英语中考英语书面表达(有难)经典

1、英语英语中考英语书面表达( 有难度 ) 经典一、中考英语书面表达（含答案详细解析）1书面表达地球是我们的家园，我们作为地球的主人，就应该好好保护地球。现在正在倡导“低碳 ”生活，只要我们不污染地球的环境，不浪费地球的能源，就能够让我们的周围变得更绿，生活变得更美好。作为中学生，我们应该怎样做呢？谈谈你的想法。内容应该包括以下几点：1. 节约用水、用电；2. 节约纸张，循环使用旧课本，保护森林；3. 节约粮食，在更多的土地上种树；4. 不乱丢杂物，保护环境；要求：短文中不得出现真实的校名和人名；80 词左右提示词： the greenhouse gases lifestyle 低碳生活方式How

2、 does our earth turn better?The earth is our home. _If everyone can make a contribution to our earth, the lift we are living will be better and better.【答案】 How does our earth turn better?The earth is our home. We should protect our earth as the owner. But how to live in the greenhouse gases lifestyl

3、e?I think as a middle school student, we should save the resources around us, such as the water, the electricity and so on. When you wash, can you close down the water? Can you turn off the lights when you left the classroom? I think saving paper is necessary. All the used text books should be recyc

4、led. Thus, less trees wont be cut down again. If we can save more food, the peasants will plant more trees on their farm. Dont throw litter everywhere, it will pollute our environment. If everyone can make a contribution to our earth, the lift we living will be better and better.【解析】【详解】这篇短文使用了大量的固定

5、句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如how to do ， live in ， aroundus， such as， as a middle school student ，and so on， close down the water ， turn off thelights， cut down ， make a contribution to our earth， pollute our environment ， better andbetter 等。而固定结构 But how to live in the greenhouse gases lifestyle? 和 I think as a

6、middle school student, we should save the resources around us, such as the water, the electricity and so on. /Can you turn off the lights when you left the classroom? / If we can save more food, the peasants will plant more trees on their farm. 等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作

7、时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到 高的分数。2 面表达随着 子 代的到来，西方文化如潮水般涌来，中国 文化的 承面 着巨大的挑 。有人 学校 当开 文化 （set up traditional culture classes ），但也有人 没有必要。假如你是Mike, 你用英 写一封 件， 你校英文 投稿写一篇短文， 数80 左右，

8、 你 开 文化 的看法。Your opinionnecessary or unnecessaryYour reasonsthe root （根） of Chinese culture, know more about,spread, developYour suggestionDear editor,As we all know, Chinese traditional culture is facing a great challenge because of the rapid development if international technology nowadays. _Yours

9、,Mike【答案】 Dear editor,As we know, Chinese traditional culture is facing a great challenge because of the rapiddevelopment of international technology nowadays. In my opinion, it s necessary for schools toset up traditional culture classes.First, traditional culture is the root of Chinese. As Chi nes

10、e, we shouldn t give up our traditionalculture and run after Western culture. Second, traditional culture classes can give students chances to know more about our nation. They can raise their sense of national pride. Last but not least, setting up traditional culture classes can spread and develop o

11、ur Chinese culture.All in all, it is of great importance to set up traditional culture classes in schools. Let schools to set up traditional culture classes! Yours,Mike【解析】 是一篇 材料作文， 我 开 文化 的看法。 合所 材料，可知本文主要考 一般 在 ，人称 第一，三人称，注意主 一致 ，句子 构主要 系Chinese traditional culture isfacing，it s necessary for sch

12、ools to ， we shouldn t，They can raise，itis of greatimportance to等句式的 用。写作中注意运用代 ，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述 序，符合 关系。点睛：本文 构 凑， 言 。开 介 了中国 文化面 的 ，接下来介 我 开 文化 的必要性的原因，最后号召更多的学校开 文化 。此 becauseof， in one s opinion, give up, know about, last but not least, set up, all in all, call on等 些 的运用也 文章增色不少。3 近 ，学校在学 小 内

13、开展了初中 段自 和 活 ，假 你是Moonlight 小组 的 ， 根据下面表格中的信息和提示， 你的 Tommy 行 合素 的 价，写一 份素 告NameTommyCharacteristics 明、大方（各 一例）Hobbies喜 看 ， 看 有很多好 （ 列 2 个好 ）Honour他在家帮助做家 。在学校和同学相 融洽。上学途中遵守交通 （ 一例）。今年，学校授予了他 秀学生 （Award for Best Student ）Problems面 考 ，遭受 力痛苦，他没有充足的睡眠Your（根据 情况提 2 点建 ） suggestions要求： 1、表达清楚、 法正确、上下文 ；2

14、、要点必 包括所有相关信息，并作适当 ； 3、 数： 100 左右； 4、不得使用真 姓名、校名和地名等Tommy is a member of my team called Moonlight.【答案】 Tommy is a member of my team called Moonlight. He is clever and he is good at all his lessons. He is so generous that he shares everything with his friends.He likes reading because he thinks he can

15、 get much knowledge and learn more about the world by reading. And reading has agood effect on children s growth. At home, he can help his parents do some housework. At school,he gets on well with his classmates. On the way to school, he obeys the traffic rules. He crossesthe road when the light is

16、green. Our school presented him with Award for Best Student this year.However, Tommy is stressed when the exam comes. And he doesnhave enoughtsleep.I think he should go over what he has learned before exams. It s better for him to manage histime wisely so that he can have enough time to rest.【解析】 篇作

17、文要求我 按照表格里的内容介 一下的 价 告。在表格中有非常 的关于Tommy 的情况， Tommy 写一篇 合素 Tommy 各方面的内容，我 需要用正确的英 把 些内容有条理的表达出来。表格中涉及的内容 多，写作 要注意表达的条理性。 篇Tommy称。同 注意表达的准确性，尤其是表格中的第五 和第六 内容。【亮点 明】 是一篇比 秀的范文。 篇作文内容完整，包含了表格中的所有内容，没有 漏要点。表达准确，注意了被 形式的使用，如He was rewarded by our school thisyear.。写作 注意了条理性，使文章具有 次感，条理清楚。短文注意到了 短句的 合，并恰当的使

18、用了一些连词，使文章表达的连贯。如He is always ready to help others. 、He not only likes reading detective novels but also likes watching programs about sports news. 、 He is good at running. He won the first place in our school sports meeting this year. 等。4假设你是来自中国的中学生李华,打算参加当地组织的国外冬令营,看完了这个网页后打算给 Liz Payne留言 ,表达你在冬令

19、营期间想去London Canal Museum 参观的愿望。,你内容包括：1.简单介绍自己；2.留言目的（包含冬令营的时间,听 Liz Payne的讲座）；3.预期收获。作文要求：1.不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名；2.语句连贯 ,词数 80 个左右。作文的开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数,也不必抄写在答题卡上。Dear Liz Payne,I m Li Hua,_Yours,Li Hua【答案】 Dear Liz Payne,I m Li Hua, a middle school student learning in Grade 3 in China. I

20、m writing to tell you that oucity will have a Winter Camp during this winter vacation. I hope to have a chance to visit LondonCanal Museum. From .uk, I know you will have a report“ An Update onththe Cotswold Canals” February,which6 will happen during the same period of our Winter

21、Camp.And I also hope to listen to your talk so that I can know more about the Stroudwater Canal, theThames and Severn Canal. What s more, I hope to learn more about London Canal Museum and even more about the UK.I m looking forward to your reply!Yours,Li Hua【解析】这篇作文要求我们以中学生李华的身份，给Liz Payne写一个留言。文章内容

22、主要包括三个部分：首先是介绍自己的身份；然后写留言的目的，包括冬令营的时间、想要去参观London Canal Museum 以及听 Liz Payne 的讲座；最后简单介绍一下你的预期的收获。写作时，应根据题目的这些要求，组织语言，串联成一篇短文。通过分析可知，这篇短文应使用第一人称 I 来叙述，时态应以一般将来时态和一般现在时为主。注意英语句子的表达和汉语习惯是不同的，不能逐词翻译，而应从句子的整体考虑，使用正确的句式结构以及适当的词汇、短语和句型，保证句子的准确性和语言的地道。另外还应注意语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯。穿插一些高级词汇和复杂句式，提升文章档次和水平，使表达更加流

23、畅。点睛：这是一篇优秀的作文。首先短文内容完整，包含了题目要求的所有信息，没有遗漏要点。作者主要从三个方面叙述：首先介绍了自己的身份和写留言的目的；接下来详细介绍了自己参加这次冬令营的愿望；最后是一个简单的结尾。如果分段叙述效果则会更好，那样会使文章的层次更加清晰。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，文章以第一人称、一般将来时和一般现在时为主，谓语动词形式准发，语法规范，符合英语句子的表达习惯。短文以简单句结构为主，也使用了一些复合句和较高级的句型，如I m writing to tellyou that our city will have a Winter Camp during this

24、winter vacation.中使用了宾语从句；F.uk, I know you will have a report“ An Update on the Cotswold Canals”February 6th , which will happen during the same period of our Winter Camp. 中有一个非限制性定语从句； And I also hope to listen to your talk so that I can know more about the Stroudwater Canal, t

25、he Thames and Severn Canal.中有一个结果状语从句等。整篇文章语句通顺、意思连贯、表达流畅。5Life is just like a mirror, you smile at it, and it smiles at you, too.请你以 “ Learn to Smile为”题，根据下表所列的要点写一篇100 词左右的文章（文章开头已给出）。1、面对困难与烦恼学会微笑（考试失利、被别人误解等）。学会对自己微笑2、使你自信，击败你的人有时就是你自己。3、有益于身心健康。1、便于与他人之间的交流。学会对他人微笑2、给别人带来快乐,自己也快乐。微笑是一种语言人人都能懂，传

26、递友谊，拉近距离。1、参考词汇：对某人微笑smile at sb. 误解 misunderstand2、短文必须包括所有内容要点，不要逐字翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯通顺。Learn to SmileI remember a song by Westlife, the first sentence of it is“ Just a smile and the rain is gone.you like smiling? I think you should learn to smile ._【答案】 Learn to SmileI remember a song by Westlife, th

27、e first sentence of it is“ Just a smile and the rain is gone.Do you like smiling? I think you should learn to smile .First, learn to smile at yourself when something unpleasant happens in your life. If you fail anexam or you are misunderstood by your friends, don t be sad. Just smile at yourself . S

28、miling atyourself brings back your confidence . Sometimes the one who beats you is not others, but yourself. And smile can also keep you healthy.Second, learn to smile at others. It will make you communicate better with people. Smiling atothers makes yourself happy as well.In a word, smile is a kind

29、 of language belonging to everyone. It passes love and friendship and helps shorten the distance between you and other people. Living with a smile ,every day will be shiny.【解析】这是一篇表格式的作文，要点是一表格的形式出现，首先要研究表格，找出需要表达的要点，然后加以整合，也可以适当增加使意思更连贯，但要点一定要全，不能漏掉。写作时要注意遣词造句，不能受汉语的影响，要用地道的英语表达，注意时态，语态，单词拼写，语法等问题，

30、用好简单句，适当用复杂句。可以用一些高级词汇。还要注意句子的关联。6环保话题是人们最关心的话题之一，请以 Change for a better China 为主题，结合自己家乡的变化写一篇英语短文。注意事项：1.短文应包括表格中的所有提示内容，条理清楚，作适当发挥。2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名,词数不少于80。状况水污染，大气污染.应对措施立即阻止此类活动,治理环境（至少两条）.感想建议环境能够变得更好.Change for a better China_【答案】 We all know it is becoming more and more important to protect

31、 our environment well.But some people don t careout abit.They throw litter into the river and even worse factories also put waste into the river, the river is full of rubbish. The air is badly polluted because there are more cars on the road these days. Factories that burn coal also pollute the air

32、with a lot of black smoke. We hardly ever see blue skies anymore.I think everyone in our hometown should play a part in cleaning it up. We should write to the government ,they should close down the factories. Trees are very helpful and important for the environment .We can plant more trees and more

33、trees in order to live better and morehealthy .Now, Our hometown has started to face the problem, I believe we can make our country a better place if we keep trying.【解析】【详解】环保话题是人们最关心的话题之一，请以Change for a better China 为主题，结合自己家乡的变化写一篇英语短文。要求中已经给出了部分提示，动笔先应先认真阅读提示，确定写作内容。写作中注意表达观点时的常用句式，注意在表达不同观点时，连词的

34、使用。内容上应注意描述的全面性；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。【点睛】本文紧扣要求对家乡做了简单介绍，内容完整，用了表格中的信息。2. 句式丰富。表述灵活。衔接自然，顺畅。文中用到了一些好的句型：The air is badly polluted because there aremore cars on the road these days. ； We can plant more trees and more trees in order to live better and more healthy. 给文中增色不少。7书面表达每个人都有自己心爱的物品，相信

35、你也拥有一个自己心爱的物品吧！请以“A（ n） _ Ihave ”为题，描述一个或一件你心爱的物品，并谈谈你是如何得到它的，以及它存在的意义。要求： 1. 请在题目空白处填上你心爱物品的名字；2.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;3.语言表达准确，短文连贯通顺，80 词左右。A（ n） _ I have_【答案】 A（ n） toy gun I haveEveryone has an object that she/ he like best. So do I.In my drawer, there is a toy gun wrapped by yellow cloth. Itgun andi

36、t scanblackshot stoymesmall plastic pills for ten meters. When I was young, I played with other kids with my toy gun.They all admired me and put me in the place of leader. I was so happy then.When I was a little boy, I liked watching the war movies best. I was eager to have my own toy gun.One day, i

37、t was my birthday. I asked for it when my father came back. My family was poor thenand my father didn t promise me. From then, father worked harder and came back more lately. Aweek later, father put a box to me. A black toy gun in it! I was moved with tears. In order to get it, father worked late an

38、d hurt himself. He died a month later.Now I hope I can be a soldier and own a real gun to protect my country and family. I willremember my father s love forever. Every time I miss him, I ll take out the toy gun and sayyou, my dear father!【解析】写作分析：这篇作文需要就自己最喜欢的物品展开描述，要求是进行描述，并谈谈你是如何得到它的，以及它存在的意义。写作的难

39、度是逐渐加深的，在讨论其如何获得的时候要注意正确使用时态，在谈论意义的时候要注意表达的准确性，避免不熟悉的表达。写作亮点：这篇文章讲了自己最喜欢的玩具枪，描述玩具枪的时候有适当的细节补充，例如a toy gunwrapped by yellow cloth （用黄布包着的玩具枪），这里用到了过去分词作定语，作者还描述了玩具枪的功能（ small plastic pills），顺便还描述了自己小时候玩枪的经历，准确使用了时态。在描述得到的经历的时候不落俗套，讲到了自己的家庭那时比较困难，父亲是通过努力工作为我赚钱买枪的，写作是富有感情的，也通过这段经历为这把玩具枪赋予了一定的意义。最后玩具的意义

40、得到了升华，表达了作者的期望（I hope I can be a soldier ），上升到了保家卫国的层面，这样的一篇作文是有深度的，能够让人感动的，是一篇优秀的范文。8书面表达（原创）今年春节，很多人加入了抢红包的游戏，但也有人表示担忧。学校英语校刊英语天地对此进行调查，假如你是一名校刊小记者，请你就此次调查的结果进行总结，并谈谈你自己的观点。Grabbing redpackets on lineAgreement（ 75%）Disagreement （ 25%）Your opinion1.a popular form of entertainment, bring more fun2.b

41、ring people closer, make more friendsspend too much time.not have enough communication with family members, feel lonely1.2.提示词： We chat 微信 Grabbing red packets on line 抢红包注意：（ 1）词数 80 左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；（ 2）文章应包括题中所提的所有要点，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯；（ 3）文中请勿提及你的真实姓名、校名和其他真实信息;As we all know, grabbing red packets on l

42、ine won popularity with the people during the SpringFestival in 2016. From then on, more and more people have been crazy about it. So we did thesurvey on the activity of“ Grabbing red packetsents”. among stud_【答案】 As we all know, grabbing red packets on line won popularity with the people during the

43、Spring Festival in 2016. From then on, more and more people have been crazy about it. So we didthe survey on the activity of“ Grabbing red packets” among students.About 75% of them think it is a popular form of entertainment, bring them more fun. It can bringpeople closer , they can make more friend

44、s .Grabbing red packets has been part of peopleAbout 25% of them s ay some people spend too much time grabbing red packets. They don t haveenough communication with their family members .They may feel a little lonelyPersonally, theres no doubt that not only does it bring people happiness, but also s

45、end blessingsto people in a special form. Also, its obvious that it is more convenient. However, as a saying goes,each coin has two sides. It is not an exception, it also has some bad effects. If people cant grabthe red packets, people may feel sad or ill-tempered ,even break their cell phones. What

46、s worse, it may lead to the crime.【解析】这篇作文要求我们对学校进行的关于春节抢红包这件事的调查结果进行总结，并谈谈自己对这件事情的看法。题目中给出了一个表格，里面包括了支持抢红包这个游戏的人们的观点以及反对这个游戏的人们的观点和理由，只给了一些短语，我们需要组织语言，将这些要点用正确的英语表达出来，并使文章内容更加丰富、完整。最后还要加上自己的看法。因此文章的内容应主要包括三部分：支持的人们的理由；反对者们的理由；自己的看法，可以分成两段或者三段来叙述，这样可以使文章结构清楚，有层次。写作时，应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同，不要逐词翻译，应从句子整体结构出发

47、，以简单句为主，穿插并列句和复合句。为提升文章档次，还应注意使用高级句型和较复杂的句式。语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文章整体意思连贯、表达流畅。点睛：这是一篇优秀的作文。首先短文内容完整、结构清晰。文章分为三段，第一段是题目中已经给出的，因此了文章的话题。第二段中作者表述了支持和反对玩这个游戏的人们各自的理由；第三段中作者发表了自己的看法。其次短文中语言得体，句式准确，符合英语的表达习惯。文章以一般现在时态为主，特别注意了谓语动词的正确形式，语法规范、准确。短文中使用了较丰富的句型，如About 75% of them think it is a popular form ofentertainment, bring them more fun.、 Grabbing red packe