中考英语书面表达(word)

1、中考英语书面表达（ word）一、中考英语书面表达（含答案详细解析）1假如你即将在学校英 趣小 的活 中 言， 你用英 写一篇 言稿。要点提示如下: （1）几个月前，奶奶晚 后去跳广 舞（do square dancing ）。（2）从那 起，奶奶喜 上了广 舞。（3） 在，奶奶比以前健康了，有了很多朋友。（4） 有些 居有意 ， 音 很吵，无法入睡。（5） 你 人 可以跳广 舞，但要求：（ 1）开 和 尾已 出，不 入 数。（2）要点 全，行文 ，可适当 。Boys and girls,I m very happy to speak here and I d like to talk abo

2、ut my grandma._That s all. Thank you!【答案】 Boys and girls,I m very happy to speak here and Ialkaboutdlikemyto grandmat.A few months ago, my grandma went to do square dancing after supper. Since then, she has beenin love with square dancing. Now, she is much healthier than before. What smore, she has

3、a lofriends. However, some neighbors have a complaint against the people who do square dancing.They think that the music is so loud that they can t fall asleep at night.In my opinion, people can do square dancing because it is a good way to keep healthy. But theyshould think about the feelings of o

4、thers and they shouldn t make a lot of noise.That s all. Thank you!【解析】 是一篇 材料作文，根据要点提示写一篇学校英 趣小 的活 中的 言稿。要注意随着文章推 的 化，一开始 一般 去 ，而后面 用一般 在 ，最后表达自己 点的 候也 使用一般 在 。人称 第一，三人称，注意主 一致关系，构思文章框架，列 出可能会用到的好 好句， 住千万不能漏写信息要点。参考 就是必用 ，一定要运用到文章当中。在写作中注意运用恰当的 ，使文章更加 ，自然。2 面表达地球是我 的家园，我 作 地球的主人，就 好好保 地球。 在正在倡 “低碳

5、”生活，只要我 不 染地球的 境，不浪 地球的能源，就能 我 的周 得更 ，生活 得更美好。作 中学生，我 怎 做呢？ 你的想法。内容 包括以下几点：1. 节约用水、用电； 2. 节约纸张，循环使用旧课本，保护森林；地上种树； 4. 不乱丢杂物，保护环境；3. 节约粮食，在更多的土要求：短文中不得出现真实的校名和人名；80 词左右提示词： the greenhouse gases lifestyle 低碳生活方式How does our earth turn better?The earth is our home. _If everyone can make a contribution t

6、o our earth, the lift we are living will be better and better.【答案】 How does our earth turn better?The earth is our home. We should protect our earth as the owner. But how to live in the greenhouse gases lifestyle?I think as a middle school student, we should save the resources around us, such as the

7、 water, the electricity and so on. When you wash, can you close down the water? Can you turn off the lights when you left the classroom? I think saving paper is necessary. All the used text books should be recycled. Thus, less trees wont be cut down again. If we can save more food, the peasants will

8、 plant more trees on their farm. Dont throw litter everywhere, it will pollute our environment. If everyone can make a contribution to our earth, the lift we living will be better and better.【解析】【详解】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如how to do ， live in ， aroundus， such as， as a middle school student ，and s

9、o on， close down the water ， turn off the lights， cut down ， make a contribution to our earth ， pollute our environment ， better and better 等。而固定结构 But how to live in the greenhouse gases lifestyle? 和 I think as a middle school student, we should save the resources around us, such as the water, the

10、electricity and so on. /Can you turn off the lights when you left the classroom? / If we can save more food, the peasants will plant more trees on their farm. 等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识

11、准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。3?的看法。内容包括：1.你没完成学习任务的经历（事情，原因及后果）；2.针对如何管理好时间给出几点建议。作文要求：1.短文须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。3.词数 80 个左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。Once, I couldnt make good use of time and it had a bad influence on mystudy._【答案】 Once, I couldnt make good

12、 use of time and it had a bad influence on my study.I had an experience like this. Last weekend, my good friend, Jim taught me how to play a kind of computer game. It was interesting. So I spent more time on it. I forgot to do my homework in the end. My teachers and parents were angry with me. I was

13、 also upset.How to make good use of our time? I think we should make a weekday plan. We should write what we are going to do on the paper, mark the deadline of each thing clearly and put the paper up somewhere we can see it easily. It can help us to remember what we have to do next.【解析】【详解】这篇短文使用了大量

14、的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如make good use of ， lastweekend， how to do ， play a game， a kind of ， spent more time on ， forget to do ， in the end， be angry with ， be going to do ， on the paper ， put up 等。而特殊非谓语动词结构 Jim taught me how to play a kind of computer game. 和 I think we should make a weekday plan. /We s

15、hould write what we are going to do on the paper, mark the deadline of each thing clearly and put the paper up somewhere we can see it easily. /It can help us to remember what we have to do next. 等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意

16、发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。4每一次变化都伴随着我们的成长，作为初中生的你，你感觉自已比起小时候有了哪些变化 ?请写一篇文章描述一下你认为最明显的变化。要点包括 : 1. 变化是什么 ?2. 变化是如何发生的 ?3. 化后有什么感受 ?_【答案】 The biggest personal change Ive ever made is falling in love with rending.When I was

17、 a child, I didn t enjoy reading books at all. Later, my mother always read stories forme and bought me a lot of books. Gradually I began to love reading. While reading, I feel like I am talking with a wise man. Reading is also a fantastic way to pass my free time. Books are my friends. They will co

18、ntinue to benefit me even more.【解析】【分析】 是一篇 材料作文，介 我比起小 候有了哪些 化。【 解】 合所 材料，可知本文主要考 一般 在 和一般 去 ，人称 第一，三人称，注意主 一致 ，句子 构主要 系表 构和 构，注意一些常 句式的 用，比如：When I was ，my mother always read ，Gradually I began to ，Books are 等句式的 用。写作中注意运用代 ，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述 序，符合 关系。【点睛】本文 构 凑， 言 。开 介 了我最大的个人 化是喜 上 ，接下来介 我小 候不喜

19、，最后指出 在 籍是我的朋友。此 fall in love in, at all, buy sb sth, beginto do sth, love doing sth, feel like, talk with, continue to do sth 等 些 的运用也 文章增色不少。5 面表达根据下列表格的提示，写一篇 Changes in Our Hometown 的英 短文（80 左右）文章内容必 包含所 的所有信息开 已 出，不 入 数内容要点： 去 在1旧房1高楼2河水 2河水清澈（ clean and clear）3步行、 自行 上班3乘公交 、小汽 上班4道路狭窄（ narrow

20、 ）4街道 （ wide ），干 整 5 居住条件（ living conditions ）差5 生活越来越好， 境（environment ）越来越舒适6 你的感想 （写两到三句）Changes in Our HometownIn the past ten years ， great changes have taken place in our hometown 【答案】 Changes in Our HometownIn the past ten years, great changes have taken place in our hometown. In the past, the

21、re used to be old houses. The river was very dirty. The roads were narrow and the living conditions were terrible. People were not rich. They went to work on foot or by bike. But now, there are many tall buildings in our hometown. We can see the clean river and the clear water . Even we can see fish

22、 in the water. There are many wide and clean roads. Our life is better and better The environment around us is more and more comfortable. People usually go to work by bus or by car.I am glad to see these great changes in my hometown. But I think it s still important to remembe the past. It tells tha

23、t we should cherish the present life.【解析】【 解】亮点 明： 篇 作的 次清晰，内容 ，表达流 。文中使用了非常好的短 ，例如take place， in our hometown ， in the past ， used to be ，go to do ， on foot ， by bike，better and better ， more and more 等。而 I think its still important to remember the past/It tells thatwe should cherish the present li

24、fe. 等 从句 构的运用，丰富了 作内容，使表达多 ，是本文的最大亮点。【点睛】 面表达 既不是 英，也不是可任意 的作文。它要求将所 定的材料内容 整理后展开思 ，考 运用所学英 知 准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能 漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的 、短 和句式，尽可能使用高 和 复 的句式 构以便得到 高的分数。6 保 是人 最关心的 之一， 以Change for a better China 主 ， 合自己家 的 化写一篇英 短文。注意事 ：1.短文 包括表格中的所有提示内容，条理清楚，作适当 。2.短文中不能出 真 的人名和地名, 数不少于80。状况水 染，大气 染. 措施立即阻止

25、此 活 ,治理 境（至少两条）.感想建 境能 得更好.Change for a better China_【答案】 We all know it is becoming more and more important to protect our environment well.But some people don t care about it .They throw litter into riverthe and even worse factories also put waste into the river, the river is full of rubbish. The

26、air is badly polluted because there are more cars on the road these days. Factories that burn coal also pollute the air with a lot of black smoke. We hardly ever see blue skies anymore.I think everyone in our hometown should play a part in cleaning it up. We should write to the government ,they shou

27、ld close down the factories. Trees are very helpful and important for the environment .We can plant more trees and more trees in order to live better and morehealthy .Now, Our hometown has started to face the problem, I believe we can make our country a better place if we keep trying.【解析】【详解】环保话题是人们

28、最关心的话题之一，请以Change for a better China 为主题，结合自己家乡的变化写一篇英语短文。要求中已经给出了部分提示，动笔先应先认真阅读提示，确定写作内容。写作中注意表达观点时的常用句式，注意在表达不同观点时，连词的使用。内容上应注意描述的全面性；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。【点睛】本文紧扣要求对家乡做了简单介绍，内容完整，用了表格中的信息。2. 句式丰富。表述灵活。衔接自然，顺畅。文中用到了一些好的句型： The air is badly polluted because there are more cars on the road t

29、hese days. ； We can plant more trees and more trees in order to live better and more healthy. 给文中增色不少。7书面表达（原创）今年春节，很多人加入了抢红包的游戏，但也有人表示担忧。学校英语校刊英语天地对此进行调查，假如你是一名校刊小记者，请你就此次调查的结果进行总结，并谈谈你自己的观点。Grabbing redpackets on lineAgreement（ 75%）Disagreement （ 25%）Your opinion1.a popular form of entertainment,

30、bring more fun2.bring people closer, make more friendsspend too much time.not have enough communication with family members, feel lonely1.2.提示词： We chat 微信 Grabbing red packets on line 抢红包注意：（ 1）词数 80 左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；（ 2）文章应包括题中所提的所有要点，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯；（ 3）文中请勿提及你的真实姓名、校名和其他真实信息;As we all know, grabbing

31、 red packets on line won popularity with the people during the SpringFestival in 2016. From then on, more and more people have been crazy about it. So we did thesurvey on the activity of“ Grabbing red packets” among students._【答案】 As we all know, grabbing red packets on line won popularity with the

32、people during theSpring Festival in 2016. From then on, more and more people have been crazy about it. So we didthe survey on the activity of“ Grabbing red packets” among students.About 75% of them think it is a popular form of entertainment, bring them more fun. It can bringpeople closer , they can

33、 make more friends .Grabbing red packets has been part of peopleAbout 25% of them say some people spend too much time grabbing red packets. They don t havenough communication with their family members .They may feel a little lonelyPersonally, theres no doubt that not only does it bring people happin

34、ess, but also send blessingsto people in a special form. Also, its obvious that it is more convenient. However, as a saying goes,each coin has two sides. It is not an exception, it also has some bad effects. If people cant grabthe red packets, people may feel sad or ill-tempered ,even break their ce

35、ll phones. Whats worse, it may lead to the crime.【解析】这篇作文要求我们对学校进行的关于春节抢红包这件事的调查结果进行总结，并谈谈自己对这件事情的看法。题目中给出了一个表格，里面包括了支持抢红包这个游戏的人们的观点以及反对这个游戏的人们的观点和理由，只给了一些短语，我们需要组织语言，将这些要点用正确的英语表达出来，并使文章内容更加丰富、完整。最后还要加上自己的看法。因此文章的内容应主要包括三部分：支持的人们的理由；反对者们的理由；自己的看法，可以分成两段或者三段来叙述，这样可以使文章结构清楚，有层次。写作时，应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同，不要

36、逐词翻译，应从句子整体结构出发，以简单句为主，穿插并列句和复合句。为提升文章档次，还应注意使用高级句型和较复杂的句式。语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文章整体意思连贯、表达流畅。点睛：这是一篇优秀的作文。首先短文内容完整、结构清晰。文章分为三段，第一段是题目中已经给出的，因此了文章的话题。第二段中作者表述了支持和反对玩这个游戏的人们各自的理由；第三段中作者发表了自己的看法。其次短文中语言得体，句式准确，符合英语的表达习惯。文章以一般现在时态为主，特别注意了谓语动词的正确形式，语法规范、准确。短文中使用了较丰富的句型，如About 75% of them think it is a popular

37、 form ofentertainment, bring them more fun.、 Grabbing red packets has been part of people、 s livesAbout 25% of them say some people spend too much time grabbing red packets、 Personally,theres no doubt that not only does it bring people happiness, but also send blessings to peoplein a special form. 、

38、 If people cant grab the red packets, people may feel sad or ill-tempered ,evenbreak their cell phones. 等等。文章中也出现了一些语法上的小错误，总的来说，不影响整篇文章的质量。8上周，你们班就初中生能否骑电动自行车上学进行了一次讨论。现在，请你根据下表用英语写一篇介绍讨论情况的短文。注意：1.短文须包括写作提示和表格中所列的全部内容；2.时态运用正确，书写工整、规范；3.80-100词。生词提示： electric adj. 电讨论结果25 人表示同意35 人不同意理由1.这样很方便；2.能

39、节约上学1.年龄太小，骑电动车不安全；2.早上交通拥途中的时间。挤，骑电动车也快不起来。【答案】 Last week， our class had a discussion about whether junior students could ride electric bicycles to go toschool.25 students of our class agreed with it ， because they said it was convenient for them andit could takethem less time to go to school. But

40、the other 35 students didn t agree with them. They said it wasnot safe forthe junior students to get to school by electric bicycles， for they were too young. They also saidin the morningthe traffic was busy and the students couldn t ride electric bicycles quickly.【解析】试题分析：本题要求以初中生能否骑电动自行车上学进行了一次讨论。根

41、据所给要点写一篇 80-100 词左右的英语短文，而且要做到表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯。根据所给要点可知，本文主要以一般过去时态书写。要注意把每一个要点都表达出来，不要遗漏任何一个，书写时一定注意时态的正确使用。观点分明，谈及理由按照要求至少要各写两点。并注意上下文要语句贯通。并且要围绕主题适当发挥。写作亮点：短文中作者按照题目的要求，给我们介绍了持不同观点的学生各自的理由，结构清晰，要点全面。时态运用正确，书写工整规范。该文中以下几个句子用得很好。Because they said it was convenient for them and it could take them less

42、 time to go to school.They also said in the morni ngthe traffic was busy and the students couldn t ride electric bicyclesquickly.阐述各自观点时，理由也很充分。考点：提纲类作文。9假如你是李华，请你根据以下提示用英语写一封保护大象的倡议书。提示：陆地上最大的哺乳动物，可以活到80 岁。目前数量在减少，因为：1）人们砍伐森林，大象渐渐失去家园；2）人们捕杀大象，获取象牙。3）应如何保护它们（不少于三条）。要求： 1）恰当运用比较级和最高级；2）80 词左右。倡议书的结尾已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：哺乳动物mammal; 象牙 ivoryDear classmates_I believe everyones contribution（贡献）can make a big difference.You