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1、 精品文档1.爱好用 40 个以上的词语描述您的爱好。例文：my name is sally, my hobby is swimming. i love swimming best. i often swim in thegym with my friends after school. wehave funtogether. ican swimvery fast. whats yourhobby? can you tell me ?用 40 个以上的词语描述您的家人爱好。例文：my name is sally,there are three people in my family. my f

2、ather is tall. his hobby isswimming.he can swim very well. my mother is beautiful. she likes singing and dancing.she can sing and dance very well. and my hobby is reading books. i have many books inmy study. i love the books and i love my family.2 机器人会做什么？如果你有一个机器人，你希望你的机器人会做什么？用英语写出你心目中的机器人能做的事情。例文

3、：my name is sally, i have a clever robot. his name is robit. its a present from mymother. the robotis very good.it s a talking robot.it can speak english. andit is good atmany things. its good at cleaning. it can draw. it can count. it can write. wow！it can doeverying! i love it very much.3. 父母日常生活写

4、一篇描述您的朋友或者父母日常生活的短文。例文：hello, my name is sally. i am a boy. my father is tom. he is 45. he often wakes upvery early in the morning . after that he has a big breakfast. and then he usually goes towork on foot.he sometimes goes out for lunch. in the afternoon ,he usuallytakes exercisein the park. he d

5、oesnt like staying at home . i love my father.4. 菜单今天是小玲的生日，请你帮她设计好一个菜单，写一篇不少于40 个单词的小短文。例文：today is xiaolings birthday.for starters we can have tomato and egg soup. wealllike soup. then for the main course we can havefish, meat ,some vegetable and rice.andfor dessert we can have a chocolate cake. i

6、 hope everyone likes chocolate cake.5. 介绍你最喜欢的动物my favorite animal my favorite animal is rabbit. its name is sweet. sweet has long ears.its very small. its white. it has a short tail. it has red eyes. it likes eating carrots. itlikes jumping. it goes jumping three times a day. i like it very much. i

7、ts lovely. its mybest friend. i like the rabbit.6. 天气写一篇小短文，描述广州的四季，天气，以及相应的活动等。并说明你喜欢的季节和理由。例文：hello, my name is sally. i am a chinese girl.liive in guangzhou. in guangzhou,itsrainy and wet in spring . the trees turn green. spring is a beautiful season. i love it. itshot and sunny in summer. i love

8、 swimming in summer. its cool in autumn. we can flykites . its cold in winter. but its not very cold. i love guangzhou.7. 描写一个节日精品文档 精品文档my favourite festival is spring festival. it is in january or february .during thefestival,people usually clean their houses and buy now things , they will go to v

9、isit theirfamily and friends. and they will have a big dinner. children often get some lucky money.8.喜欢的运动table tennis is one of the most popular sports in china.its my favorite, too. its a good way of exercise, and its easy to play. you dont need many skills. i often play table tennis after class.

10、most of my classmates like it. so we always have partners. but if you want to play well, its not so easy. you must focus on your gesture, your hands and yoursteps. i want to be better, so i practice it very often. i have my own teacher to teach me. iwork hard on it9. 周末活动on saturday, i go painting i

11、n the morning. the pictures are very beautiful. then, i eatlunch at 12:00 at noon. in the afternoon, i usually go to the park, climb mountains or playwith my friends. i can see beautiful flowers, green grass in the park. wow! its very veryhappy times! in the evening, i do homework and watch tv. some

12、times i play computergames.10.介绍朋友i have a good friend. we are in the same class. his name is bill. he is 13. he likes sportsvery much. these sports are tennis soccer and basketball. he plays tennis twice a week.he plays soccer twice a week. he plays basketball once a week. he often likes to wear bl

13、ack t-shirt and blue pants. his phone number is 5352375. everyone likes him.小升初英语书面表达优秀范文一、以你自己的宠物或你熟悉的小动物为题按下面的要求写一篇英语作文。要求：1.意思连贯，词句通顺，标点正确，书写规范。2.不少于 50 个单词。my dogi have an english dog. its name is laike. its two years old. its grey. its body is verylong. its mouth is white. its two eyes are blue

14、. it has two small ears. its four legs are verylong. its tail is thin and long. it runs fast. it likes meat. i like to play with it. its my goodfriend.二、以 my bedroom (我的卧室)为题按要求写一篇英语小作文。要求：1. 要写出卧室内的主要物品。2. 条理清楚，语句通顺，标点正确，书写规范。3. 不少于 50 个单词。my bedroomi have a big bedroom. there are many things in it

15、. there is a big desk in the middle ofthe room. there are some books, a computer, a keyboard and mouse on it. theres apencil-box and a lamp on it, too. near the desk, theres a bed. near the bed, there is a bigwardrobe. there are two windows in the wall. there are four pictures and a nice clock onthe

16、 wall, too. i often clean my bedroom. i love my bedroom.精品文档 精品文档三、以 my day(我的一天)为题按要求写一篇英语小作文。要求：1.有一定的内容，条理清楚，语句通顺，书写规范。2.不少于 50 个单词。my dayim a boy, and im a pupil. i go to school from monday to friday. i have no class onsaturdays and sunday. i often get up at six oclock. i go to school at seven o

17、clock. i havefour lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. i go home at five. i do my homeworkat home.四、以一种文具为题按要求写一篇英语小作文。要求：1.要写出此文具的主要特点。2.条理清楚，意思连贯，标点正确，书写规范。3.不少于 50 个单词。my pencil-boxi have a pencil-box. it is nice and big. it has many colours. there are two blocks on mypencil-box. one

18、is yellow, the other is orange. in my pencil-box, there are pens, pencils, aruler and an eraser. i like my pencil-box very much and my pencil-box looks like my bestfriend.五、假如你是照片上的女孩nancy,请你描述一下你全家的照片。要求：1.条理清楚，意思连贯，标点正确，书写规范。2.50 个单词左右。the photo of my familythis is a photo of my family. i sit in t

19、he middle of my mum and my dad. mum is ateacher. dad is a doctor. look at the boy. he is my brother, bill. we are in the same school.but he is in grade 2. i am in grade 1. oh, there is another one in our family, my lovely cat.七、以 myself(我)为题按下面的要求写一篇英语小作文。要求：1.语句通顺，条理清楚，书写清晰、规范。2.不得少于 50 个单词。myselfm

20、y name is wang dong. im 12 years old. im a student of no. 5 primary school inbeijing. i have many hobbies. i like reading and watching tv in my free time. snow white ismy favourite book.i have some friends in my class. my best friend is chen gang. i often play games withhim. my english teacher is mi

21、ss hu. i like her very much.my english teachermiss tang is my english teacher. shes very pretty. she is tall and thin. she has two bigeyes and a small mouth. her hair is long. she likes cats very much. and she likes singingand dancing, too. her english is very good. we often play games in english cl

22、asses. she isvery kind to us. we all love her. 【要领点评】这篇作文的题目是“我的英语老师”，是一篇介绍人物的作文。小作者开门见山，直接点题，首先介绍了英语老师的姓名，然后逐一介绍了她的外貌特征、喜好、英语水平、上课特点以及师生情感等。 小朋友们在写作文时，要注意使用自己最熟悉的词组，以免写出一些错句子。写作时要注意意思连贯、语句通顺、标点正确、书写清晰、规范等。my days of the weekim a student and i am in grade 5.i get up at six oclock every day. i have b

23、reakfast at精品文档 精品文档half past six, and go to school at seven oclock. i have classes from monday to saturday.i have an english class on friday and i have a pe class on tuesday. i dont have to go toschool on school, and i like to go swimming on that day. 【要领点评】目是“我的一周”，小作者没有说一些空话，而是从自己的亲身经历写起，叙述了自己一周七

24、天的所作所为，并特别强调了星期天的喜好，写得自然、流畅。 小朋友们写作文时要注意人称及谓这篇作文的题语动词的变化，要依据提示，结合自己的实际，写自己身边熟悉的事情。my favourite fooddo you know what this is? guess! its colour is yellow. its long and thin. it looks like asmall boat and crescent. oh, it is a banana. do you know what that is? guess again! itscolour is orange. its rou

25、nd. it looks like a small ball and a small lantern. oh, it is anorange. i like then a lot. i like ice-creams. i like to chew gum. chocolates and candies areyummy. i like them very much.how about you? whats your favourite food? 【要领点评】 my favourite food 是一篇很成功的文章，小作者并不是简单地列举出自己最喜欢的每一种食物，而是有详有略地进行介绍。整篇

26、文章用词准确、语言流畅、没有语法错误。另外，文章中出现了一些生词，可见小作者是用心查字典了。i can help do houseworki am a girl. my name is li ling. im in class three, grade five. im helpful at home.i can water the flowers, empty the trash and sweep the floor. after meals, i can help mymother do the dishes. on sunday, i can wash the clothes. wha

27、t about you? are you helpful,too? 【要领点评】的事情，介绍自己的名字，所在年级及在家能做的家务，很详细，到位。本篇作文的题目是“我可以帮助做家务”，作者主要叙述自己在家帮助做小朋友们在写作时，应尽量写一些亲自经历的事情，这样会避免在作文时显得太空，因为只有自己经常做的事情印象才会特别深刻。写作时还要注意大小写和时态。in the kitchenthis is the kitchen of my family. its big and nice. look! my mother is cooking in it. this is a microwave and

28、that is a stove. there is a big table here. there are many things on it. what are these? they look yummy! oh, theyre strawberries. and what are those?they are grapes.【要领点评】这篇作文的题目是“在厨房”里，作者根据自己家的厨房情况。介绍厨房里有微波炉和电炉，有一张大桌子和桌子上的物品等，以及妈妈在做饭，非常真实。小朋友们，可以从观察自己身边的事、物写起，利用所学的句子，描述身边熟悉的东西来训练习作。my villagemy vi

29、llage is very beautiful. there are many houses in the village. near the village, there is a forest. a small river is in front of the village. the water in it is very clean. we can see some fish in the river. near the river, you can see a mountain. some flowers and grassare on the mountain. i like my

30、 village. welcome to my village!【要领点评】本文以“我的村庄”为题描述了自己家乡的风景。介绍了村庄的房屋、森林、河流及大山，使人看了这篇作文后确实感觉到“我的村庄”的美丽。小朋友们在写作时，可仔细想一下自己的村庄或所在城市的特点，尽量使用本单元学过的单词或短语进行叙述。小学英语五年级下册各单元作文范例及点评精品文档 精品文档my weekendthere are two days on the weekend, saturday and sunday. on saturday, i often go tomy dancing class in the morni

31、ng and do my homework in the afternoon, and i often helpmy mother do some cleaning. on sunday, i always visit my grandparents in the morningand do some reading in the afternoon. after dinner, i often watch tv with my parents. atthat time, we can talk with each other and say something happily. we oft

32、en have a good time. 【要领点评】 写法：这篇习作是按照时间顺序记叙周末的活动，记叙了周六和周日的上午和下午分别做了哪些活动及对活动的感受。即：周六上午：舞蹈课下午：做作业和帮妈妈做清洁周日上午：看望祖父母下午：阅读晚上：看电视，与父母交流感受：高兴和愉快。我们还可以选取周六和周日中的几个比较主要的活动来写，先说明什么时间在什么地方由什么人做了什么事，有什么感受。再按照活动顺序把活动内容写清楚，最后抒发一下对这次活动或这个周末的感想。时态：这篇短文我们可以用三种时态来写: a.一般过去时（主要描述你上个周末是怎样度过的）;b.一般现在时（主要描述你经常怎样度过周末）;c.一

33、般将来时（主要描述你要怎样过周末）。这里我们来表述平时是如何过周末的，所以采用一般现在时来写。注意：活动的相关表达方法可采用旧知识，eg.（例）起床 get up，和新知识，eg. climb mountains去爬山中的un很容易错写成nu。还要注意不要出现病句，eg.“i often watch tv with my parents.”不要写成 “i often with my parents watch tv .” 词量上控制在 50 80 之间。my seasonswe have four seasons in a year. i can do many interesting thi

34、ngs in each season. in spring, the weather is cool and wind, i can fly kites whenits wind. and i can go hiking with my family when its sunny and cool. i like hiking. summer is hot in the north of china, but its not long time. i often go swimming. it can make me healthy and strong. i canalso wear my

35、beautiful dresses. fall is a season with harvest. and i can eat delicious fruits in this season. i can watch the leaves fall. winter comes, its often snowy in winter in my hometown. when it snows, everything is white. we can play with snow and make a snowman, skate and ski. and winter is my favourit

36、e season, because of the spring festival. i love seasons. i love the nature.【要领点评】写法：这篇短文是描述“我的四季”，在写法上，是根据春、夏、秋、冬四季的更替来写的，先讲明每个季节的特征，之后再写在这个季节中的主要活动或比较有代表性的活动。同时讲一些自己的真实感受，最后阐述自己最喜欢的季节。在实际的写作的时候我们还可以先写出自己喜爱的季节及主要的活动内容，之后再去讲其他几个季节，还可以多讲解一下地域的季节特征和大自然中的其他景色，如：秋天的田地里一片金黄，农民在收割等等，这样写出来的四季更贴近实际。时态：这篇习作讲

37、的是“我的四季”，是比较惯常的一些行为，所以我们最好采用一般现在时和情态动词结合活动的写法。即：在什么季节，天气如何，我们可以做什么。注意：在写作内容上，不可以像以往的内容那么简单，因为有四个季节，所以要写明季节，季节天气，季节性活动，活动的人，活动的感受等，要求句子顺序要正确，在写作中还要注意关联词的使用，如用了“因为”，就不能用“所以”，二者不可以同时出现。词量要控制在80 个词以内。my birthday partyevery year, when its birthday, my parents hold a party for me. they invite my friendto

38、come to my house to celebrate my birthday. i can get many beautiful gifts every year. in my party, we can do many things: 1. light the candles.2. sing a “happy birthday” song. 3. make a wish.4. blow out the candles. 5. cut off the cake. 6. eat the cake.7. open the presents. 8. sing and dance.精品文档 精品

39、文档9. watch videos or play other games. 10. say goodbye with each other.thats my birthday party, is it interesting? 【要领点评】写法：这篇习作是按活动的顺序来写的，记叙了生日晚会的各项具体活动，比较全面。比较以前几个单元的写作写法，这个短文按活动顺序比较合适。 时态：这篇短文可以用三种时态来写：1、一般将来时：主要说明生日晚会份的各项计划，都将如何进行。 2、一般现在时：主要说明习惯上如何度过每个生日。 3、一般过去时：主要说明你的生日晚会是如何进行的。 句型：invite sb.

40、 to do sth. 邀请某人做某事注意：由于这篇短文很有局限性，所表达的大体上都基本相同，所以在书写的时候要注意结合自己的实际活动与真情实感去写。另外注意一些短语和单词的书写不要发生错误：eg.“吹蜡烛”要写成“blow out the candles”而不能写成“blow candles”。my familythere are five people in my family. they are my grandma, grandpa, dad, mom and i. look!grandma is watching tv. grandpa is reading a book. dad

41、is writing an e-mail. mom iscooking dinner. i am doing my homework. i love my family!【要领点评】 写法：这篇习作介绍了自己家的家庭成员，以及此刻他们正在干什么，表达了自己对家人的感情。 时态：由于本单元主要讲的是现在进行时态，所以建议采用现在进行时态。 句型：主语+be+动词的现在分词。 注意：本单元的重点是现在进行时态，注意在写句子时要保持时态的完整性，即系动词和动词的ing 缺一不可。in the parkit is sunny today .my mother, my father and i are

42、going to thepark. we like the park very much. it is very big and beautiful .there are many trees andflowers in it. many people like to go there. look! an old man is sitting on the chair. he isreading a book carefully. two boys are jumping on the ground. their mothers are talkingwith each other. two

43、birds are flying in the sky. the ducks are swimming in the river. theyare very happy. what is the cat doing? oh, it is running after a mouse. it s a poor mouse.【要领点评】 写法：这篇习作是用现在进行时描绘出公园里的人和动物们正在进行的活动还运用了一般现在时叙述了公园美丽的景色。 时态：这篇文章可以采用一般现在时和现在进行时两种时态，由于本单元的语法项目是现在进行时，因此，描述的重点要放在现在进行时态上。 句型：一般现在时：主语+谓语+

44、其他 现在进行时：（1）what +be (am,is ,are)+主语+v.-ing+其他? （2）主语+be(am,is ,are)+ v.-ing+其他。a field tripit is a nice day. our class will have afield trip today. the classmates are very excited. look! here we are. therere a lot ofactivities to do. amy is watching insects. peter is collecting leaves. they want to

45、 write areport. mandy is catching butterflies in the woods. tim and bob are playing chess. some ofthe classmates are having a picnic. there is a lot of delicious food to eat. oh, whos thatover there? its miss white. what is she doing? she is taking photos. we had a very goodtime. ill never forget th

46、is field trip.【要领点评】 写法：这篇习作是按照郊游时的画面来描述的，记叙了同学们分别在郊游中做了哪些活动及郊游的感受。 时态：这篇文章可以用一般过去时和现在进行时来写。由于本单元主要讲的是现在进行时，所以，这里我们采用现在进行时比较合适。句型：. is/are doing sth. she /he is doing sth. they re doing sth. 注意：活动的相关表述法采用新旧知识相结合去写。注意时态的转换、描写感受时用一般现在时。li ying s hobbyli ying likes english very much. she works hard at

47、it. she reads english every morning. she likes speaking english. she often listens to the radio. she watches tv only on saturday evening.does she like dancing? no, she doesnt. but she likes drawing and singing. her pare精品文档 精品文档nts love her. and all the teachers and her friends like her, too. she sa

48、ys her hobbies make her happy.【要领点评】这一篇写爱好的文章,小作者的写作思路很值得我们学习,他没有具体写到刘莹的某一种爱好,而是从学习到课余的多种爱好入手,对刘莹的各种爱好进行了粗线条地勾画.从“爱好”这个角度来看刘莹的话，我们会觉得这个形象很饱满。小朋友们写这种“叙事写人”作文时，可以从两个角度下手：一是具体地描绘；二是和上面小朋友一样，粗线条地勾画，二者各有所长，另处在行文中使用一些问句，使用一些转述的话，可以使作文更有灵气，避免了平铺直叙的缺点。比如上文的“ does she like dancing? no, she doesnt.”和“she says

49、 her hobbies make her happy.”就是十分不错的句子，使读者眼前为之一亮。dont be against the traffic rulesi go to school from monday to friday .i go to school by bike at 7:30 in the morning .i must cross two busy roads .if the traffic light is red or yellow,i know icant cross the road,so i wait.if the light turns green, i

50、know it means “go”, and then i walk across the road .i always ride on the right side of the road .i am never against the traffic rules.【要领点评】这篇作文的题目是“不要违反交通规则”，小作者没有说一些空话，而是从自己的经历写起，叙述自己以什么方式去上学，在上学的路上是怎么做的，很形象。小朋友们在作文时注意不要图大，那样很容易使文章显得空洞，而要写自己身边熟悉的事情。要注意行文中字母的大小写、句子的标点符号等。i love my familyhere is a

51、photo lf my family. these are four people in my family. they are my father, my mother, my brother and i.my father is a doctor. he works in a hospital far away. he goes to work by subway. mymother is a teacher. she works in a school near my home. she goes to work by bike. after work, they like readin

52、g books. who is the tall boy? he is my brother. he is five years older than me. he is a singer. hes now in beijing. he goes there by plane. i love my family.【要领点评】一个平凡的题材，一篇生动的作文。这样的命题，我们可能面对几次，甚至几十次了。但这位小朋友的笔端很是灵巧，了了数言，让一个幸福的家庭跃然纸上，很值得我们去思考，我们能做到吗？小朋友的这篇作文除了语言优美之外，在结构上也有闪光之处。先总说，将自己的家人逐个介绍一遍，后分说，把家

53、人的工作、上班方式，爱好一一细说。最后以一句话进行概括，起到点题的作用。我们在写类似的作文的时候是不是也可以借鉴呢？how to get to the science museumwe are going to the science museum tomorrow. there is an old thing show in the museum. do you know how we can get to the science museum?the science museum is next to the peoples park. its isnt far from our scho

54、ol. sowe can go there on foot .walk straight to the west from our school, next turn left at the post office and walk for about 5 minutes, then turn right at traffic lights. you can find thepeoples park on the right . walk straight, and youll see the science museum. 【要领点评】这篇作文的题目是“怎样去科学博物馆”。怎样才算是一篇好作

55、文呢？通过你的叙述，能让别人很精品文档 精品文档容易找到博物馆，这应是最基本的要求。小作者在文中告诉我们什么呢？首先他写了去博物馆的位置，最后浓墨重彩，指明从学校去博物馆的具体路线，这条路线够清晰吧！小朋友们在写这类作文的时候，总有些无从下手的感觉，不知从何说起。其实介绍路线，无非就是告诉他人某段路的起点和终点，还有就是如何从起点走到终点。要给他人说清楚，你自己首先得清楚，然后再通过自己的叙述，将路线清清楚楚得呈现出来。一定要注意行文中一些关键的地方，如在哪儿转弯，向哪儿转，经过哪些重要的交通标志或显眼的标志建筑等。这样，你就能说清，别人也能弄明白。planting treesits spri

56、ng. its time to plant trees.i want to plant a tree in our garden. dad and mum are very happy. they like green. dad helps me plant the tree. first, we dig the soil. then i put a little tree into the soil. next iwater it. i am so excited and i wait for the tree to grow. two weeks later, my tree has so

57、me little leaves. i water it every day. now it has lots of leaves. it grows fast. we should plant more trees. they make our world beautiful.【要领点评】小作者写了一次植树的经历，但他并没有单纯拘泥于植树的过程。既有过程，也有感觉，能使文章打动读者，给人以启发。作文的最后一段就非常好，两句话胜似千言万语。我们可以学习一下这种写法。 既描述过程，又适时提自己的看法或想法的写法，在作文中叫做“夹叙夹议”,描述过程为了提出一种思想服务，提出看法或想法使原本平实的描述有了意义。我们在以后的写作中也可以试一试。lets have a nice dayits sunday tomorrow .im go