therefore，we shouldmake efforts to make our dreams com

13、e true.It universally acknowledged that we would accomplish nothing without actions and efforts.能力提升练 3(2019 江苏启东中学高三检测)假如你是李华，请根据下图中围绕“拒为低头族” (stop phubbing)这个话题写一篇150 词左右的英语短文。词汇： phubbing(低头族 )phone(手机 )snubbing(snub冷落的进行时态 )内容包括：1.你身边有“低头族”吗？他们的表现；2.“低头族”给学习和生活带来的影响；3.就如何“拒为低头族”提12 点建议。要求： 1.文章开

14、头已给出，不计入总词数；2.可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事；3.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。Nowadays, many people are addicted to their phones. 参考范文 Nowadays,_many_people_are_addicted_to_their_phonesThey. look at their phones everywhere all the time, ignoring the people around them. In recent years, many activities have been organized to appea

15、l to people to stop phubbing. There is a lot of phubbing around me. My cousin likes playing with mobile phonesvery much. He can t stop sending text messages, surfing the Internet, playing mobile games and even taking photos with mobile phones.However, phubbing disturbs not only our studies, but also our life. Phubbing, whether playing phone games or sending text message, particularly in class or at work, is a big第 4页waste of time. What smore, it can lead to health problems. For instance, using a mobile phone too mu