高三英语对比类作文写作指导

1、对比类写作训练 对比类作文写作指导 2006年浙江省高考作文 当前不少文学作品被改编成电影。有人选 择看电影，有人则喜欢读原著。请你以“film or book, which do you prefer?”为题，按照下 列要点写一篇英语短文： 1、 看电影：省时、有趣、易懂 2、 读原著：细节更多、语言优美 3、 我的看法及理由 注意：1、词数：100-120 文章题目和开头已 给出（不计入词数）。 2、参考词汇： original work 或 book in the original （原著） 想一想：想一想： 1.分几段来写？分几段来写？ 2. 每段的内容安排？每段的内容安排？ 3. 怎

2、样连接这几段？（过渡，关联词怎样连接这几段？（过渡，关联词 ） film or book, which do you prefer? some of us think that it is better to than to the reason is that besides, and it is easier to some others have just the opposite opinion. they think that meanwhile, personally, i agree with the second view. i think and whats more, in

3、 a word, 写作框架：写作框架： 点题概括点题概括 （第（第1步）步） 具体对比阐述具体对比阐述 （第（第2步）步） 表达观点表达观点 （第（第3步）步） 1. 点题概括点题概括 认真认真审题审题, 准确理解主题内容准确理解主题内容, 并用并用一两句话一两句话 将主题将主题概括性地概括性地导出。导出。 2. 具体对比阐述具体对比阐述 今昔对比今昔对比的写作要注意突出过去与现在的的写作要注意突出过去与现在的 区别，一般通过对区别，一般通过对细节细节的描述展现，同时注的描述展现，同时注 意意对比关联词对比关联词的使用。的使用。 正反观点对比正反观点对比的写作要注意的写作要注意客观地客观地介绍

4、两介绍两 方观点，不能只侧重一方而忽略另一方。方观点，不能只侧重一方而忽略另一方。 3. 表达观点表达观点 在前两步的基础上写出在前两步的基础上写出自己的自己的观点观点 （有的题目无此要求）。（有的题目无此要求）。 经典语句：经典语句： 1.过去与现在对比过去与现在对比 i used to read the newspaper, but now i prefer to watch tv. he once knew her, but they are no longer friends now. tom liked to collect stamps when he was young, alt

5、hough now he enjoys climbing. ten years ago there was only one middle school here, yet now there are five. we played basketball in the past, while we play football now. 2.正反观点对比正反观点对比 weve had the discussion about whether (点题句） opinions are divided on the question on the one hand, ( a 观点） on the oth

6、er hand, ( b 观点） every thing has two sides. in my opinion, (收尾句） 1. 1. 表示表示罗列增加罗列增加 besides, in addition 过渡词的恰当使用过渡词的恰当使用 2.2. 表示表示解释说明解释说明 for example, for instance 3. 表示表示时间顺序时间顺序 firstly, to begin with 4. 表示表示转折转折 however, on the contrary 5.5.表示表示条件条件 as (so) long as, unless 6. 6. 表示表示因果因果 theref

7、ore, as a result (of) 7. 7. 表示表示让步让步 as, even if 8. 表示表示强调强调 indeed no doubt 9. 表示表示概括归纳概括归纳 in a word, in short 5.5.表示表示条件条件 as (so) long as, unless 6. 6. 表示表示因果因果 therefore, as a result (of) 7. 7. 表示表示让步让步 as, even if 人们对于学生网上交友持不同意见。请你用英语人们对于学生网上交友持不同意见。请你用英语 写一篇关于学生网上交友的短文，介绍人们的不同观写一篇关于学生网上交友的短文

8、，介绍人们的不同观 点，并表达自己的看法。点，并表达自己的看法。 赞同的理由赞同的理由反对的理由反对的理由你的看法你的看法 注意注意: 1. 文章必须包括表中的所有内容；文章必须包括表中的所有内容； 2. 词数为词数为100左右。左右。 参考词汇：参考词汇： online friend (网络朋友网络朋友), to be cheated ( 上当受骗）上当受骗） 试一试吧：试一试吧： should students make friends online? some people say yes. the internet helps make many friends. by chattin

9、g online, students can express their feelings and opinions more freely, and even get help with their foreign language studies. others, however, think students should not make friends online. they say making friends online is a waste of time, which should be spent more meaningfully on study. besides,

10、 some students get cheated online. it is my opinion that students should place study, health and safety before other things. as for friendship, we can readily find it among our classmates and other people around us. 1. susan was ill in hospital. she couldnt go to the concert. (现在分词现在分词) 2. the profe

11、ssor entered the hall. his students followed him. (过去分词过去分词) (一一) 、非谓语动词非谓语动词的使用的使用 being ill in hospital, susan couldnt followed by his students, the professor 巧用多种结构增强句子的表现力巧用多种结构增强句子的表现力 1. he didnt realize his danger until he was left alone. not until 2.we can save the animals by changing the pl

12、ants we eat. only 3.she is clever but she never works hard. as he was left alone did he realize by changing the plants we eat can we save clever she is, she never (二二)、倒装句倒装句的使用的使用 1.he didnt realize his danger until he was left alone. 2.the teachers words encouraged her greatly. (三三)、强调句强调句的使用的使用 i

13、t was not until he was left alone that he realized his danger. it was the teachers words that encouraged her greatly. 1. to our surprise, he refused to take the position. 2. i wont believe what he says. what surprised us was that he refused no matter what you say, i wont believe. (四四)、从句的使用、从句的使用 3.

14、when he climbed up higher, he felt more breathless. the higher he climbed up , the more breathless he felt. 4. we all know that china will host the 2008 olympic games. as is known to all, china will host the 2008 olympic games. 1. the manager had many problems to solve. he looked worried. (with) 2.

15、when he arrived home , he found his house freshly painted. with many problems to solve, the manager looked worried. （五）、介词短语的使用（五）、介词短语的使用 on his arrival home , he found his house freshly painted. 使用高级词汇、词组以增加文采使用高级词汇、词组以增加文采 1. the tourists had to ask the villagers for help. the tourists had no choice but to ask the villagers for help. 2. the car wa