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1、如何从评分标准入手备考GRE写作 如何从评分标准入手备考GRE写作,我们一起来看看吧,下面小编就和大家分享,来欣赏一下吧。 如何从评分标准入手备考GRE写作 GRE写作满分要点解析,主要包括以下四点: 1、迎合GRE考试评卷人的评卷思路: 每个评卷人对你文章的评阅非常快,不可能对每个细节都很仔细地去看。考生应该迎合评卷人的评卷思路,用最规范的结构和最清晰的表达来体现自己的思路:首段要鲜明地提出观点,中间段落层次要拉开,每段的开始应该就是该段的topic sentence。 2、熟练掌握新GRE写作题库: 为了达到公平,ETS公布了它考试的所有写作题库,那么为了达到能和native speake

2、r一起竞争,考生应该在考前对所有题目都进行预习(节约考试时的审题时间),并通过100-150个提纲的写作了解GRE写作的一般结构,通过30-50篇写作来练习自己的写作思路和表达。对题库中的题目越熟练,对考试越有利。 3. 新GRE写作评分注重三方面 首先,从ETS公布的各分数段评分标准看,其评分主要注重以下三个方面:、逻辑分析能力(要求insightful);、文章的组织(要求well-organized);、语言能力(要求standard written English; concise; varied structure等)。 4. 尽量提高AI部分的写作能力而力保AA部分满分 由于AA的

3、写作不牵涉自己观点的展开,只须指出作者逻辑上的漏洞,因此在经过训练以后,写起来并不困难;而AI的写作需要自己展开自己设立的观点,不但需要逻辑上的洞察能力,还需要论证观点的能力,语言组织的能力,因此对于中国考生来讲比较困难,难以短期内有较大提高。 但是这两个部分在总分中的权重是一样的,因此考生的策略应该是尽量提高AI部分的写作能力而力保AA部分满分(或高分)。因为如果AA部分满分的话,AI部分只需争取在4分以上就可以保证整体作文分数在5分以上。 GRE issue写作优秀实例:钱是否花在当下 题目: It is more important to allocate money for immed

4、iate, existing social problems than to spend it on long-term research that might help futuregenerations. 与其花钱进行可能有助于后代的长期性研究,还不如把钱花在迫在眉睫,已经存在的社会问题上。 正文: In this contradictory era of pleasure and pain, loyalty and treachery, joy of life and fearof future, which arise a considerable of problems govern

5、ment hasbeen bored by. No matter how serious and urgent one aspect turns out to be in acertain period,government is supposed to call for a balance between allocatingmoney for immediateproblems and spending it on long-term research when makingbudget. To be responsible for current citizens, government

6、 should solve those existing socialproblems, such as unemployment, illiteracy, and social crimes, inorder to oil the socialmachine. To some extent, increasing the amount of jobsmay get more benefit thanitself, because it is a way to release social pressureand dissatisfaction of thoseunemployed worke

7、rs who may eventually become aticklish factor to society. Additionally, illiteracy is to society as the shortest baffle is to a cask. And it could donothing but lengthen the shortest baffle to the same length asthe other baffles if morewater is supposed to be poured in this cask. As amalignant tumor

8、, social crimes do harm to the economy and security of oursociety and, in some cases, is a potential fuse especially when there is aninternal or external opposition to the government, so, to keep societystabilized and booming, government has to pay more attention to socialcrimes. If not, citizens ma

9、y feel under peril and lose confidence to the ruling class. As a result, for saving money, the government is bogged down in SargassoSea of troubles.Nonetheless, the governors are not born only for todays people.That is to say,another significant and meaningful responsibility of governmentis to try i

10、ts best to supply our posterity a society that consists of people whoare well educated and obtain a desirable job or career, less juvenile crime anddrug, and stable economy. As H.W.Beecher pointed, “We should so live and labor in our time that what came to us as seed may go to the next generation as

11、 blossom, and what came to usas blossom may go to them as fruit. This is what we mean by progress.”It is truethat long-term research could not give out an immediate value, for example,howto afforest a wasteland, but we shouldnt be so narrow foci and misprize thereal value normally coming up in about

12、 decades or more. “Life can only beunderstood backwards, but it must be lived forwards”, said by Kierkergaard. Thephrase “be lived forwards” here, in this case, means digging out the profit infuture, the same as futures. Although no one knows whether or not the future isin concord with what we expec

13、t, we still could invest in it based on a pile ofwide investigation and a cogent demonstration rather than a gambling. Simply put, without spending money on immediate and existing social problems, our society cannot keep flourish and robust. Without investing on somany long-term researches, we will

14、live no guarantees and aimless. Therefore, toensure the stability and health as well as lasting development of our society,spending money on immediate social problems and investing on long-termresearches weigh the same. GRE issue写作优秀实例:竞争利弊问题 题目: Competition is ultimately more beneficial than detrim

15、ental to society. 归根结底,竞争对于社会是利多弊少。 正文: Darwin suggested that the process of evolution is one based on competition. This deadly competition weeds out the weak and only the fittest of the speciessurvives. Humans, being the product of millions of years of evolution, are bynature, competitive beings. Y

16、et, humans are also social beings. Like the bees inthe hive, we are not very successful living completely on our own. We need tocooperate with other individuals for our survival. Thus, a conflict ensues,between our innate competitiveness, and our need to cooperate. There are prosand cons associated

17、with both. However, it is my belief that overall,competition, is more detrimental than beneficial to human society. First, let us try to identify why there is competition in the first place. In an environment abundant with resources, where supply outstrips demand, thereis very little need for the in

18、habitants to fight with each other over them. Thisis not the case on planet earth. Resources are limited, and there is constantjostling to get to the front of the queue to get acquire them. For example,thousands of prospective students apply to gain entrance to top universitiesaround the world, but

19、there are only a handful of places in those universities.Thus, there is competition to get into to these hallowed institutions of higherlearning.From a utilitarian perspective, competition is a good thing. Inevolution it is responsible for the elimination of weak genes. In the businessenvironment, i

20、t gets rid of the weaker players. In politics, it weeds outunpopular candidates. In academia, it gets rid of weak students. Furthermore, competition leads to self improvement. Businesses will strive to offer better products and services at lesser prices. The consumer reaps richrewards from this comp

21、etitive spirit. Politicians strive to do the utmost forthe people, so they would get reelected. Students excel in there studies, tryingto outdo each other. Thus, ostensibly, competition is responsible for the betterment of the society as a whole. However, this is just the superficial view. Underneat

22、h thesurface, competition, in every aspect, is slowly eating away at the very fabricof the society. While it is true to say that competition in corporate world has brought great benefits to the consumer, the society as Missed A herewhole is playing agreat price for it. Most businesses are exploiting

23、 cheap labour in the thirdworld to maximise their profits. There are thousands of sweatshops run by wellknown western corporations in countries like Indonesia, Bangladesh and China.People are forced to work in squalid conditions, often 16 hours a day. They arelucky to receive a dollar a day for ther

24、e labours. The moment a government inany of these countries try to improve the working conditions of the employees,these multinational giants flee the country, often leaving whole communitiesfacing financial ruin. The corporations are aware that there are plenty of otherlabour markets that could be

25、exploited with gay abandon. That is just the human cost. What about the environmental costs? Competition has forced many corporations to stream line their operations.Environmental standards are normally the first victims of this stream lineprocess. A significant amount of environmental pollution and

26、 land degradationhas been blamed on industry, yet the factories keep producing more and more.Thousands of items go unsold each year due to competition. Only a fraction ofthis merchandise is recycled. The rest goes to the already overflowinglandfills. In politics, the detrimental effects of competiti

27、on are blatant. Politicians often resort to popular yet socially damaging policies to gainvotes. These measures include imprudent spending to rabble rousing. The currentvolatility in Israel and Palestine, the ethnic conflict in Sri Lanka, and thefamine in Zimbabwe are all, at least partially, problems c

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