2017-2018学年高中英语 Unit 5 The power of nature Section Ⅴ Writing—旅游景点介绍教学案 选修6

1、学必求其心得，业必贵于专精unit 5 the power of nature section writing旅游景点介绍一、基本结构二、增分佳句1my hometown is on the railway line。 我的家乡在铁路沿线。2in the west suburbs of the city there stands a small village。 that is my hometown.市西郊有一个小村子,那就是我的家乡。3our country is a large one with a long history。 我们的国家是个历史悠久的大国。4great changes

2、have taken place in my village in the past/last 20 years。在过去的20年里,我们村子发生了翻天覆地的变化。5the streets have been widened. factories， schools, hospitals， cinemas and theatres havebeen set up one after another。 now my hometown has become a rich and beautiful place。 街道已经拓宽.工厂、学校、医院、影院和剧院一个接一个地拔地而起。如今，我的家乡变得富裕、美

3、丽.6located in the east of fujian province， xiamen is a coastal city with a long history。厦门位于福建省东部，是一个具有悠久历史的沿海城市。7it covers a total area of5，271 square kilometres with a population of about 3.5 million.它总占地面积是5 271平方千米,人口约为350万.8there are many famous places of interest in shanwei, among which are th

4、e fengshan temple and red bay。汕尾市有很多著名的旅游胜地，如凤山祖庙、红海湾等。题目要求根据以下提示写一篇关于伦敦的旅游景点介绍。一座艺术气息和历史氛围浓郁的都城，一个重要的政治中心，一处巨大的金融市场金融广场square mile最古老的地方;常住人不是很多；每天却有30万人在此工作伦敦西区west end繁忙的购物和娱乐区伦敦东区east end伦敦港（the port of london）；移民最先到达的地方；在此成功举办2012年奥运会；当地人希望这个区的住房、教育和工作机会能够得到改善是一个“乡村集散地”（a collection of villages

5、)，每个地方都有自己的特色和自己的社区，因此要全面描述伦敦是很困难的.第一步：审题构思很关键一、审题1确定体裁：本文为说明文;2确定人称：本文的主要人称应为第三人称；3确定时态:主要使用一般现在时。二、构思第一部分，整体介绍。第二部分，分区介绍.第三部分,总结全文。第二步：核心词汇想周全1full_of充满2a_political_center政治中心3a_huge_financial_market_place一个巨大的金融市场4the_oldest_part_of_london伦敦最古老的地方5a_busy_shopping_and_entertainment_district繁忙的购物和娱

6、乐区6hold_sth._successfully成功举办7improve改善8it_is_difficult_to_do_sth。做很困难第三步:由词扩句雏形现1一句多译伦敦是一座艺术气息和历史氛围浓郁的都城,一个重要的政治中心,一处巨大的金融市场.london_is_a_capital_city_full_of_art_and_history,_an important political centre and a huge financial market place.london, a_capital_city_full_of_art_and_history，_is an import

7、ant political centre as_well_as a huge financial market place。伦敦是一个“乡村集散地”，每个地方都有自己的特色和自己的社区,因此要全面描述伦敦是很困难的。it is difficult to describe london in every aspect， for_the_city_is_made_up_of_a_collection_of_villages，_each of which has its own character and community。as_a_city_made_up_of_a_collection_of_

8、villages，_it is difficult to describe london in every aspect, for_each_of_the_village_has_its_own_character_and_community。2基本句式金融广场是伦敦最古老的地方.the_square_mile_is_the_oldest_part_of_london。并不是太多的人居住在那里。there_are_not_many_people_living_there。每天30万人在此工作。300，000_people_work_there_every_day.伦敦西区是繁忙的购物和娱乐区.

9、west_end_is_the_busy_shopping_and_entertainment_district。伦敦东区包含伦敦港。east_end_contains_the_port_of_london。那是移民最先到达的地方。it_is_the_place_where_many_immigrants_first_arrived.在伦敦成功举办2012年奥运会。the_olympics_were_successfully_held_in_2012_in_london。当地人希望这个区的住房、教育和工作机会能够得到改善.the_local_people_hope_that_housing，_

10、education_and_employment_for_many_people_in_this_area_will_improve.第四步：句式升级造亮点1用定语从句及with的复合结构连接基本句式中的the_square_mile_is_the_oldest_part_of_london，where_there_are_not_many_people_living_there_with_300，000_people_working_there_every_day。2用while及which引导的定语从句连接基本句式中的west_end_is_the_busy_shopping_and_en

11、tertainment_district_while_east_end_contains_the_port_of_london,_which_is_the_place_where_many_immigrants_first_arrived。3用whose引导定语从句连接基本句式中的the_olympics_were_successfully_held_in_2012_in_london,_whose_people_hope_that_housing,_education_and_employment_for_many_people_in_this_area_will_improve.第五步：过

12、渡衔接联成篇london，_a_capital_city_full_of_art_and_history，_is_an_important_political_centre_as_well_as_a_huge_financial_market_place。the square mile is the oldest part of london, where there are not many people living there with 300，000 people working there every day。 west end is the busy shopping and en

13、tertainment district while east end contains the port of london, which is the place where many immigrants first arrived。 the olympics were successfully held in 2012 in london, whose people hope that housing, education and employment for many people in this area will improve.as_a_city_made_up_of_a_collection_of_vi