托福综合独立写作考试7大特点分析

1、精选word文档 下载可编辑托福写作中无论是独立写作还是综合写作都和大家平时接触过的英文作文有一定区别。今天给大家带来了托福综合独立写作考试7大特点分析,希望能够帮助到大家，一起来学习吧。【基础常识】托福综合独立写作考试7大特点分析托福独立写作特点分析对于独立写作来讲，从早期托福考试一直延续下来的形式大家比较熟悉，包括思路和写作材料，需要我们关注的有几点well organized & well developed怎么样让文章结构写的完整，而且把你的观点阐述清楚。大家在写的过程中可能developed过程是特别重要的，你平时阅读的时候要特别注意。appropriate word choice就

2、是你怎么样把这个词用对，写出来一句话你要让阅卷者完成阅读并且完成理解如果你用一个说法以前没有人用过，这个时候他看了也不知道是什么意思，如果我们第二语言学英语的时候，就像英语是第一母语学汉语的时候犯的错误是一样的。cohesive & coherent主要是在语言论述和阐述过程中的问题，托福写作辅导提到托福的作文写的是议论文，不是小说也不是散文，所以在这个过程当中如何让文章结构变得严谨，这是重要的过程，你怎么样让它实现完整的论文结构。另外在描述的过程中需要保持语言的连贯，第一个是逻辑的连贯性，逻辑是不是一致的，有没有出现冲突。第二是语意上的连贯。variety of language use你需

3、要一种语言变化，平时在写作文的时候会有一个问题，写任何一个东西的时候我可能想脑子里信出来的表述方式非常有限，所以导致一讲said你就听不明白了，对于语言的变化并不是要去炫，而是要你的语言表述有一种特征，向考官表明你能自由驾驭一种语言，这也是托福考试本的核心和目的。托福综合写作特点分析no attitude of the author独立写作是你自己的想法，综合写作一定不能有自己的想法，你要看别人的东西，不能带有自己的观点态度或是看法。completely repeated points必须完整复述你听到、看到的东西，你在写的时候不能漏掉听到和看到的。paraphrase考生必须具有能够把原始内

4、容转化为自身表达方式的能力，也就是不能直接照搬照抄原文内容，无论是听力中的语句还是阅读中的资料，都需要进行一定的改写加工才行。我们在大学上课的时候需要看教科书、讲义，听教授讲课，同时要做笔记，同时还要有自己的理解。托福考试在这点上把所有的练习都放在一个环境当中，通过阅读也好、写作也好会对你自身在美国的学习打下非常好的基础。托福写作句型析一句话三种逻辑名句欣there has been an implicit assumption that because electric cars do notburn fossil fuels, they are clearer for the enviro

5、nment and safer for people,but that does not take into account how the electricity they use isgenerated.解析这句话比较长，但逻辑主干还是比较简单there has been an assumption that a, but that does not take into accountb.有一个假设a，但这并没有考虑到ba 是 assumption 的具体内容， b 是考虑的内容，即=take b into accounta=because electric cars do not bur

6、n fossil fuels, they are clearer for theenvironment and safer for people1) a 是 assumption 的同位语2)electric cars 电动汽车3)burn fossil fuels 燃烧化石燃料4)safe 在这里的意思是not likely to lead to any physical harm or danger 不损害健康的整个a的意思是因为电动汽车不燃烧化石燃料，因此它们对环境更清洁，对人们更无害。b=how the electricity they use is generated.1) they

7、 use 是后置定语，修饰 the electricity2) generate electricity 发电3) b=它们使用的电是如何生产的这句话有三种逻辑，因果逻辑比较逻辑转折逻辑，值得好好模仿整句话的意思是有一个隐含的假设因为电动车不燃烧化石燃料，所以他们对环境更清洁，对人们更无害，但是这并没有考虑它们使用的电是如何生产出来的。托福考试作文独立写作范文孩子过分依赖电子产品independent tasknowadays, children rely too much on the technology, like computers,smartphone, video games fo

8、r fun and entertainment; playing simpler toys orplaying outside with friends would be better for the childrens development.写作参考一:for parents, how to well plan their childrens development has been a hugeproblem. while some children are given more time on technological gadgets,others are more inclined

9、 to choose some activities, such as going camping ortraveling. for me, the former option would be a better one.admittedly, playing simpler toys or playing outside might be good choicefor children. simpler toys, namely lego, are a good way to develop childrensthinking on solving the problem through b

10、lock by block. by assembling the piecesfor different blocks, children could assemble an even big piece, such as theclassic london tower bridge. also, playing with friends is helpful. when theyare playing with others, they would cooperate with them to playing sports oreven solve problems. however, on

11、 balance, both of these ways are limited inhelping children. toys and outdoor activities are restrained to their actualforms: parents need lots of money to buy different toys to help childrendevelop, and they pay a great amount of money on helping their children fordifferent activities. for those pa

12、rents who suffer from financial burden, theseare not effective ways for childrens development. comparatively, technologywould be a more effective way for children.firstly, internet via computers and smartphone are essential for theirdevelopment. in other words, internet provides students with vast a

13、mounts ofinformation. according to a recent survey conducted by gallup, after pollingthousands of students from local high schools, most respondents claim thatinternet is the no.1 helper from them to finish homework. when they haveproblems, they would search reference on internet. websites such as g

14、ooglescholar would be a wonderful tool for them to find some papers or academicreference for their homework. meanwhile, internet is a wonderful place for themto entertain as well. they could watch movies on y. they could even findinteresting stories on . all funny experiences are ava

15、ilable on internetwithout causing children too much money.in addition, video games are also necessary for childrens growth. whenchildren are playing video games, they might learn some strategic thinking. forexample, when i am playing fifa 216, i have to manage my team members accordingto their physi

16、cal strength so that i could beat other teams. for those who runquickly, it would be a good idea for them to play forward; for those who aretall and strong, they would be better playing middle field. because of this teammanagement strategy, i have achieved many titles in the game. learning fromthis,

17、 i would allocate my time in finishing homework according to my energylevel. when i am energetic, i might choose the most difficult homework; if i amtired, i might choose some easy-to-do tasks, which would not cost me muchtime.to conclude, while playing toys or spending time on outdoor activities is

18、 agood way for their development, technology would be better way.写作参考二:2月28日nowadays, children rely too much on the technology, like computers,smartphone, video games for fun and entertainment; playing simpler toys orplaying outside with friends would be better for the childrens development.technolo

19、gical advancement has contributed to the invention of a wide rangeof electronic products and there are an increasing number of children who arereported to rely heavily on the technology. thus, the controversy is raisedamong the public whether playing simpler toys or playing outside with friendsare b

20、etter for the childrens development. from my perspective, i insist on thatdepending on high technology is a rather right decision.for one thing, children can learn more about the world and develop a betterway of resolving problems. for instance, the upcoming fourth industrialrevolution heralds a tho

21、rough change of the composition of working force in thesociety and learning the latest news through computers or smartphones will leadchildren to be aware of what are needed urgently and what have been outdated, inthis way, they can decide what kinds of capabilities and qualities they shoulddevelop

22、for being accustomed to the fast-changing world. besides, childrennowadays have to accomplish diverse curriculums many difficult assignments likewriting a paper related to how independent war was sparkled or what consequenceshad been aroused after the assassination of lincoln. computers can help res

23、olvethe problem more effectively by providing students with abundant references andhistoric documentation. additionally, there have been more educational programsspreading through the internet like ted that is designed to disseminate the mostoutstanding professors lectures throughout the world to sh

24、are the greatestideas with people in every corner of the world. obviously, relying on thehigh-tech devices can be of great benefits for children both to resolve theproblems they might meet during their study and learn more things beyond theirtextbooks.for another thing, video games have been designe

25、d to be more alluring andintellectually demanding. to be more specific, there have occurred many morevideo games that are invented to exploit childrens imagination and also releasetheir pressure. take minecraft, a popular game sweeping many primary and highschool students, as an example. in the game

26、, players can use diverseconstruction materials and tools to construct what they like such as a castle ora skyscraper even a city. besides, by decorating the entities they created inmany different styles, massive intellectual activities are needed like how todesign the roof the house and where should put the pets in the city and etc.during the process, students can be fully occupied in the game, serving as anantidote to boredom that will be detrimental to students mental health if itcan be