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1、专题二写作技能升华篇 第一讲读后续写,A (2018年6月浙江高考)It was summer, and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before.He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West. We took a plane to Albuquerque, a big city in the state of New Mexico.We reached Albuquerque in the late afternoon.Uncle_Paul,_my dads frie

2、nd, picked us up from the airport and drove us up to his farm in Pecos,原题呈现,His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle.My dad and I spent the night in the guestroom of the farm_house listening to the frogs and water rolling down the river nearby.Very early i

3、n the morning, Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast.“The day starts at dawn on my farm，” he said.After breakfast, I went to help Aunt Tina feed the chickens, while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze (吃草)I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses.They looked

4、 really cool,In the afternoon, I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride, and he said yes, as long as my dad went with me.I wasnt going to take a horse ride by myself anyway.So, my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats, got on our horses, and headed slowly towards the mountains.“Dont be late fo

5、r supper，” Uncle Paul cried, “and keep to the track so that you dont get_lost！” “OK！” my dad cried back.After a while Uncle Paul and his farm house were out of sightIt was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks, the deep green pine trees, and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a

6、 magic scene.It looked like a beautiful woven (编织的) blanket spread out upon the ground just for us,注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右； 2至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语； 3续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好； 4续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语,写作流程,第一步：审题 1审体裁：记叙文 2审人称：第一、三人称 3审时态：一般过去时 4审所标出的关键词语,表人物的有：dad, Uncle Paul 表事物的有：farm house, river, sheep, t

7、rack, sight 表动作的有：feed, get lost 表时间的有：late,5审前文大意：父亲带儿子去西部荒野的一个朋友家喂鸡牧羊，体验农场生活，见父亲和叔叔骑马很是潇洒，儿子也很想骑，于是亲身上马体验,第二步：抓住段首句设问 续写段首1：Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.设问： How would the horse react? What would they do with the rabbit? What would happen after that,续写段首2：We had no idea

8、where we were and it was getting dark.设问： How did they feel? What would they do? How would they get back to the house? 第三步：谋篇 1第一段所给首句Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.是故事发展的转折点，可从rabbit出现后带来的结果入手，可以写马受到惊吓狂奔而去，也可以写人的反应，无论从何角度拓展，需注意与续写第二段首句呼应,2第二段首句We had no idea where we were

9、and it was getting dark.呼应前文Uncle Paul的叮嘱不要误吃晚饭，可从如何寻路返回农场来写。 3对所标出的关键词语进行分类并选择性地加以有效利用。同时灵活运用话题词汇：情感：panic, relief, nervous, worried；动作：run, cry, think to oneself；环境：shower, mountain, forest, valley, tree, lake, sun。 4在确定了思路和内容之后，续写时，要注意句子结构的多样性，语言的丰富性，并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用，使上下文连贯,第四步：拟草稿并检查誊写,参考范文1】 Pa

10、ragraph 1： Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. Dad and I found it was so cute that we decided to chase it.After a while, we were completely lost in the forest.There was nothing left in our sight but the trees.“We may not be able to make it back to the farm_house in time for sup

11、per.” I thought to myself.After a series of fruitless attempts to find a way out, we felt hungry and tired,Paragraph 2： We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark. We got stuck in the forest.And an unexpected shower added to our difficulty in finding a way home, for all the tracks we had m

12、ade disappeared because of the rain.I was almost on the edge of breaking down when my father said, “Dont worry, my son.I remember there is a river near the farm house.Find the river and we will be back home.” Finally, we found the river and got back to the house along it.Needless to say, we ate a la

13、te dinner,参考范文2】 Paragraph 1： Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. My horse turned to the left to avoid the little rabbit as I held on tightly and tried not to fall.Then my dad turned around and shouted, “Hold on！” All of a sudden the horse began to run.My dad tried to keep up b

14、ehind us.For a few minutes my horse slowed down and then stopped beside a riverI looked around and realized that we were away off the track,Paragraph 2： We had no idea where we were and it got dark. Luckily the stars came out and gave us a little light when we were looking for the way to the farm_ho

15、useAfter what must have been several hours, we suddenly heard the sound of sheep in the distance.My dad and I both rode our horses towards the sound of the sheep.As we got closer we saw Uncle_Paul with a flashlight waving us over.What a night,对于这种新的题型，考生首先要能对所给的文章有深刻的理解，对文章的脉络和发展的方向有很好的把握，对文章使用的词汇的特

16、点有整体的认知。然后，根据对文章结构的理解设计合理的情节，完成对文章的续写。因此，续写文章的关键是,1掌握所给文章的主旨意图及故事情节的发展方向。这点至关重要。只有把握了文章的主旨意图，才能很好地完成续写。 2正确理解故事的脉络线索和段落结构，设计续写内容的基本框架。只有对原文的脉络线索和段落结构有正确的和深刻的理解，续写的内容才能和原文骨肉相连，契合紧密,3理清文章中的要点信息和逻辑关系。确保续写的内容和原文要有逻辑上的一致性，并能回应原文的信息。 4感知文章的用词特点。以便使续写的内容在语言色彩上和所给文章保持一致。 5注意语言的使用。考试说明中非常明确地指出，写作中要准确使用语法和词汇，

17、清楚、连贯地表达自己的意思。所以，在考虑文章结构的同时，一定要注意使用比较“高级”的词汇和语法结构,每一种体裁都有其特定的语言特色，记叙文也是如此。记叙文的语言有记叙文语言的特点。那么，在记叙文写作中，哪些词汇的运用可以为文章增色，成为文章亮点呢？下面收集整理了部分具有高分特质的词汇，请细细体会，熟记于心，多加运用，定会让你的文章脱颖而出,1满意的表情a satisfied look 2令人鼓舞的表情an encouraging expression 3既兴奋又开心a mixture of excitement and happiness,4流下幸福的泪水tears of happiness

18、flowing down 5心情愉快in cheerful spirits 6心满意足，非常幸福be on the top of the world 7极为感动be overwhelmingly moved 8被强烈地吸引be powerfully attracted to 9因而高兴be joyful over/about 10喜爱，对着迷be keen on 11快乐至极be overwhelmed with 12欣喜若狂be wild with delight 13精神高涨be in high spirits,14为成功而欣喜be excited with joy at the succ

19、ess 15被她的美貌所吸引be fascinated with her beauty 16显示出极大的意愿show a great readiness 17乐得大叫yell with delight 18使某人心情愉快brighten sbs heart 19使某人安心set ones heart at rest 20感到鼓舞的feel inspired/encouraged 21振作精神keep up ones spirits,1强烈的失落感a strong sense of loss 2怀着沉重的/沮丧的/忧郁的心情with a heavy/sinking/sorrowful heart

20、 3惊慌失措be seized with panic 4情绪低落be down in spirits 5陷入绝望fall into despair 6悲痛欲绝cry ones heart out 7垂头丧气lose ones spirit 8使某人悲痛make ones heart bleed 9减轻某人的痛苦/烦恼ease sb of his pain/trouble 10因某人的死亡而痛心break ones heart over ones death,1感到恼怒feel annoyed 2感到愤怒feel irritated 3感到泄气feel discouraged 4感到尴尬feel

21、 embarrassed 5感到困惑feel puzzled/confused 6感到沮丧feel frustrated/depressed 7感到恶心feel disgusted/sickened 8易为琐事而恼火be easily annoyed at trifles 9对某人的行为感到不满be displeased at ones conduct,10引起某人的不快arouse ones displeasure 11不断地抱怨complain constantly 12气得满脸通红flame with anger 13勃然大怒fly into a rage 14对某人勃然大怒get ma

22、d/cross at sb 15愁眉苦脸have a worried look 16对抱怨不予理会ignore/disregard a complaint 17对表示不满express/voice a complaint about 18怒气冲冲地跑出房间run out of the room in a burst of anger,1宽容的精神a forgiving spirit 2以和蔼可亲的态度with a kind and goodhumored spirit 3在这些情绪的控制下under the domination of these emotions 4对一点也不感兴趣be no

23、t in the least interested in. 5对彻底上瘾be hopelessly addicted to. 6混合着焦虑与希望的情绪be mixed with the emotion of anxiety and hope 7感到极为有趣find.highly stimulating 8引起强烈的情感set off strong feelings,1中等身材an average build 2优美的/匀称的身段a graceful/shapely figure 3痩削的/细长的身材a skinny/slim figure 4发育良好的身体a well-developed fi

24、gure 5身材魁梧的人a well-built man 6仪表堂堂be imposing/dashing/handsome/striking 7(人)形体很好have a good figure 8改善形体improve ones figure 9看到月光下有一个模糊的人影see a dark figure in the moonlight 10显露出她优美的身段show off her lovely figure,1保守的性格conservative personalities 2缺乏责任感lack of sense of responsibility 3高素质、有经验的老师a highl

25、y-qualified, well-experienced teacher 4光明的前途a promising future 5完人a faultless/perfect person 6天资高的/聪明的人a talented/an intellectual person 7有抱负的人an ambitious person 8脾气好的人a good-natured person 9容易相处的人a person easy to deal with,10有前途的青年a promising young man 11浪漫的人a romantic figure 12说话直率的人an out-spoken

26、 man 13消息灵通/见多识广的人a well-informed man 14未婚妇女an unmarried woman 15时髦的妇女a fashionable lady 1620岁出头的姑娘a girl in her early twenties 17品格纯洁无瑕的女子a girl of stainless character 18娴静有礼的淑女a quiet, gracious lady 19冷酷无情的/心肠冷酷的人a cold-blooded/ hard-hearted man,20具有的美德with the virtue of 21务实的be down-to-earth 22关于

27、很无知be ignorant about 23性格果断be of a determined character 24乐观和有抱负的be optimistic and ambitious 25脱颖而出stand out from the crowd 26有突出的个性have striking personalities 27有诚实的好名声have an excellent character for honesty 28具有独立的性格possess an independent character,1赞赏的目光an admiring gaze 2嫉妒的目光an envious glance 3一

28、项有意义的活动a meaningful/rewarding activity 4互相谅解，相互理解mutual understanding 5相信in the belief that. 6期待 in the expectation that. 7面对斗争与改变in the face of struggle and change 8不顾对的忧虑regardless of concerns over,9完全一团糟be completely in a mess 10对某事不存幻想be under no illusion about sth 11被认为是权威be considered an autho

29、rity 12不愿改变be reluctant to make changes 13无力改变结果be powerless to change the outcome 14步态优美地走walk gracefully 15鼓起勇气muster up courage 16吸引注意capture the attention 17首次露面make ones first appearance 18没有履行职责fail to carry out ones duties,19给某人造成负担impose a heavy burden on sb 20服从志愿者组织的指挥follow orders from th

30、e voluntary 21损害高中生形象damage the image of high school students 22经受起起落落go through ups and downs 23朝某人匆匆瞥了一眼cast a hasty glance at sb 24向某人投以爱慕的目光cast an admiring glance at sb 25凝视着某人look at sb with a fixed gaze 26爆发出阵阵喝彩声break into shouts of applause 27收回前言，承认说错eat ones words 28严厉训斥某人give sb a sharp

31、scolding,29就某事发表意见make a remark on/upon sth 30说得明白而深刻say sth clearly and impressively 31来回踱步pace back and forth 32以栽培花木为消遣look upon gardening as a recreation 33在倾盆大雨中走walk through the pouring rain 34在乡间漫步wander over the countryside,1一件常常发生的事a frequent occurrence 2一件身心有益的事情an occurrence enchanting mental and physical health 3一件辛劳的任务a painstaking/a laborious task 4值得珍藏的经历a truly memorable experience 5突然繁荣的房地产市场a sudden boom in the housing market 6费时的be time-consuming 7通知某人inform sb of sth 8某