英语 分词与写作example 5

1、Participles in writing,Teaching Aims,?,1. Participles as attribute,?,2. Participles as adverbial,?,3. Participles as object complement.,?,4. Absolute construction( -ing/-ed),?,5. The use of participles in writing.,Read the following sentences and change them,into simple sentences with,participles,:,

2、?,1. Please tell the children,who are playing,outside,not to make so much noise.,?,Please tell the children,playing outside,not to,make so much noise.,?,3. Setting off firecrackers (,鞭炮,) is a,practice,which was handed down from the,remote past,?,Setting off firecrackers (,鞭炮,) is a practice,handed

3、down from the remote past,分词作时间状语：,?,6.,When he saw the house on fire, he dialed,999,?,Seeing the house on fire, he dialed 999.,?,7.,When metals are heated, they expand.,?,Heated, metals expand.,?,分词做原因状语,?,8.Because I was sick, I stayed at home.,?,Being sick, I stayed at home.,?,9.The boy cried har

4、d,because he was lost,in the forest.,?,Lost in the forest, the boy cried hard.,分词作条件状语,10.If you turn to the right, you will find a,path leading to his cottage.,Turning to the right, you will find a path,leading to his cottage.,11.If the trees had been given more,attention,they could have grown bett

5、er.,Given more attention, the trees could,have grown better,.,12.It rained heavily and caused severe flooding in,that country.,It rained heavily,causing,severe flooding in that,country.,分词作结果状语,13.The teacher followed the students and came into,the classroom.,Following,the students, the teacher came

6、 into the,classroom .,14. The teacher came into the classroom and the,students followed her.,The teacher came into the classroom,followed,by,the studen ts.,分词做伴随状语,17.The farmer,had,his horse,running,.,18.Her questions,set,me,thinking,.,19. I,found,him,locked in the room,.,分词作宾语补足语：,常见的可以带分词作宾语补足语的动

7、有：,catch,（碰上）,discover,，,feel,，,find,get ,have, hear , help, keep ,leave, listen,to,，,look at ,notice, observe, see, set, start,（使得，引起）, watch,独立主格结构（,ing/ed),19.,The three Bront,?,sisters adopted this,practice, and Mary Ann Evans did the same,and wrote under the name of George Eliot.,The three Bron

8、t,?,sisters,adopting,this,practice, Mary Ann Evans did the same and,wrote under the name of George Eliot.,20. When the test was finished, we began our,holiday.,The test finished, we began our holiday.,?,With+ sb + doing/ done,的结构：,?,21.,With National Day (October 1),approaching, many people have bec

9、ome a,little worried about their wallets.,?,22. China is the worlds largest cigarette,consumer,with education about the,dangers of tobacco not widely known,小试牛刀,?,1.,在这个世界上能为别人减轻负担的人都,是有用的。（狄更斯）,?,2.,中国是一条沉睡的巨龙。让他睡吧！如,果他醒来，他会让全世界震撼。（拿破仑）,No man lightening the burden of,someone else is useless in thi

10、s world,China is a sleeping dragon. Let him sleep!,If he wakes, he will shake the world.,小试牛刀,?,3.,世界上大部分的麻烦都是要想成为伟大,人物的人搞出来的。（艾略特）,?,4.,乐观主义者就是被狮子逼上了树,(get,treed),但仍能欣赏风景的人。（温切尔）,Most of the trouble in the world is caused,by people wanting to be important.,An optimist is a person getting treed by a

11、,lion but enjoying the scenery.,小试牛刀,?,5.,夏日黄昏之际，成群的母牛从小山上下,来，哞哞地叫着（,low),，脖子上的小铃,铛儿叮叮当当的响着,(tinkle),奔古城而来,?,At this time of summer evening, the cows,are trooping,（成群而行）,down from the,hills to the old town, _,_.,lowing and with their,bells tinkling.,小试牛刀,?,6.,昨日清晨，他打着雨伞沿着泥泞的小巷，,艰难地向校园走去，心里惦记要背诵的,课文。

12、,?,Yesterday morning, he made his way,_,_,，,along the muddy,alleyway to his school,_.,with an umbrella,held,in his hand,thinking,of the passage to recite,(,holding,an umbrella),小试牛刀,?,7.,这是一个小而宜人的公园，到处被花和,树覆盖着,，中间有一个小湖。,?,This is a small nice park,with trees and,flowers,（,dotted,）,everywhere and,wit

13、h,a little lake lying,in the center.,?,This is a small nice park,covered with,trees and flowers everywhere and,with a,little lake lying,in the center.,小试牛刀,?,8.,当我们沿着道路行走的时候，太阳灿烂地照,耀着，微风轻轻地吹着。,?,While we were walking along the road, the sun,was shining brightly and the breeze was,blowing gently. =,?

14、,We were walking along the road,with the sun,shining brightly and the breeze blowing gently,?,We walking along the road, the sun was,shining brightly and the breeze was blowing,gently.,小试牛刀,?,我们看见美丽的花儿对我们微笑着和听,见鸟儿在树上唱着悦耳的歌曲。,?,We,saw,the beautiful flowers,smiling,at,us and,heard,the birds,singing,th

15、eir sweet,songs in the trees.,查漏补缺,Reading the following sentences and,correct the mistakes if any.,?,1. There are large quantities of birds fly,to the south in winter.,?,改法一：,There are large quantities of,birds,flying,to the south in winter.,?,改法二：,Large quantities of birds fly to,the south in wint

16、er.,查漏补缺,?,2.The number of the chickens which,affected by the bird flu has reached 100,000.,?,改法一：,The number of the chickens,which,were affected,by the bird flu has reached,100,000.,?,改法二：,The number of the chickens,affected by,the bird flu has reached 100,000.,查漏补缺,?,3. We enjoy seeing the films h

17、aving been,directed by Charlie Chaplin.,?,改为：,We enjoy,seeing the films directed,by Charlie Chaplin.,?,4. Most of the people being invited to the,party were famous scientists.,?,改为：,Most of the people,invited,to the,party were famous scientists.,?,瞬间动词不用,ing,进行时的被动语态作定语,查漏补缺,?,5. Soon they saw the m

18、an disappearing in,the crowd.,?,改为：,Soon they,saw,the man,disappear,in the crowd.,?,瞬间动词作宾补不用,ing,形式。,?,6. Being late, so he was punished by his,teacher.,?,Being late, he was punished by his,teacher.,查漏补缺,?,7. His brother being a PLA man is 19 years,old.,?,改法一：,Being a PLA man, his brother is 19,yea

19、rs old.,?,改法二：,His brother who is a PLA is 19,years old.,?,8. Looking around, there was no one in sight.,?,改为：,Looking around,I,found no one in,sight.,查漏补缺,?,9. The roof of our house was damaged by,a fallen tree in the great storm last night.,?,改为：,The roof of our house was,damaged by,a falling tree

20、,in the great,storm last night.,?,The ground is covered with,fallen leaves,.,?,The falling leaves,are dancing in the air.,查漏补缺,?,10. With the price of this TV set has,reduced, its sales are larger than last,year,s.,?,改法一：,With the price of this TV set,reduced, its sales are larger than last,year,s.,

21、?,改法二：,As the price of this TV set has,reduced, its sales are larger than last,year,s,五句话作文：（尽量使用分词）,一辆载着六百乘客的火车从格尔木（,Golmud,）出,发，在星期天到达了拉萨火车站，这标志着划时代,的（,landmark railway),火车的开通。这辆名为“青,藏一号”,(Qing 1),的火车，从格尔木出发，穿越了,号称,(dub),世界屋脊的青藏高原,(the Qinghai-Tibet,Plateau ),，到达了西藏的省会拉萨。在火车离开格,尔木前，国家主席胡锦涛强调了保护青藏高原环境,的重要性。许多当地的农民等在铁路边向奔驰而过,的火车招手致意。入藏的火车将运载,75%,的货物入,藏，降低了交通成本和推动,(boost),了当地的经济发,展。,写作拓展,A train,c